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My life turns upside down
I got up from annabeths embrace, careful not to wake her. I jumped out of the window and with a little help from the winds, landed on my feet. I looked up and saw the ugly, humongous figure of dalamar
"hello perseus Jackson. We meet you at last." I glared at dalamar. But where was damactus? I frowned. Did he just say we?
As if to answer my question, a big ball of – wait was that fur? I frowned at the looming figures of
Dalamar and Damactus and glared at them
"could you be a little quieter? Annabeth is trying to sleep."
The furry one, who was Damactus, said
"oh that petty fake girlfriend of yours? Come on, dude we should leave. You know, so that we can torture percy Jackson together"
They grinned at me like we were sharing some inside joke.
Suddenly, I heard the door of the inn open, and saw Jake, Nancy and a very furious Annabeth emerge.
Annabeth was giving a death glare to the giants, and if looks could kill, this one could too.
" look, if it is not the annabeth chase. Still did not figure out that this guy over here is not your boyfriend, huh?" I stared at them with a ghastly look. What were they doing?
"I – annabeth stopped and looked at me with a questioning look.
i did not know what to do, and being the seaweed brain i am turned to face the monsters
"why should I believe you?"she asked dalamar
"Oh don't, daughter of Athena. We do not want you to, but well we would risk that much to see the look on your face"
Annabeth looked broken. No this was not happening. She shouldn't believe them. She had sensed something was wrong. Marty was right. Annabeth and the others were with me, but they weren't believing in me. That is what the twins were doing. They were dividing and conquering.
"don't believe them annabeth, they are lying. They are just trying to break us apart"
"but why shouldn't I ?" she asked me "what do I know? they might be right. i know that you are hiding something from me. and there are many things that make me believe that you are not my percy. How come you are present at the place where we were going by. Why would Hestia visit you. And even if she would do that, why would she give you those powers? And the percy I know just isn't like you. Even though I want to believe it so much, I just can't" she sat down on the floor and started to cry. Nancy started comforting her while Jake continued to stare at me.
Even if I wanted to go and comfort her so much, I knew that I had to finish Dalamar and Damactus first. I turned around and found that they were nowhere to be seen. I probably should have stayed there and thought of what I should be saying, but I wasn't losing the love of my life. Not again. I ran to annabeth, and was going to hug her, but jake blocked my path.
"are you really him? Or are you just another clone?" he asked me. He was scared. I could have threatened him to get away, but doing that would just make them believe that I really was a clone. I had to do something. Fast. Can I tell them the truth? I looked at annabeth. She was crying. Suddenly, she got up and glared at me "where is percy" she asked me.
"annabeth, it me , percy, your seaweed brain" I said, trying to convince her
"no, you are lying. Where is he?" she bought her knife out and repeated
"tell me, where is he?"
I just sighed. What should I do? Should I tell them, or should I not?
"tell them. It would be better if you do". Wait . was that marty?
Marty, where are you, ithought as I started searching around for him
"in your head dumbo" oh yeah, he was in my head. How stupid am I. I was really happy. I could tell them everything. So I told it to them. I told them everything. From the time she betrayed me till now. The look on their face was of pure shock.
"and why should I believe you?" annabeth asked. Oh man, now what should I answer to that? Luckily, marty saved me.
"because you know that it is me. And because I love you." Till that time, annabeth had stopped crying, but tears started flowing out of her eyes again. She ran to me and took me in a back crushing embrace.
"I-can't-breathe, wisegirl" she looked at me and let out a laugh. A short and sweet one. I smiled at her.
"I think we should really leave for CHB now." Jake said from behind. It was strange hearing him. Nancy and Jake had been pretty silent for the past few hours. But well, annabeth and I hadn't let them speak.
We soon packed up all our stuff and were ready to leave. We decided against hiring a taxi, and decided to do shadow travelling. I was not very good at it, but I could try. But annabeth came up with a better plan. We could fly. I pointed out that I would get tired eventually, but she said that we could rest, but shadow travel is way too dangerous.
We started flying in a small vessel made up of water. And while we were travelling, the others decided to sleep as they would guard would be needed to guard later.
After some time, I noticed some small figures in the sky. I didn't know what they were, but they were coming towards us at a high speed. I would have killed them, whatever they were in a few seconds, but I was really tired because of flying the vessel for so long.
"umm guys, I think you should get up—
and thats when i heard her scream
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yours truly
- i am MVJ
