June 20, 2014
Alright, I am getting these out as soon as possible and I hope they still have the quality because I love this story. Review ideas for later in the story.
"H-hinata? What are they talking about?" Naruto somberly said.
"N-Naru-t-to, I am sorry I don't know what they mean," I Protested.
"What are you talking about, Hinata? Of course you know," Everybody else said.
"You mean to tell me you didn't find the note in the locker?" Sakura said
"So it was you!" I yelled angrily.
"Uh, yeah, we wanted to give you a chance with Naruto when we found you unconscious," Ino said.
Sakura leaned and whispered in my ear,
"He saw you naked, didn't he?"
At that, I felt my face go DEEP red. I grabbed my coat and ran out of the restaurant as fast as I could. Crying as I ran I didn't know where I was going I bumped into an unknown object, I sat on my bottom and a boy with blonde hair and blue eyes offered me a hand (If you don't remember that is from the first chapter) DejaVu!
"Hinata…." Naruto whispered to me.
"I'm sorry, Naruto," I stuttered, and I tried to get around him and he easily blocked me.
"It's alright, Hinata, I know you didn't know,"
"Thank you, Naruto,"
"But DID you know? For sure?"
"I had no idea Naruto."
NARUTO'S POV
I Told her about the day at the park,
"I felt like you had been setting me up, that you didn't like me, that someone had pushed you into it and that you weren't supposed to come to the park, but, I forgive you Hinata-chan"
HINATA'S POV
'I was so glad he forgave me I almost cried',
I hid it just in time to give him a hug and cry into his shoulder.
He hugged me back and we hugged for a while as the sun disappeared over the Hokage monument.
"Ribbit, Ribbit, Croak!" A Voice came behind me with the sound of jingling coins.
Naruto broke from the hug and jumped over to Kiba who was holding his froggy wallet, he swiped it from him, Kiba was accompanied by Ino, and sasuke and sakura were arm in arm.
"So… what now, Naruto?" said Sasuke in his teasing voice
"Yeah! Breaking up? Wahh" Kiba said adding fake cries at the end. With rage building Naruto, with a wind charged fist he knocked Kiba right off his feet and 5 yards back.
Kiba had blood coming from his mouth when Kiba's worried yet angry Girlfriend ran over to him and flipped Naruto off. Now THAT pissed ME off!
I Nearly used my Jūho Sōshiken but restrained myself to a simple gentle fist to block some chakra ways.
I am glad I did restrain because it was enough to hit only 4 chakra points for her to cough of blood, and they weren't the worst one's either.
SakuSasu, being as uncaring as always walked off to their home, giggling and flirting as they went.
Naruto and I did the same and Naruto was checking his froggy wallet.
"WWHAAAT!?: Naruto screamed
"What, Naruto?" I asked him.
"When we got to the restaurant I brought about 200,000 yen!"
"How about now?"
"100,000! OVER HALF! DAMN KIBA AND SASUKE!" He said while running towards where we were.
Hey so that is it, hope you enjoyed review if you have any ideas to help me become a better writer or if you want to sort of steer the story in a certain way.
