'Could have fooled me.' mumbled the youki, still with his back to her, he heard her huff incredulously, giving him a warm sensation that he had won. He started walking off in the direction they had come in, feeling her weight behind him as she reluctantly followed.
'Either way I was winning that fight.' she said behind him, obviously just trying to wind him up again, but he wasn't having any of it. 'I guess we're going back for your precious Rin, now.' she continued, putting special emphasis on the little girl's name. 'You really are a paedophile, aren't you?' she added matter-of-factly. 'Plus you like some kind of… toad… thing-'
'He's my…' Sesshomaru tried to retort, swiftly whirling around on his heel… but he couldn't find the word… what was Jaken to him?
'Bitch?' prompted the blue haired girl unhelpfully, a big fake smile covering her blue skinned face.
'Servant.' finished the youki finally. 'And you'll pay him the respect he deserves from a shitbag like you.' he added imperiously. She mimicked a scared face, making her knees knock together gently and her hands softly pressed against her smooth cheeks, her mouth in the shape of an "O".
Dear (scratch that) Mr (scratch that too) Flame Rising, Some people are just plain sad to write that much, explaining why or how they waste their time reading other peoples work. At least the people you flame have the balls and imagination to go ahead and write something in the knowledge that it is quite possible they will be flamed. I feel sorry for your "friends" and people who have added you to their watches of some sort, because they are just about as sad as you. Oh, and you mention something about people not knowing how to speak English, when you repeatedly say the word "fucktard" which, to my knowledge, is not in the English dictionary. Go ahead and delete this, but it will just prove that you have too much time to waste flaming other writers. A wise man once said: "Critics are like eunuchs- they watch it being done (...), but they can't do it themselves." Says everything there is to know about you. Have a nice day.
