A/n i own only my ideas and Oc's if I borrow from another fan fic it's because it was a damn good idea. Quickly i want to thank those in Japan that have stayed with me through the chapters now, you have no idea how tough an audience japan is when writing fanfiction of Anime/manga
Jiraiya sat Looking over his notes the last week insane, and he was still trying to work through what he was learning, thinking back to see a pattern he was missing something,
Jiraiya was pissed and shamed he had lost Orochimaru the snake had vanished. First the toad sage had tracked him to a group called Akatsuki a mercenary group that now house several S-class missing ninja's. very dangerous situation. Then he learned that the snake had left that group and went...that was the problem he vanished. never before had Jiraiya's spy network lost someone so quickly.
He started thinking when a blue toad arrived and opened his tongue handing the sage a note shaking his head and muttering 'again'
Jiraiya moved quickly he was only a town over as it was slipping through the woods he found the warehouse quickly. Slipping in, he disabled the two guards quickly and found a room that was full of cages, the good news it was almost empty there was only one person there. The bad news was the person was a 'young' blonde large chested woman unconscious in a cage smelling of booze.
Jiraiya did not hesitate was he quickly freed her, as powerful as She could be, the path of booze and cards was a path of pure self-destruction and no one could resist opium laced sake not even the slug princess Preforming a quick check showed that nothing had happened yet but Tsunade was out cold and he had to pick her up and carry her on his shoulder,
"Well where do you think you're going with my property," a wheezy weak voice trying to sound important called out.
Jiraiya didn't even blink his hands flashed as he walked out the door as the walls of the warehouse changed into the stomach of the great fire toad of. the scream was muffled and Jiraiya knew those 'men' would take weeks to die and feel every second.
Moving quickly with the woman on his should he headed for the hotel he knew Shizune was at, waiting. He was not disappointed as she quickly opened the window and he carried the Blonde in and laid her on the bed.
"Same rules, she is not to know, she will wake up think she just had a hangover," Jiraiya spoke as he headed back out the window.
"Why...why don't you want her to know?" the young lady asked. He had been watching out for both ever since Tsunade first left, this was not the first time something like this happened and unless something drastic changed for her mistress it would not be the last.
"She will feel in debt to me...when i get my date with her it will be because she wants to not because she feels she has to."
and he was out the window and gone. Finding a tree, he sat high above the ground and distracted himself by again going over his notes on his former teaming. The sun in the morning and Jiraiya was tempted to get some sleep.
Then he got a letter from Chief, (arrived by a monkey summons) the Toad Sage had forgotten that the ten-year banishment was about to end. The file that came with it gave very detailed information about the Sandaime and about his godson. The sage was not happy anger at the village and shame at himself did battle for the sage's emotions.
At the bottom of the letter distracted the sage,
'Find out who leader of Otogakure, before you return,'
Then the letter detailed the Chief's plan.
Now back in the present Jiraiya looked at his watch as the sun continued to raise.
"If the plan went through he should be starting the second day of hell right...now."
As the clock hit ten a massive pain shot through his shoulder, a pain or a memory of a pain he had not felt in years. All Jiraiya could say was two words,
"Training Dummy,"
Tsunade woke with a groan and a killer migraine, Shizune looked to her mistress with mild worry, not like a few days ago when she woke up Shizune looked down right scared. The migraine returned and ended any though as she stood,
"I need a shower," she growled and started for the bath her eye caught the clock for a second in that second it turned ten. A pain ran a crossed her lower back, so painful it put the Sannin to her knees with a scream.
Shizune came running the pig at her heels. Before she could ask her mistress just stood up,
"What happened Lady Tsunade?"
"Just a memory, a shadow of a... of the one day I was..." she shook her head trying to get that memory away.
"of the day I was a training dummy,"
The scream set the tone of the day, Naruto started his group moving,
"Choji set a faster pace but not too much he will run us harder and nastier then yesterday," Naruto ordered and Choji nodded and set the pace.
"It is a safe bet the attacks will come harder as well," Shika spoke and Shino nodded,
"Yes, there are far less victims for them to choose from and unlike the rest of the class we return, there is no doubt they will push harder to break us."
"And with our parents here I think he will be even more sadistic just to test them." Kiba finished.
The prediction turned out to more than accurate the viciousness of Chief's attack on Hiashi inspired Anko...she wanted to make someone scream louder. Naturally her first targets were Ino and Sakura before they were half way around the lake they were bleeding from thighs shoulders calves, Anko went after all the soft spots...well most of them.
But those two where not the only ones, Anko and Yugao both targeted the parents, paying close attention to Ino and Sakura's but EVERYONE was bleeding by the end of the first lap, even Hinata.
The group was focused on the task, but the boys figured it would be Anko looking for the prize she was denied the day before,
CRACK...Hinata cried out but kept moving as she held her head and the boy saw Yugao, "you got to focused on one threat, we are all here for one job," she vanished with that.
The start of the second lap had Negi and Sasuke in the lead, the Hyuga had dashed forward before Gai could reel him back and soon he and the Uchiha were in a 'race' seeing as they were both rookies of the year...to the point they forgot about the gauntlet,
CRACK CRACK CRACK CRACK CRACK. Five of the instructors at once attacked and when they were done the two prodigies/geniuses were bloody beaten and on the ground.
The Hokage watched as he ran, at first the instructors were hesitant to attack him, he was after all the Hokage, that was till they spotted the Chief appear out of nowhere and give the old man a new scar. Hiruzen just took the hit and started to run harder, he knew his soon to be battle with his student would be fast and brutal, he guessed Orochimaru would try and rush him, A man his age would not have the speed or chakra management to keep up with the younger snake...so he would get more speed remove that advantage the snake had.
Hiashi was in hell he ran as hard as he could maintain (well as fast as he could with his leg, he would swear was broken from that first shot) Chief would just come from nowhere and hit every soft spot his armor did not cover over and over and the Hyuga just could not see or track him...Tsume was right, it was going to be a long day.
Then he felt it and screamed again, Chief had come up behind and just brought his foot up between the man's legs, Chief had a few rules one was 'if it puts them down use it' and kicking a guy in the balls always buts them down. 'damn those boots again' Hiashi thought as he felt the hidden metal, he held himself and just vomited on the ground before forcing himself up. Good thing to as the Cane came down and left a small crater in the ground right where the man had been kneeling.
"Stop playing with yourself and run boy," Chief called as he walked behind the hobbling Hiashi who still held himself.
Tsume growled as Kurenai tagged her again, this time causing a little trickle of blood, all was forgotten as she heard Hiashi scream out again, she knew that kind of scream and looked back and smiled as the arrogant clan head hobbled while holding himself, 'worth it,'
The ninja dogs were also getting a workout, the massive Kuromaru was doing the best as he leaped, ducked, and dodged every attack. So far only Dog and Mai had been able to land a hit...the triplets...weren't so lucky.
"You three got lazy," the large dog spoke as the three whined at the pain.
The run continued, they realized it would be harder as the third lap finished and they just started a forth, Ino and Sakura were just carrying each other as they walked, even Anko was ether tired or starting to show signs of mercy though no one risked asking her which. The only one who did not seem tired was Chief, Hiashi had hit the ground and the man just grabbed the clan head by the hair and pulled him to his feet and forced him to walk. One hand holding him up.
Finally, the call was shouted as the group seemed to finish the last lap all together, even Lee was tired, and at the end everyone was on a knee or laying on the ground, except Naruto who was leaned forward hands on his knees but still 'up',
"Equipment check, empty your gear in front of your circle," Chief ordered and pointed at the large purple circles that just showed up again.
No one spoke as they obeyed pulling out their weapons and other gear, Naruto and TenTen pulled out scrolls they had stored their gear in,
"You...buy those?" Kiba asked.
"Made them…had clones...working on them...all yesterday and last night," the blonde replied.
"You…been doing seals?" TenTen asked. "how long?"
"Since yesterday morning," Naruto replied.
"How?" she started to ask.
"Long story...tell you at...lunch," Shikamaru panted as he finished and laid on his back.
"So...what do you...hey that is my dad," TenTen called as she spotted a new body.
The boys looked and spotted a man not much taller but very stout, he walked by looking at the tools with an eye that screamed 'weapon smith'
"He was sitting and watching the whole time," Shino informed her.
"How did he get to sit and watch?" Kiba asked as he started to stand.
"He did not eat the food," The Hokage replied as he moved near the boys. "Chief's rule want the food, you have to earn it."
"Speaking of food, have you noticed in the twenty minutes we have been stopped our energy is returning quickly?" Shino asked as he looked around, almost everyone was back to their feet, even Ino and Sakura were back to their knee.
"How are you feeling Naruto?" Kiba asked.
The blonde just did a backflip and gave that smile.
Hinata was quiet, she was watching her father, true he had been mean to her. Even cruel but what Chief had been doing was making the generally kind girl feel sorrow and concern for her father. Plus, Naruto mentioned he was not part of the plan.
"The Chief's actions are fueled by a personal matter," Hokage spoke watching the girl. "A matter you will understand soon enough."
"What is this?" TenTen's father asked as he stopped and looked at the equipment in front of the blonde. "Where did you get this crap?"
Naruto just looked at the man as he picked up a Kunai, "That, I bought from Ken-san, for seven hundred yen. most of it I had to scavenge cause no one would sell to me."
The smith just tossed the Kunai away, "And you did not come to my store why?"
"You were the most expensive smith in town, and I was told you did not sell to students." Naruto replied.
"Who told you that?" TenTen asked offended someone would speak of her father or his shop like that.
"Mizuki, it wasn't till the last few days I learned how he set me up and I have not had time to resupply,"
"You will come by my shop tonight and I will supply you correctly,"
"We won't be getting out of here till late," Naruto spoke
"When you are done here tonight you WILL come see me, it will not be free of charge mind you but at a fair price..." the smith spoke till Tsume interrupted.
"No way Gen, charge him full price and put it on the Hokage's bill," she shouted and when Hiruzen looked at her. "your damn law kept our families from befriending the boy sooner and better, we could have prevented that shit, and Gen, my hunter team now buys only from you."
That was a good deal, Tsume was one of the lead Hunter-nin captains.
Some of the other adults nodded, and Gen smiled seems Chief was right it would be worth his time closing the shop for this.
"Hey can you do 'custom' orders?" Anko cried out with that wicked grin on her face.
"I made Ibiki's trunk and everything in it," was all the smith replied.
Anko's eyes lit up like a kid on Christmas...a very sick twisted Christmas.
"Sold when can I get it?"
"Finished with the inspection?" Chief called out pulling everyone back to the situation. "good...full counts begin."
Everyone groaned as they started,
"How soon Teuchi," Chief called out.
"you will know when you hear the bell," he replied with a chuckle from his cooking area.
Over and over they went up and down, when someone slowed the cane motivated them to speed back up, the instructors just walked through the rows striking a person hard, no one could tell who was hit harder by Chief, Hiashi or Naruto.
"Hinata...could...I...ask...about...last night?" Naruto asked after what felt like hours.
"Oh...that...it is...hard to...explain..." she replied.
"STOP," Chief called out, "line up for sparing."
As the group moved to the new large purple circle Hinata stood with her friends.
"When I was very young four I think, my mother took me out one night to her privet pond, she called it 'gentle dance of the moon light' I watched her for hours, she promised to teach me," Hinata told them as she looked to the past. "I had forgotten it till last night, I was having a dream about it, work up and moved on my own to that lake...It was like I was in a trance."
"Lee you first," Chief called.
The group watched as Lee cheered, then the spar began, Lee was fast as he moved almost no one could see him half the time...Chief was faster he did not dodge he just blocked and countered...Lee only stopped as he was put on the ground over and over.
Neji was watching he scuffed to himself as he watched he thought of all the ways he could end the fight, having beaten Lee repeatedly. Then a thought entered his mind, your Byakugan was useless with the Chief, he asked what he could do without it and realized he had become reliant on it...His families greatest weapon had become his...their crutch. He paid a hell of a lot more attention of Lee and the Chief.
Sasuke was watching, Lee was fast, and Chief looked to be able to block and counter everything, hmm that loser can't land a single shot. when I get my Sharingan I will surpass them all.
Lee was knocked back hard but just leaped to his feet so over come in joy of the spar he made a really stupid mistake,
"FIRST GATE..."
"LEE NO!" Gai shouted, but it was too late.
"OPE..."
He couldn't finish as Chief moves faster than anyone had ever seen, pushed Lee's arm to the side and slammed his fist into the boy's chest ending whatever he planned, forcing the boy to pass out. Chief while holding the boy lifted his right root and kicked out to his side where his foot found the jaw of Gai who had been rushing to his student's side.
The green beast hit the ground as Chief carried Lee to where the Hinata and TenTen and the boys were and left him.
"Ok" Naruto started, "That...what was that."
TenTen started to explain the Gates and the Hokage filled in a few gaps.
"But...he closed the gate," Hinata replied. "Is that...how normal is that?"
"few can do it," Hiruzen replied. "It takes Kage level Chakra reserves and Control."
"Kage level?" Naruto asked.
"Yes, Kage level, if it wasn't for the fact he would kill me for thinking it, I would try to hand the title of Hokage to him."
"That would be dangerous father," Asuma spoke as he stepped closer, "remember what happened when he Proctored that one Chunin exam, or that year he worked the Academy.
The old man just growled and nodded as the Chief woke up the knocked out Gai,
"Dumb fool, your next." Chief shouted as he stood waiting on Gai to stand.
This fight was faster, where before Naruto had watch Chief evaluate and work with Lee this time Chief just beat the Jonin.
"Your father warned you about the gates...teaching them to the boy who would use them in a spar is reckless and," Chief stopped and used a heavy axe kick to put Gai's head into the ground. "We will be talking about this later, Neji."
The young Genin walked forward not sure what to do, he had just watched his sensei the Taijutsu master get beat without even landing a hit, and through all this time, he never saw the Chief show any sign of fatigue, he wasn't even breathing hard.
The match did not last long without the Byakugan, the Hyuga could not even get close, his Jyuken was empty without being able to see the targets, Neji was kicked from the circle easily.
"Kiba,"
The boy did better, he was quick and good at hand to hand, but he did not have the experience to back it up. Choji was next, here Chief changed he went to a different form that turned out to be a lot like the Akimichi a lot of power little skill. Choji was pushed from the circle quickly.
"Tsume," the woman came hard and fast used every skill she had...and lost quickly though she was smiling at the end.
"Shino," Chief called and when the boy entered the circle. "You can shut that off now."
"Chief?" Shino replied confused. Shibi was also confused till...
"So, you can't control it...you don't even know do you?" Chief asked. Ok quick lesson, Aburame are the best as spying and infiltration only Jiraiya surpasses them and he learned a version of the Aburame cloak." Chief started. Everyone listened, "Your allies emit pheromones that actually block senses they mask you shield you make you invisible to the naked eye."
Shino nodded, maybe this is why people tend to forget he is there, at least he wasn't being ignored they really couldn't see him.
"Your file shows that you like, your father tends to stay back and watch. Which is a characteristic of your clan, my guess is your allies sensed this and activated the cloak to help you. your father should be able to help you learn to turn it off."
Shino nodded and took a stance, His Taijutsu was different then the academy style that he normally used, it actually took Chief a second to recognize it. It took Shibi half a second before he looked at his wife,
"When did you teach him your style?" he asked his wife who just smiled.
"When you weren't looking," her grin and when his eyebrow rose above his glasses she replied by sticking her tongue out at him before..."SHINO I SAW SIX HOLES YOU MISSED," she called as Shino was standing up and heading back to the group.
The boy just nodded to his mother and stood by Shika.
"How many secrets are you keeping?" Shika asked his friend.
"How many are you?" Shino replied, and the young Nara just nodded the point.
And so, on he went down the line. Adults and kids no order, when fighting a student or member of team nine Chief was mostly defensive, did not stop him from ending the bouts with Ino and Sakura in less than a minute, and that was with adding the times for each girl together...less than a minute total.
As he faced the adults, he pushed. They gave a rather decent showing and Naruto learned a few things, one: Shino's mothers name was Midorando Mitsubachi, Tsume called her Meme, the rest of the adults called her Midori. two: Chief was just as hard on Sakura and Ino mothers as he was on the girls, combined they lasted six minutes.
"Chika," he called
And here the younger ones questioned, they did not know a Chika. Till Choji's mom Chi-Chi stepped forward.
"I thought her name was Chi-Chi," Ino questioned louder then she thought.
"Chika Chiyoko Akimichi," the large woman spoke as she stepped forward, "but that won't change anything I am still mama Chi-Chi to you Ino,"
Ino blushed and ducked her head, "yes mama Chi-Chi."
Chichi was wearing a sleeveless shirt and a pair of dark brown leggings and was tying what looked like a Mawashi. She stepped into the circle and set her feet waiting, Chief looked at her and got into his own stance.
"Began," the Hokage called and Chi-Chi charged, and pushed Chief back three inches, so far no one had moved him back yet. then started a fast contest of hands trying to gain leverage on each other. Chi-Chi kept trying to pick and throw, after her momentum to try and push him from the ring ended. Chief would ether out power her lift or use another means to break her hold, Kick to the shin, slap to her side...even a headbutt, which gave her a cut on her eye.
For ten minutes they grappled back and forth. Ito, Ino's mother, was clapping while Tsume and Choji cheered loudly for the woman. Even Choza was giving out encouragement, Till Chief got under her arms finally and pulled using a hip throw to put the big woman down on the ground out of the ring. It was the closest anyone had gotten to beating the Chief, Choza didn't even do that well.
"Hinata," Chief called as he helped Chi-Chi up.
The young girl was scared as she stepped forward, for once neither her father nor her cousin scuffed at her timidness, Neji had his ass handed to him in his spar and Hiashi...still hurt.
"Easy Hinata he is not out to hurt you, he is testing use to see what we can do and what we need work on." Naruto whispered to her.
She just nodded and went to the ring, she did not activate her eyes but took her standard Jyuken stance. Chief just looked at her it wasn't a cold stare Hinata felt like he was waiting for something. Hinata attacked and Chief started a strange bouncing dance going side to side. Every time she attacked he just dodged and slapped her hands away, he moved in a way that as time went by Hinata would get tangled in her own feet.
'What is he doing," Hiashi asked himself. ' He is acting like...no she can't..."
Some were getting tired of watching the Chief play with the girl, it was the first time he acted this way. One person was getting mad, Shino and Shika spotted the shaking of the blonde who stood between them. Both boys looked at each other after staring at their friend and both held up fingers counting down, three...two...one.
"Hinata dance with the moon." Naruto called out not knowing just how powerful that one sentence was.
The group as one looked at him, then the adults looked back at the girl, the kids however stared at the blonde, Ino and Sakura shout things calling what he said a stupid distraction. Not speaking but both Neji and Sasuke agreed with the girls.
Hiashi was wide eyed and pale as he watched his daughter, not saying a word she changed her stance from the solid footing of her clan's style to up on her toes.
"Let's dance," was all Chief said.
Hinata charged...she flew and attacked staying on her toes she attacked and spun around on the tip of her toes to avoid the counter. Those watching had never seen anything so graceful and those that could see it or knew that style so deadly.
Tsume was grinning evilly as everyone watched Hinata push and challenge the chief (he was still holding back) as she walked up beside Hiashi who was deathly pale,
"Seems she inherited her mother's kindness, her gentleness and it seems her fighting style," the woman whispered.
"Yes," the man whispered more to himself then to her.
Hinata was pushed back but she stayed on her feet in the circle when she looked back up at the Chief she had a fire in her eyes no one had seen before. So powerful her Byakugan activated no hand signs or words.
"But she has lost," Hiashi spoke out.
"What?" Naruto growled, he was getting pissed how that man could just disregard his daughter so much.
"Chief," Hiashi started realizing how it sounded for once. "Has a special skill that makes the Byakugan useless." He looked to the boy. "Once our eyes are activated he vanishes."
"Really?" Shibi asked in a surprised and almost humorous tone.
"Yes," Hiashi replied and turned to face the man on his other side. "rea..." he stopped and looked back that the spar.
Hinata was still going and getting closer and closer...then she landed a finger on the Chiefs hand, he actually winced and shook his hand reopening the Tenketsu point in his palm just as fast as she closed it.
"She," Hiashi stuttered "She can see him?" and he activated his eyes to make sure. Sure enough, the moment he did the Chief vanished and it looked as if Hinata was fighting air.
"And it seems her mother's eyes." Tsume finished and walked away.
Hinata again attacked and as Chief went to block she shifted catching him off guard as she pivoted and brought her foot around in a round house kick to the side of his head. Chief hit the ground his glasses falling off. He got on his knees and grabbed his glasses and replaced them before anyone could see his eyes, but he did reach and touch the spot where she kicked him. pulling his fingers back he saw the red of his blood.
Getting to his feet he grabbed the clasp that kept his coat fastened on, "Finally a real fight," he growled as he went to remove his coat only to have a hand on his chest. Mai had walked up and stopped him, confused the Chief looked and found Hinata on her hands and knees panting, she was done. Quickly clipping his coat back together he walked to the girl and helped her up and over to sit next to Naruto.
At that moment only four people were left, Naruto Sasuke Hiashi and the Hokage, Chief just ignored Sasuke as he had the whole time (the emo boy was starting to get pissed at the lack of attention) Hiashi was pale and only his training kept him from pissing himself when the Chief locked eyes with him for a second. Naruto knew he would not be called, he had spared just a few days ago so the Chief already had all the information he needed.
"Hiruzen," Chief called. "I need a fight or I'm going to kill Hiashi,"
The Hokage just put his helmet on and stepped into circle and took a stance. Knees bent one hand back and above his head the other down fingers touching the ground. Those who knew the monkey style the Hokage learned when he became their summoner, knew this was not a spar. The fight was just that a fight, the Hokage moved around rolling, ducking and striking like a monkey, Chief just hit hard and violent...
"That's basically A monkey verses a gorilla," Shika spoke as they watched.
And he was right Chief was using a monkey form that looked like an enraged gorilla, the two seemed on par with each other. time no longer mattered.
'DING DING DING' A loud bell rang and both men stopped panting as Teuchi rang the bell for lunch,
"That's two hours for lunch," Chief called "You better be ready at the water's edge in two hours."
The group started to move but Chief charged at Hiashi and decked him hard holding him by his shirt, so he would not fall he slammed him to a tree, "Where is she?"
No one was moving as they watched the normally controlled chief lose all control as he slammed Hiashi again. "WHERE IS KYOKO,"
Neji heard that name and charged forward, "What do you want with my mother?"
"Where is she her and I need to speak," Chief growled still pinning Hiashi to the tree.
"My mother is in morning seclusion she will not speak to anyone. She has refused to speak to anyone."
That statement told more secrets than any other, Neji's mother hasn't spoken to him since his father died.
"We shall see," Chief growled and let the man go and just started walking out of the area. Walking not vanishing like normal.
'Better run...don't want to miss...this," Mai said as she grabbed her plate of food and followed the chief. soon everyone followed suit.
Plates in hand they followed the marching Chief as he walked all the way over to the entrance of the Hyuga compound. Even Sasuke join as he wanted to learn more about the Chief. the group followed along walking behind the angry Chief, well most did Anko decided to take her favorite way to travel, on Kurenai's back.
Hiashi was walking limp and all right behind the Chief along with Neji and as they approached the entrance to his clans land he frantically waved the guards away as the Chief just walked right into the center of the Courtyard.
Taking a deep breath, "KYOKO...GET YOUR SKINNY ASS OUT HERE!" the chief shouted causing the entire clan to stop and look at the man, many shocked to see him there.
"Chief instructor Kuzai," Neji spoke with as much formal authority as he could. "My mother is in seclusion she will..." a screen door opened. " Not speak," Neji said as he slowly turned to face the door that opened. " to anyone,"
The place went silent as a pale woman with black hair wearing a pure white kimono came walking out of the hut and straight towards the Chief, the Clan Head, and Neji. No one spoke no, one moved, as she stopped before the Chief and bowed at her waist as far as she could eyes down,
"Welcome home...father."
A/N Sorry for the cliff, i hit the 5k words and had to end it there. thanks to Sultryvoice for her help with names.
R/K
1: yes, i planned for Hinata to have special eyes long before I saw that movie (did not like the movie but was so angry with shippo that was the main cause for my dislike) let's dance, shall we?
2: yes, that is the reason chief is so cruel to Hiashi...father in law.
3: had to do that with Choji's mom it was one of the better late episodes of Shippo the moms fighting the sumo and Choji's mom doing it with just her hands.
4: I did that with Tsunade simply because there is no way she could have gone that long that drunk without getting into that kind of trouble, and I have always seen Jiraiya as coming in and saving her without her knowing.
5: I put that in for Shino lovers, he was ignored way too much so I gave it a reason. the Byakugan can though.
6: as of this 181 follows, 131 favs, 7 communities. 8800 views and 3500 visits (not sure what those mean to be honest) my best story ever and thanks to the 42 reviews I have gotten so far 42 and only 1 that said they did not like it and they weren't even rude ether
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