Geez, you guys. I haven't been on fanfiction for a while. (P.S This is my second time rewriting this since my computer shut down.) But I hope you enjoy~ [P.S, Things in this chapter will be 'sped up' and 'to the past']


[Jaypaw's point of view]

Jaypaw stared out across the lake, the wind blowing his fur. He was having a great dream until something broke it.

"Jaypaw! Do you think you can doze all day?" Leafpool yelled. "It's time for your final assessment!" Jaypaw was shocked- it was already his final assessment? He had faith that he could become a warrior. He missed his littermate, Moonpaw who was stuck in Shadowclan. So it was only him and Firepaw. Moonpaw would've been excited to be a warrior. He thought. Now, it was time for the assessment.

"First, you'll be hunting." Cloudtail told them. Jaypaw nodded, so did Firepaw. After explaining some boring stuff about hunting- one last thing caught his attention. "Be careful if you're hunting by Shadowclan, they attempted to take Hollypaw. Well, that's all. Good luck!" Jaypaw was starting to figure something out... Shadowclan was taking Hollypaw? They must have took Moonpaw too! Anyways, it was time to hunt.


[Moonpaw's point of view] - The past

Moonpaw was stuck as an apprentice in Shadowclan camp, she wanted to know- why? She hadn't done anything wrong, had she? If so, what was it? She wanted to ask Blackstar so many questions. For now, she was stuck in the medicine cat den. Littlecloud, the medicine cat was organizing herbs. She wanted to do something to help. Now, her mentor was Tawnypelt. She was born in Thunderclan but was now living in Shadowclan. That's what she heard, at least. She stepped to Littlecloud, wondering if she could do anything for him.

"Littlecloud? Do you need help with anything?" Moonpaw asked. Littlecloud thought for a few moments.

"Yes, Flametail. I need you to gather more herbs." Littlecloud responded.

Moonpaw's tail twitched in wonder. She was mistaken for Flametail? This was her chance to escape!

"Okay, I'll get some herbs." Moonpaw replied. She quickly walked out of camp, until she heard Dawnfire's voice.

"Hey, Flametail, what are you doing?" Dawnfire asked. Phew. She didn't recognize me. She thought.

"Gathering herbs." I muttered. Before she could reply, I quickly got out of camp. Seeing a cat on the other side of the border who looked just like my brother, only blind, I approached him.

My mind shifted to basically, the ancient times. A voice called my name, or part of my name. "Half Moon!"

I turned around, and I saw a cat, who I think that I knew, but did not know at the same time. "Uh... Do you know where Thunderclan is?' She asked. The tabby she-cat twitched her tail.

"Half Moon? Has Jay's Wing been filling your mind with nonsense?"

Then I remembered. I was in the time of the ancients, in my den. "Um... No. I'm just going to take a little walk." I muttered. That cat, who was named Broken Shadow, watched me. Running outside of camp, I felt the wind in my fur and kept running until I reached the lake. I was running as fast as I could, and crashed into a tree in Thunderclan territory, on the lake.


[Jaypaw Point Of View] - The future

Jaypaw crouched down, spotting a plump bird in the grass. "You'll be mine, bird." He whispered to himself. He pounced, but the bird was already taking off. "Mouse-dung!" He spat, but he noticed- The bird was too heavy to fly. It fell down, feathers scattering everywhere. It tried to run, but quickly pouncing on it, it was his fresh-kill.

Jaypaw caught a squirrel, and he took the bird and the squirrel back to the meeting place. Firepaw had two squirrels. "Good job, both of you." Cloudtail praised. As they were going back, Jaypaw spotted Moonpaw.

"Moonpaw!" He yelled, picking up her by the scruff.

"I'll help take her back." Firepaw volunteered. The two took Moonpaw back to camp, where she was safe and sound.