Hey you guys,
Someone brought it to my attention that I wasn't showing enough of Edward, and i'm sorry that he hasn't been in this story as much as some of you might have hoped.
I was just going to add one more chapter and that would be the end of this story, but I really wanted to add Edward into this, only because he's like the BEST character in Twilight.
I haven't decided how much chapters I should have about him, but i'll just wing it with chapter eight and see if i'm even good at writing this story in Edwards' point of view. Oh, don't worry i'm not going to write the story over in his point of view. That would take up too much of my time, plus I really don't think you guys would like that, cause I have a feeling that you want to see (hear) what happens to Dolyn, Edward, and Bella. Am I right?
So, from now on (till I have no idea when) i'll be writing this story in Edwards' point of view. Just so that he'll be in this story more.
If you guys get confused just let me know, and i'll try to lay it out for you guys.
Oh, one more thing. Someone asked why Dolyns' eyes were green. Well, his eyes are green only because I like guys with green eyes (unfortunetly, guys with green eyes, make my heart melt). There's no particular reason why I made his eyes green (except for the one I mentioned), but when the time comes closer, i'll explain to you guys why it changed when he was talking to Bella in the car. I hope that answered your question.
Don't forget to let me know if you guys are in any way confused about this story. I've heard from my friends (who read my chapters for before I put it up) that they were kind of confused at some points in the story.
Please continue to check back and i'll try to have at least one chapter up a day. Don't forget to review too :)
Signed,
Your Nikkah
