Hey guy's it's me here chaos um...how do i put this i'm going on hiatus BUT you guy's can Help me get over my writer's block by sending me in ideas but this will be my newest chapter for a while _ so...

Disclaimer: i aM an old Japanese rich basterd and i DO own Naruto AS well as avatar the last air bender
Now for those who can't take a joke:

I do not own naruto or am i an old Japanese rich basterd (lucky basterd)
Any way i'll have a poll for Naruto the bloody whirlpool rewrite and here are the options:

A. Naruto goes on a mission to wave with his new teammates ( team kirabi) and meets Haku and Zabuza (SP?) and get's in a fight with team 7 that has Sai.

B. Naruto goes on a mission to snow and meet princess yuki and save Snow with Yuki falling in love wid him. (But remember this is NARUTO X KYUUBI unless i change it into a harem.

C. Naruto goes straight to the Chunin Exams and *GASP* finds kushina and the rest of the uzumaki clan abandoned him because they think he became the kyuubi. (this is my favourite i always love these types of story's and i know that kyuubi said that all the uzumaki's died BUT i am the ALL powerful author that knows and See's everything, JIMMY STOP PICKING YOUR NOSE!

Bold :shouting or demon speaking
bold italics: jutsu (i need someone to help me with those),
'bold italics':demon thinking

'thinking'
"speaking"

Ages
naruto: 15
kyuubi :looks 15 but been around 15 hundred years, (demons age in hundreds) but will stop aging at 17 as will naruto for later reasons.
Yugito: 17

Samui: 17
Omoi: 17
Kirabi: thirty
Raikage : thirty

Konoha 12: 14 apart from Neji, lee and ten-ten whom are 15

Oh and there's been a four year gap between from when i last updated

Any way enough with this shit on with the story!

Naruto the bloody whirlpool chapter 6 Start!

As the sun rose over the snowy peaks of Kumo we see a Kid around the age of thirteen that was 5'11' with blond hair that had a black leather duster on with the sleaves ripped off with the coat open showing off his tightly fitted black wife beater that did nothing to conceal his muscles,

As for his pants they were a combination of black skinny jeans and ANBU black ops standard pants

Strapped to his back was a sword slightly longer than a katana with the shape of a white dragons head as the handle spitting out the obsidian black blade ( i know i changed his look but i am the author and i felt that he needed an upgrade so bite me)

"Naruto!" a voice shouted.

The blonde named naruto turned around and saw two girls running at him full shinobi speed both blonde though the difference between then was obvious.

The bigger bulkier blonde had a larger bust that would soon rival tsunade's in a couple of years and short cropped hair that suited her that made her amber coloured eye's stand out more she was clothed in a light green tank top that looked rather tight this made many men's eyes follow her as she ran up to our blonde protagonist.

While the other shorter and lither blonde had long hair about waist length but still had a rather sizeable bust, she was decked out in a black long sleeved top and biker shorts. Her eye's shone with announce as she looked upon the blonde.

Naruto looked at the two before bursting out laughing at the sight.

You see the what made the people stop to stare at them wasn't the fact that they were beautiful.

It was because

They.

Were
painted
a
bright purple.

Naruto seeing how annoyed they looked ran for his life as any sane man would when there were two extremely hot girls that were pissed beyond reasoning were chasing after him.

After a while Yugito and Samui gave up on chasing him and naruto finally got to have a rest after dodging multiple sharp objects among which were a number of sharp tipped spears aimed at a place where it is most important to most men.

"Hold it" Naruto panted as they stopped .

"What!" both Samui and Yugito yelled i mean asked.

"why are you going after me?" asked Naruto confused.

"You pranked us!"
"Did not''

"did too"

"Not"

"Too" you see after a few months
in Kumo naruto regained his reputation as a prank king and it was aimed mostly at his team mates which he found out after a couple of weeks in Kumo. In went like this
flash back
Naruto had just walked into the Raikage's office after being called in there.

he was surprised too see that team kirabi was in there too.
"was going on?" naruto asked with a totally confused looked shared by the genin of kirabi's team.

soon the raikage walked into his office and asked, or told them to sit down.
"Naruto" the powerful man of thirty ( i dunno his real age)

"yes sir?"

"do you still want to be a shinobi"
"of course sir"
"are you sure"
"yeas sir" naruto started to grow annoyed with the same question being asked a statement being shadowed by kyuubi.

"how do you feel about being on team kirabi?"

"WHAT? WHY" shouted Samui, it's not that she didn't like naruto it's just that he was a handful some times.
"geez thanks for welcoming me with open arms guys"

Naruto said sarcastically, Samui didn't even bother apologizing.

Flash back over

So soon after that Kirabi choose no mercy and doubled naruto's weights every second day before making him run around the whole of Kumo,

.hey guys i am/was really tempted to end the chapter here as i said i am going through a really hard writer's block and it doesn't help having school work, soccer and a social life on top of that, but since i love you guys, even though y'all can be dicks sometimes. I will continue the chapter.

"Kirabi...ima...gonna...kill...you..." Naruto panted as he dragged a tire on his back that had kirabi on it who was reading Kumo weekly and drinking lemonade.

"yeah, yeah nine that's what you said last time" was his reply. Off in the distance the sun was setting over the giant snow capped mountain.

Three hours later

Naruto had just collapsed into his bed when darkness over took him. He then recognised the are of his mind-scape before he was tackled to the ground by a red and white blob.

"naru-kun" a sweet voice purred above his head, naruto looked up into the beautifully sculpted face of young redheaded women.
"you haven't come to see me for ages, do you not like me anymore'' kyuubi fake sobbed into his shoulder.
" no no no no kyuu-chan i do like you but I've been busy lately with training and my friends" naruto rushed out sadden that he had upset kyuubi.

kyuubi suddenly stopped sobbing and became angry at the mention of his friends because that blonde bitch was included in that category " but naru, i'm the only friend you need, i don't want you to get hurt again, and then there's the blonde girl yugioh somthing''

"Yugito" naruto corrected confused at her attitude,
"what ever, she's trying to take what's MINE from me, and i don't like her" kyuubi growled out possessively while hugging naruto to herself as if she could feel Yugito trying to steal him.
"W-w-w-w-what do you mean?'' naruto said in confusion but likeing the feel of her body against his 'so soft and warm'.

" Your my naruto, and MINE only" ' i'll kill that bitch if she ever tries to take him away from me' kyuubi thought with full intention of following up with that threat.
" kyuubi i don't get what you mean, what do you mean i'm yours" naruto said in confusion but felt his body reaction to her being possessive of him, kyuubi felt that too and started grinding into it.

"your body knows it and don't try to deny it you like me, so ive decided to keep you,''

" i don't get what you mean'' said naruto said in confusion yet again.

"oh you will,'' kyuubi grinned like the cat that got the rat as she latched her head up to his neck, her mouth opened to reveal two elongated canine teeth.

Before naruto could reacted she plunged them into his neck all the while pumping chakra into them, naruto felt his body spasm in pain, kyuubi brought his head up to her neck as well, naruto felt complelled to do the same to kyuubi as he bit her at the juncture between her neck and shoulder.
kyuubi started to shake in pleasure-pain as well as she collapsed on top of the soon-to-be unconscious blonde male. As they faded into the sweet abyss of sleep neither noticed the swirl of dark red colour around them focusing onto one point, the spot they were bitten.

There, lay the tattoo's that marked them to each other forever.

AND CUT:
sorry if the story ended a bit confusingly but i'm tired and it'll probably a while until i next update but instead of telling you what the tattoo's look like in the next chapter i'm going to tell you now.

Kyuubi's tattoo: a broken swirl that has a blue slitted eye inside the crake of the swirl
naruto's tattoo: a red fox curled into a ball inside a feild of grass.

now that that's done can you people please leave reviews but no flames and just for the arseholes out there that think i failed in school, guess what I AM in school ergo i'm still learning...jackasses

Please no flames otherwise i'll use them to cook my dinner.
Peace out

Shadows chaos