Chap up

I am currently trying to fix grammatical errors in my other chapters. I've read it over and realized that some of them doesn't really flow. So those who haven't read this story would be reading a story that makes sense and doesn't look like it was typed by a 10 year old (that's exactly what I think of the other chapters)…

ENOUGH TALKING ONTO THE STORY


It was now afternoon as she was still following the beetle. The bug made a quick right, which Sakura also did. Sakura was running for 8 hours straight and was starting wonder if she was getting any closer. She was completely exhausted but didn't want to stop, as she needed to get to the two quickly. As if her stomach didn't agree with her, a loud growl resounded throughout the forest.

In her haste, she completely forgot to eat something, so using it as a chance to catch her breath Sakura took out a jar and caught the beetle inside. She came to a stop next to a stream where she put down her bag and began to rummage through it looking for the bento she packed for herself.

Inside the bag was a variety of food, clothing ,weapons (of course), and first aid equipment. There were packs of ramen, cinnamon buns, and bentos. Each which were for Naruto, Hinata, and herself. Sakura didn't know if they were eating right so she decided to pack some of their favorite foods for them (great friend).

Sakura opened her chopsticks and began eating her food. Sakura wondered how Hinata and Naruto was, focusing more on Naruto. Over the years after Sasuke left, Sakura began to get feelings for Naruto, which she refused to admit. Each time Naruto would greet her or flash his famous smile at her, it would make her heat up in a blush and make her heart skip a beat.

Sakura knew Hinata liked him, everyone knew and she didn't want to hurt her friends' feelings by getting in the way. But Hinata is so slow to confessing her feelings for Naruto and she decided whoever is first will get Narutos heart. Sakura couldn't deny any longer that she was head over heels in love with Naruto and she wanted him to know that. However, with everything going on she would have to hold off on confessing to him and focus on getting him and Hinata back.

Sakura was soon finished with her food and put the trash in a plastic bag, which she placed within her pack. After drinking some water from the stream, Sakura picked up the bag released the beetle and went on her way.

After 30 minutes of running, the beetle turned left. Sakura sensed some chakra signatures that were moving at fast speeds and passed seeming to not notice her. Sakura wondered why they were there, there chakra didn't feel friendly and she hoped it had nothing to do with Naruto and Hinata. Sakura would like to move faster but the bug can't fly any faster than right now and she cannot go on ahead of it since it was her only sense of direction.

"Man how much longer till I get there." Sakura questioned

"Why did this have to happen? What made you do this Naruto?" Sakura asked herself.

"I knew there was something wrong that day, but I was too late to ask you about it."

Flashback

Sakura was looking for Naruto since Iruka wanted to ask him about something. Sakura was walking down the street looking for him until she saw Kiba and decided to ask him if he knew where he was.

"Hey Kiba" Sakura called out

Kiba was walking with Akamaru minding his business when he heard Sakura call out to him.

"Oh hey Sakura" he yelled back as she came closer to him

"Have you seen Naruto anywhere, Iruka sensei has been looking for him" she asked Kiba

"Oh Naruto, I think I saw him heading to the training grounds. I tried calling out to him earlier but it seemed like he was out of it." Kiba said

"Thanks a lot" Sakura said as she ran towards the training grounds

Sakura arrived at the training grounds when she saw Naruto standing off in the distance. Sakura decided to stay in the trees as the air seemed thick and there seemed to be something off about Naruto.

She was looking at Naruto as she saw him staring off in the distance into the trees seemingly lost in thought.

"I wonder what he's thinking about" Sakura said to herself

Naruto was still staring off in the distance when his face suddenly turned into a frown and his chakra quickly spiked then dropped. After that, happened Sakura felt another chakra presence suddenly, appear and then leave.

"It must have been Hinata spying on Naruto again; I can't believe I didn't notice her she's really good."

"But, did Naruto know she was there" Sakura said in shock but dismissed it thinking there would be no way Naruto could of known

After watching Naruto a bit longer, Sakura realized that he would keep staring off into the direction he was looking at (which she found strange) and decided to approach him.

"Hey Naruto" Sakura called out to him

Naruto who seemed to have not noticed her quickly snapped out of the spell he was under and shined a smile at Sakura.

"Hey Sakura-Chan what are you doing here, do you finally agree to go on a date with me." Naruto said with a huge grin

"As if" Sakura said with a blush, that Naruto didn't notice while hitting Naruto on the head.

"Iruka sensei is looking for you," she said

"Oh really I better go then, see you later Sakura-Chan" Naruto said leaving

After Naruto left Sakura looked in the direction Naruto was looking in before and then looked at where Hinata must have left wondering why he was acting that way.

"When I talked to him he seemed to be ok." Sakura said to herself

"Well I'll talk to him about it tomorrow." Sakura said unknowing that it would be too late.

End Flash Back…

"There has to be a reason for this," Sakura said to herself

"I'm not gonna give up on you Naruto, just wait I'm coming" Sakura said forgetting about Hinata in the process.

The beetle then made another right to which Sakura followed.


Sakura is nearing the location of Naruto and Hinata….I wonder what's gonna take place Next chap.