Spooky scary authors, send shivers down your spine! Take too long to update stuff and don't apologize...(Good for you if you sang that in your head.)

Hi hi guys! Guess what? I have a fictionpress now! I know, I know...that's kind of lame. Stop laughing. But since Halloween is coming up, I'm putting up loads of original horror stories with plenty of death and psychology and gore. So like, if you're into that...um...check it out. It's literally the same penname and everything.

Reviews:

TheRandGirl: Lol, good theories. Okay so yeah, I figured people would be a bit confused with all the characters. You've seen all the major ones now though so that's good, and no more will be introduced that are actually important. I put a list at the bottom of who the characters are, but you pretty much got it right. Yes, Ada and Shui are the same person. You are correct on Danny and Ada having to eliminate the Devil King, and that now those powers are Danny's. The Order wants him because those powers are the literal energy source of the whole organization. And everything else, well, you'll find out. ;)

Masked Revenge: YAY THANK YOU SO MUCH THAT MAKES ME REALLY HAPPY! Ha, but really thanks for reviewing! Enjoy the chapter!


"It's not fair Drakov! Why do I have to go to the ceremony again?! I...I can't...Not every six months...please..."

"Those are the rules Shui. Class One women go twice a year. You would be a Class Three by now if you killed more."

"Like you do?"

"Yes."

"You know that isn't true. We have to kill twice as much to class up."

"It is only so we men have more options. Think of it as a compliment sister dear...how else would we expand our Order if it wasn't for you beautiful girls? Now think of that tonight, and I'll see you tomorrow."

"...I wonder sometimes if you remember that we are on a mission...sometimes you sound just like these monsters."


Peter faced Danny, standing in the doorway of the interrogation room. He had expected to feel something. Expected loud organ music to groan into a crescendo of battle cries.

Expected Danny to look different. Maybe wearing all black? Or with evil in his eyes.

Nothing.

It was quiet and awkward and Danny looked like his usual innocent self. He sat with his hands folded and cuffed on the table, staring down with an unreadable expression.

And Peter felt all of his bravado melting away, until he just stood there. Feeling naked almost. Weak.

He's your suspect. But he's also your friend.

"Hey Fist!" He blurted. "Um...I asked Fury if I could ask you some questions and uh...well..."

"Peter please do not pretend that you believe me," Danny said suddenly.

"What?"

"You think I am a monster. You think I killed that girl and ruined the city."

And there it was. That difference that Peter had been waiting for. Because while Danny looked the same on the outside, his voice held an edge that Peter had never heard before. And that was all he needed to regain his composure.

He nodded once, closed the door, then sat squarely in front of Danny. Peter stared hard into his green eyes.

"Danny, I don't know what exactly I believe. But I do know that I want to help you. But you can't lie to me, okay?"

There was a hesitation.

"Okay," Danny said finally. Peter took a deep breath. He played with his hands while he thought of his first question. His eyes settled on the word above Danny's head. It was still there, mocking him.

Peter hated it. And he realized there was one way to test out Danny's trust.

"Alright then. Have you ever killed anyone before?"

Danny blinked, surprised. But Peter didn't waver.

"No. I haven't."

The answer was completely steadfast. Convincing. Danny's face gave away nothing. And Peter would have believed him on the spot if the evidence wasn't literally floating above him.

"You're lying."

"I'm not."

"Yes Danny. Yes you are. I know you are beca..." Peter trailed off. No. He couldn't reveal his new gift. Not yet anyway.

"Because what?"

"Because you're my friend, and I know you."

"I see. Does that mean that you know I'd kill someone? Or you know when I'm lying?" Danny asked. There was steel in his voice, but he didn't move.

Peter froze for a second. This wasn't going as well as it had when he rehearsed in his head. Especially because Danny wasn't cooperating at all.

His mind raced. His carefully prepared questions seemed to all slip away from him, and he knew he looked foolish.

It's fine. Just avoid his question, and ask something else. Something simple. Just do it now.

"What was that kid talking about? What does Devil King mean?"

"You're not very good at this Spiderman."

"Just please answer me."

Danny's eyes hardened. He shifted in his chair, then looked down at his hands.

"It is the title of a murderer that is in the city right now."


Danny watched Peter's eyes widen. He was obviously interested. Good. Danny fidgeted some more, trying to sell his act.

He needed to be convincing for his plan to work. Because if it did, it'd hopefully buy him enough time to find Kito and Arai.

"What do you mean?" Peter asked.

"An old enemy of mine is in New York. He has been trying to frame me in Kun'Lun for quite a while, but always fails. Now he's trying to do it here."

"Why didn't you say anything before?"

"Because he had several accomplices this time. They were members of some kind of organization, and they had been following me and everyone I am close to."

Danny thought fast. Obviously Peter knew that he'd killed before, though Danny had no idea how he could possibly know such a thing. So he needed to include that into the story.

But carefully. Believably.

"Then...why are you talking now?" Peter asked, narrowing his eyes as if he already knew what Danny was going to say.

"Because I got rid of them. They killed the little girl as we were fighting. I didn't have my communicator or my phone at the time," Danny bowed his head, feigning sorrow. He clenched his hands together. Acting.

A valuable skill.

And he could tell that Peter was enthralled. Now it was time for the finishing touch.

"I am sorry for my actions, but there was no alternative. My enemy is still alive, though I've weakened him enough that I can stop him."

"No," Peter interjected as Danny knew he would. "No more killing. There is always an alternative Danny. Tell us who he is and SHIELD will deal with it!"

Danny waited for a few seconds. Then nodded slowly. He almost smiled as he spoke, but contained it just in time.

"His name is Kito Rinji. And he is the Devil King."


Oooh, sneaky. Okay so we reached the point where you've met basically all the major characters that will be in this story. Let's review, shall we?

Danny/Drakov: Same person. Drakov is an alias he used in the Order.

Ada/Shui: Same person. Shui is her alias for the Order. Also, she's dead.

Arai: Creepy weirdo from the Order, and the 'alpha' ninja that attacked Danny.

Kito: The smaller, more pathetic creepy weirdo from the Order. The smaller ninja.

Kaleb: You can literally forget Kaleb since his role is basically over for the most part.

Okay great, so now that we're all caught up, I'll see you all next week-ish. Also, I've been working on a few Halloween themed stories and I'm pretty disappointed that I haven't seen any yet on the site. Seriously where is your spirit?

I better not be the only one making a Halloween story! You hear me?! Lol, anyway,

Wolf Out...