My story was obviously the worst thing ever written in the history of story writing, and now, I really don't feel like completing it. But let me get you in on a secret. It's based on a true story, believe it or not. It happened to an acquaintance of mine. Thank goodness she didn't die but only got injured. She's as well as ever now.
Anyway, I was saying I didn't want to complete the story. It was kind of cheesy, wasn't it? So I'll just say it has a happy ending and get on with the description of a story I mean to write but need your opinion on. Ooooor, I could just give you the main characters of two stories, a brief synopsis of each and let you decide which I should do. Oh! And the titles as well are for you to decide. I have them thought out but I want better suggestions. For now they're just Story A and Story B. Remember, you are the ones that choose. Sooo, here goes.
STORY A
Syaoran Li: A really handsome and charming 19 year old. Both parents died three years ago so he is head of the 'Li Corpse' (Sorry! I mean 'Li Corps.' =D) and the owner of the-no less than- five mansions in Japan (Don't ask me the city). He is an expert in martial arts and enjoys horse riding, and racing, of course, as well as hunting.
Sakura Li: She is Syaoran's sweet, innocent, 10 year old sister. She loves her brother to pieces. Always cheerful, but she has a secret her brother doesn't know about. Many people her age and older hurt her despite her sweet nature. Or is it because of it? She loves horse riding as it helps her get away from her troubles for a while. She also likes watching Syaoran practice his martial arts.
Tomoyo Daidouji: She is Sakura's caring cousin who is 3 years older than her. She's almost as rich as her but not quite. She defends her cousin the best she can when she can and is quite safe while doing so. She also knows Sakura's little secret.
Eriol Hiiragisawa: He's the same age as Syaoran and also his best friend. As he lives alone, he often stays at the Li Mansion. He annoys Syaoran a lot thus earning the title of 'the annoying,' blue-haired freak' by Syaoran. The name always makes Sakura smile and giggle on hearing it which is probably the only reason Syaoran says it and Eriol puts up with it.
Rika Sasaki: Rika is the sensible and sensitive one. She is, at 14, quite mature. She is also Sakura and Tomoyo's good friend and helps her out a lot and gives her advice.
Touya Kinomoto: He's 25 and really good looking. Being head of the Kinomoto Businesses and Syaoran's rival, he will resort to anything (even attempt murder?) to top the Li Corps'.
STORY B
Sakura Kinomoto: She is a 9 year old orphan and lives with her brother and her cruel uncle. After he dumps her at her mother's friend's house in Hong Kong without any notice, who knows what will happen?
Syaoran Li: He's 12, rude and mean. You can call him stoic or whatever but I call him mean and rude. He hates anyone who doesn't have a lot of guts and who cries in front of anyone- namely him. (I don't blame him. Oh! Who am I kidding, I do.)
Touya Kinomoto: He's Sakura's older brother but he rarely makes an entrance into the story and, by rarely, I mean very rarely. His character sketch is not important except that he calls Sakura a kaijuu (monster).
Yelan Li: She's Syaoran's mother. She is kind when she has to be but her son looks at her as really strict since he turned 7. The rest is in the story.
Meiling Rae: I'm using this surname since I don't want her mixed up in the Li family. She's Yelan's niece and Syaoran's cousin. Meiling can be a really good friend provided you don't insult her in any way even once. Once she's you friend, there's never and mistrust or enmity with her ever. She has a fiery sort of nature.
Story A is about Sakura, what she goes through and what Syaoran does when he finds out. There is no love story only family, friendship (and attempted murder? Thrice?) Sakura is a girl with a huge secret. She is bullied and hurt a lot by people who pretend to be Syaoran's friends but he doesn't know that since she won't tell him. The question remains. "Is Sakura really as innocent as she looks or isn't she? And what is the secret she's hiding?)
Story B is about the orphaned girl, Sakura. Her uncle hates her and unable to bring himself to kill her, just sends her to her parents' friend's house along with a letter and leaves her there without notice. She meets Yelan and her son and is kind of scared of Syaoran once he threatens her and she takes his words seriously. Who knows what could happen if you left a 9 year old alone and away from the only family she has left- her brother, Touya.
So that's it. Now it's up to you to choose which one you want to continue though, personally, I like the second one best. The titles are for you to decide as well but if you can't, then I'll put up the one I originally thought of,'kay?
Love you all. Tootles
~Ayesha
