Hello all, very sorry i haven't posted recently. A lot going on in life, and I am working hard on becoming an author by the end of the year. With publishing contracts already offered. I am working hard to try get it completed soon but so much mind fog recently keeps stopping me so I thought if i try write a bit of this. Maybe just maybe... I'll get myself going again. My goal in life is to get this book published (not the fan fiction haha) So it's taking a lot of work, and on top of that. My god, I'd be in heaven if it gets turned into a film or series. Though to be honest, i am just happy enough to already have 3 publishing contracts offered. Anyway, enough with my rambling. I'm going to post more I promise! Well can't fully promise. I will post, but may be one per week, could be more. Will have to go with the flow. But enjoy!

~ Kiyli Tier


Tony turned around with a smirk on his lips. He eyed Suzie as she walked into the room. He liked it when she never followed Gavin around. It showed another side to her. As Tony began to walk up to Suzan, he noticed something was wrong. He frowned then backed away. He walked into the wall behind him banging his head. Letting out a gasp Tony put a hand to the back of his head.

Tony. This isn't you. This isn't the real you. Where are the Movie quotes? Snap out of it DiNozzo! She's trying to kill you!

Flash backs of the last few weeks flashed in front of Tony. He frowned then looked up at Suzan. His left hand made its way to the side of his cheek and wiped a tear. He looked at the tear that lay upon his index finger. DiNozzos don't cry… Tony looked at Suzan and glared. He went to lung forwards but she must have noticed him with question looks on his face.

"Stay away!"

Before Tony could step back he bumped into the wall, and what felt like hands. He frowned then quickly shot a glance to either side of him. Without noticing two of Suzans men had made it around by his side. They grabbed his hands and forced them behind his back. Tony tried to scruffle his way free, try dive out of grip James Bond style but ended up on the floor with two heavy body guards on top of him.

"Stay still Tony. The more you fight the more you will get hurt. We're trying to help you remember?"

*** Flashback ***

Tony looked up as Suzan shot into the room.

"Tony! Oh thank god Tony you are alive!"

She ran to Tony's side. Grabbing his wrists and jamming the cuffs with some lock picks. Soon they were undone. She grabbed Tony pulling him close to her, holding her.

Remember the time I save you from Mcgee Tony?

Tony looked up. The gun pointing straight between his eyes. His best friend, his probie, his partner. Aiming a gun straight at his face, ready to blow his brains out. Tony felt sick. He began to brace himself, knowing he could no longer talk Mcgee out of it. He had tried his hardest, and only end up with repeated whacks of magazine butts against his cheek which now burned. He could tell it was cut wide open, he could feel the blood trickling down his cheek but he couldn't wipe it. His hands were tied behind his arm.

"Go on probie. Shoot me"

Tony gave Mcgee one last look as he watched him go to pull the trigger.

BANG.

Tony looked in front in horror. Mcgee dropped the gun into Tony's lap. He fell forwards leaning over Tony in shock. He looked at his shoulder. Tony looked to see blood pouring out of it. As Tony went to go jump forwards Mcgee ran, grabbing his gun and opening fire on the man who shot him but each bullet missing. Gavin looked at Tony then to the running coward.

"He's gone Tony. He's gone"

*** Back in the room ***

Tony stared at Suzan with tears rolling down his face. He frowned then nodded. He couldn't do much more. He felt sick but knew he wouldn't. He had nothing in his stomach anyway. He frowned and looked to the men then laid his head back. He relaxed his muscles and allowed them to stand him up. Once up Tony stood and embraced the hug Suzan got him.

"Oh Tony I'm so sorry"

She looked in his eyes then to the men glaring as if telling them telepathically to go. She looked back at Tony.

"I have some good news Tony. Ziva, she's joining us"

Suzan watched as Tony's face went red with fury. She could see the anger.

"Tony calm it. She's HELPING us. We're going to kill your old team, the traitors that tried to hurt you. She's our slave Tony. Your slave. Now I want you to respect my wishes. Go see her, she's in the room across yours. Please Tony. I think it's time you two spoke"

Tony looked at Suzan trying to calm down. He nodded. He had to respect his friends wishes, his friends requests. How couldn't he? She saved him. He owed her that.