Battle for Crait Six:
Walker Two guns downs two more First Order AT-ST's. A First Order AT-AT turns its head and hits Walker Two with a couple of salvos.
Rose looks out the side-viewport. "Heavy walker turning on us! It wont be long until they can fire their main cannon at us!"
The First Order AT-AT slowly turns, trying to aim its main gun at Walker Two.
"Turn us around!" Poe says. "Hurry!"
Rose pulls on her controls and Walker Two slowly begins to turn.
Finn is still hanging from the cable and can only watch as the First Order AT-AT he is attached to turns around and opens fire on Walker One, hitting Walker One in the already cracked side-armor. Three salvos from its head-cannons and Walker One topples over, crashing forward into the ground. Finn finds renewed strength and beings to climb the cable.
Rose steers Walker Two and Poe climbs back and pulls down the command-periscope.
Poe aims for the heavy cannon on the enemy walker. "Locked on" Poe says. "Powering up the guns."
Rose pulls her controls. Walker Two takes a sidestep and Poe's periscope indicates he can fire. The chin-guns opens fire with maximum firepower and hits the heavy cannon, blowing it apart.
Finn realizes that his First Order walker is heading to come up behind Walker Two. He struggles to climb faster.
At the base, a pair of blast-doors slowly open, Republic troops help to push them open. Then a classic imperial-style turret, box-structured, is pushed out and into place on a platform. Maz climbs a ladder and sits down by the gun-controls. Colonel Stammett runs up with a thick power-cable and hooks it up to the turret.
"There!" Stammetts shouts up at Maz. "You got power!"
Maz angles the turrets dual cannons and fires. The blaster-rounds hits the First Order walker that has lost its main cannon over the body-section. The last corvette fires as well, hitting the same target and brings the AT-AT crashing down.
Finn climbs the cable. He realizes that the AT-AT takes aim at Walker Two. The walker fires its main cannon and hits Walker Two in the rear; the body-section erupts from the explosion and Walker Two topples over. Onboard Walker Two, Poe and Rose scream as they crash towards the ground. Walker Two hits the ground and Poe and Rose are thrown against the consoles of the cockpit! Finn begins to climb even more determined.
Creels throne-room:
Creel and Luke fight and then backs away, aiming their lightsaber at one another.
"We can go on like this for eternity" Creel says. "The light against the dark. But there can not be one without the other. You can not defeat me and I can not defeat you. We are destined to forever counter one another. As darkness rises, there will be light to meet it."
Luke has a stern face. "I used to think that was the nature of the Force. Now I know better."
Luke attacks, they fight and Creel stabs at Luke. Rey and Kylo can not grasp what they have just witnessed. Creel is as baffled as the others when he realizes he has impaled Luke through the stomach, his purple lightsaber going straight through Luke's torso. Luke is holding on to the hilt/cane that is Creels weapon with his gloved robotic hand.
Creel looks up at Luke and realizes what is about to happen. "No."
Luke sweeps with his lightsaber, cutting through Creels cane, cutting through his arms and chest. Creels body-parts fall to the floor, along with the broken piece of the cane. Luke drops the other piece of the cane and deactivates his fathers lightsaber. Slowly, Luke turns to look at both Kylo and Rey.
"I will always be there to guide you" Luke says. "The both of you. If you'll let me."
And then, his body vanishes and the clothes fall to the floor, as does Anakin's lightsaber.
Rey's world falls apart. "NO!"
Kylo watches as the eight other Knights of Ren picks up their weapons. Slowly, he unhooks his lightsaber-hilt. Rey realizes that she's in trouble, surrounded by the Knights of Ren.
Battle for Crait Six:
Six AT-STs armed with a single heavy blaster opens fire on the last corvette. As does the last of the First Order AT-ATs. As the blasts hits the corvettes hull, the crew abandons ship and runs for the base. Behind them, the corvette gets shot to pieces.
Maz fires her turret and hits the last of the AT-AT's. The explosion against its hull has Finn dangling out of control. The AT-AT takes aim. Maz hurries to get out of the turret and she and other Republic troops leaves the platform in a hurry. The AT-AT fires its main cannon and takes out the turret at the base in a big explosion.
On the command-shuttle, Colonel Relmar nods with a smile. "Their main defenses are destroyed. Now all that remains is clearing out the base. Send in the troops. Full attack."
Dozens and dozens of speeder-transports carrying twelve stormtroopers each race across the salt-desert, flying past AT-ST's and the AT-AT. Finn looks down at the transports as they head for the base. He climbs the cable and at last manages to grab hold of the hull of the walker.
Republic troops fill the trenches in front of the bases large gate. An officer looks at the incoming enemy troops through his magnoculars.
"Fire!" the officers call out to his troops.
The entire line of Republic troops open fire. The assaulting First Order vehicles return fire!
Finn reaches over to the blown hatch. He finds a grip and manages to pull himself inside.
Creels throne-room:
The Knights of Ren spread out, weapons ready, prepared to fight Rey and Kylo. Kylo unhooks Reys twin-lightsaber and, much to her surprise, hands it to her.
"Trust the Force" Kylo tells her. They both activate their weapons. "Let it guide you."
The Knights of Ren attack! Kylo and Rey take them all on!
( Basically, this fight is more or less what we saw in the actual movie, apart from Rey wielding a dual-bladed lightsaber )
Battle for Crait Six:
Inside the First Order AT-AT, Finn, with a blaster drawn, moves through the vehicle, gunning down First Order crewmen as he moves. He makes his way into the cockpit and guns down the pilots, drags one from the seat and takes control over the walker.
The First Order troop-transports comes to a stop and unload their soldiers. The First Order stormtroopers assaults the Republic trenches on foot, supported by AT-ST's. The Republic troops in the trenches are overwhelmed. That's when the First Order begin getting hit by fire from the last AT-AT.
Finn is firing his guns time and time again at the First Order troops.
Creels throne-room:
The fight between Kylo/Rey and the Knights of Ren continues. The Knights of Ren are down to four, having lost four of their own!
Battle for Crait Six:
Poe and Rose climb out of the wreck of Walker Two. They are both in pain, bleeding from cuts. A half a mile or so away, the battle rages outside of the base. Turning, they see First Order support units slowly advancing, the command-shuttle hovering in midair like a floating bunker.
Poe turns to Rose. "I got an idea."
"Should I be worried?"
At the trenches, First Order troops and Republic soldiers are gunning at each other. Finn blasts AT-STs and stormtroopers. Eventually, the stormtroopers falls back in full retreat. The Republic troops gets out of cover and begins to cheer in triumph!
Poe and Rose climb out of the wrecked Walker Two's main hull. Together, they set up a heavy blaster-cannon of the kind we see Imperial Snow Troopers assemble in The Empire Strikes Back. Once put together, Rose hooks up the gun to a power-pack. Poe takes aim and begins to fire time and time again at the command-shuttle.
Onboard the command-shuttle, Colonel Relmar turns to his crew. "Take us out of here!"
Poe keeps firing and in the end the command-shuttle comes crashing down and explodes on impact.
At the imperial base, an armored door opens and Holdo and Stammett runs out on a balcony and look out over the battlefield, excited that they have won the battle.
Creels throne-room:
Kylo and Rey kills the last of the Knights of Ren! They end up catching their breaths and looking at one another, on their own in the throne-room.
"Now what?" Rey asks.
"Now?" Kylo says. "Join with me" he then goes on. "The Republic will fall. It can not survive after today. Join me and we can shape the galaxy. Right all the wrongs."
"Join you?" Rey says, a bit appalled. "You're a tyrant. A murderer!"
"I saved you!" Kylo counters. "I shut down the defenses protecting Luke's Jedi academy. I let them inside. They killed them all. All the students. But I saved you. I took you to Jakku and left you there. I knew that Creel and the Knights of Ren would never find you there. I protected you! From the Knights of Ren, from the Jedi."
Rey can hardly take it in. "What are you talking about?"
"My uncle kept secrets from me" Kylo says. "Just as he has kept secrets from you. I will never lie to you. I will always be loyal to you."
"Why?"
"I remember when your mother died" Kylo says. "You were only a few years old when a noghri-assassin killed her. The poison-dart was meant for your father, but she sacrificed herself to save him. He was never the same after that. It affected his teachings. The way he treated his students. The way he treated me. The way he treated you. He kept things from me. Refused to teach me things about the Force. Secrets and powers I knew I could handle and control. He stopped teaching you altogether. Tried to treat you like an ordinary girl. Tried to give you an ordinary life. And doing that, he ignored his students. He ignored me."
Rey shakes her head. "No."
"Search your feelings. You know it's true."
"No" Rey says and shakes her head.
"Luke Skywalker gave up on us all" Kylo says. "Just like he gave up on the Jedi the day your mother died."
"Stop it!"
"We can change it!" Kylo argues. "You and me. We can rebuild. Create our own order. We don't need the Knights of Ren. We don't need the Jedi. All we need are each other. You and me, Leanna."
Rey reacts upon hearing her real name for the first time ever. Kylo reaches out with a hand towards her, inviting her to take it.
"After today, we only have each other" Kylo says. "We are alone. Who else can we trust?"
"I know what you want" Rey says. "I can feel your darkest desires. Hidden deep inside of you. You could hide it from Creel, but not from me. You are vulnerable around me. You want more power. Power only the Dark Side can give you. You want to know all the secrets about the true nature of the Force. Secrets known only to the Sith." Rey steps away from Kylo. "You want to become a Sith lord. You want to be as powerful as Darth Vader. You desire power above all things. Power at any cost."
"Don't do this. Don't turn against me" Kylo says. He then turns to a frown and shouts at her. "I Saved You!"
Rey activates her lightsabers. "I will never join you."
"If that is your destiny" Kylo replies and ignites his own weapon.
They prepare to fight. Then the ship shakes, trembles and rocks, forcing both Rey and Kylo to fall over, unable to keep their balance.
Orbit over Crait Six:
The First Order fleet is under attack! A Republic fleet is moving in, sending in its Pike fighters and SF-17 bombers.
Bridge of Republic cruiser, The Spirit of Alderaan:
Admiral Hera Syndulla, a green-skinned twi'lek in her sixties, stands on the bridge of her warship, overlooking the attack on the First Order fleet.
"Have the Reliance and the Liberator move to point six, four, two. Concentrate fire on the Star Destroyer at nine point three" Syndulla tells her crew on the bridge. "Send in our bombers. Let's clear out these First Order scumbags."
Orbit over Crait Six:
Republic bombers flies in and drops their payload, destroying two Star Destroyers. Pike fighters dogfight with Tie Fighters. One Republic bomber gets shot down and it veers away, crashing into The Supremacy and causing a massive explosion!
Creels throne-room:
The floor of the throne-room collapses, as do all the statues. Great flames erupt out of the broken floor. Kylo gets back on his feet and looks out through the windows of the throne-room; he sees that a large section of the flagship is burning from the crashed bomber. He turns as Rey climbs back on her feet. In the ceiling, a plasma-cutter cuts through the roof in a circle and the piece of the ceiling fall to the floor. A cord extends into the throne-room, a small rig attached to it. Rey hurries over to it and climbs up on the rig; no bigger than to allow her to set one foot on it and hold on with one hand. Kylo watches as Rey is hoisted into the air and disappears into the cut open hole.
Millennium Falcon:
Rey hits a button and the airlock closes below her and then she steps out into the corridor of the Falcon.
"Chewie, get us out of here!" she shouts.
Chewie, sitting in the cockpit, operates the controls with a growl. The Falcon detaches itself from the roof of Creels throne-room and flies off, leaving The Supremacy behind. The Falcon flies through the space-battle, dodging stray shots and fighter-craft flying at full speed.
Bridge of The Supremacy:
Grand Admiral Armitage looks out through the viewports at the battle. He turns to his officer on the bridge.
"Pull back the fleet. We are done here."
Orbit of Crait Six:
The First Order fleet pulls away from the battle and one by one, their ships jump to hyperspace.
Surface of Crait Six:
The Millennium Falcon and a dozen Pike fighters, along with four Republic transports, fly in towards the imperial base.
Admiral Syndulla steps off one of the transports and is greeted by Senator Holdo, the two of them shaking hands and smiling. Poe and Maz smile as Finn runs up to the Falcon. Rey steps off the Falcon and spots Finn; she runs over to him and the two of them embrace in a big hug!
The Supremacy:
Grand Admiral Armitage enters a room that used to be Creels private retreat. It contains a lot of expensive art in the form of statues and paintings. Armitage walks past several of Creels advisors and then finds himself standing in front of Kylo Ren, sitting in Creels throne/chair.
"What is this?" Armitage asks.
"What does it look like?" Kylo asks.
"This is the personal retreat of the Supreme Leader" Armitage says. "What right do you have to sit in that chair?"
"What right?" Kylo asks. Kylo extends his hand and forces Armitage to his knees with a Force Choke. "As the current grand master of the Knights of Ren, I claim the position of Supreme Leader. Do you object, grand admiral?"
Armitage struggles to give a response. "N… No."
"Good."
Armitage is released and falls to his knees, stroking his throat as he looks up at Kylo. Kylo adjusts for a more comfortable seat in the throne and rests confidently upon it.
Armitage gets back on his feet and is not pleased at all as he says, "All hail the Supreme Leader."
Republic ship:
Rey is asleep, but wakes up. She listens and looks around in her quarters but sees nothing. Getting out of bed, she looks around, suspicious and curious. Then she is bathed in a pale blue light. Turning around, she finds herself face to face with the Force Ghost of Luke Skywalker. She is amazed. Luke smiles. Then, Rey smiles too.
"Shall we begin?" Luke asks.
THE END
So that's it. That is how I would do it if I was ever allowed to do a remake of The Last Jedi. I think I managed to handle Luke better than Disney. And I think that giving Snoke/Creel a backstory makes his character more interesting and more believable. And it ties in with how and why Ben/Jacen betrayed Luke. My trip to Canto Bight, at least I feel, is much more interesting and exciting, with chases and confrontations, and when Finn runs through the town there is ample opportunity to throw in all kinds of aliens, from farmers to dozens of various farm-animals. And the end-fight on Crait, with walkers versus walkers, I just think is an awesome idea that is so much more enjoyable than what we actually got in the movie. If you don't agree, please let me know. If you agree, well, let me know! And of course, Luke facing Snoke/Creel was fun to write and would have been awesome to see in an actual movie. I think that gave more meaning to Luke's death and it was more in line with how a Jedi should sacrifice himself; an homage to Obi-Wan in a way. Oh, almost forgot; Luke is Rey's dad in this one. Star Wars is about the Skywalker family after all, so Rey has to be related. It just seems to make sense. So, yeah, that's it.
