Beta Reader!
I have a lot written, but I am looking for a beta reader, and someone that can read and give me feedback. You see I don't have any friends in which to bounce off ideas seeing that the friends that I still have are not all that into anime anymore. I need a fresh set of eyes.
I am looking for,
Someone that is highly detail oriented!
Good with spelling and grammar, especially tenses.
And someone that can catch difference in plot changes or things that I might have stated and the restated, on not covered along the way.
If anyone is interested, shoot me an email.
After an email,
We shall see where it goes from there.
Thanks for everything and thanks for reading!
I will remove this as soon as I get a beta reader: Here is a previes of the next chapter, so that this will follow the guidelines for posting chapters:
Crystal
Chapter 8
Inuyasha was no accustomed to things that they did in Kagomes time, especially that of using automobiles. The thought or getting into a box that allowed you to travel faster was not something that his simple mind could process. Not that he didn't understand, but since he didn't need such a device, it made him uncomfortable to drive in one.
But he had been told that the Monestarty was very far, at lest three hours drive, and a little less by train, but they knew that going by train would be even harder on Inuyasha so they decided to take a car. The Monks assistant drove.
The monk was trying to explain what he knew about situation to them, so that when they arrived at the monestary they would be prepared.
"Ok Kagome, I am no sure what happened exactly to you during your battle, but what we think happened is this. Naraku was trying to absorb your spiritual energy, so that he would become an all powerful being. He thought that sine the Jewel was a merger between both good and bad, pure and evil, that if he was strong enough that he would be able to merge you into his body. Your spiritual energy would become part of him, not cleansing him as you know that you could not do, but give him your powers. The mixing of such strong spiritual powers with such horrible demonic power would have made him unstoppable. What we think happened, is that the Jewel actually prevented the merger. When Kagome tried to purify the whole jewel, when your part and his parts joined, his youkai energy made the joining impure, and unlike you might have previously thought, there might have not been a way to purify the Jewel, with just miko or youkai energy, or just making a pure wish. The Jewel is of a magic that is older than anything anyone ever knew. "
Kagome was having a difficult time with this. Was Naraku inside of her? Was the Jewel also inside of her? What was the voice?
Kagome cleared her throat. "The voice, what is the voice?"
The monk took a deep breath.
"Kagome, I do believe that the voice is the demonic power inside of you. When Inuyasha's demon takes over him, what happens to him?"
Inuyasha and Kagome blushed. Inuyasha knew exactly what happened when his demon took over him. His passions, his desires, his core emotions, thoughts, wants are all manifest, because his demon is controlled by his desires, and wants, his emotional and physical needs.
"Kagome, I know it may be hard for you to understand, but somehow, there is a demonic force that is growing inside of you, and your mind is trying to deal with it. That voice, it could be your mind, your emotions, your needs trying to make you see what you want, what you really want, not what you rationalize that you want. Demon's are not like people, they live to a different set of standards. I am sure that you are not completely familiar with how demon thought processes work, but imagine that you made decisions based mostly on feelings rather than reason and logic."
Kagome had to think about that. She had never really conceptualized the thought processes of demons. But now that she thought about it, look a Kouga for instance. It didn't matter her feeling in the matter, he still was obsessed over her. Maybe it was just because he was attracted to her, and he cant really help himself, he cannot control his actions, no more than Inuyasha cannot hide his true feeling for me when he is a demon. Kagome sighed. This felt very strange.
Inuyasha was really starting to feel uncomfortable.
"So is she a hanyou? I mean, why is she feeding off my youkai?"
"Inuyasha and Kagome, we need to delve a little deeper, and we have the time now, so let me tell you the history of how I came to know about this, let me tell you some things that you do not know about demons and miko, nor the Jewel. "
