AN THANKS FOR THE GOOD REVIEWS (pffthahahaha) YOU LAST TOW ONES. AS LONG AS THE REEL FANS SUPPORT ME THIS STORY WILL NEVER DYE! (Noooooo.)
ALSO THANKS FOR TELLIN ME ABOUT NEXT NOT NECKS ILL REMBER THAT. =D
All of sudden Wheatly an Altas an P-Body was were I was an looked all shocked at me. I was a goth emo now an had died my jumpsuit black (With what? Or do your powers include dye?) an was cuttin myself while listenin to Avril Lavinge music. (That is incredibly offensive to people who self-harm. I mean, I don't but seriously.) "Marrissa what happoned to you?" Wheatly asked but I just cryed at him an yell "You broke me heart Wheatly, so Im a goth emo now (Dude, it was like 5 minutes. There is no way that kind of change can happen in such a short period of time.) an were threw!" I got up like crazy an puched Wheatly in the eyeball-thing so hard he fell of the rale an landed with a huge crush an he was broken. (He survived falling from that height in the games.)
"NOOOOOO WHEETLY!" I ranned to the robocorpse an picked him up in my arms. "You are died an now our baby will have no father." I cried even more an cut myself a copple more times. (Yeah, wouldn't cutting yourself hurt your baby.) Atlas an P-Body was froze in shock at the site of Wheatly's kill. Then a guy walked in with a tool box an lots of tooles. "Don't worry my dotter Ill fix him!" Gabe Jonson (Swiggity Swell, #backfromhell) looked at me an smiled an I was reel happy an gabe him the Wheatly body so he could make it work a gain. "Oh no" He o-mouthed. "Wheatly body is full of drugs an beer!" (How the ever-loving tie-dye duct tape did he actually get it inside him.)
Atlas an P-Body got nervos an I glared at them reel mean like an said "What did you do TO WHEATLY YOU B*****S!" My powers started glowin like the sun an electric sparks went ever where. "Marrissa stop yur powers are too strong!" Gabe pleeded but I was soo angry that I didt listen an powere up more until electric stuff went every all an the whole room explosioned! (Did you die?)
When I woke up there was messy dirt an marks all a round me an the room was destoryed. I looked a front of me an saw Atlas an P-Body was died (Oh no. You killed Kenny 1 and 2.) an I was happy. Then I saw a skelton that was Gabe Jonson an Wheetly an I got sad a gain an started to cut myself some more while singing a My Kemical Romace song. (Which one.) "Hahahahaha!" GLaDOS started lolling at me. "Now you are a goth emo an killed all yur friends my plan worked." I punched fist into hand an got the most angry ever, this was all GLaDOES plan! (No crap.)
"Wheatly wasn't realy cheetin on you Marrissa I was controllin him (That makes sense.) an I gave Chell the brane damage relaps! (That doesn't.) LOL!" GLaDOS had gon two far this time an I needed to kill her for ever now. (She is a robot. You can't do that.) My powers were flowin threw my vans an I blew up the wall (You threw a couple of vans. That's actually kind of also.) an went to GLaDOSs room.
"YOU MADE ME KILLED WHEATLY (She really didn't.) AN A GOTH EMO AN ROONED EVER THING NOW YOULL PAY GLADOS YOU B****!" I used my powers to make my jumpsuit not black no more becos I had stopped being a goth emo for good. (Wow you have mood swings. I guess you are pregnant.) "No stop Marrissa you cannt kill me im yur mother!" (That means nothing.) I stopped an thot she was lyin but then I used my detective power an new it was true. I couldn't kill my on mother (Why not.) but she was a evil mother so maybe I cold. "I killed you ones befour I can do it a gain!" I powered up my powers like a fireball of the glowy electric powers an shot them at GLaDOS an blew up the hole room.
GLaDOS was finally ded but I wasn't happy none. Wheatly was still gone an I had killed him. Then Chell came into to the room cryin an I saw that the exploshun had made a peace of metal slice her butt off so she couldn't booty quake none more. (Or you know fart.) Ever thing was rooned an not even my powers cold fix it now. I sat down on knees an cried some more (but not emo cry becos im not a goth emo any more) (No one cares.) . It was teh end but not happy which meens Im not perfect so Im not a Mary Sue (Saying they aren't a Mary Sue? Check.) AREEL WRITER or what ever yur name is! Chell tried booty quake but with no bom all that happened was blood got in places from the shakin' an some blood hit a werd machine. (That is actually hilarious.) It was…. A time machine! (Let's do the time warp again.)
"OMG I can go back in time an stop me from killin Wheatly (That would definitely cause a paradox,) an make every thing happy a gain!" I ran tinto the time machine an pressed some bottons and there was a huge flash…
TO BE CONTINUED!
UH OH MARRISSA IS GON BACK IN TIME BUT DID SHE GO TO THE RIGHT TIME OR MAYBE TO PORTAL 1 (You spoiled it.) TIME WINK WINK FIND OUT NEXT TIME!
