Hey everyone! I re-did this chapter because I needed to put something in here that I had originally planned to be in chapter 9. Now it's way longer!


Nightmare Fumu charged at Kirby, Bun, and the twins. Bun and the twins dodged by jumping/flying in various directions. Kirby, on the other hand, stood right where he was and took an uppercut to his stomach (or chin) that sent him flying towards Whispy's Woods.

"Poyoooo." Kirby yelled as he flew, and landed on the fringe of the woods.

Fumu ran towards him, smirking. Close behind, Bun, Lololo, and Lalala were trying to overtake her.

"Kirby do something!" Bun called out.

Kirby heard him and ran into the woods, weaving between the trees, as fast as his rather large feet could take him. He ran, and ran, and didn't stop until he had come to a grassy, round clearing. Kirby decided he had gone far enough and he was tired, so he sat against a tree to take a breather.

Kirby looked up into the leaves of the tree, and a pair of red eyes looked back. He jumped away from the tree, into the clearing, just as Fumu jumped out of the tree, and landed where he had been resting.

"You can't escape me that easily." She said, walking towards him menacingly. Kirby, too tired to run any further, and sat down and breathed deeply.

She was no more then two feet in front of him when a giant beam of light, the shape of a crescent moon, came from the forest. Fumu had to jump back to avoid it, and it barely missed Kirby. Fumu looked in the direction it came from and muttered "Meta Knight" as if his name was a curse.

Then Meta Knight came out of the shadows of the trees with his sword; Galaxia drawn, followed by Sword and Blade; both had their swords drawn as well, who where then followed by Bun, Lololo and Lalala who were panting.

Fumu's eyes narrowed and she said in a low voice; "You can't stop me Meta Knight, if you kill this girl's body, little Kirby will be heart broken, and I'll just take someone else." She paused, grinned, and then added, "But if you do nothing, I will destroy Kirby, you, the rest of this *beep* Star, and take back my control of this Universe. So, Star Warrior, what will you do?"

Her grin grew wider as she stared down Meta Knight, daring him to make a choice. He would have to fight, or stand aside and watch.

Meta Knight held Galaxia in front of himself, and grabbed it with both hands.

In a fighting stance.

"Sir Meta Knight, you wouldn't." Bun exclaimed in disbelief.

"There is no other choice." Meta Knight darkly. Fumu smirked, and gave Meta Knight a 'come and get me' kind of hand gesture.

"I should warn you, I cannot allow you to simply kill this girl," Fumu warned, "She is part of my plan."

"Plan?" Meta Knight inquired.

"Yes. My plan to take my ultimate revenge!"

Meta Knight charged and slashed at her. She dodged to the left, and punched him in the back. He turned and hit her side, hard, with the flat of his sword. She stumbled back, cursing. Meta Knight pressed his advantage by hitting her other side and her back, with just as much force, before she could recover. He stopped, and backed up, like he was expecting something to happen.

Fumu, shaking from the pain in her sides and back, noticed this and said, "What are you waiting for?" Meta Knight didn't answer, but she figured out the answer, "You think that you can get me out of this body by forcing me out with pain? 'Just like Bokyaku' right?" She scowled, "Do not compare me to such a petty demon. I am Lord Nightmare; I live on pain and suffering."

Ignoring her injuries, she lunged at Meta Knight, feinted a punch to his back, and as he turned to block, she spun and kicked his sword arm, he flinched. She jumped back, leaving a few feet between them, and started gathering a ball of dark energy in her hands.

She shot this dark energy ball at Meta Knight. It blasted him backward into a tree. Before he could get up, she shot two more balls of energy; one of which tied his hands to the tree, like a rope of black electricity, causing him to drop Galaxia; the other tied his feet to the tree.

"Meta Knight!" The kids cried.

"Poyo!"

Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Sword and Blade charge at her, and shot four balls out; tying them to trees the same way as she had Meta Knight.

She walked to the base of Meta Knight's tree, bent down, picked up Galaxia, and pointed it at Kirby, who was still sitting down, and said "Now Kirby we will finish this."

"Poyo!" Kirby exclaimed, shaking his head no.

"What, you don't want to fight?" Fumu asked mockingly, walking up to Kirby until she stood over him. "You won't hurt your friend?"

"Poya Poyo!" Kirby exclaimed.

"Of course you won't," Fumu pointed Galaxia at Kirby so it was just an inch from his face, "that is why I chose the girl and not you."

"Huh?" Was the general expression of everyone watching.

"You where mistaken to believe I could be destroyed so easily," Fumu continued, glaring at Kirby as if she was talking just to him, "After you did that to me, a small part of my soul survived. At that time, I could have chosen to possess this girl or you Kirby."

"That doesn't make sense!" Bun shouted, "Why choose sis? She can't inhale or use copy abilities."

"She serves a greater purpose," Fumu answered, still not taking her red eyes off Kirby, "I learn from my mistakes; Kirby had little problem expelling the Devil Frog when this girl called to him. I suspect that the same would have happened if I had possessed him."

"Now it makes sense," Meta Knight muttered. "He doesn't have enough energy to completely take over a host."

"Completely?" The three kids asked.

"Mind, body, and spirit." Meta Knight answered. "To completely control a host, you must have control of all three. Kirby has an impenetrable spirit, so it's next to impossible to completely possess him."

"So, do you have complete control of Fumu?" Meta Knight inquired.

Fumu scowled, taking her eyes off Kirby to glare at Meta Knight, "Her body and spirit are mine, and her mind is falling. She has almost no will to live."

The kids gasped. "What did you do to her?" They all demanded at once.

Fumu lowered Galaxia, looked towards the kids, and laughed. "I trapped her in her own worst nightmare, she thinks that your planet has been lay to ruin and you're all dead. Now she's trapped in a world of darkness."

"You *Beeeeep*." Bun yelled. Lololo and Lalala had to hold him back to prevent him from charging.

Kirby looked sadly at his possessed friend. He didn't understand everything that Nightmare had said, but somehow, someway, he knew that Fumu was sad and scared. He wanted to comfort her, to make it all better.

Fumu was finishing her speech still looking at the kids, with her back to Kirby, "Imagine her anguish when she wakes up, only to find that nightmare come true, but by her own hand. Her pain and suffering will be a banquet for me." Kirby took one careful step forward. Placed one hand on her arm, and slowly rubbed back and forth, saying comforting 'poyo's.

Fumu spun around her expressions changing from smug bravado, to surprised, then, for just a moment, something that looked like happiness, and then raging fury. She smacked Kirby's hand away and pointed Galaxia at him.

"Kirby of the stars," She said angrily, as she raised Galaxia above her head, her eyes glowing brightly "This is the end."

Kirby let out a terrified "POYO!", and covered his head, as the gold sword descended toward him…


Well how did you guys like the add-on? Of course now I need to change the next chapter too.