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Chapter 8.

AN: stop flassing ok! if u do den u r a prep! What the fuck is flassing? O.o

Everyone in the class stared at me and then Draco came into the room even though he was naked It's good to know he has no dignity as well as virginity now. and started begging me to take him back. Draco would never be that desperate.

"Ebony, it's not what you think!" Draco screamed sadly. I'm not even going to begin to explain how a person cannot scream sadly.

My friend B'loody Mary Smith smiled at me understatedly. Anyone else find it odd/funny that part of her name is similar to Mary Sue? She flipped her long waste-length gothic black hair and opened her crimson eyes like blood that she was wearing contact lenses on. She had pale white skin that she was wearing white makeup on. Too much detail…and she looks like a Blade:Trinity reject

Hermione was kidnapped when she was born. When did one of my favorite characters come into the conversation?

Her real parents are vampires Oh no. and one of them is a witch Please no. but Voldemort killed her mother and her father committed suicide because he was depressed about it. Dear God, if you are merciful at all… She still has nightmares about it and she is very haunted and depressed. It also turns out her real last name is Smith and not Granger. FUCK YOU TARA (Since she has converted to Satanism she is in Slytherin now not Griffindoor.) WHAT THE HELL

"What is it that you desire, you ridiculous dimwit!" Snape demeaned angrily in his cold voice but I ignored him. He sounds very polite yet rude at the same time o.O

"Vampire, I can't believe you cheated on me with Draco!" I shouted at him. No one cares.

Everyone gasped. Of course they do.

I don't know why Ebony was so mad at me. Huh? I had went out with Vampire (I'm bi and so is Ebony) Ooooooh random POV change. That doesn't confuse anyone at all -_-" for a while but then he broke my heart. Good for you. He dumped me because he liked Britney, a stupid preppy fucker. You have issues with preps. We were just good friends now. He had gone through horrible problems, and now he was gothic. (Haha, like I would hang out with a prep.) But you dated him before he was gothic ,stupid.

"But I'm not going out with Draco anymore!" said Vampire. And again with the random POV change-.-

"Yeah fucking right! Fuck off, you bastard!" I screamed. You say fuck alot. I ran out of the room and into the Forbidden Forest where I had lost my virility Uh? to Draco and then I started to bust into tears. Please tell me that means your eyeballs exploded. Because I would LAUGH.