Author's Note: Hello everyone, sorry for taking a while with this chapter. It turned a lot longer than I envisioned and hopefully I don't have to rewrite for a fourth time. I'm also sorry for not responding to the Chapter 6 reviews in the last chapter, I was running short on time and needed to post Chapter 7.

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Chapter 8: Turning Point part 2

When Adam and the blonde fall to the ground in a heap with Adam's aura-rose petals falling all around them, Ilia panics as she tries to decide what to do when she hears thud near her. Turning to the source of the noise, she sees a white haired man in green and black gym attire stumbling a little bit towards her with a pained look on his face. They catch each other's stare for a moment and Ilia awkwardly walks away, trying to make it look like she was wasn't spying on anyone. Ozpin raises an eyebrow as the freckled girl quickly walks away before he shrugs off what happened and enters the room where Adam and Yang lie unconscious. Nearby, Ilia sees the man enter and decides to pretend to work out on the nearby equipment in case something happens.

Upon entering the room, Ozpin sighs and makes a mental note to reimburse the gym when he sees the damage that has done to it. He quietly walks over to the ring to check on the unconscious pair and winces at the sight of the black eyes forming on Adam and Yang's faces. He turns to walk out of the room when his scroll starts to ring loudly causing Adam and Yang to stir and he hastens his retreat to make sure he isn't caught. Once outside of the room, he looks at his scroll to find that Glynda is calling and he hesitantly answers as he walks away. Ilia watches as the white haired man walks away towards the reception desk as he sheepishly talking on his scroll and decides to continue working out nearby in order to keep on things. Sure enough the white haired man comes back sits just outside of the room, making Ilia suspicious.

Meanwhile in the room, Adam and Yang slowly awaken and groan in pain as they roll onto their backs. Adam lays there slowly recovering from the daze of the knockout before he hisses in pain when his fingers brush against the skin around his left eye. At the same time, Yang tries to sits up but she immediately regrets her decision as waves of aches and pains roll over her body just before she winces at the sight of her developing black eye in the remains of the wall mirror.

Memories of the past few days slowly return to Adam, making him cringe at his own actions. Thinking back on those actions, he sighs regretfully knowing how easily he entered the downward spiral of his psyche which reinforces what Ilia said yesterday about him fucking up big time.

'Great job Yang on thinking that taking away his weapon would make him less of an experienced fighter.' Yang berates herself as she lays there letting her body rest and deciding her plan once again failed. She grumbles to herself as she tries figure out what she could have done for her plan to succeed. She continues to lay expecting White Fang members to come rushing in but after a minute, nothing happens. Despite her body's protests, Yang sits ups and looks over at Adam to discover that he is just lying lost in his thoughts.

Suddenly Adam lets out a sigh and sits up, making her worry what is about happen next. When Adam uneasily stands up through gritted teeth, she assumes the worst and tries to stand up as well to defend herself but she immediately falls back down. She curses underneath her breath when she tries to stand again to ready herself for another round but once again she falls back down onto one knee. Suddenly movement just inside her field catches her attention and when she looks up, she sees Adam slowly walking towards with an unreadable look on his face.

"Comeback for more?" Yang defiantly asks.

"No I did not." Adam calmly replies as he extends a hand to help Yang up. "I'm here to say thanks."

Yang warily looks between Adam's hand and his face. "What for?"

"For being such a fool and challenging me. I..." Adam briefly thinks back to his state of mind for the past few days. "I really needed that."

"Couldn't you have just asked your comrades to spar with you instead?" Yang asks as she accepts Adam's outstretched hand.

"Most of them know of my tendency of getting carried away and even fewer know of my semblance which makes them all unwilling to spar with to this extent." Adam replies as he pulls Yang up and catches her when she stumbles forward. "That being said, I must admit that you're quite good for someone who knows only one trick."

"Says the person with the world's most useless semblance." Yang retorts as she carefully backs away from Adam to lean against one of the two remaining corner posts, unsure of what he'll do next. Adam heartily chuckles at what Yang said, knowing how true that statement is and Yang stares at him strangely, wondering if their mutual knock out broke him. "So what are you going to do? Kidnap me so you can use-"

"No!" Adam sharply says, cutting Yang off before she finish that asking that question.

"No?" Yang asks incredulously.

"It's not worth going through so much trouble to do something that would only make the situation my cell is in worse." Adam hastily replies.

"What about Blake?" Yang inquires, narrowing her eyes in the process. "I thought you were obsessed with her."

Adam tenses up for a second then sighs regretfully. "Once upon a time, I was. But knowing and seeing what that obsession has brought about, that is no longer the case."

Yang looks at Adam in disbelief of what she just heard and finds herself unsure how to proceed. "If that's true and you actually did love Blake at one point, what happened to change that?"

"I didn't change, I relapsed." Adam replies, feeling strange on how easily he can recall the moment when his relationship with Blake took a turn for the worst.

"What do you mean 'relapsed'?" Yang asks, confused by his choice of words.

"I already had anger issues before I joined the White Fang and when I met Blake, I was immediately infatuated with her being along with being drawn into her belief of the White Fang's goal at the time and found myself changing for her. So when she and got together as an actual couple rather than partners attracted to each other, I got over my hatred and buried the hatchet in a place where I couldn't find it."

Adam takes a deep breath, mentally preparing himself for the next part of his explanation. "But a few years later, I went on a solo mission that went south very quickly and I ended up killing a few humans because of what I saw happen during that mission, reigniting the hatred within without me realizing it. After that, Blake and I started getting into arguments every now and then and I subconsciously started seeing her as an object to keep me grounded as I started climbing the ranks."

Yang thinks to how Blake explained her and Adam's relationship and finds that Adam is confirming what she said. But considering what they both explained, she feels like something wasn't said. "Adam did you ever hit Blake during these arguments?"

Adam freezes up at the question and stares at Yang wide eyed. "No I never did but there had been times shortly before she left that I nearly did and the closest I ever gotten was hitting the wall behind her." Adam lets out a regretful sigh. "If she stayed any longer than she had, I would have most definitely hit her and I don't think anyone would have stopped me at that point either."

An awkward silence fills the room as both of them let what Adam explained sink in. Adam carefully climbs off out of the ring and sits down in one of the chairs, trying to quell the emotions that had risen up from his explanation while Yang sits down on the edge of the ring to gather up her thoughts. Suddenly, someone knocks on the door startling them out of their thoughts.

Adam and Yang at each other with suspicion but they quickly dismiss the thought when they realize they both came alone since nothing happened to them while and after they were unconscious. They both stand up at the same time but Yang quickly hobbles to the door, before Adam gets halfway to the door. Opening the door, Yang is surprised to find a female gym staff member with a small cooler in hand standing there.

"Hello Ms. Xiao Long, I'm here because a concerned customer…" the staff member trails when she sees Yang's black eye." Oh, oh my. Looks like the customer was right that you do need these." She gives the cooler to Yang. "Is there anything you and your sparring partner need?"

"Uh… I don't think so." Yang hesitantly replies.

"Well if you do need something, flag down a staff member and tell them what you need. We'll be sure to get to you in a timely manner for a small fee of course." The staff member cheerfully explains, clapping her hands together before turning to leave.

Closing the door, Yang stands there for a couple of moments, unsure what just happened and opening the cooler reveals that it is full of icepacks. She looks at the icepacks then at Adam and decides to take a chance by throwing an icepack towards Adam as a sign of trust. "Catch."

Adam easily catches the icepack but he immediately drops it into his lap, not expecting the object he caught to be cold. He realizes what it is and puts on to his black eye with a thank you. Yang closes the cooler and hobbles over to a chair next to Adam and sits down before pulling out an icepack to put on her own black eye with a quick hiss of pain followed by a sigh of relief. The two of them sit in silence as they enjoy the cool relief of the icepacks when Adam sets his down and turns to Yang.

"How is Blake doing at Beacon?" Adam asks with genuine concern.

'She's doing well." Yang replies. "Though there were a couple moments where we thought we lost her."

"Does she still care for the White Fang?"

"She still does despite learning and seeing Torchwick working with the White Fang when he was robbing the SDC shipment at the docks." Yang says. "Seeing that broke her heart and sent her down a self-destructive path of fool hardily trying take down the White Fang all by herself."

"Was she there when Torchwick fled in the Paladin?"

"Yeah she was there when he unveiled the Paladin at the White Fang meeting and helped stop the Paladin he was in."

"Fucking Torchwick. You told me it was just some dumb pair of idealistic students who interrupted you both of those times." Adam curses underneath his breath to himself after letting out an uneasy sigh. He glances over at Yang and notices the strange look she is giving him. He quickly recomposes himself with a cough. "And here I thought the worst trouble would sneaking in her pornographic books into class."

"Don't you mean her 'Adult literature'?" Yang says automatically without thinking.

Adam stares at Yang incredulously before starting to chuckle that quickly turns into full blown laughter, earning a really confused look from Yang. "What? What did I say?"

"She's still calling those books that?" Adam exclaims between gasps for air.

"What do you mean 'still'?" Yang asks with curiosity.

Adam chuckles at this. "When Blake and I first met and before we started drifting apart as a couple, I accidently caught her in a compromising position and she quickly denied what the book was by saying it was 'adult literature' while hiding said book behind her back."

Picturing a very flustered Blake trying her best to hide the book, causing Yang to laugh for a minute or two. "Sounds like there is a good story behind this. Do you mind telling it if you don't kind?" she asks once she is calmed down enough to speak.

"Sure, I don't mind." Adam replies with a grin, figuring why not since it is the past and there is nothing incriminating in the memory. "Well it was a couple of weeks after Sienna rescued me from the back alleys of Mistral and she just convinced me to join the White Fang, we arrived at the camp that was set up outside of Mistral because there nowhere for us to stay due to the protests the White Fang were staging at the time….."

6 Years ago…

A 14 year old Adam wanders down the various pathways of the camp, inspecting it as he goes along. For the most part, he was generally impressed with way things were inside the makeshift looking camp and the camaraderie among the various members reminded him of home that he lost 6 years prior to coming here. Looking around once more, he spots a hill overlooking the camp with single on top of it and he decides that it would make the perfect to hangout until he has to meet up with Sienna again.

Heading towards the hill, he soon arrives at the top and he immediately hears the various sounds of the camp float up to the top. Plopping down at the base of the trunk, he hears everything from a group laughing at something to something being cooked to someone turning a page of the book. He finds that last sound a bit odd but he ignores it and stretches out into a comfortable position when hears the sound of a book's page turning again.

Looking around, he sees no one until he looks up into the tree branches to find a girl nose deep in a book, sitting on what appears to be the thickest branch of the tree. Upon a closer look, he sees what looks like a pair triangular cat ears on top of her head that twitch ever so often, along with the fact that the girl has barely started the book judging by the small amount of turned pages that can be seen, and that the girl may have not noticed his presence.

"Uh, hello up there." Adam awkwardly asks.

"Hello" the girl replies without looking away from her book.

"I'm Adam. What's your name?" Adam inquires, hoping to get more out of the girl.

"Blake." The girl replies in a monotone voice as she turns the page of her book.

Adam find himself standing there awkwardly unsure what to do as Blake continues to read. "So uh… what are you reading?"

"A book." Blake deadpans, earning an eye roll from Adam. He notices from where he stands the book's front cover is obscured by Blake's hand but the back cover is mostly exposed, allowing Adam to get a good view of the summary.

"When a young Atlesian nobleman meets his soulmate in the city of Atlas, they enter a secret, forbidden relationship…" Adam begins to read off.

Blake realizes what Adam is reading and hastily slams the book shut before attempting to hide said book. But doing so causes her to slip off the branch and fall. Luckily Adam is there to catch her but the impact of catching Blake forces Adam to fall onto his back. Blake quickly scrambles off of Adam when she realizes the position they are in and Adam sits up a moment later to find that Blake's book somehow found its way underneath him.

"Here you go, Blake." Adam says, holding out her book.

"Th- Thank you." Blake says shyly, taking the book quickly with a flustered look on her face.

"So what is this book you are reading?" Adam asks out curiosity now that he's read part of the summary of the book.

"It's uh…" Blake trails off trying to find the best way the book without revealing the supposed forbidden nature of it while her face contorts in the process. "ADULT LITERATURE!" She squeaks out before backing away from Adam slowly when she sees the strange look he is giving her before she realizes that she accidently revealed the nature.

Adam opens his mouth to say something but Blake suddenly runs off towards the camp, holding the book to her chest and leaving Adam standing there with his hanging open. Adam shakes himself out of his stupor and follows after the intriguing cat Faunus that he admittedly finds a little bit cute.

Despite the rather depressing beginning, Yang heartily at the last part of the story. "Did Blake get in trouble for reading that book?"

"Yeah she did. Her parents caught her trying to put the book back where she found it." Adam replies, finishing the story with a soft, reminiscent smile on his face that sends Yang's heart racing and causes her to slightly blush. Yang quickly covers up the blush by quickly looking away for a moment.

Another awkward silence falls over the room as both of them sit there with icepacks back on their black eyes. Yang leans back in her chair rethinking her plan while Adam hunches over replaying old memories.

'Ugh, what am I going to do now?' Yang thinks. 'Can I really go through with my plan after all that has happened so far? But what if I do turn him in and a crazier leader takes his place?'

Yang shudders then sighs at thought and glances over at Adam as he leans smiling softly at what Yang assumes is a good memory. 'Was he always this attractive when he's not an angry asshole?'

She shakes her head briefly to shake the thought away. 'I'm this to protect Blake not to score a date to heal my broken heart. But how?'

She compares the Adam that Blake told her about and met earlier in the week to the current Adam. But when she does so, she can't help but notice the similarities to her father's episodes of rage after her, Ruby, and Qrow got him responding to the outside world. She then remembers the ways they calmed him down and helped him get him over the episodes, prompting an idea begins to form in her head.

'What if I can protect Blake by helping Adam with his anger issues thus ensuring that he go after Blake anymore?' Yang asks herself as she replays what Adam explained about his relationship with Blake. 'But how do I start such a crazy plan?'

Suddenly her date plan for wooing Blake flashes through her head and she remembers the basic plot of plot of Tiger in the Ballroom. She grins to herself as she easily adapts the plan into a starting point of this admittedly crazy stupid plan that would hopefully serve as the perfect icebreaker.

"Hey Adam." Yang says breaking the silence. "What would you do if you got to meet Blake again?"

"I would apologize to her and ask for forgiveness for causing our relationship to wilt." Adam replied without hesitation.

"And then what?"

"I..." Adam thinks about this for minute but comes up with a blank. "I don't know."

"Then how about I give you a chance to earn her trust so you can apologize and ask for forgiveness from her?"

Adam looks at Yang suspiciously. "Why?"

"Because I want to protect Blake from you." Yang confidently replies.

Adam looks at Yang dumbfounded and not exactly following her logic. "Can you explain a bit more?"

"If I can help you deal with your anger issues, then when you possibly meet Blake at a later point in time you could surprise her by how you changed back to the person she loved and thus you can begin earning her forgiveness." Yang replies.

Adam raises an eyebrow at this. "What makes you think I can change so easily?"

"You already recognize that you have a problem and know what it is. Which is difficult to do when someone doesn't confront you about it. Plus you already overcame this problem once when you were with Blake, what's stopping you from doing that again?"

"Do you even have the necessary experience for this flimsy plan of yours?" Adam challenges, standing up and setting down his ice pack in the process.

"My father used have similar if not worse anger issues among other things when I was a child and my uncle, little sister, and I helped him through those issues." Yang confidently replies, standing up as well to face Adam in response to his challenge. "So when I say if have firsthand experience with this sort of thing, I mean it."

Adam recalls what Yang said in the holding cell and understands what she meant a little bit better. He then considers Yang's proposal and its potential benefits/consequences for a minute. "Okay but what if I relapse again and I decide to attack Mistral instead Vale?"

"Then I'll be there to help stop you." Yang counters.

"You and what army?"

"Blake for starters, Mistral's Wall Defense Forces, the Atlesian army, Haven Academy Students, plus any hunters who just so happen to be in the area at the time, and any Faunus willing to rise up to oppose the White Fang. Just to name a few."

"Oh? What makes you think that the Faunus will rise up against the White Fang?"

"Considering all of the stuff the White Fang did for the Faunus as a whole and the fact that things haven't changed much for the Faunus either since you guys started to using violence to gain fear and respect. The kindling is all there, someone or something just needs to be the spark to light it up."

'Like Blake's parents, Ghira and Kali.' Adam thinks to himself.

"Besides what are you going to do to accomplish this attack? Take over the White Fang and hope no one notices your anger fueled mental instability and decides to take advantage of you being blinded by your own anger for their own goals?" Yang continues on, unknowingly hitting a nerve. "Surely by now the rest of the White Fang knows about your failure to successfully attack Vale."

Adam wants to say something to the first part of Yang just said but the second part unfortunately reminds him of someone rather important along with something he and Andre has been putting off/forgotten to do over the past year. Despite how worrying the reminder is, he makes a mental note for later while maintaining a calm expression. "Are you sure you want to go through with this? Considering all of the fire you're currently playing with."

"Yes." Yang confidently. "It's either this, I turn you in to General Ironwood, or we walk away and try to return to our normal lives."

"But?" Adam asks, sensing there's more to this.

"But we both know that there's no way the General is going to believe a first year huntress in training captured the head of the local White Fang cell all by herself. He'll just think it is a trap or a ploy to break Torchwick out of prison. And walking away would only bring both of us more trouble when people start asking how we know each other once we meet again in battle."

"If you go through with this plan, won't you lose your family, friends, and everyone else when they find out about this?"

"That is a risk I am willing to take. What about you and your friends and comrades if you accept?" Yang replies after flinching at Adam's question.

Adam looks like he is going to reply immediately but instead he simply sighs in response. "Fair enough. Let me think about this."

"Take as much time as you need." Yang says, nodding her approval. Adam sits down and begins considering Yang's proposal in his head for a minute before going through his memories to see what good his anger did for him over the years.

At first he finds himself warming up to the proposal when he looks back at his past before the White Fang and what his anger did for then. Then he finds the proposal even more appealing when he reminisces about the time he and Blake spent together as a couple before his reignited anger warped his perception of the world around him and drove them apart. And when he thinks about what all that has happened since Blake left him standing there on the SDC cargo, a very appealing idea for what his cell needs to do to get out of the situation they are in forms in his head which helps him realize some of the benefits of this proposal. 'Even if I don't get a chance to meet with Blake, at least I can have a much clearer head for the days to come.'

"I accept." Adam announces, prompting Yang to breathe a sigh of relief. "So what did you have in mind?"

"I was thinking of us going to see the premier of Tiger in the Ballroom movie the day after tomorrow then dinner afterwards to discuss where we go from there." Yang explains as Adam tries to remember where he knows the book from but he can't quite recall where.

"A movie and dinner? Really?" Adam asks, pushing aside his thoughts.

"Well we have to start somewhere. Why not a movie where a Faunus and a human overcome racial barriers and become a couple followed by in a relaxed setting?" Yang nonchalantly replies. "Unless you're afraid of being in a room full of very emotional women?"

"Of course not!" Adam huffs, raising an eyebrow at Yang's second question. "So when and where are we going to meet up at?"

"The movie is at the Gruman's Mistralan Theater and it starts at 4:30 PM." Yang replies, smirking. But when she goes to take out her scroll to get the address for the theater, she remembers that it is in the women's locker room and she sighs as a result. "I'll text you more of the details once I get my scroll back from the locker room."

Outside of the room, Ozpin is taken by surprise by what Yang proposed and Adam agreeing to it. He then smirks at the potential of this turn of events and takes what Yang just said as sign that it was time leave. He inconspicuously starts heading towards the men's locker to get changed. Ilia sees the white haired man leave his spot and uses the opportunity to get even closer to the door while remaining concealed.

"I guess this is where we go our separate ways." Adam awkwardly says, unsure how to say goodbye in this situation.

"Yeah, I guess so." Yang awkwardly replies.

Both of them toss their ice packs back into the cooler before Yang closes the lid and picks it up while Adam picks up their weapons. When they both leave the room, Ilia gets a good view of their black eyes and their uh… happy expressions? She scrambles to leave the gym with a hope of intercepting Adam before he returns to base. Adam and Yang walk towards the locker rooms in an awkward silence, both of them unsure what to talk about until they reach their destination.

"Well Adam, today didn't really turn out the way I expected it to but I'm glad it did." Yang says with a grin. "So I'm looking forward to our meetup and you not getting cold feet at the last minute."

"So am I." Adam replies with a matching grin. "I'll see you then, Yang and I'll let you know if anything comes up."

They both go into their respective locker rooms and begin to change out of their gym clothes and into their normal outfits. As she is getting changed, Yang is thankful for the way things turning out the way they did and she grins to herself as she thinks of the possibilities of this plan of hers. As he is getting changed, Adam finds himself intrigued by what Yang has planned and grins when he thinks about the possibilities of the idea that formed in his head.

When they are done changing, they exit the locker rooms only to unexpectedly run into each other as they leave at the same time. This leads to them walking towards the entrance of the gym in an awkward silence. Reaching the entrance, they go their separate ways after quickly exchanging goodbyes for a second time after Yang returns the cooler of ice packs to the front desk.

Walking down an empty street, Adam comes across a concerned Ilia leaning against an alleyway wall with her arms crossed over her chest. "Ilia? What are you doing here?"

"I could ask you the same thing."

Adam sighs, knowing he's been found out. "How much did you see?"

"The last bit of your fight with blonde." Ilia replies. "Who is she?"

"She's..." Adam thinks for a moment on how best to put this. "...a friend I've come to respect."

"What?!" Ilia as reels back in shock. "Are you sure?"

"I am sure." Adam says with a smirk. "What are doing here, Ilia?"

"Taking a break from looking for a way to infiltrate Beacon. The Breach caused a lot of the normal ways of infiltrating to become unavailable due to the increased security." Ilia replies, looking away.

"Understandable."

"Is the mission still a go?" Ilia nervously asks.

"It is." Adam calmly states.

"Has anything changed?"

"I have an idea on what we need to do about our current situation but not how yet."

"What is it?"

"I believe it is time for the White Fang to ends its partnership with Cinder and her allies." Adam says with dangerous smile on his face that worries Ilia.

"Does the blonde have anything to do with this idea?"

"No." Adam simply states. "She is helping me with a personal issue of mine."

Ilia looks at him like he's gone insane and wonders what exactly happened in that room to change the passionate, charismatic, and angry Adam that she always knew into what she sees before her. She wants to say something about it but the calm look on his face convinces her otherwise. Instead she suddenly remembers the flyer that was handed to her yesterday. "Oh, right!"

Adam watches as Ilia digs into one of her pockets with a raised eyebrow when she pulls out a folded piece of paper. "What's this?"

"It's a flyer for a group called the Citizens against the White Fang and Racism." Ilia explains as she hands Adam the flyer.

Adam warily inspects the flyer. "Do you if this is a new hate group like Humanity's Shield?"

"I don't think so." Ilia honestly replies. "A Faunus and a human were handing these out side by side and the feeling I got from them reminded me of stories of the White Fang before Sienna took over."

"Huh." Adam simply says, looking at the flyer with greater interest. "Thank you for showing this to me, Ilia. Is there anything else you want to show me or need?"

"No." Ilia says, shaking her head no.

"Well, I should be going before my second in command gets too worried." Adam says. "I'll see you around."

"You too, Adam. And please be careful, I can easily see things getting worse because of your association with that blonde." Ilia says with worry clear in her voice.

"I will." Adam replies, nodding to say goodbye before continuing on his way. Ilia nods goodbye in return with small grin on her face and begins heading back to her safe house.

Meanwhile in the main White Fang headquarters that is somewhere in the jungles of Mistral...

Sienna Khan watches the last bit of a Vale's News Network recording explaining what the Breach is and the events leading up to it. When the recording ends, she lets out an unhappy sigh and rubs her temples in an attempt to dispel the rising anger.

"Adam... what have you done?" She mutters to herself before turning her attention to a nearby subordinate. "Have we established contact with Vale cell yet?"

"No ma'am, we have not." The subordinate replies. "We are assuming that they maintaining radio silence until the dies down."

'If it dies down.' Sienna thinks to herself. "What about Andre?"

"We still haven't heard anything from him yet." The subordinate hesitantly replies.

"Thank you and you are free to return to your duties." Sienna unhappily sighs.

"Thank you ma'am!" The subordinate salutes and leaves the room.

'Andre, I sent you there to keep an eye on Adam and keep him from doing anything rash. But it seems you joined him in his plans.' Sienna thinks to herself when she is finally alone. She turns her attention back to the recording and glowers at the frozen image of Roman Torchwick being put into the back of a police cruiser. 'What are you going to do now, Adam?'


Author's Note: I would like thank all of you who followed, favorited, reviewed, and stuck with this story. You guys surprised me with all of the positive and constructive feedback you given me so far. I was expecting some negative feedback, especially with how the first chapter went and with the comparison of Adam and Yang. Once again thank you all and I'll see you next chapter!