Hello everyone! Thanks for the reviews! They made my day so much better when I read them! I give my thanks to:
Smokeblade27: Awesome names (it is interesting) your boss.
Willowdream of Forestclan: You give me tons of reviews and you're a good writer plus you gave me my first favorite. Thank you!
Moonbeam141: You gave me my first review! Thank you thank you!
OceanSeaBlueEyes: You have given me reviews too and we both agree that ravenkit is cute.
To whatever Guests that have reviewed me: Thank you for the wonderful names!
To whoever has read this: YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE! I thank you for taking the time to read my story! I couldn't have done this without you.
Alura arrows: You gave me a birthday present, another favorite!
Oh yes one other thing to do is list off names I might give little Twigkit!
Twigfrost (meh), Twigleaf (preety name), Twigstrike(powerful…and boss), Twigtail( its catchy isn't it?) and Twigclaw or fang (not like Yellowfang I hope)
Yellowfang: IM GOING TO SHREAD YOU!
Me: ….. *runs away*
CHAPTER SIX
I looked up and heard cats coming into camp. I ran outside curious to see who would be the new deputy. "All cats able to catch rabbits gather bellow the high rock" We all gathered. "I have recived my new name from Starclan and I will serve you all as best as I can". "POOLSTAR POOLSTAR!" we all chanted. Poolstar purred in reply. "Mousestep please step forward." Mousestep walked up to Poolstar" I say these words before Starclan so they may hear and approve my choice. Mousestep will be the new Windclan deputy." We all chanted his name. "I will serve Windclan until death and after." He mewed. "Now since I am leader I have a few changes to make". Everyone cocked their heads confused. "Spirits of Starclan, you know every cat by name. I ask you to take the name away from the cat you see before you, as it no longer stands for who she is. By my authority as clan leader, and with the approval of our warrior ancestors I name Twigkit Venom because she has poisoned our clan with her Adderstar blood and she will be an outcast, never to become a warrior, apprentice or medicine cat. She will give to our clan by eating after everyone else and must have food given to her, get new moss and take away dirty ones, sleep out in the open to warn us of danger, participate in battle training so the apprentices can harm her and not each other and must never leave camp unless given permission. "I looked around as my clan mates looked at me in pity and disgust. "Starclan won't you kill me now?"
Venoms lifestyle had rapidly changed. Every morning she woke up in the cold clearing with no moss. Mentors' took her out in the morning and she had many horrible injuries. On the way back she had to gather moss. She spent her afternoons going through moss, making sure no thorns got in. She then had to replace the moss. Lakewater would let her sneak into the nusery to play with Skykit and Ravenkit who were now four moons old. In the evenings when Leopardpaw and her siblings came back from training they would spit at her and kick dirt in her face. After everyone went to sleep Poolstar would throw the skinniest thing in the pile at her face. Today it was a tiny robin. The robin had a bite taken out of it and it was a few days old but it was food. She gobbled it down in seconds and followed Poolstar to her den. "Poolstar?" she asked "can I talk to you?" Poolstar glared at her "Spit it out foxdung!" Venom asked "Why do you hate me?" Poolstar sighed and sat down. "As an apprentice I had a crush on your grandfather. He liked another she cat though and had one kit with her. I was glad when she died. When his daughter went missing I tried to convince him she was dead but he refused to think that. I convinced your mother to kill herself but then you came. He spent all his time with you! I remember when you were born all four of her kits survived. I took one to the twolegplace and Tinywhisker took one to Shadowclan and Rockfoot took one to Riverclan." I blinked in confusion and left the den. I had siblings? What were their names? What did they look like? I sat down on the ground thinking of Mudstar. Was he watching me right now?
I woke up to see Ravenkit and Skykit bouncing around. I smiled at the kits but Lizardstripe gave me a warning glare. I rolled my eyes. Like I'm dangerous. I leapt at the kits growling. And rolled past them. They laughed and I fell. Claws went down my back. I screeched in pain. "What did you do that for!" I yelled at her. "You're a danger to the kits!" I laughed in her face she clawed my face sending me to the ground because of my skinny weight. She tried to strike again but I dodged her and swiped at her face. She growled at me and pushed me against a wall. I winced as teeth touched my throat but the teeth were gone. Skykit and Ravenkit held her tail in their jaws. She schreeched in pain and threw Skykit on the ground. Lakewater bounded to Lizardstripe and pinned her down. She looked down at her with hatred in her eyes and bit into her neck killing her. Poolstar looked at all four of them. "Those four traitors are banished from Windclan and if we see you this evening we will kill you." My eyes widened. Beetlewisker looked sadly at Lakewater. "I will go where my heart lies, that is with Lakewater". Poolstar bowed her head. I tried to walk toward the way to Riverclan but the world swirled around me and I fell unconscious.
Four cats gathered in a clearing "How do we know if she's good or not yet?" the brown tom mewed. The silver she replied" She is very fragile at the moment but has grown strong enough to endure her destiny." A white she steped forward "I say we make sure she has something to be good for to live for. The black tom nodded "She has Ravenkit. Is that not enough? The white she shook her head "She needs love."
Oh sorry I forgot. This chapters question is: What clan do you think you would be from? I think I would be Riverclan and Skyclan because I climb trees and swim great in mountain rivers. Thank you everyone! You all make my day better. Thank you.
