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Abhijeet opened his eyes with a soft sound of laughter burst.
He turned his head and noticed Freddy sat on sofa present in the room with his mobile in his hand & laughing madly on something in low voice!
A teasing smiled appeared on Abhijeet's lips…. He cleared his throat intentionally.
With this, Freddy shocked hell & instantly jumped on his feet…. He stood down head as if he was any culprit!
So…. so… sorry sir. Woh mai… mai…. He could only fumble somehow.
Abhijeet laughed lightly seeing his condition.
Kya Freddy, muh kiun laktake khare ho? kia kya aab tum? Asked Abhijeet innocently.
Freddy made an extreme awkward face…. sorry sir, woh meri wajah se apka nind tuta.
Abhijeet chuckled…. Are nehi Freddy. Mai toh kab se soo raha tha. nind aise hi khula aur dekha tum haans rahe the. Toh kis baat pe itni haansi aa rahi thi tumhe? Kya bhabi ji se koi baat- chit ho raha tha? He winked.
Freddy embarrassed: nehi nehi sir. Mai toh Vivek ke sath chat kar raha tha.
Abhijeet's face glowed: Vivek? He smiled broad…. Achha…. woh hai kysa? Kya chal raha aajkal uska?
Freddy: sir, Vivek ko badhe dino baad aaj chutti mila. Lekin Bangalore me aaj kisi wajah se 12 hours ka strike hai. Toh bechara ghar baythke bore ho raha tha…. mujhse baaten kar raha tha.
Abhijeet: hmmm. He smiled softly & tried to sit.
Freddy got the matter & helped him adjusting his bed in a comfortable position.
Abhijeet: sirf baaten kar rahe the tum usse?
Freddy gave a shy smile…. Nehi sir, woh joke bhej raha tha mujhe.
Abhijeet nodded disappointedly: tumlogo ka yeh joke culture…..
He scanned the whole room & missed his desired person…. Wayse Freddy, Daya dikh nehi raha?
Freddy: sir, Daya sir doctor se baat karne gaye.
Abhijeet: lekin doctor toh sham ko milne kaha tha…..
Freddy pointed the wall clock…. Sir, chay (6) baj raha hai… he smiled.
Abhijeet shocked…. kya! Mai itni der se soo raha tha!
Freddy offered his senior a glass of water….. Aap bahat weak hai sir, jitna zada rest lenge aab, utnahi achha.
Abhijeet irritated slight: kya weak weak laga ke rakhe ho Freddy. Hua kya mujhe…. Paheli baar kya hospital darshan ho raha!
Freddy (strongly): lekin paheli baar bina wajah aap behosh ho gaye the sir. Aur uska natija aaj apka CT scan, MRI yeh sab karna padha. Aur baki toh aab Daya sir hi ake batayenge.
Abhijeet turned silent with the sudden tough reaction of Freddy. He clearly felt the fear among all his family members…. With his this unwanted health issue…. As he heard earlier from his brother.
After some time he asked in low voice: wayse, tum kab aye?
Freddy: aap soo rahe the sir. Mai dopahar ko hi aya.
Abhijeet shook his head only in reply.
Again silence prevailed in room.
Freddy could not bear the awkward weather.
He initiated: sir… woh…. Mera matlab… mmm…
Abhijeet sensed something uneasy disturbed Freddy yet he desperately tried to lighten the situation…. khana khaya tum logone?
Freddy: haan sir…. mai Daya sir ke liye launch pack kar ke laya tha. pahele toh mana kar rahe sir. Lekin kha liya baad me.
Abhijeet: hm.
Freddy was trying his best to gather courage, but failed badly. So he thought to divert his senior's mind…. Sir, woh kal Sachin sir aa rahe hain.
Abhijeet: kiun?
Freddy: woh sir, Daya sir ke sath koi aur ek rahena thik hoga. Mujhe do din ka hi chutti mila.
Abhijeet raised his eyebrows: lekin aab toh mai thik hoon.
Freddy nodded affirmative…. Phir bhi sir, kisi aur ek rehna chahiye idhar. Warna Daya sir pe bahat pressure…
Abhijeet: agar mujhe discharge na bhi mile, aab Daya sambhal lega. Ek toh hum dono hi nehi hain…. Upar se tum log bhi idhar rahoge, ACP sir pe bahat pressure aa jayega…. Samjho… Daya can manage here.
Freddy sighed: dekhte hain sir, kya hota hain. Doctor kya batate hain? Phir woh sab sochenge …. He continuously was playing with his mobile, which seemed quite unusual to Abhijeet.
He noticed keenly Freddy's nervous face… his tensed body language…..tried to figure out the matter…. & asked lastly….. baat kya hai Freddy? Kuch zada hi soch rahe ho…. koi khas wajah?
Freddy's throat turned almost dry. He complained to God in his mind…. Hay Bhagwan… apko mai hi mila tha is kaam ke liye! Daya sir se karana chahiye tha nah…. aab is masoom par Abhijeet sir jab bharkenge, kaun bachayega mujhe…. Aap?
Abhijeet was waiting for his answer. He called sternly: Freddy!
Freddy's heart jumped from its place. He replied feebly: ye… yes sir.
Abhijeet maintained same serious tone: mai kuch pucha tumse…
Freddy forwarded his mobile towards Abhijeet in a hurry.
Abhijeet got confuse though he grabbed it.
Aap ekbar baat kijiye sir. Kal se unhone mujhe panchas (50) baar call kar chuke hain apko puchne ke liye…. he completed all in a single breath.
Abhijeet suspiciously looked at him first then towards the cell phone…. kisse baat karna mujhe?
Freddy clearly understood his lips turned dry due to fear. He kept mum.
This time Abhijeet raised his voice: kaun kal se mera puch raha Freddy?
Freddy closed his eyes for once… took his mobile from Abhijeet's hand…. Dialed a number & attached it with his senior's ears….. Dr. Tarika! He uttered.
Abhijeet felt a wave in his body listening that name. All of a sudden…. HER face, HER smile, HER gesture, HER blush…. All…. came in front of his eyes.
With the continuous ringing voice…. Gradually HER grave voice…. Humare bich jo kuch bhi tha, aaj se sab khatam….. over powered his mind…. HER negligence at the time of their mission…. HER care only for Daya through video call…. Her not a single look towards him infront of all team members…. Created a suffocating environment for Abhijeet.
He cut the call abruptly throwing his most dangerous glare to Freddy…. Kisne kahan tumhe mujhe kisise baat karna hain? Kisne permission de di tumhe… haan? He shouted.
Freddy stood there helplessly as he well guessed earlier this rash behavior.
Mai puch raha hoon Freddy, kisne kaha tumhe mujhe kisise baat karna hain? Again Abhijeet burged.
Sir… woh Dr. Tarika… bahat tensed hain… Aur Daya sir bhi kafi padheshan the… toh unhone mujhse hi puch rahe the baarbaar…. Freddy mumbled.
I guess, Mumbai me sabhi mere liye tension me honge. Agar Daya ke baad koi bahat zada mere liye soch rahe hain, toh ACP sir hain woh. Baki sab mere colleagues hain Freddy, kisiko mere liye extra concern dikhane ki koi zaroorat nehi. Agar baat karwana hi hai, ACP sir se baat karwao… kisika bhi number mila dete ho…. Abhijeet's high pitch suddenly decreased & he started panting heavily!
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At the same time… Mumbai
A drop of tear fell from a pair of swollen eyes. The person looked at the cell phone with all guilt…. Embarrassment…. Love & care.
Legs of the person seemed unable to bear all its body- weight & slowly collapsed on floor with a thud.
An aged person rushed to the shattered person in a hurry….. He got stun to see the scenario. Quickly he kept his hand's file on a nearby chair & softly pressed the former's shoulder…. Tarika!
Tarika jerked light & uttered in extremely low tone…. Sab khatam ho gaya hai sir…. sab. She covers her face in her palms. Only small jerkings of her body were visible which proved her weeping.
Her aged boss stood there for some time then kneeled beside her with…. Hausla rakho bachhe. Sab thik ho jayega. Kuch nehi bigra abhi, itni si jhagra toh har rishte me hota hai…. itna kiun ghabra rahe ho!
Tarika jolted from her position…. Kuch thik nehi hai sir…. sab… sab… khatam ho gaya. She forwarded her hands in front of her boss… in hi hathon se sir… mai khud…. Sab khatam kar di…. Again she busted into tears.
As Dr. Salunkhe knew earlier the misunderstanding between his assistant & her silent lover…. Though he couldn't figure out the actual present matter for which his junior was behaving like this!
Dr. Salunkhe grabbed Tarika from her shoulder & turned to him…. His heart pinched looking his daughter like junior's wet face…. dekho Tarika, baat kya hai batao mujhe. Abhi abhi kya ho gaya phirse ke tum aise roo rahi ho?
But Tarika still sited down head.
Dr. Salunkhe again asked her the actual matter.
Tarika took a deep breath…. Sir, mai Freddy sir se kaha tha…. use hosh…. Hosh aa jaye… ek bar baat… mujhse…. She chocked.
Her boss shocked…. tum pagal ho? aisi halat me bhala koi aise baat karne ko soch bhi kayse sakta hain… haan? jis insaan ne uss din ke baad se ek bar bhi tumhare samne nehi aya…. Ek phone tak nehi… tum usse baten karne chala… itne dino baad…. woh bhi phone pe…. Jab ki woh hospital me admit hain!
Tarika looked up with guilty eyes.
ki usne baat…. Uska Tarika ji uske liye aab kitna padheshan hain… bol payi tum? Dr. Salunkhe smirked.
Tarika while sobbing… nehi sir… sayad Freddy sir Abhijeet ko bina bataye hi mera number mila diye the. Jab hi use pata chala phone mujhe kiya gaya… turant hyper ho gaya aur call cut kar diya.
Dr. Salunkhe teased: toh use karna kya chahiye… tumhare arti utare! Joh muh me aye keh deti ho… aise hi jhagra kar leti… nehi… madam ki toh ego hurt ho gaya nah… rishta khatam karne chala! Aab bhugto. Mai tumhe kitni baar kaha… beta aise choti choti baat dil pe mat lagao…. Contact karo usse… Abhijeet ek dum se rista todhne ki baton se bahat hurt hua… tum nehi mani…. ihan tak…. Use chot lagne ki bawajood bhi ek bar haal- chal pucha tak nehi… raho apne apne ego le kar baythe…. Aab kiun roo rahi ho? Usse toh tumhara koi rishta nehi… woh jiye yah mare… tumhara kya!
Tarika's eyes popped in utter shock. She somehow suppressed her high pitch…. Sir!
Dr. Salunkhe: kya sir… haan… kya sir? Ek bar use ek message hi bhej dete…. Bahat kuch bigar jata?
Tarika looked with sad eyes. Tears were continuously over- flowing.
But her boss was not in mood to pacify her…. Mai kaha tha nah…. dil ka rishta bahat hi nazook hota hain. Jitna pamper karoge… utna hi khushbu ayega isse. Ise aise hi rehne doge… din bar din aur bhi yeh rishta strong hote jayega. Lekin beta, agar ise neglect karoge kabhi yeh phir iska apmaan karo kabhi… sayad samne wala tumhe kuch na bhi kahe…. Lekin iska neev dhira dhira kab khokla hota jayega…. Tumhe pata bhi nehi chalega. Jab tum sametne jaogi…. Sirf rait (sand) hi milega tumhe… kitni mehnat se joh ek ashiyana banaye the…. Tumhere ek jhakte se woh gir jayega… aur tumhe pata bhi nehi chalega. He made sit Tarika on chair…. beta, Abhijeet thora flirty character ka hain, tum jante tha pahele se. Walki, is flirt se hi tum dono ka yeh goomnaam rishta jora! Phir bhi tum use apnaya. Woh bhalehi Daya aur duty ko sabse jada importance deta hain, lekin kabhi bhi aaj tak tumse misbehave ki? Nehi nah? Humesha tumhe tumhara space dete gaya… chahe mujhse ladhna padhe use… yeh phir ACP se ek half day chutti ke liye sir jhuka ke shyly permission lena hi padhe! Usne kabhi tumhe hurt karne jaysa kuch kiya… kuch bola?
Tarika nodded in negative.
Tum mere side le kar uska mushibat aur bhi barah di thi (Griraftaar series)…. Phir bhi usne gussa nehi dikhaya…. Ulta Shreya se manmani nipta lene ko kaha tumse. Kabhi koi sikayat uska nehi rehta kisi ke bhi khilaaf. Beta, woh bhale hi na aab tak keh paya…. Tum uske liye kitna khas ho, abhi tak samajh nehi paye? Mana ki usne mazak udhaya Forensic ko le kar… tumhe bura bhi laga bahat… yeh bhi samajhta hoon mai… lekin tum aur kuch keh deti…. Use bhi tum professionally do baten shuna deti… aise koi rishta todhne ki baat karta hain! Tum hi toh humesha kehte ho, Abhijeet kabhi apna dard zuban pe nehi lata… humesha samajh lena padhta hain… toh aaj tumse yeh kayse ho gaya! concluded Dr. Salunkhe.
Tarika was keenly watching floor design as she had nothing to say more. Each and every words of her boss was right. She didn't know, that day what happen with her. Why she was behaving so rude with her charming prince! She inhaled deep…. Sir mujhe bahat dar lag raha hain…. Jayse hi Abhijeet mera naam suna itna jor se chillaya… mujhe bahat dar lag raha sir. Usne meri awaz tak sunne ka intezar nehi kiya. Use kuch ho toh nehi jayega nah… anxiety me? She whispered barely.
The old doctor also understood the fearful situation as being a doctor he well aware of a brain stroke patient's condition & his care.
He hurriedly took out his cell…. Isi liye mai tumhe samjha ne ki koshish kar raha tha… use rest karne do. Excitement uske liye is halat pe thik nehi hoga…. he dialed someone's number with an irritated face… aab hi baat na karne se kya aa jata tumhara…. Kuch sochte nehi ho Tarika…. are use wapas toh ane dete…. Khud hi jhagra karti hain…. Khud hi….
Dr. Salunkhe got stop with a loud sound of lab door opening…. ACP Pradyuman had entered as usual in hurry along with some juniors. Looking at their serious faces the genius forensic head left the Abhijeet matter for then & eyed at Tarika to calm down…. They back to their daily professional avatar.
But the sharp eyes of the Boss of CID Mumbai team…. Sensed something fishy…. And he was sure enough it had some connection obviously with his right hand… who is presently admitted in Delhi.
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After half an hour, Delhi
Freddy stood down head in hospital corridor. Daya was infront of him while continuously trying hard to control his rage… but his red eyes was enough to make afraid anyone!
Freddy after a long pause: sorry sir… mai socha nehi, sir aise react karenge… mai toh bas…. He missed his words.
Daya (in extremely chewing way): tum doctors ki baten toh sun sakte the Freddy. Uske dimag pe koi bhi jhatka nehi ana chahiye tha…. kaha nah un logone?
Freddy nodded still looking downwards.
Daya: toh phir? Jab kabhi bhabiji se tumhara jhagra ho jata….baadme tum jab unse milte ho… as usual roj ki tarha… sab normal hoti hain tum logoke bich? Tum me se koi bhi ek pal liye bhi emotional nehi hote ho?
Freddy again nodded positive.
Daya: toh aab? Woh nehi socha tum ne Freddy? Jhagra jab hua…. apas me agar baten karenge…. Thora gussa toh dikhayega hi nah ek dusre pe? Yeh excitement uske liye khatarnak hai aab…. Tum jante the nah. Aur Abhijeet, kitna reserved hain aisehi…. Gussa hain aab Tarika se…. Chillayege... tumhe andaza hona chahiye tha yaar…. he somehow resisted himself from being harsh.
Mean time doctors came out from a private room.
Dr. Rohitogi looked at the two cops: mujhe samajh me nehi aa raha officers, apke colleague ke jaan aplogo pyari hai ki nehi! Itni mushkil se toh hum ne sambhala unhe… phir se aap log unhe usi andhare ki aur dhakalte jaa rahe the! Mana ki apke duty aap logoko sayad aam insaan ki tarha jine ka mauka nehi deta hoga…. iska matlab yeh nehi…. ek patient ko bhi aap log na rahem karen. Aisi bhi kya emergency aan padhi, aap ko aisi koi baat inse share karna padha…. Inka BP itna badh gaya! Abhijeet ji itna jada hyper kayse ho gaye?
Dr. Mishra who was playing the role of a silent viewer till now, looked at Daya: sorry Daya ji, hum humare patient ko le ke koi risk nehi le sakte. Halanki, aab koi khatra nehi unhe…. under control hain sab… phir bhi…. hume unhe discharge ki decision phir se sochne pahega…. And with that doctors left from there leaving a guilty Freddy & shocked Daya.
Daya sighed & silently made his way towards his buddy's room…. While Freddy from behind uttered feebly… sorry… sorry sir.
Daya stopped but did not turn.
Freddy gathered some courage…. Mai socha bhi nehi sir, Abhijeet sir aise react karenge. Dr. tarika bahat padheshan the…. Aur itne dinon gaye yeh dono kafah hain ek- dusre se…. maine socha isse achha patch- up ka mauka aur kya ho sakta?
Daya inhaled two- three deep breathes to calm his tempted mind and put his hand softly on Freddy's shoulder…. hum sab hi chahte hain Freddy, Abhijeet aur Tarika ki patch up ho jaye. Lekin yeh waqt sahi nehi hain. Joh hua… inlogo ka apas ka mamla hain…. Lekin isse mera bhai ka health pe aur koi adverse effect aye… mujhse saha nehi jayega. Tum koshish kiye achha… lekin halat ka dhyan rakhte toh achha hota. Hume Abhijeet ko phir se fit n fine dekhna hain nah?
Freddy looked with wet eyes.
Daya in calm tone: tumhe tumhara Abhijeet sir ko phir se pahele jaisa active dekhna hain nah bureau me?
Freddy tilted his head in yes.
Daya: toh phir…. Use thora sambhalne do. Thora thik ho jane do. Doctors ek baar green signal de de…. Hum Mumbai wapas chale jaye…. Phir Abhijeet bhi hoga…. Tarika toh rahe gi hi. Tum aise hi dial karke speaker pe daal dete phone ko… baat karte usse…. Mujhe batana chahiye tha nah ek baar…. Kuch na kuch solution nikal hi leta hum dono ne… he smiled.
Freddy felt a l'll relief in his heart seeing Daya's smiling face…. phir sir, aap mujhse gussa….
Daya patted his arm… kaisi baten karte ho Freddy? Mai bhala kiun gussa hone laga tumse? Joh hua… so hua…. aab toh Abhijeet under control hain. Bas uske samne aur iss baat ka zikar mat karo. Mai sambhala lunga aab. Aab chalo bhi…. He dragged his friend cum junior towards his elder bro's room.
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