Hey! This is why the next chapter took so long:
I recently got obsessed with Tony-award-winning musical Spring Awakening! See it! I am telling you it is amazing! So, I quit this story for a bit and started a story on Hanschen and Ernst in SA (so much better than this one. Sorry, but it is.) It has 5 chapters now and soon to be six. BTW, it is in Germany in 1891, and two boys fall in love. They take turns speaking, so writing is a bit different.
This story is NOT going in the right direction for me. I will now write longer chapters and be more interesting. Now that I just read it back, I am writing better now from all the criticism of my other story.
I may be changing my name by the user name to something related to Spring Awakening or just generic, because I am not obsessed with Twilight anymore. Don't hate me.
Here is chapter 8! Thanks for all reviews!
That second Jared walked out of the limo, my head literally went numb. Yes I am fully aware that I have seen Jared before, but somehow this was way different. Perhaps it was the fact that he was dressed in a tuxedo, with his hair slicked back and a glimmering smile on his face that made my heart melt. Or perhaps it was just the lighting. I highly doubt it was the latter, so I went with the first one.
Jared made his way to the door of the limousine which was already open because the driver got out and did so.
I could not find a single flaw on his perfect tan skin, or a single trace of dust or lint on Jared's black suit.
He must have spent hours with duct tape in his bathroom preparing for this date! However, for some reason I just couldn't imagine that he would. Jared seemed like the most perfect person without really trying or noticing. He wouldn't mind going out and getting dirty during a nice long run, but for some reason he would always look completely handsome and sane at the same time. I, on the other hand, would look like a sweating freak that badly needs deodorant after breaking a sweat of any kind.
Since I was spacing out looking out the window at absolutely nothing, I did not notice Jared enter the vehicle, close the door, and stare at me questioningly as the limo started moving. I was pulled to the right, toppling over onto the lap of a very confused Jared.
"Oh! I-I am so sorry! I didn't realize you were her." I rambled, my face instantly consumed with an embarrassed blush. I noticed my response made him laugh, which made me feel a whole lot better.
"It is all right." He chuckled.
Before I was able to respond, my words were meshed with the light touch of Jared's mouth on mine. It was a short little kiss, definitely not satisfying to my needs. In actuality, it just made me want more. As I leaned in forward for another kiss, a hand restrained me back.
I shot back up and raised my eyebrows as if to ask a question.
"Consider this your punishment for not noticing me." Jared said in a smooth and attractive voice. He was teasing me. I bet you can imagine my reaction.
Jared started laughing at me again and had to turn his head in the opposite direction as not to make me even angrier. I was starting to get annoyed. As much as Jared was stunningly beautiful in every way, he had a dark side in which I was just figuring out.
"What is your problem?" I asked incredulously.
"You. You're my problem." He answered in between chuckles, which made him burst out even more.
"Me?" I asked with an innocent little smirk on my face.
"How could I ever be a problem? I am just a little angel! You can see my halo right here. See it?" I continued. I couldn't restrain my laughs at that point and playfully punched his shoulder.
At that point Jared slowed his laughs and spoke looking deeply into my eyes.
"You have the perfect laugh. You should laugh more often."
With that he forced his mouth onto mine without giving either of us time to breathe. It was okay though. We had no need to breathe at that moment, for we had each other by our side.
I could taste Jared when I kissed him. I always loved how he tasted like because it comforted me and made me feel like that only girl in the world. He tasted distinctly him. I don't know I should describe it except that I could pick out both his taste and smell from any other guy on the planet with ease.
Jared put his arms around my and pulled me closer to his body so that we were firmly pressed up against each other. I loved being able to feel his body heat and every wrinkly of cloth in between us. It felt so perfectly intimate, but without being scary. Mostly because I knew I was safe and that Jared would protect me in any means possible, even if it meant risking his own life. I am still mot positive how I knew this was so, however, it was quite obvious that he felt very close to me, not just physically, but emotionally. He was very protective.
I came up with a brilliant idea.
Right as we were really getting into it (we were then lying down him on me on top of him on the long seat) I just pulled up and got off of Jared, therefore breaking our exploring kisses. Yes, it did pain me to cut off our romancing, but it was for a good cause. Plus, it was fun to make people pay anyway.
I sat down on the smaller seat for one on the shorter edge of the limo and smiled triumphantly for my plan had great success.
I looked over at Jared's shocked face and noticed that Jared's mouth was widely agape and his eyes were so big you'd think that they would pop right out of his skull. He was not used to getting turned down. It was quite obvious.
I thought up a smart aleck reply. "You know, you should really close your mouth, because having it hanging open like that in midair like a fish out of water is getting really unattractive." Okay, so I was lying. Jared couldn't really get unattractive, but for the purposes of the conversation and jealousy I said it anyway.
Jared looked more shocked at that comment. However, he did shut his mouth immediately.
"Now that's better. I thought I might have had to do it myself!"
After a couple of moments that Jared was using processing my words, he became more composed. Disappointment was finally setting in that I wasn't kissing him still. He fully enjoyed kissing me as I did him.
"U-ummm. W-What was-s that about Kim?" He questioned, cocking his head slightly to the right hand side. It was funny how that smallest gesture were greatly noticed by me. At least, as far as Jared was concerned.
"Oh, I don't know." I made sure to say this as slowly and pretending to think, like it was no problem at all to me. "Perhaps to get back at you, maybe get you wanting more in the process."
I saw him nod slightly and move his head forward.
"And… am I going to get more?" He asked timidly. Jared was like the little boy who just got punished for something he really wanted to do but didn't get to. And it was exactly what this was, anyway.
I acted as if I was playfully thinking. Then I slowly shook my head 'no' at a tilt of my head, puckering my lips and narrowing my eyes.
"No." I shrugged and straightened my head locking my eyes with his, taking in his expression.
I loved being able to do this. I would have never had the guts before hand, and probably with another boy I wouldn't have, but Jared's security made me feel so comfortable and I knew he would never leave me. So, why not tease him? It was so different from the feeble, innocent Kim that I normally was. This way he would never be expecting this to happen.
Ah, I loved it!
Jared's expression was priceless. He looked a mixture of the following: lust, desire, anger, shock, confusion, sadness (just a little), hysteria, and just that feeling that makes you sit back and think what the heck was that?.
Then it was my turn to start laughing, which was really when Jared started to blush and sweat. To this day I still could not believe I made Jared sweat. AND blush! This was huge for me!
We had arrived at our destination. The limo stopped and the driver came to open the door. We thanked him and he left, leaving us standing in the parking lot in front of the restaurant. I did not know what we should do, so I took his arm and pulled my beloved shocked Jared into the packed delicious-smelling Italian restaurant. It was quite fancy. I could not fathom hoe Talia had manage to make this happen. But then, as I thought closer, I could. She's Talia. She can do anything she wants. Trust me.
Right after we got in, I heard high pitched giggling and a shrill voice over all the other noise screaming stuff. It became louder which means it was coming nearer.
All of a sudden a beautiful lady, obviously from La Push as well, was in front of me.
"Jared! Is this Kim? Oh my gosh hun, she's beautiful!" She pulled me into a loving embrace. I noticed a long scar on her face and felt bad for her. It wasn't natural, so she didn't have to live with it her whole life. Something happened. Poor lady.
I just stood there with a plastered smile on my face after she released me. I had no clue who she was. Then I saw the rest of the motley crew come over. Some hugged m, while some just smiled. I recognized a few from school.
" Oh, hun! I am so sorry I didn't introduce myself. I am Emily, Sam here's fiancé." She pointed to a tall La Pushian on her right, who looked up at her lovingly and put a hand around her waist.
"Nice to meet you!"
After everyone introduced themselves, Jacob spoke.
"I am so excited to have you join our crew! I know some people take our news extremely hard," he coughed making it sound like Emily's name, then continued while I was looking at him in extreme question, "so it is always nice to have some understanders around. Not like they have a choice, though." When he finished I was completely confused, while Jared stood there ferociously shaking his head to stop.
Jared spoke up. "Jacob, no! I didn't tell her yet!" I could both hear and see the shock on everyone's face when Jared said this. I guess they thought he had told me whatever it was.
I have to say though, I was quite curious what was going on.
"Jared? What didn't you say to me? I would be honored to know."
Embry nodded his head. "Yeah, Jared. You gotta tell her sometime. It best be soon."
"Yes, I know, but I was going to tell her on our own time. As in not in a packed fancy Italian restaurant." He sighed.
"What is it?" I was starting to feel nervous. I did not enjoy having no clue as to what was going on!
"Alright Kim. Would you like me to tell you now and get it over with, or tell you when we get home?"
I thought for a second and made up my decision.
Sorry for the cliffie!
Alright. So I don't know what I should do. Let's take a vote, shall we? In you review please answer A or B"
A: Have Jared tell Kim about being a werewolf in the restaurant then and there (well at the table obviously)
B: Wait until they are home and comfortable. Little more romantic, I will tell you that much.
Please vote. Also, I am not going to make this story so incredibly long. Sorry. A couple more chapters, like about 5 to 10. Okay, maybe that's a lot. But still.
Hope you enjoyed! Please review! It makes me happy! Please also feel free to read my Spring Awakening new story It Started as a Crush. It is very good! Longer better chapters!
I hope you like my new writing style. It is longer, I know. I just hope I didn't bore you! See ya! Plz review and give constructive critisism!
Sarah
