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Chapter 8- What your problem

Alvins pov

Well its school and at the moment me and Britts are in homeroom.

Taylor and Rebecca are still being bitches, being nasty with Britt but she can take it, she always says a better come back whichq shuts them up.

At the moment we was just talking, Sir was writing something up but we didn't care. Are minds was set on from last night. If Eleanor hadn't inturupted then we could have gone all the way. I mean am not desperate or anything, I love Britts but there is no other way to show my love for her...

I don't know why but i have a feeling about are date, well afterwards. I have this feeling that something is gonna happen from Brittany. I hope its true because then i won't have to try and convince her myself.

I looked at Britt who was texting someone a minute, probably Jeanette telling her what were doing, that kind of stuff.

"Britts who you talking to" i whispered whilst the teacher had his back to us.

She looked at me with her sly smile, she then tapped her nose meaning 'note for noses'. I had to chuckle because she does it in such a cute way.

"let me guess Simon" i eyed her, she looked at me in disgust, I couldn't help but laugh. Sir looked at me and narrowed his eye.

"hhhhmmm...is their a problem mr seville" he asked, all eyes was on me

"no!" i replied

"well get back to your work" he told me. I hate him.

I looked back at Brittany an she was still texting so i had another guess

"is it Jeanette" i asked, she looked at me and smiled.

"yeah...just telling her that we have an apointment at the docters, saturday" she said, i smiled but as she turned to from, sir was looking at us again.

He looked angry but not because he caught us talking but he saw Brittany with her phone. He sighed an began to walk towards her. I know he's a teacher but if he touches her i'll kick his headin. As he walked over to us, Britts put her phone on her lap. Everyone was watching...

"Miss Miller...hand me your phone" he said putting his hand out

Brittany just looked at him, she looked nervouse. She then shook her head as refusing to give it him, he then leaned closer to her face. I watched but what i did notice was that she was wearing a V'neck vest and he was looking down, stright into her crotch.

"You pervert!" i shot, he looked at me, he looked pissed off.

"Mr Seville...you be quiet otherwise i''ll hold you back after school" he ordered but i refused, there is no way aam gonna let this perv check my girlfriend out. Hes 50 years old!

"No, NO am not gonna be quiet...how can I when your checking out my girlfriends Breasts, YOU PREVERT!" I shouted but then i realised what i just said.

Brittany looked at me, her eyes was wide. It was quiet, everyone was staring at us. Rebecca, Taylor, Ryan and David was glaring at us ut i didn't give a fuck about them. Sir looked pissed, his face was red and I could hear him grinding his teeth. He looked back at Brittany, my eyes was peircing through is. If he has a problem take it out on me but not her...

He sighed then looked at me then Britts then me...

"i'll deal with the both of you at the end of the lesson" and then he walked back over to the black board and finished the crap he was writing.

I looked over at Britts and saw her cross her arms covering up her crotch. I could hear the two bitches behind us talking but i didn't care. Britts didn't look comfortable at all...

"Britts are you ok" I asked placing a hand on her shoulder.

She was about to reply but then sh got cut off by Taylor. This sin't gonnat be good...

"oh whats wrong Brit-tany, scared...thats what you get for being a slut" she shot, smirking. I was geting pissed off my self and so was Brittany

"well least am not flat chested, like you i can get attention. I don't see you pulling any fish in and how can I be a slut if I have a boyfriend, I don't see Alvin kissing you do I" she shot, oh man why pull me in.

Rebecca and Taylor couldn't come back with a come back but i knew any minute they'd say something to stirr us up. Brittany looked as if she was gonna eplode any minute...

"well this school was slut free before you and your fat, speckyfore eyes sisters came" Rebecca shot. She did not just say that.

But instead of Britts replying she stormed up, sir noticed...

"Miss miller sit down at once" he orderd but sh didn't listen.

She stormed towards rebecca and then suddenly she wacked her in the face knocking her back on the floor. Everyone was gobsmacked including me, I never knew she could punch that. Rebeccas lip was bleeding but i didn't care, Brittanys eyes was forming tears...Then in the next second she stormed out.

"BRITTANY MILLER GET BACK HERE AT ONCE!" he shouted, but she didn't listen she just left the classroom.

I sat their, Rebecca got up as she began to cry when he the blood Taylor looked at as she helped her but then she looked at me...

"look what that stupid bitch has done to my friend, Alvin" she said, thinking i cared.

"so she asked for it and by the way if anyones a bitch...its you" and with that i headed for the doorbut as i did i noticed Ryan and Davids faces, they looked pissed and i know why, sir began to shout at me now.

"ALVIN SEVILLE, IF YOU DARE LEAVE THIS CLASSROOM I WILL CA-" he didn't finish as i slammed the door.

I looked for any sign of Britts as i was on the corriedoor, i noticed a janitor who looked like he had been cleaning the floor for a while. Maybe he knows?

so i walked up to him, trying my best not to stand were it was wet because otherwise i'd slip. He saw me and smiled...

"oh can i help you" the old man said, I nodded

"yeah have you seen a girl, she has aurban hair an she was crying" i said, he nodded

"oh you mean that girl who just slipped. Yeah i saw her, she went in the girl bathroom..." he explained so i darted for the girls room "you can' go i-" he siad but i already had.

I entered the girls room an as soon as i did i could hear sobbing coming from round the cubicles, so i walked around and saw Britts leaning over one of the sinks. Her jeggins was soaked and er arm looked red.

'It must be when she slipped' i thought, she was crying as her head was down.

She lifted her head and saw me in the mirror, her mascara was smudged and her hair was a bit messy but she still looked beautiful. I wanted to make her feel better so i gave her a sympathetic smile and held my arms out for a hug, she turned around and smiled as a tear rolled down her cheek. She walked towards me and hugged me, i hugged back...

"everything gonna be ok Britts" i said comforting her as she sobbed into my shirt.

"i know Alvin, as long as i got you...it will be" she replied

We both just stood there as time went on, the only thing that bothered us was going home. Dave would know but am not gonna give up...


School had ended, me and Britts had a detention for walking ou and doing what we did, me calling sir a pervert and shouting at him and Britts for hitting her.

We was sat at a table each on eaither side of the room but the problem was that David and Ryan had a detention aswell, they've had a detention everyday this week and last, a student was murderd last week straight after school so it wasn't them but they day she was a couple of teachers was so it gave me the idea that it could be a teacher.

David was sat behind Brittany whilst Ryan was behind me.

I told Simon, Jeanette, Theodore and Eleanor that we had a detention, they told me that those dicks did as well so it kinda pissed me off.

I looked and saw David looking at her, trying to get her attention but Brittany just ignored him. I watched as he eyes her, it was pissing me off more, any minute now i could go up there and smash his face in. Sir left the room for a minute, David thought he'd wind me up and flirrt with Britts...

"So gorgouse...keeping them curves smooth, they look really sexy" he said snickering at Ryan.

"yeah or is it your jugs that give your beauty away...i have to admitt but i'd love you in my bed" he said, they was doing it on purpose because they was smirking at me.

I kept my posure as i gritted my teeth ' just keep it cool Alvin...show them whos boss' i told my self, I looked at Britts and she looked disgusted with them. She was about to say something but David cut her off as he was gonna talk to me...

"well Alvin...I see you didn't listen to me" he said, i rolled my eyes

"who are you...your not my dad" i shot. Both of the just snickered

"Am fucking pleased aswell but if you remember, i said Brittany was mine...not yours" he said. Brittany and I looked at each other like as if we was say 'who said'

"woah woah wait, not she isn't. She belongs to no one but herself, but one thing pal...shes my girlfriend!" i finished.

He was about to say something else but sir walked in, i glanced at Britts as she did back, we smiled at each other as we waited for the detention to finish.


The detention had finished.

Me and Britts managed to escape Ryan and David, well why lets just say they had a extra hour to hold. Suckers!

We was walking home at the moment, Brittany had to nip into the shop for something. I didn't know what but it probably wasn't important.

She came out to minutes later with a bit of paper in her hands.

"whats that" i asked.

"Credit...i need to call Eleanor" she said as he put it on.

once she did she dialed her number, after a couple of minutes she answered...

"Hey Eleanor i need you to d-" she began

"Brittany...you and Alvin need to come home" she sounded like she had been crying.

"Ellie what is it?" Britts asked, she sounded worried.

"please come home and will tell you, Alvin needs to know" and with that she hung up.

Brittany and I looked at each other, we hd a feeling something was wrong. We wasn't far from home so we started to run, I was in front but Britts wasn't far behind. After a couple of minutes of running we finally made it home, we barged through the gate and into the house.

Once we enetered it was quiet, Me and Britts headed to the living room but what shocked us was that their was two policemen sat on the chair, Eleanor and Jeanette was on the floor looking at us whilst Simon and Theoore was comforting Dave but what got us the most was Dave...

His face and Eyes was red, his heair was a mess, he was crying. Simon and Theodore looked like they had been crying aswell but not as bad as Dave.

Me and Britts walked in worried as sick. All eyes was on us, we didn't have a clue what had happend...

"guys w-whats happen?" i asked, It looked seriouse because of the police

Dave stood up and walked over to me, he looked like he was gonna cry any minute.

"you know that woman who I'm planning to propose to" he said, of cours i know her, shes like a mother to me and my brothers but we have'nt seen her in ages because of her job.

"Claire, yeah whats happend to her" i asked getting worried.

Dave sighed, looking at me...

"She's dead"


OMG! Clairs been murderd.

The murder is one of the jocks as one of yu guessed but it isn't Ryan or David , I think he's bin in the story a dunno if not i'll add him in one of the upcoming chapters.

Anyway, a bit of drama like, it should be a drame school :/

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