Well here, you go readers, chapter 7. I hope you guys all like it, because I've had a little writers block lately and have been brainstorming the new story I should write, which I'll probably put up tomorrow. I only got a few reviews last chapter, well chapter six I mean, and I was depressed for a while and I got even more depressed when I only got three reviews for my last chapter in life. Please review, to avoid making me depressed so that I won't get writers block.
Imprisonment:
Chapter 7:
Great Calamity
Who the people are so far:
1. Sasuke: a slave/ supposed mass murderer/blind
2. Sakura: A gypsy; codename: (Klyna)
3. Ino: Pickpocket; codename: (Kauri)
4. Neji: Head of the Royal Guard
5. Naruto: prison guard
6. Kakashi: Sakura's beloved father
7. Kabuto: a hated noble who treats his slaves like dirt
8. Itachi: King of Konoha
9. Hinata: Princess of Konoha and the sister of Itachi
10. Tenten: Hinata's maid and best friend
11. Gaara: a boy who lives on the streets, helping Kakashi
12: Temari: Gaara's sister and is homeless, helping Kakashi
13. Kankuro: Gaara's brother; homeless, helping Kakashi
14: Tsunade: healer, friend of Kakashi, Sasuke's mom
15. Klyna: Sakura's dead mother/ gypsy
Recap:
Sakura ended the song and immediately felt like all her problems were lifted off her shoulders. She had sung this song since she had learned it when she was 4 years old and had sung it every night before falling to sleep.
Ino and Sasuke felt every word that she sung cut into their hearts, and it did give them the hope to go another day, here in the prison.
End of Recap:
Flashback:
"Sakura, dear get in here," Klyna spoke.
Sakura came literally bouncing into the house with a bundle of chrysanthemums, cherry blossoms, and sunflowers. A smile was literally plastered on her face, and she was giggling along with her best friend, Tenten.
Tenten was a girl with just as a huge imagination as Sakura that the lives they lived were dreams and they were medieval princesses loved throughout the land and were destined to become faeries after death. They would each fall in love with handsome princes, never once feeling the pain of hardships, never having to endure the harsh work of being on the run.
Kakashi came from behind the two girls and gave them each a kiss on the head.
"Come on; sit down, supper's ready."
They all sat down at the supper table and were all enjoying dinner- when it happened.
"Gypsy," They heard people shouting. The sun had set, and they had thrown torches onto the hut.
Smoke broke out to quickly; Kakashi was looking for his wife and the girls. He managed to grab Sakura, not finding Tenten.
The town's people now grabbed Tenten and Klyna, while Kakashi was rushing Sakura into the forest.
Right before Tenten's eyes, she saw it all; they through her to the ground and then they brutally attacked Klyna. Then with more force then necessary, they threw Sakura's mother onto the flames.
Klyna never screamed or hollered as her life was ended, because that was a gypsy's way; never fear death because everyone has his or her own time.
Kakashi never saw Tenten sprawled their in the to high grass, he must have thought that he had perished with his wife; he must of thought that her essence was gone, with the wisps of ash.
Some of the town's people's children now went over to Tenten- one had a knife and he just started to slice at her back.
The pain was to intolerable, Tenten could hardly breath while the cold hard object kept hitting her back.
The last thing Tenten had remembered seeing was the look on Kakashi's face- it looked like that he had lost his world to the embers himself, for his life was Klyna and without her, what would there be?
From Sakura's point of view:
I could hardly breathe- I saw them throw my mother into those pit-forsaken embers of the wild fire. How could they do that to her, when all she did was help them.
Why was life taken from her young youthful mother? Sakura knew though that this was wrong a gypsy never asked what Gods whim was, for that was wrong.
Tears escalated down her face, like waves- I don't think even the ocean could compare to the amount of salty water that she released from her eyes.
Kakashi's point of view:
The villagers how, how could they kill Klyna when all she did was help them and bring them good luck? Why did she have to die so young, she had a whole life a head of her, and now her only life was with her believer?
Tears, dripped down my face, this was the first time he has ever cried in his life.
He lost his wife, not only his wife though; he lost the love of his life- his soul mate.
At that moment, he remembered his daughters- his real and his adopted. He looked around him but he didn't see Tenten anywhere. They must have caught her and through her in the fire with Klyna.
Two Days Later:
Tenten was so badly cut and bruised that she couldn't get up without the pain causing her to scream. She heard horse beats in the distance.
One of the men on the horse shouted something, but Tenten couldn't hear properly, she still had the sounds of the fire burning and crackling in her head, the sound of Kakashi's torment when he yelled out in the loss of his wife shortly after he had begun to cry.
The next thing she knew was that there were horses all around her. She couldn't see who the riders were because she was on her stomach with her face in the dirt. She felt ashamed of the scars on her back, out in the open like that.
"Who are you?" She whispered while turning her head to the side, and finally sleep overcame her, making her black out.
That was how she came to be at the castle for the person who found her was the old king himself, Itachi and Hinata's father.
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Inside the Castle Kitchen:
"A new dish is completed." Kiba said triumphantly as he set it down before the castle taste tester to make sure that it wouldn't poison the king.
Choji automatically took a bite and said, "This is the best dish I've ever tasted in my whole life."
That was a huge complement coming from Choji.
Kiba smiled, "I'm glad you like it."
"I bet the king might even give you a bigger salary for this dish."
"I don't think that would happen, but it would be great." Kiba imagined more money in his hands.
"This beef pie, is delicious, what ingredient did you add, from the last time you made it."
Last time the beef pie turned out both burnt and gross, with no flavor.
Kiba smiled evilly, "Why would I ever tell you what my secret ingredient is."
"Oh come on man, were good friends, it's not like I'm going to go run to the middle of the street and shout the secret ingredient out.
Kiba did not believe him, because that is exactly what he did, the other three times that he told Choji the secret ingredient.
I'll give all you readers a clue it ends with a T and starts with an S, and has only four letters.
If you guessed salt, that is the secret ingredient, I mean you think Choji could be able to taste the salt.
"I SAID NO," Kiba said very irritated.
"Alright," Choji said not wanting to think of the consequences of getting his best friend mad.
All of the sudden a man ran into the room tripping Kiba who held a pie on each hand and the pies went straight up in the air landing on the now laying/tripped Kiba.
"Lee, get out of my kitchen now," Kiba yelled, with an ominous aura about him.
Oh, Lee ran straight out of the kitchen knowing what he just did. Kiba would kill him later on, and Lee was afraid of Kiba.
Lee went back to his job, as the trainer of the guards, and boy was he ever proud of his youthful job.
"Attention," He ordered his guards in training, "We are now going to youthfully run one youthful lap around the youthful inside of the castle."
All the guards in training grunted, they hated Lee as their superior and they hated, wait no beyond hated the word youthful.
They wish that every time that Lee said that word they could slap him right across the face. That word they wanted to kill, they didn't want it to be a word of any language.
They now all started to run the lap, next came the obstacle course, swimming, push ups, curl ups, and then the most dreadful thing of all…Lee's youthful speech.
When Lee gave his speech, they all wanted to drop dead because every other word he said was youthful and this whole speech lasted a whole 40 minutes of their lives. If one of them slouched or fell asleep Lee would gone on with his speech for about another thirty minutes.
Lee had his life well, because after a nice day of training his guards, he went to his little hut on the outside of the inner castle, which was about fifteen minutes away. When he got home, his dad was always waiting for him with a huge bear hug. He loved Gai more than anything in the world and he loved him as a father.
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At the Castle Garden:
Hinata was lying on a bench reading her book happily, when all of a sudden someone kissed her on the forehead. It was Shikamaru; of course, it had to be him, because the man she loved would never do a thing like that. (Whom do you think that is? You will have to wait a couple chapters, peoples.)
"You look beautiful today," He said in a distraught voice.
"What's wrong, Shik," Hinata asked.
"Unrequited love," Shik said.
It was clear that was all he would say, yet she knew that one day he could capture the heart of the woman he loved. She felt sorry for him and herself, when it came to love because they had no choice they were sentenced at birth to marry one another.
Hinata hated the arrangement when their hearts belonged to two different people, they were the same and then different, because for one being a princess meant that happiness is not always there and she understood that obligation, because she was a true princess by heart.
A/N
Well that's where the chapter ends, like I said I'm having one heck of a writers block and I need all your guy's help. Please if you have any ideas that you could share with me for what you want the next chapter to be about do tell, because I am stumped.
It was a bad chapter I know, but hopefully next chapter will be better if you guys give me your opinions. My goal is to make it to review number 30. So please review, for my sake and the sake of the next chapter.
Thanks, moonlesslife
