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B p.o.v.
I was extremley annoyed. Even more than usual. When Kat and I were picking out my clothes,
neither of us had thought about the rest of the male population at Rosen high.(I don't know if
there is a school called Rosen high, but I thought it was a pretty name.) They stared and
whispered and asked for numbers and only three things kept me sane. 1), The fact that I could kill
them all quite easily. 2), The fact that Kat was dressed like this too, in almost my exact out fit,
except her colors were red and gold. And 3), The fact that Edward would undoubtedly have the
same reaction as the rest of the guys at our school. After all, hadn't Edward once told me I
brought out the human in him? We were making our way to lunch, when Kat pulled me into an
empty classroom.
"You know what Isabella Marie Swan, this is so not going to work if you keep moping. Now
you stick your head up and walk- no prance-into that lunch room as if you own the world. Every
girl better be jealous and every boy shall have a major-" I cut her off before she got too rated r.
"Kat I get the point. But do I really have to do this?" I guess my human side was deciding to
show out today. Kat nodded firmly, and said "Lets go." I opened my mouth to protest, but she
cut me off saying. "I said MARCH!"
E p.o.v.
(The night before)
I sat on my bed, thinking about today's events. I had a music class with Bella. Hm. When I
followed her and her new sister to their car, she was in the middle of telling her whole story.
When I tried to talk to her, she ignored me. Actually, she had her sister float her home, along
with the car. I didn't expect to see her at school the next day so it seemed I'd blown my only
chance to talk to her. Unexpectedly, alice walked into my room. Her eyes glittered with an anger
that was very close to hate, as they had since I told the family we had to leave. Only this time,
they also held... hope? "Look idiot," she began using her new pet name for me. "Bella will take
you back but she needs some pursuasion. So we're going to dress you up so you can catch her
eye."
"Alice, please, it's no use." she glared at me and said "it beats sitting on your couch doing
nothing." we had a small g;aring match, which she won. I sighed indefeat. This had better work.
The hopeful side of me spoke up saying "It will. Didn't bella used to say don't bet against
Alice?"
But even still, the more practical side of me spoke up saying "there have been times when alice
was wrong." I severly hoped this would not be one of thoese times.
B p.o.v.
I took Kats advice and strutted into the lunch room. Beside me, she whispered "That's more like
it." We entered to the usual murmers and drool, but in front of me was one sight I would have
never expected. Adonis himself was sitting smack dab In the middle of the lunchroom, holding
three flowers. One wiff, and I knew exactly what kind they were. Freesia.
Edward, sat there, his smirk growing slightly larger by the second. I used my power and heard,
"Thank you Alice. Wow, Bella would've never dressed like that as a human." As I easily slid
past him, I hissed venemously, "Good thing I'm not human anymore, now isn't it." it was too
low for any human to hear, but he still looked around nervously. I was struck by an idea, and I
took the flowers from his hand. This time I spoke loud eniugh for everyone to hear. I faked
surprise and joy quite well as I excliamed "Oh, these are absolutely wonderful love." Then I
pretended to take a second look at them. "But darling,"I said, making people knew I was making
fun of Edward, "They looked a bit...wilted." As I said the last word, I dropped the gorgeous
flowers into the garbage bin. A low "ooooooo"went through the crowd. Someone even went so
far as to say "crash and burn."it was then that I spooted the rest of the Cullen clan. Thier faces
ran from livid(Rosalie), to depressed(Alice). I rose my eyebrows at them, turned on my heel and
left. I felt kind of bad for leaving Kat up there, but I knew she'd have no problem getting back.
As I pulled into the drive way, I smelled something horrendous. Werewolf. I entered cautiously
and said, "Come out come out where ever you are." I heard movement and at the top of the stairs
appeared the last person I ever expected to see. In the midst of my surprise, I managed to say
" J- Jake? What are you doing here?" He simply looked at me, and for the first time in 2 years, I
was more than just scared, I was downright terrified. Jake hadn't changed much since the last
time I saw him. Actually, I only noticed two changes. One, he had grown considerably taller.
And two, in his eyes, where there used to be laughter and warmth, there was a cold and icy hate.
I knew without a doubt that his hate was for my kind, and more specifically, me.
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