Ok, AG329 back again with the 7th chapter of A Rose to Remember. I know that I said that I would only be using 4 OCs, but I decided to use all 5 that I got, instead. Here are the profiles:
Name: Ty
Age: 17
Height: 6'2
Hair: Messy and spiky, jet black
Eyes: Sapphire blue (pupil is silted like a wolf's)
Build: Very defined muscles and so is obviously strong. However, he also has a lean build creating a very good-looking effect (he's hot to put it simply)
Clothing: Baggy black pants, a black muscle shirt, and a black band on each forearm. Gold hoop in left ear and right eyebrow is pierced as well. Howling wolf head tattoo on left bicep.
Other: He is an ookami(wolf)-jin and so has slightly larger than normal canines.
Attitude: Calm, collected, and cool. He always keeps a level head and is often sarcastic. Nothing can disrupt his attitude. However, he rarely smiles and instead prefers to smirk. He's not really mean, but just cold and indifferent
Likes: wolves, ice, lighters
Dislikes: preps and sluts
Beyblade Color(s): black and ice blue
Courtesy of: Song Of A Fallen Angel (info about bitbeast pending)
Status in Team: Captain
Note to Song of a Fallen Angel: I may or may not need the info for one of the next couple of chapters, please send it in ASAP.
Name: Dirk
Age: 16
Height: 6 feet 2 inches
Weight: 160
Appearance: Sandy hair with green eyes. (kinda cat like)In my story Unexpected, he wears a white shirt with a tan cover shirt. It's kinda like a dress shirt or would be if it wasn't unbuttoned and the sleeves weren't cut. He wears blue jeans with large holes in 'em.
Attitude: Cocky, but sly. He thinks he's god's gift to woman but unlike Enrique, he stays with one at a time. He's a sweet talker with a quick temper and he likes to claim everything that's "his". He also has an ego problem.
Likes: beyblades and girls. He also has a weird fascination with knives for some reason...
Dislikes: Authority, he has a big problem with people telling him what to do. He also hates guys who mess with his "girl" and he can't stand it when he's not in control of everything even though he's really not the leader type...
Beyblade Color: Tan with green streaks
Bitbeast: Sabriel, he's a saber tooth tiger -I really like the name.
Bitbeast element: Earth
Bitbeast attack: Gaia Strike: Gaia is Greek for earth, Sabriel's paw turns a light green and he well slashes his opponent, vines pour out of the wound capturing the opponent's bitbeast.
Other: um, he has a habit of keeping his fingernails perfect instead of biting them. He worse than any normal girl had time to be and he has to have his hair gel.
Courtesy of: silverdranzer
Status in Team: 2nd in Command
Name: Blake Martin
Age: 16
Height: 5'10''
Weight: 175 lbs
Appearance: spiky blonde hair, coal black eyes, muscular built, peach colored skin, dresses in all black.
Attitude: cold, quiet, sexist, cocky, laid-back, cold-hearted.
Likes: beating his opponents, making them suffer especially female bladers.
Dislikes: when his opponents defeat him.
Beyblade Color(s): Black and Silver
Bitbeast: Scorpius (Scorpion; black)
Bitbeast Element(s): Darkness
Bitbeast Attack(s): defense: Shadow Barrier; offense: Shadow Box; final: Nightmare Reign.
Other(description of attacks): Shadow Barrier: is a defense attack, what this does a black shadowy substance surrounds Blake's beyblade and forms a barrier which prevents the opponents from attacking but when they attack Scorpius doesn't get affected but the opponent is the one that gets damaged; Shadow Box forms a box in which both bladers and their blades are trapped inside but the opponent can't see Blake's blade but Blake can see them and this gives him the advantage of possibly destroying the opponent's blade; Nightmare Reign: this covers both bladers in a shadow box inside the box it's pitch black but inside the box all of the opponents fears come to life and they slowly start 2 break down and suffer while Scorpius destroys the opponents blade.
Courtesy of: ZorraVixen10187798
Status in Team: Blader
Name: Jay Renski
Nickname: J.R
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Eyes: cerise
Hair: short Ebony Black
Nationality: Russian
Body: well toned from all the sport that he does. Pale skin color.
Height: 57
Body Markings: a tattoo of a dragon on his left arm. The dragon is an intense blue color, the underside is an ice blue color and it has red fire coming out of its mouth. Its wings are stretched out.
Normal Clothing: jeans with a black sweatshirt. Has chains hanging from the jeans.
Accessories: he wears his sister's ying yang pendant around his neck. He has a ring on his right middle finger. The ring was past down to his father from his grandfather and now its past down to him. Also the bitbeast has been past down in his family.
Personality: he is kind only to his friends and very protective of his team. If someone messes with them, he'll find ways to hurt them. He talks when he wants to, so if he doesn't answer people then his not in the mood.
Likes: blading, sports, fighting, challenges, snow, the cold, dark places, running.
Dislikes: girls crowding him, spoilt brats, friends getting hurt, people annoying him, being in one spot for too long.
Hobbies: blading, being with his friends
Blading Style: endurance
Beyblade: cherry red with a gold defense ring
Bitbeast: a crimson saber tooth tiger which has a pair of black powerful wings. It has 2 tails which are tipped in dark red and its ears are also tipped in dark red. Its claws are made of diamond. Its eyes are shadow blue in color.
Bitbeasts Name: Indurata
Bitbeasts Element: fire
Attacks:
-Fire twister (attack): Indurata creates a twister of fire which is sent towards the opponent's beyblade.
-Fiery Blitz (attack): Indurata slams into the opponent's bitbeast. Indurata's wings are on fire when Indurata attacks.
-Opaque fire barrier (defense): Indurata creates a solid barrier of fire around it, blocking most attacks.
-Inferno tempest (final attack): Indurata sands a storm of fire towards the opponent's beyblade. May cause scorch marks.
Other Info: he never went to the abbey. Is strangely able to use the elements (fire, darkness, ice, earth, water, air, light). He lives for his dead sister.
Courtesy of: royalphoenix
Status in Team: Blader
Name: Elias Vargas
Age17
Height: 5'7"
Appearance: short mahogany colored hair with orange streaks and hazel eyes, he wears camouflage colored cargo pants and a black tank top that showed his thin but well toned torso and wears combat boots
Attitude: hot tempered, stubborn, rash
Likes: to have his way
Dislikes: people who don't do what he wants
Beyblade Color(s): red, orangey yellow and black
Bitbeast (if he has one): Helios, white horse with flaming mane, tail and wings
Bitbeast Element(s): fire
Bitbeast Attack(s): flaming hooves and spiraling flames
Other: he would do almost anything to get what he wants
Courtesy of: lil' angelgrl
Status in Team: Blader
Well, that's that…heh…
Disclaimer: What do you think?
And now on with the story!
Chapter Seven:
The Black Night Bladers
Mocha's/White Rose's POV
I finally made my way to Xie's house, and I let myself in using the key that was under the placemat in front of the doorway. Xie told us about it in case something like this ever happened and one of us needed to wait for the others to get back. It's a great idea if you ask me.
Anyways, I waited for what seemed like forever. Finally, I decided to take a look at the clock. They should've left by now…something's keeping them from getting here. Noting the possibility of a threat, I ran to Xie's room and pulled open the door to her closet.
I frantically searched through her closet until I finally found what I was looking for. I then pulled out the white outfit and ran into the bathroom, slamming the door shut on my way. Faster then ever before, I got dressed and ran out of the house, making sure that no passerby would be able to tell who I really am.
I retraced my steps, but I didn't find them anywhere. Hesitantly, I made my way back to the park…maybe, just maybe they were still with the guys…
When I got there, Ray, Tala, and Kai looked at me. I glanced around, and, seeing that they weren't there, started to panic. I whipped out a pen and pad of paper from my pocket and quickly wrote down a message. When I was finished, I handed it to Tala. He read it aloud.
"Where are Black Rose and Red Rose?"
They looked at me for a moment. I could see that they were confused, I mean, how could I have known that Black Rose and Red Rose were with them if I just got there? Ignoring the fact that I probably just gave them a huge clue as to who we really are, I tapped the watch on my wrist impatiently. It was Ray who spoke first.
"You just missed them; they left a few minutes ago." I didn't have to say…er…write anything else because Tala pointed the direction in which they went to me. I sighed in relief before heading that way.
After a few steps, I stopped. I quickly ran up to Tala and gave him a little peck on the cheek. Heh, needless to say, he was pretty dumbfounded. Man, it's a good thing that Aikou wasn't around to see that just now, she would never let me live it down.
After I completed my little task, I ran away in the direction Tala had pointed to. As I was running, Black Rose and Red Rose finally came into view. I sighed in relief, until I saw who was standing in front of them. It was Ty, the captain of The Black Night Bladers.
They've been trying to capture us and find out who we really are for as long as I can remember. They're a bunch of jerks who think they rule Boston. Well, let me tell you something, they're dead wrong! They'll never find out who we are!
As I made my way them, I managed to hear Ty say something.
"Now, now…no need to get violent…We just want to…talk…"
Hah, as if. Over my dead body they just want to talk. Seriously, them just wanting to talk is like...me never wanting to drink another Mocha Latte for as long as I live! I don't know what kind of game they are trying to pull, but I better stay on guard.
I was about to walk up to Black Rose and Red Rose and pull out my Beyblade alongside them, but I felt someone grab me from behind and put a sharp beyblade up against my throat. I glanced up to see who it was. It was Dirk. He was Ty's right-hand man.
I struggled to get out of his grip, but my efforts were in vain. He was too strong for me, and I couldn't break free.
"Aw, come on baby, you know you want me. I just broke up with my girlfriend earlier today, so what do you say? We can go get some ice-cream, maybe walk around in the park?" His finger came up and trailed my jaw line. I bit him…hard…
Black Rose and Red Rose saw this, and they glared at him. The glare was so threatening, that only an idiot would ignore it, but…being the guy he is…Dirk ignored it…wrong move.
Instead, he lifted his hand to lick off some of the blood that my bite drew. Then, he pulled me forward and grabbed the edge of my hood. He pulled it back slightly, and was about to remove my mask.
Black Rose and Red Rose were dead still. Neither of them knew what to do. Is this it? Will our charade finally end? Then, in a split second, everything happened.
Someone punched Dirk in the jaw, hard. The force caused his body to jerk away from me and stumble back a little. Meanwhile, two people ran in front of Black Rose and Red Rose and stood up against the other four: Ty, Blake, Jay, and Elias.
Finally, my vision became less blurry and my head cleared. I looked up at my savior and saw that it was Tala. Eyes wide, I fixed my mask and hood so he couldn't see my face, except for my mouth. Tala looked down at me and smirked. Ray glanced at me, and then glanced back at Red Rose. Kai, meanwhile, was situated directly in front of Black Rose and hadn't moved his gaze from Ty since he got here.
Finally, Tala returned his gaze back to The Black Night Bladers. He was still smirking. Without returning his gaze back to me, he spoke.
"It's a good thing we followed you here, isn't it?" A subtle blush tinted my cheeks. Ty took a step back and glared at Tala and the others. Apparently he was really pissed that some people decided to come at a time like this! I'm glad they did though, if it wasn't for Tala, my identity would be out right now…and who knows what would've happened if my identity was revealed.
"Who the hell do you three think you are?" Ty was pissed. Really pissed. His glare darkened and he put his hand in his pocket, probably ready to take out his beyblade if he needed to. The other four were just standing there with similar expressions on their faces.
"My name is Ray Kon. You probably recognize me as a member of the World Champion Beyblading team theG Revolution. He's Kai Hiwatari, also member of the World Champion Beyblading team theG Revolution." Ray introduced himself and Kai, and I could see that The Black Night Bladers were starting to get a little uneasy.
"And I'm Tala Valkov, captain of the Blitzkrieg Boys." Tala, Kai, and Ray smirked when they saw the looks on The Black Night Blader's faces. Seriously, it was priceless! Man, I really wish I had a camera right now…It was Elias who spoke next.
"Ty, we should get out of here and regroup. These guys mean business." Ty turned to face Elias as soon as he heard him say that.
"So you're saying that we should quit!"
"No! That's not what I'm saying! As much as I want to finish what we started, these guys are way out of our league! We need to come up with a new plan!" Jay stepped up and took over.
"Elias is right." Their whole team looked at Jay. I could tell that Ty was thinking about what Jay and Elias just said. Obviously it would be for the best. After a few moments of hesitation, Ty turned to face Blake.
"What do you think we should do, Blake?" Blake glanced at Ty before responding.
"I think it's pointless to leave when we almost had them where we wanted them. But at the same time, Jay and Elias are right. These three are strong bladers, and we might have a little...trouble beating them." At that, Ty nodded. He turned to face us one last time. Geez, if I didn't know better, I would've said that he had forgotten that we were even there.
"Fine then, let today be a warning to all of you. We will be back!" And with that, they left. Just like that, they were gone. With a sigh of relief, I walked over to Black Rose and Red Rose. I gave them a look, and they returned it.
Black Rose nodded in Kai's direction, almost like she was saying thank you for the help. Red Rose hugged Ray, and I almost laughed when I saw how pink Ray's face got, and finally, I turned to face Tala. Once more, I gave him a little peck on the cheek…oh crap…Red Rose saw…bad move…now she's never going to let me live it down...seriously...
And with that, we left. Our walk was in silence until we reached Black Rose's house. We went inside and trotted up to her room. Once we were finally in her room, we all got changed into our usual attire.
When I finished, I walked out of the bathroom and closed the door behind me. I headed down to the living room. When I got there, Aikou looked at me. I don't like that look she's giving me…it's kind of…scary…I should just walk away…right…now…
"Hey, Mocha!" Crap. Too late. I sat down on the couch before responding.
"What is it, Aikou?" She smiled that evil smile of hers. I felt a lump form in my throat. Quickly, I swallowed it. She's never going to let me live it down! Why, oh why did I have to kiss Tala on the cheek when Aikou was there? Why am I such an idiot! Um...drama much? I think I should just stop, I mean, what's the worst that can happen, right?
"I saw you kiss Tala on the cheek." That's it, I couldn't take it anymore. My face went completely red as I remembered my previous actions. For the next five minutes or so, all Aikou did was go on and on, teasing me about it.
"Alright, that's enough!" Aikou and I turned to face Xie. "We have school tomorrow. You two should go home and get some rest…we had a long day today…." Aikou and I nodded our heads in understanding and we made our way to the front door.
"Bye, Xie." Aikou waved and headed out. Xie nodded her head.
"Ciao! Oh, and, can we stop by somewhere to get a Mocha Latte tomorrow morning?" Xie just rolled her eyes at my pleading voice. What? I can't help it if I absolutely love Mocha Lattes.
"Sure, whatever. Just make sure you wake up early." My mouth turned into a huge grin that covered my entire face and I said thank you. Walking out of her home, I quietly shut the door behind me. Aikou was waiting for me. I gave her a questioning look.
"What do you say we sneak into Ray's house later and do some stuff to him and the others? We can take pictures and post them all over the internet and the school!" I couldn't help but smirk at Aikou's over-enthusiasm.
"You are so evil, Aikou. Let's do it." With that, I headed down to my house to get some rest. I promised Aikou I'd meet her around midnight in the bushes in front of Tala, Kai, and Ray's house.
I'm almost upset though, that we didn't ask Xie if she wanted to come with us. But she probably would've said no anyways, claiming that what we were doing was childish and stupid. I admit…it is childish and stupid, but it's fun too…
I can't wait to see the look on Tala's face tomorrow.
AG329: Wow, I'm really sorry about the shortness of this chapter, but it was mainly to introduce the new team. I promise the next chapter will be much longer and much funner (Ya, I know it's not a word, but whateva). Also, if you have any ideas of things that I can do to Kai, Tala, and Ray, please do tell!
Oh, and please don't forget to review to tell me what you liked, didn't like, etc.
