I will be discontinuing this version of the story. I have gone back and re-written the first chapter and am, at this moment, finishing the second. I've been able to improve my writing style dramatically because of feedback and support on this story.
It will continue! And I will take every comment/review to 'heart' and consider all of my writing and story choices carefully. If you're interested in helping with pointing the story where to go or to provide suggestions and let me know if a chapter will work before I publish it, PM me and I'll publish that seperately.
Thanks for the support!
-Blargleschnartz
