'Um, yeah'.

'God girl, you're in there'.

When it got to ten to five, we left the dorms to head to the training room where the rankings would be announced. Kaily was convinced I didn't have anything to worry about, but I didn't want to believe her. I didn't want to get to hopeful of staying only to be kicked out.

But Kaily was right when she told me to not be worried, I kept my ranking of second place through all the fights, while Andy retained his position in first. The order went;
1) Andy,
2)Jasmine,
3) Hunter,
4) Kaily,
5) James,
6) Nathan,
7) Tate,
8) Chloe,
9) Becca,
10) Anna
And 11) Summer.

We were then shown the rankings with the Dauntless born initiates, I kind of expected to drop to a lower ranking, at least past ten. I only dropped one spot, I couldn't believe it. Finn went into the first spot, with Callum in fourth, Lexi in sixth and Alexa in eighth. Kaily wrapped her arms around me while jumping up and down.

'Come on' She says, pulling me out the training room 'We're going to look more Dauntless!'.

The Pit is full of people in varying stages of drunken ness, all milling about. We head towards the tattoo and piercing place, where Tori is sat at a desk and a pale skinned man is sat in the swivel chair, spinning around. He had blue hair and a visible tattoo on his back where his t-shirt had ridden up.

'Hey, Jasmine the first jumper, and Kaily the Stiff', Tori greets us as we walk in.

'Hey Tori, we want to look more Dauntless, I'm hoping for a tattoo'.

'Wow, Jasmine, you being brave? Do you want an already created stencil or something unique?'.

I already had planned in my head what I wanted, and quickly looked around to find it. Needless to say, there wasn't anything like it. So, I asked Tori for some paper and and pencil and I drew it for her. It was an apple tree that was near my house in Amity, with flames surrounding the branches. Tori inspected my work before turning to the guy sat in the chair.

'Alfie, if your not careful, Jasmine here will steal your job'.

'I don't actually work here, I spend the time I'm not meant to be in school designing tattoos for you. It's slave labour', the guy, Alfie, walks over to me and looks at the design. 'Thats pretty awesome, I'm guessing you were Amity, so that makes you Jasmine, who jumped first. I'm Alfie, Tori's boyfriend's little brother. I'm nearly sixteen, choosing next year'.

'But you're so tall'.

'Thats a very strange thing to say to someone you just met'.

'Sorry, um, your hair is cool'.

Tori interrupted our slightly awkward small talk 'Hey, Jasmine, you want this tattoo done today?'.

'If that's possible'.

'Come in then'.

I follow Tori out of a door and into the treatment room where I got my Snake bites. Kaily is sat in a chair getting two tattoos, one on the back of her neck and another on her foot. After explaining to Tori that I want the tattoo on my right side, just above my hip, she places the stencil on my desired body part and gets to work. It was quicker than I expected and while she's working she chats to me about my family in Amity and my initiation.

'Brother and Sisters in Amity?'.

'Yeah, got a brother and a sister, Bella, she's a year older than me and a younger brother, Ben'.

'Thats cute, what happened to your face?'.

'I got punched in a fight. You should have seen the other guy'. I pause for a moment, before turning slightly to Kaily, 'Did Nathan actually get out of the hospital to see the rankings?'.

'No, I don't think so'.

Beside me Tori looks impressed, 'You put the other guy in hospital?'.

I nod, 'He was unconscious when I left after Er- the nurse, did my face up'.

'Who did you say did your face up, Jasmine?'.

'Er, the nurse'.

'Tori, don't listen to her, she's lying. Eric did it'.

'Eric, you let him near you with an instrument can could injure you?'.

'It was fine. Honestly'

'Okay, if you say so, you're done. It looks pretty cool to be honest'.

I swivel to look at my tattoo before thanking Tori and paying with my points, of which I get two hundred a month, and the tattoo cost twenty, I find out that points will go into our accounts on the 2nd of each month and it's the nineteenth of April today, and I'm down to 120 points, after the hair and piercings, and clothing I bought. Before I leave with Kaily, I get a tongue piercing and a small stretcher to put through the holes in my ears that have been there since I was seven. That takes another ten points and I've still got another ten days before my next point load.

We leave the tattoo and piercing parlour and head to the Mess Hall, where James, Hunter and Andy are sat around a table. We sit down and eat a pile of burgers and cake washed down with the juice in a jug that was sat on the table.

Sleep came easy that evening, and we were all out by ten. Only to be woken up two hours later by Eric and Four whacking the metal bed frames of our beds with their metal rods and shining torches into our eyes.

'Everyone up, we're going on a trip. Get dressed and be ready to go in ten minutes' Eric explains, from where he's stood by the doors, wearing tight jeans and a long sleeved t-shirt. 'Dress warm, we're going to be outside'.

I groan, and Eric and Four walk around once more to make sure everyone is awake. Eric pauses at the bed I'm in, but makes to move on when he realises I'm awake, he pauses, 'You can take the plaster off now'. His hands move to my face where he grabs the edge of the plaster and pulls gently. 'You can see your face again now, gives everyone something pretty to look at'.

Glaring at him, I reply with a sarcastic, 'Thank You, you're implying that I'm not actually good for anything' and I turn, looking for appropriate clothing to wear. He stands closer too me, before saying quietly, 'I'm sorry, I didn't mean to offend you. But I was telling the truth, you do have a very pretty face'.

As I make to turn around, he's gone already whacking his metal rod against Tate's bed until he sits up and makes to get out. I pull on black skinny jeans and a thick dark oversized jumper. I pull my dark hair into a ponytail and pull on my combat boots. Kaily is beside me, doing the same and wearing a similar outfit to me.

'I'm way to tired for this shit, aren't you Jazzy?'. I shake my head, I actually feel pretty awake and I'm looking forward to whatever we are going to be doing. We head towards the doors of the dorm and sit in the floor, waiting for the rest of the dorm to be ready. By the time Eric and Four come back, most of the initiates are ready to go, apart from a few stragglers, who are told to hurry up.

We're lead towards the train tracks, where we wait for the train with the Dauntless born initiates. Finn, Callum, Alexa and Lexi all wave from their spot and I wave back, going over with Kaily to join them.

'Alright, Initiates, listen up! The train is due in, actually, I have no idea when the trains due. Four?'.

'You still haven't memorised the timetable yet?'.

'I don't need to, I have you to tell me the times'.

Four rolled his eyes and Eric laughed, 'Three minutes, you'll have to jump on the train like on the day of the choosing ceremony, and we'll sort out teams and ammunition on the train' Four explained. Right on cue, the train appears and Eric and Four set off into a run, obviously making it into a competion. They jump on and the rest of us follow.

'Capture the flag' Four explains, 'Is an initiation ritual. You'll be split into two teams, with Eric and I as Captains. This is to build your strengths in working together as a team. You'll be tested as to how you work'.

Eric continues as Four trails off, 'This', He says, waving a lightweight black gun around, 'Is your weapon of choice, and this' He says, holding up a cardboard box, 'Is your ammunition. Paintballs. We were told we weren't aloud to us real bullets, although Four and I we trying to get permission. Everyone grab a black vest', gesturing to another box on the train floor which must be where he and Four got their vests from. We grab the thick black vests and pull them on.

'Two teams, Four can pick first'.

'You're not going to win this year either, Eric'.

'You're all talk really, just shut up and pick your team. Transfers first'. Four grins at him, before scanning the train car and looking at each initiate thoughtfully.

'Okay, first I take Jasmine'.

My eyes, from where they were looking at the floor, shoot upwards. Four is looking at me, waiting for me to join him. I leave where I was leaning against the wall and make my way over to him. Eric takes Andy, James, Tate and Chloe and Four ends up with Kaily, Hunter, Nathan, who finally got out of the infirmary and I. Finn and Lexi both end up on the same team as us and we make our way out if the train, following Four.

COULD I PLEASE HAVE SOME FEAR LANDSCAPE IDEAS, I HAVE A FEW BUT I WOULD LOVE SOME MORE. THANK YOU!

I'm sorry, I know I said this would be Visiting Day as well but this was already 1,709 not including the authors note. Eric is movie Eric, so Jai Courtney and 24 at the time of Divergent, he's seventeen here. I don't know when the next update will be, schools back on Wednesday and I've got German to learn before that. But hopefully, an hour or two tomorrow and an hour on Tuesday and I've got another chapter. Hopefully. I don't own and I hope you enjoyed. Bye my lovelies.