Ok guys starting to draw a more advanced story in my mind. I see a... NO I can't tell you :( Guess you'll just have to read on. Anyways huge thanks again to 1dog2boys, James Dashner, Jake, and Alex. (Jake also helped me with the story.) Two more things. One, when I put "and the left the room" I really mean they* Also sometimes words get smashed into each other, but when I check the spelling error on GD it says there actually was a space. (Example "awayfrom" in the beginning of the book.) Two, sense you guys aren't sending me characters expect little creativity. (You'll find out what I mean by that later in the story.) Enjoy!

Brenda's POV

All I wanted to be was alone. My heart was broken, and thrown away like trash. Teresa was back, which I was happy to see, but she did steal my only love from me. So I went up into one of the guard towers facing north looking down the long road that led up to the fort. All I had with me was an alarm button that would send off a pulse turning all the alarms on if I pushed it. I was depressed, alone, and of course heartbroken. I just sat there turning my head every once, and awhile to see how low the sun was getting before disappearing under the horizon. Suddenly out of the corner of my eye I saw four strangers approaching. I pushed the button not quite sure if I should grab my gun yet. They looked like they were only a few years younger than me. Three boys, and one girl. One of the guys were ahead of the other three by a few steps, and looked like the leader. He was strikingly handsome with blonde hair, and brown eyes. He had a troubled look on his face. The other two boys weren't quite as handsome as the first, but one had brown hair, and the other was another blonde. The girl on the other hand had pitch black hair with brown eyes as well, but didn't look as afraid. The door opened below as James, and a few other men ran out pointing their guns at the group of four. Before they did however the whole group also had weapons. They seemed to have pulled them out of nowhere. The leader of the group was yelling at James, "We don't want any trouble, we were just passing by." James shouted back, "Then why don't you set your guns on the ground, and step back on the ground?" The group didn't comply. "I was hoping you were going to do that." The leader's voice strangely calm. He gave a nod backwards, and did what James said. "Now what?" The leader called. He seemed sweet not trying to cause any trouble. "Just stay there until I say." James said as he holstered his weapon and started walking forward with the Flare testing kits. "What the hell are those?!" The leader called again. "We're just going to see if you have the flare." James said emotionlessly. James pricked each of them, and tested their blood. "They're immune!" He yelled back to the other guards. "Get up." James demanded. The leader was the first to do so. Started walking for his gun. James kicked it away. "Oh hell nah." He said sarcastically which made the other people in the group laugh. James glared at the leader, and asked, "Got a name?" The way he said it sounded like he was annoyed. "Jim Rollington Hendrick Luckingham the forty second." He said again in a sarcastic voice making the others laugh. "Just kidding, it's Jack." I giggled like a immature girl again. I laughed. Actually laughed. This "Jack" fella is actually making me laugh at a time like this. Ignoring James's glaze he picked up his pistol which was rather large. Looked like it was a magnum. Jack spoke, "So is this your little fort?" he asked directing the question to James. "Yeah, and we're not taking in at the moment because we are already full enough." Jack turned to his friends still on the ground, and said "Looks like we're going back to living in a box, and fighting for scraps from people that are insane." Obviously trying to convince him to let them stay. "They can stay with me!" I shouted not really knowing what I was doing, but in fact they did have to spare rooms back at the house where Thomas, and Teresa are probably making out right now. Jack looked up at her obviously not noticing her until now. "So can we then?" Jack asked James. "Fine by me." Jack grew a smile. "Thanks." and he started to walk toward the door. I quickly slid down the latter, and met him at the door. This time now that I got a better look he had a gash in the side of his head that was still bleeding. "Let me take a look at that." I said pulling out my disinfectant spray, and bandage. "This might sting a little." Trying to not make him afraid, but it was actually really going to hurt a lot. I sprayed his head, and he flinched trying to look tough, but I knew that it really hurt. I put the bandage around his head then said, "Looks like you will be staying with me so I might as well show you too room." He smiled then replied with, "Thanks for saving our butts out there." I liked him more, and more with every word. "My honor." I said as I smiled. I led them to the house, and opened the door while giving them a gesture to come in. Teresa, and Thomas were sitting on the couch flirting with each other. "Where have you been?" Thomas asked. "Like it matters to you." He looked sad. "Oh, and some more people are going to stay with us." I said while walking in with the others walking in behind me. "And you didn't think "Maybe Teresa would want to know about this?" She said putting parenthesis around the words. "Short notice." was all I said as I led the four new guests into their room. "Oh and by the way this is Alex, Jake, and Katherine." I studied the new peoples' presence. "Hi, I guess. Oh, and dinner will be served," I looked at my watch which said 6:12, "in exactly 48 minutes." The I left the room shutting the door behind me.

Ok don't blame me for using my name (Plus Alex, and Jake). Told ya you should have inputted Characters. Anyway review, review, review, review, and review!

Also my plan for the story is to write 5,000 words a day for the next 7 days. Some days I might fall short, but thats because i'm mapping out the next part of the story, and i'll make up for it the next day. Like always enjoy, and keep up your Imagination!