Note: Thanks everyone! You have no idea how my plot bunny reacts to all the hits, views, alerts, fav alerts, reviews.. Everything! It makes it very very happy and when it is happy, it wants chocolate and write more down! Thank you for those who are reviewing so far- Miss Yvonne Hartman, Leanne1402, black59, chironsgirl, vampire princess 900 Ya just so wonderful to me!

Miss Yvonne- I had to sort of tie in everyone and still give the movies some justice! But really, would I really get rid of any of the remaining 4 and still have Lisa around? She was so the first one to go! But keep on guessing. Maybe I will get rid of Ianto! No, I couldn't really.

Plus I had to write the boat ride from the first movie. The song below goes with that beat. It is found on youtube. I typed in Willy Wonka Boat Ride. I really don't know the whole title. But, more of Jack's past will be revealed. The reason why he makes candy.. Hmm... ON WITH THE SHOW!


Jack extended his hand out to help the others lower down into the submarine. Gwen was first as she bash her eyelashes at him and smiled. Jack cringed as he just stared at her gap. He lowered her down as he extended his reach to Tosh. Tosh looked down into the cramp space.

"I really don't do well in tight spaces." Tosh hugged herself as she felt trapped.

"Never had a man sandwich before? Would be nice to be so close to each other, seeing if you think my aftershave is too strong." Jack flirted as Tosh smiled at him. She couldn't resist his smile. Tosh was lowered down as Jack extended his hand to Owen who only pushed it away.

"Yea I can manage." Owen jumped down as Jack turned his attention to Ianto. Ianto thought he could do it without reaching for Jack but on stepping into the haul of the submarine, his foot slipped on some chocolate and fell forward into Jack's arms.

"Did you do that on purpose?" Jack questioned as he held on to Ianto. Ianto was still catching his breath because he thought he was going to land face first into the chocolate river. Jack helped Ianto stand but still having his arms around the Welshman send a tingle down Jack's spine.

"Are you cold sir?" Ianto asked as he felt Jack shivered. He slowly pulled himself free from his grasp as he straightened his waist coat.

"No. You feel good against my skin." Jack smiled as Ianto rolled his eyes and lowered himself down. Secretly hiding the smile that ran across his lips as he too felt good against Jack's skin. Jack climbed down as he sealed the hatch and went to the bridge of the submarine. The chair spun around as he set in the destination and then placed it on auto pilot.

"Take a seat. Buckle up. Going to be a bumpy ride!" Jack heard the controls turn on as the auto helm started to dive the submarine down into the chocolate river. "Hungry?" Jack pressed a few buttons as something was released into the air. Tiny little particles few across the seated 4 as they seemed to poke their faces as they all tried to push them away.

"Fireflies?" Owen complained as he pushed the glowing flies away from him.

"I wouldn't be that cruel. Those are flying nano-bitesize-gens. Go on, takes them. They are attractive to saliva! Look." Jack opened his mouth as a set went flying into it and started to pop in his mouth. "They zap your tongue and explode with fruit juice. Go on." Jack spoke as the nanogens started to pop more and more. Ianto was the first to try as he opened his mouth and felt a few fly into it. Ianto closed his mouth as he felt the strangest sensation he had ever felt. The nonagons started to pop like those old pop rocks but with each pop, it would fill his mouth with juice. He got Orange and Strawberry.

"That's amazing." Ianto covered his mouth as more nanogens came towards him and wanted in. Tosh opened her mouth and experienced the same thing.

"Lemon lime." Tosh smiled as she loved that taste.

"Cherry!" Gwen yelled out in excitement as by doing so, more nanogens came in making Gwen mouth swell up with popping nanos.

"Grape." Owen replied as he covered his mouth and looked at Jack. "They are all different flavors but glow the same."

"Yea. They zero in on to your favorite flavor. If you think real hard, real real hard, if you think of something bad tasting it will taste like it!" Jack answered.

"So we have to have happy thoughts?" Tosh replied as she covered her mouth. She didn't want to test that now that Jack had put that into their heads.

"Exactly." Jack replied as he winked at Tosh. Ianto looked at Gwen who was making the sickest face anyone could. She had so many nanogens in her mouth that once Jack had said about tasting something horrible, she couldn't help it but think of it. Jack turned his chair around to cover himself up from what was going to happen. Gwen spitted all the nanogens out of her mouth as she wiped her tongue with the inside of her blouse.

"That is disgusting!" Gwen complained as she tried to get that taste out of her mouth.

"Depends, what did you think about?" Tosh commented as she was starting to get annoyed by Gwen.

"Manure" Gwen replied as she smacked her lips, trying to get that taste out.

"Yup. That would do it! The beauty of hinted messages!" Jack felt the submarine pull forward and stop. "Hang on!" Jack yelled as the submarine started to spin. Everyone held on to the arm rest of the seats they were sitting on as the submarine was spinning down.

"This doesn't make any sense! Nothing here does!" Owen yelled as Jack was laughing. "This isn't funny!"

"Round and round. You spin me round and round!" Jack started to sing as

"If you really must sing, please choose another song!" Owen yelled as the submarine violently turned to the left and went straight down.

Faster. Faster. Harder. Deeper.

Was that too cheek for you?

Faster Faster. Deeper Harder

Where could we be going?

There no way of knowing.

Could it get deeper?

Could it be steeper?

Could this River be anymore creeper?

Boo.

There's no light at the end of this tunnel.

But surely it has to end.

For we just keep going.

The Danger. Danger. Look, its glowing.

YES!

YES!

This is it.

This is the end.

End of the line for you all.

Here we go for the last fall.

For help you all call

The end is near for you all...

"Sir, please stop." Ianto pleaded as this was just getting everyone upset. Tosh was crying and Gwen had her eyes shut as tight as anyone could. Owen held on as tight as he could as Ianto did the same. Jack stood up as he yelled the submarine to stop. The lights went off as the submarine hatch opened and a weevil heads popped in.

"Ah we are here. Everyone off the boat." Jack ordered as everyone rushed out of the submarine as a weevil growled at them. Ianto looked around as they were in a sewer type of place. It didn't smell like one but the lighting and tunnels down each side made it feel like a sewer. Gwen hid behind Ianto as she seemed to push him forward a bit.

"Maybe it was safer back in the boat." Tosh stood behind Owen for protection as Owen looked at the weevil's eyes. Something about them was drawing Owen in as Jack walked over to Owen and kissed him on the forehead.

"What the hell was that for?" Owen wiped his forehead with his hand as Jack looked very seriously at Owen. Maybe the first time he looked serious at anyone before.

"Staring at them puts them in a trance. You felt like you were being called by them. Staring will make them feel uneasy and make you their enemy. The trance you were on was because of them. So if you want to keep your little head of yours on your shoulders, you will not stare at them ever again. Ok?" Jack smiled as he patted Owen on his back and looked at the weevil friend waiting there with Jack's coat. Jack smiled as he kissed the weevil forehead as it left them through a secret tunnel.

"It got here without the submarine? Why couldn't we gone the same way?" Gwen complained as she never wanted to go down in that submarine again.

"Of course, we could have walked here but the submarine was way much fun." Jack smiled as he slipped on his coat and walked off the deck and down a long hall. "Welcome to the rooms where all the magic happens. Each room contains a form of candy I have the pleasure of making. Not making pleasure, no dirty minds when it comes to my candy making skills. But each room, each place is magical! You, lovely lady with the gap, pick a room." Jack pointed at Gwen as she looked at the directory on the wall to where they were standing it.

"Invisibility room." Gwen answered as she looked at Jack. The others nodded as it was a good place to start. Gwen couldn't help but remember the deal she made with the strange man in the pinstripe suit. What she didn't know was that almost everyone there as well made the same deal. All except Ianto who still felt it wrong to steal ideas. Jack grinned as he nodded at everyone. "We could take the submarine down there... or we can walk."

"Walk!" Everyone yelled as Jack pouted.

"Fine. On with the walk. Please notice how my greatcoat flaps as I walk. Very sexy." Jack smiled as he led the way to the room. The group passed several rooms as Owen and Gwen followed Jack while Tosh and Ianto followed them. Gwen and Owen seemed to flirt a bit as almost everything Owen whispered to her she found very funny. They were almost there as it seemed the hall went on for miles. They passed a few doors on the way. Taffy Paste Room, Gum Paste Room, Candy Paste Room, Copy and Paste Room and...

"What do you use Tooth Paste for?" Tosh asked as Jack turned around and flash them a huge grin. "Ah. Gotcha." She answered as Jack stopped and looked up at the cog door.

"Please be careful in this room. It's really delicate work going on here." Jack typed in a code onto the computer door as the door rolled open and the group walked in. What was in the room was just very unexpected.


Woo! Another room another place to get rid of a character! Anyone have good ideas for candy names? Leave a comment or review with your idea, I love getting people involved in my stories and might use them. Plus it is a way to get free ideas when I run out. Love ya all! Thanks for reading!