I hope you like this chapter, it was hard to write and translate. Thanks for all the support.

Most of the characters belong to E. L. James


September 23rd, 2016

Christian's POV

This week Ana and I celebrated a month together. What can I say?, I'm a lucky guy. My life changed completely when I met her and is like if just now I'm really living for the first time. The progresses I've made since we are a couple are unbelievable sometimes for my family. One day out of nowhere before going to pick up Ana for school I said goodbye to my mom with a hug and kissed her on the cheek, I don't think I've ever seen her cry like that, she was more excited than when I told her I had a girlfriend. Now I hug my family all the time, Ana taught me people don't want to hurt me, I have nothing to be afraid of.

My girl and I are a team, we study together, I help her with Precalculus and she helps me with our reading, she always has a different perspective for every book she reads. We do our homework together every afternoon after school. We're still waiting for the acceptance letters from colleges, we are anxious to know the answers, I don't know what could happen if we get accepted in different places or if only I get accepted in Harvard, my father would never let me turn down that opportunity, anyway I'm positive about it.

After the talk Ana and I had on her birthday every time has been harder to control ourselves, but we have managed to wait for the proper occasion to have an intimate and calm moment.

We didn't want to lie to our parents, it's not like they are not waiting for this to happen either, but come on, it's not that easy to say to your father's girlfriend or your parents that you are staying at a hotel for the night with her daughter or my girlfriend whichever is the case. I wasn't going to pick up Ana at her home and say to Ray 'see you tomorrow, now I'm leaving with your daughter to make love to her for the first time', the guy knows how to use a gun, he made it pretty clear. So with the help of Mia, Ray thinks Ana is staying at my home for a sleepover, while my parents think I'm in Montesano with Elliot, Ethan and Jose.

Now, Ethan is in Montesano with Jose, but Elliot also taking advantage of the moment is gone with Kate somewhere. Mia has a sleepover with half of the cheerleader team and that leave Ana and I alone and calm. Though the fact that our friend suspect is not so relaxing, but for now we enjoy the moment.

We didn't talk much on the way to the hotel. What can be said in a moment like this?, maybe my romantic night it's a little affected by not having the surprise or spontaneous factor, but my girl deserves the best and what I have planned I know she will love it. I put some Coldplay on the car, her favorite band and let the music take away the nervousness.

It's almost 7 at night when we arrive to the Four Seasons, I pass my keys to the valley along with a tip and open the door for Ana, she holds me by the arm when we walk into the hotel.

"Good evening sir, what can I help you?", asks a smiling receptionist at the checking in desk.

"I have a reservation for Christian Grey" I say with steady voice. She searches on the screen.

"Reservation for Mr. Christian Grey, room 306, I need your credit card", I hand her my card and she hands me the keys of the room. A bellhop will show you the way, she points to a guy just a few years older than us that approaches us.

He greets us with a polite gesture of his head while asks us if we need help with our bags, we both say no. We follow him, he leaves us at the door of our room and goes. It's not a suite, but there's enough space to move around.

When we get in, Ana smiles when she sees the table with our dinner ready and candles decorating the place, I know she likes those little details more than bringing her to a fancy hotel. I feel the tension in the room, maybe if we stop thinking about what's going to happen we'll calm down. To do something I look into the little refrigerator in the room to find something to drink.

"Do you want something to drink Ana? There are sodas, sparkling water, beer and wine."

"Sparkling water is fine, unless you want to drink something stronger."

"Mmm… sparkling water will do it, I don't drink Ana."

"You don't drink like you are not 21 yet?", she asks.

"No, you see..., I haven't tell you this because the topic hasn't had come out, a few years ago I had troubles with alcohol and drugs, that's why I don't drink", for a moment I think I ruined the night.

"Oh…, okay, is good to know" she gives me a little kiss, I don't know how but she is always capable of seeing my fear. "I'm still here Christian, I'm not going anywhere", she smiles.

"We should have dinner before it gets cold, don't you think?" I ask and she nods.

I pull the chair for her to sit, before sitting myself I connect my iPod to the sound system in the room and we start eating dinner while listening to 'Canon in D Major' by Kevin Macleod, I have a whole playlist ready for the night, maybe this piece will help to calm our nerves.

We don't talk much, just a few comments about the food now and then, I know Ana is nervous I am too.

"You are very quiet Ana", I say while the music changes to 'Maybe' by Yiruma.

"I know…, I'm sorry, I'm nervous Christian, that's all", she blushes.

"Don't apologize Ana, I'm nervous too. You know we don't have to do anything tonight right?" I say with honesty, she looks me in the eyes and smile, stands up from her sit and comes near me, instinctively I push my chair back and she sits in my lap, she encircles my neck with her arms and I have her by the waist.

"I love you, Christian."

"I love you, Ana."

We kiss slowly and tenderly. When the music changes again and we pull apart to breath.

Love is a funny thing
Whenever I give it, it comes back to me
And it's wonderful to be
Giving with my whole heart
As my heart receives
Your love

"Let's dance", I say to Ana.

I've never been a great dancer. As I never tolerate to be touched I couldn't take lessons as my siblings, but Mia gave me a small class last week and I know Jose has taught Ana a little.

We stand up, I offer my hand for her to take it and she places it softly.

Oh, ain't it nice tonight we've got each other
And I am right beside you
More than just a partner or a lover
I'm your friend

I guide her so her back is in my chest and we move to the rhythm of the music while I sing in her ear. With a little strength I pull her and with a twist we are front to front.

When you love someone
Your heartbeat beats so loud
When you love someone
Your feet can't feel the ground

I take her by the waist and she places her hands on my shoulders, while the rhythm of the music gets faster we glide in the little space of the room smiling to each other.

Shining stars all seem
To congregate around your face
When you love someone
It comes back to you

Holding hands we spin, always keeping the rhythm of the speed of the music, fast and slow at the same time, Ana's face looks like it's shining through her eyes and smile, without needing a mirror I know my face looks the same.

And love is a funny thing
It's making my blood flow with energy
And it's like an awakened dream
As what I've been wishing for, is happening
And it's right on time

I propel her again and she gives a little shout of excitement when I do it, I smile, this is what we wanted, to be relaxed, when I have her back I wrap her in my embrace and she caresses my face, my neck and my hair with her hands.

Oh ain't it nice this life, we've got each other
And I am right beside you
More than just a partner or a lover
I'm your friend

Still dancing I catch her sweet mouth, at some point we stop moving. I lose track of the lyrics and just Ana is filling mind. She lowers her hands and takes mine and clench them, we separate our lips and rest our foreheads in the other's looking into each other's eyes.

Suddenly the song changes, Adele's voice sings 'Make You Feel My Love' and like and order for us our mouths meet again, our feet are not moving but our mouths dance to the slow rhythm of the music, they move with a passion we haven't allowed ourselves to have so far, we get closer to the edge of the bed.

With clumsy hands and trying to not stop kissing her I unbutton her blouse, I take it off of her and throw it to the floor, then she follows with my shirt and her hands go over my naked chest. I kiss her neck and we laugh shyly when I try to unfasten her bra and it takes a while, finally I manage to do it and I see her naked breasts, they are perfect. I touch one of her nipples with the tip of my fingers and they react to my touch hardening, Ana gives a little moan, I look at her for an instant as asking for permission and go down, I put the other nipple in my mouth and caress it with my tongue and lips, very slowly, almost with adoration and softly I bite it, her breathing turns more violent and I smile knowing it's because of me. I go to her other nipple and do the same, Ana fists her hand in my hair.

I come back to her mouth for a moment, then I take off my shoes and kneel in front of her, I take hers off too and unbutton her pants, Ellie Goulding fills the room with 'Love Me Like You Do', this time with more steady hands I drop her pants down along with her panties while I kiss her navel and the bone of her hips, I feel the heath coming out of her, I stand up and Ana finds the zip of my pants, she blushes when she sees my erection and touches it with shyness, I give a little moan when her hand enters my boxers and go over my length, when she takes off the rest of my clothes I lean her back softly on the bed.

I lead my hand to her entrance and touch her, this time the moan that goes out of her mouth is louder, with my fingers I feel her arousal and slowly put one inside of her, she arches her back a little and a little cry comes out of her mouth. I feel how her tightness surrounds me, I insert another finger, she tries to muffle herself by biting her lower lip and that turns me on even more. I take out my fingers from her and search for the condoms box in my bag, I take out one, break the packaging by the corner and put it on. While Michael Bublé sing 'Close Your Eyes' I place myself on top of her and looking into each other's eyes we kiss and I enter slowly inside of her, I feel how a barrier brakes inside of her and I hear a little scream of hers in my shoulder and her fingers hold to my back with strength.

"Are you okay", I say worried and with a hoarse voice that doesn't sound like mine.

"Yes, just give me a second, please."

I stay still, may be I did something wrong and hurt her.

"Keep going…, slowly" she whispers after a few seconds.

I start to penetrate her with a slow rhythm, I kiss her neck, her hands caress my back and her leg holds my butts, we both moan because of so many new sensations. Our breaths start to accelerate.

"A little faster, Christian."

I obey. I start to move faster, while we stifle our moans in kisses, I keel how her core starts clenching, she arches her back and I move faster knowing she is close to her orgasm, I'm close too, I absorb the sensation of her tight canal that clenches my member and a warmness surrounds me and I finish with her, we kiss and caress our faces, I'm still inside of her while our breathing calm down. I pull out of her carefully and take out the condom, I make a knot on the top and throw it to the floor, next to the bed.

I cover us with the sheets, we are lying in bed still naked, Ana draws little circles in my arms and I caress her waist.

"I love you Ana", I say kissing her hair.

"I love you too, my love" I smile listening to her words.

Finally the tiredness and stress of the day beat us and we fall asleep wrapped into each other's arms.


September 24th, 2016

Christian's POV

I wake up from a beautiful dream to see something even more beautiful, Ana's blue eyes, she's looking at me with a smile.

"Good morning love", she says with a sweet voice.

"Good morning", I smile. "Where you enjoying the view?"

"Always", she answers.

"How are you?" Elliot told me that it could be a little uncomfortable for girls after having their first time.

"I'm fine, a little sore but is not bad, I feel... different."

"I feel different too", I say with honesty, "I'm sorry if I hurt you."

"You didn't hurt me, it just took me a few second to get used to the sensation."

Shyly and blushing I ask her. "Did you like it?"

"Oh Christian , that was the best night of my life, thank you for making it so special, I love you."

"That's what you deserve my life, it was the best night of my life too. I knew we were going to enjoy it but we connected baby, it was beautiful", we kiss tenderly. Since she is a little sore I don't want to push her to do more so I offer to order breakfast but she says not yet.

"I have a better idea though", says my girl.

"Do you now? What idea would that be?," I ask with hope.

"Lets shower together…" she gives me a shy smile.

"Your wish is my command, Ms. Steele."

Slowly we get up of bed, Ana goes to the bathroom and I can appreciate her nakedness, she is so beautiful, I wouldn't change anything about her. I get lost in my thoughts for a moment until I hear the water running and her voice. "Are you coming?"

"Yeah" I answer while walking to the bathroom and getting into the shower with her.

The water pours over our heads, I take a sponge and some soap and start massaging her delicate skin all over her body. Ana repeats the action on me. We get out of the shower and dry ourselves.

"I want to try something" she says in low voice. I nod.

Ana takes my semi erect penis in her hand and start to move it, I moan while it start getting hard in her hand.

She kneels in front of me and starts giving little kisses to my dick to then put it in her mouth, I close my eyes, this is too much.

"Oh Ana, it feels so good" I know she is smiling.

With her tongue licks the head and sucks, she starts moving her mouth, I see my dick appearing and disappearing in her, I can feel how I'm touching the end of her throat. Ana doesn't stop, and applies a little pression with her teeth through her lips while she takes me in her mouth.

"Ana, if you keep going I'm going to come in you mouth", I say in a very little gentle manliness and with a barely audible voice. She doesn't stop.

"Oh God Ana", I feel my legs weak, I can't hold on more and as I told her I come in her mouth. She swallows my come and stand up in front of me with a smile on her face. "That was... fantastic", I say and lean to kiss her I can taste me in her mouth.

"Did I do it right?"

"I'm telling you, it was great..., come, it's time for me to test my oral skills" I lead her to the bed.

Once she's laying down I kiss her deeply and keep going down by her neck, breasts, stomach. I hold her thighs to open her legs and have access. My nose touches her labia and I absorb the smell, with my tongue I start to circle around her clitoris. She tense her legs and moans while raises her back a little.

I can taste how with every second her arousal is getting bigger, her humidity calls me and while I attend her clitoris I insert two fingers in her.

"Faster, Christian" she says and pulls of my hair to make more pressure.

I feel her orgasm exploding in her while she yells my name with her eyes closed. I search for a condom and put it on quickly and get inside of her with one thrust, we both moan. I start to move fast.

When I feel her body starting to tense again around my penis I thrust deeper and her warmness surrounds me again, I have my own orgasm and fall exhausted over her for a moment while my strength comes back. I pull out of her and get rid of the condom. I lay next to her and give little smooches in her neck.

"Mr. Grey, your skills are spectacular", we laugh.

"Now that we have done it, I don't know how I'm gonna get enough of you Ana"

"I know, we'll find a way. Besides in less than a year we are going to college together."

Having Ana all the time for me, my Ana...