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BrambleClan Story EP 8- Others

When I woke up, Eagle was still laying beside me. I walked out and stretched my legs in the early morning sun, dew was still on the grass. No one was awake, so I decided to explore around the cave a bit. It was very peaceful; ususal mornings in BloodClan were filled with the sounds of hunting and border patrols padding in and out of camp followed by then-deputy Spottedpelt barking out orders.

The area surrounding the cave was a natural beauty, pine trees as far as the eye can see, lush grass, and plentiful food. Suddenly, I heard furious rustling in the undergrowth and hid in a bush.

"Those apprenticies! If it weren't for them, we wouldn't be like this," a tom said.

"Whitefrost, they were only doing what they thought was right," another tom said. Whitefrost! He was my old mentor. I instantly recognized the other tom's calm tone. Foxtail! I bounded out of my cover not to see strong, brave warriors, but small, scrawny loners. How long had they been out here?

"W-Whiteforst?" I stuttered at the sight of my starving mentor's dirty white pelt.

"What are you doing out here? You should be dead." Foxtail nudged the senior warrior.

"What he means is that everyone thought you'd be dead by now. We didn't think you would survive, but obviously we were wrong. Where are the others?" I led the two back to our camp where Soulpaw and Icepaw were talking outside the apprentices' den. They looked very surprized to see Whitefrost and Foxtail. Wind and Eagle poked their heads out of the apprentices' den at the sound of multiple sets of paws padding into the cave.

"Who are these two?" Whitefrost asked while looking the tribe cats up and down.

"This is Wind and Eagle," Soulpaw meowed, "They are from the Tribe." Foxtail and Whitefrost's eyes widend.

"Tribe cats! I thought all of them where gone by now." The two siblings look a little embarassed to be called out like that by Foxtail, but pushed the feeling away.

"Foxtail!" Sandpaw bounded over to his old mentor. "What happened to you?"

"Well, this mouse-brained cat had the crazy idea that you four apprentices where doing something good, and tried to stand up for you. As we all can see, that didn't work." It seemed like Whitefrost had developed some animosity toward the four of us, and I didn't like it.

"Well," I growled "If you don't like the fact that we tried to stand up to that evil cat, you can leave our cave!" And so he did. Whitefrost turned around and nonchalantly walked out, dissappearing into the bushes.

"Whitefrost may be leaving," Foxtail said with regret in his eyes, "But I'm staying." I nodded and got a ball of moss to make Foxtail a nest in the larger den. Sandpaw went and fetched him a juicy peice of fresh-kill. Foxtail looked very tired and hungry, and I was wondering if we would look like he did if we didn't find our cave.

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