AUTHORS ANNONCEMENT
I apologise readers but I have decided to rewrite the last two chapters due to certain reasons.
Reason 1. Naruto seems not righteous enough, If Naruto really wanted to make a difference to the lives of poor people the unification wars should have really have started in Genbu city in the form of a slave rebellion led by Naruto's group.
Reason 2. I've re read the last chapters and I found that people's reactions to Naruto wasn't realistic enough in the real world if you declared you were some type of nobility without considerable power backing the claim everybody would just tell you to shut the fuck up for being delusional.
Reason 3. Naruto's empire is gonna be Noblebright compared to the elemental nations grim dark future, Naruto is very much a humanitarian, he hates when innocent people suffer so of course back to reason 1, the last few chapters just wasn't humanitarian enough for me for me to consider it a success Due to the fact that I kinda written what a very bitchy Sasuke would sound like when he is demanding something from people.
Reason 4. Naruto needs to have Genbu city first, I can't have Naruto starting extremely slow because he has such a short time limit to unifying and the consolidating his conquests before he has to turn his attention out wards to foreign lands so I decided that Naruto literally had to have a running start instead of a slow one in Sōru No Tamashi, but don't worry Tamashi is still gonna be extremely important in the story.
Reason 5. Having the first Zaraki and Urahara on his side right from the very start seems... Too overpowered from the start, he gets quantity at the start before he begins to receive quality in the form of soldier veterens and surrendered lords
Reason 6. Naruto in this fic doesnt tolerate slavery at
Thus with these reason I have decided to change the whole plot of the unification wars from Naruto and gang starting out small to being a regional power from the very start from Genbu city itself.
changes from last two chapters
-DOMINATUS organisation is gonna start showing up at the end of the chapter after this one.
-Aizen is not gonna pay attention to Naruto until Naruto manages to conquer at least a quarter of the continent.
- you are gonna see at the start of each chapter the worsening situation in the elemental nations and the fucked up amoral decisions Danzo is gonna be enacting and at the end of each chapter the result showing itself.
-Hollows will appear in Naruto's first expansion out of Genbu region, you know when he stumbles across the Menos forest.
-Hidden all over the western continent are Ōtsutsuki clan vaults in each castle containing either gold or artifacts that Naruto puts to use.
-Due to future advice about how to create a fast response and quick reaction thus is given the idea from... DUH the Shinigami herself in making the Senkaimon gates in each conquered town and city and castle although top secret restricted to soldier's accessable Through use of Jigokucho(Hell butterflies)
Chapter 10 is also gonna consist of the battle of Nagashino and the battle Okehazama
Now I won't enact this rewrite without asking for your opinion so I'm gonna put up a vote whether
YES or NO?
I will leave this up until the end of this Sunday to tally votes
