So, yeah, the next chapter is going to take awhile. I need to edit all the chapters I've already made to make them legal, cause OF COURSE, I forgot this kind of story was banned. That rule was actually the reason I flat out STOPPED production of my HDN reader, because I did not feel like going back and editing those. SO, YEAH. Sorry bout that. However, to tide you all over, here are some concepts for upcoming LEGAL chapters.


ALL HERE IS SUBJECT TO CHANGE (Especially Mei's)


"Kinzoku! That's enough!" Aizawa yelled at his student in the battle exercise, the student having produced an entire array of various spikes, holding in Hagakure and Kouda, both too horrified to to move. "Hagakure, Kouda, you both lose. Mineta, you failed the trial as you failed to assist Kinzoku in any way." The tired teacher said, and Kinzoku grinned as he touched the metal torture machine. It melted. His victims stepped out, and he took a deep breath. His arms felt strained, and he was very tired. Using a Quirk to make something complex like that took a lot out of him, and he figured his Quirk would have to be on cooldown. "Kinzoku, come with me after class." Kinzoku got worried, this being the first time he had ever been reprimanded. And he had just gotten here!

While being accepted into UA was the dream of a lifetime, his hurried transfer after the Hero Killer incident by his parents in order to make sure UA didn't cancel it, so of course jumping into 1-A right after three of their members just went through some serious trauma, and gifting everyone daggers probably was not the best idea, he still did it. Hopefully his trouble wasn't for that. After class passed, he walked up to the teacher.

"Yes, sir?" He asked, and Aizawa handed him a letter. Kinzoku opened it, and it was a request by another hero in the school named Power Loader. Please come meet me after school in the Development Studio. It wasn't trouble, as far as he knew, and when he asked if there was anything else Aizawa shook his head and with a grin Kinzoku was good to go! After a quick walk through the school, he arrived at the studio. Looking around, he couldn't find anyone. Then she popped up, literally popped up behind a workbench, with a grin. He looked at the girl in confusion, figuring she wasn't Power Loader.

"Hello! Who are you?" She asked, and you waved.

"Justin Kinzoku. You are?" Kinzoku asked, and she grinned.

"Mei Hatsume! Nice to meet you!" She whirled around and dipped back down into the work area. He were confused, expecting her to pop back up, but she never did. As Kinzoku was about to open your mouth, the door behind him opened.

"Hatsume! Did that Ki..." The short man with large claws looked at him. "Oh, I'm assuming you're Kinzoku." He gave a quick thumbs up. "Ah, yes, so…"

"What did you need Loader?" Hatsume asked, popping back up right next to Kinzoku. He jumped, and Power Loader sighed.

"Please don't interrupt me when I'm talking." She nodded, with a smile that conveyed the fact that she couldn't care less about him talking. Kinzoku couldn't help but grin at that little response as Power Loader cleared his throat. "I needed Kinzoku, who is here." The short hero turned to him again, and cleared his throat. "Is it true that you can make any metal you've seen before?"


"Ma'am, a villain with water?" Uraraka asked, running with Asui along the way to the villain attack.

"Yes, I believe you and Froppy should be able to handle him. If needed, Wave and I will arrive on the scene to help." Ryukyu said, and Uraraka nodded.

"Okay then! We got this!" Uraraka nodded at Asui, who nodded back. "Okay, Tsu, we should be able…" They had to dodge a lobbed table that was soaking wet, and they saw the villain.

The villain on the other hand, was doing what he pleased. His eyes flitted about, the water moving with gestures of his hand. He was on the lookout for heroes, scared of only Kamui Woods, Gang Orca, and possibly Ryukyu. They could swim through the water with relative ease, however even the number 1 hero Endeavor could not stop him. He flinched hard when something entered his expansive water world. With a wave of his hand, he caught the table that was thrown at him, and the water bubble that contained it crushed the property.

"You are?" He asked, intrigued at the sight of the two new heroines. He focused the water in a swirling tornado, and let them enter. They would be easy to handle, they seemed about his age.

"I'm Uravity! And you need to stop what you're doing!" The heroine declared, and he raised an eyebrow.

"Hilarious, what can you do to stop me?" He asked dryly, ironically, raising his hand.

"Like this, ribbit." The other one lunged for him, and he raised a water shield. She instantly swam through it with ease, and sent a drop kick right into his ribcage, and he crashed into his own funnel. He coughed hard, comprehending what just happened. And then becoming extremely angry at what just happened. "I'm Froppy, villain, how did you like that one, ribbit?"

"A frog girl, how quaint." He muttered, clapping his hands together and the water shifted into a prison for the two, and he stepped out of it, holding his ribs. His outfit wasn't meant for defense, his water was. He had a pair a black swimming goggles on his face, a mask over his mouth, a white t-shirt on beneath a black trench coat with tails, black slacks, and black shoes. That with finger less biker gloves, he was not expecting such force.


The reason it will take a minute to edit the chapters is this; The shortest chapter in Hagakure, has 202 "you's". And 66 "yours". Don't get me STARTED on Ochaco and the two Nejire. Nearly 700, and they all can't be replaced with one word. I'm going to have to go back at my own pace, so sorry if the next chapter's take awhile.