Hi guys! Long time no see! I'm so sorry! There were so many things going on! I have been volunteering at a school this week and it's been taking up a lot of the time. I've been coming home absolutely exhausted. I wonder how those kids have so much energy in them 24/7! It's weekend though, so I was able to write early in the morning! Anyway…I'm back!
Since I couldn't reply to some replies, I have decided to answer them here! :-D
STABBYTHINGS – I'm really glad you think my story is nice so far! I hope it still is! Lol. To tell you the truth, I thought it was kind of sad when Darken Ralh died. I saw the show on YouTube. Lol! Thanks for the correction though!
ANDURILEVENSTAR –Thank you! That's a really good idea! I might use that idea with a little twist later on in the story. I don't like planning my stories out because I constantly change how I want things to turn out. Thanks for the suggestion!
I'm kind of sad about it. At least one of the original characters will still be in the Hobbit though!
PIXIEALICE-XX –I am also terrified of spiders. It was really hard for me to write about and describe it. I forget where it hints that! I know that they said he had brown hair though! :-O
xXREBELXROSEXx –I know you did not review, but in case you are reading this, I am really sorry I did not respond to your message! I really enjoyed the rp-ing, but I remember seeing your message and telling myself to respond in a minute. I never did! I am so sorry! Do you want to continue? I'll understand if you don't want to anymore.
On with the story! I'm sorry if this chapter is kind of shabby. I woke up at 5 in the morning (which is not that early to some people) to write this…..and I was not used to that.
-Do elves have bigger heads than humans? They obviously are much smarter than them -
The spider stood there. Its gleaming beady eyes stared into hers. Adlanniel was on the ground, frozen in terror, the beast standing in front of her. Her eyes widened. She heard a hissing sound and suddenly saw a drip of venom falling to the ground and landing on a baby tree. The tree instantly turned brown and shriveled up.
"Adlanniel! Run!" Legolas screamed. Adlanniel could see his form running towards her from the corner of her eye. "Run!"
I'm trapped, Adlanniel thought helplessly. The front legs of the spider guarded her sides. She did not have a choice. Adlanniel scrambled up and backed away from the beast as fast as she could.
The beast's hissing got louder and it started running towards Adlanniel, its beady eyes focused on her only. Adlanniel spotted an abandoned sword on the ground. She quickly grabbed it. As she turned to run, Adlanniel saw the guards and Legolas running behind the spider. They were running at such an outrageously fast pace, and yet still too slow.
Fear fought its way back into Adlanniel's throat. She felt something wet on her face. She suddenly realized that they were tears. Weak! a voice cried out in her mind. Adlanniel tried to run even faster, but she could hear and feel the pounding of the spider's legs getting closer and closer.
Adlanniel knew that the spider was too close. She instantly turned around to face the spider rising into the air to puncture her in the head.
Adlanniel stepped back, but stumbled on something. She fell, landing on her back. Something dug into her back. She couldn't breathe.
Gasping for breath, Adlanniel stared at the spider that was falling towards her. She gripped the sword as tightly as she could and raised it.
-If orcs brushed their teeth, I think they would look even more ridiculous with their suddenly WHITE teeth and then everything else still…grey and stinky-
Silence. That was all she could hear. Pure silence. Am I dead?
"Adlanniel," a voice whispered loudly. Adlanniel gasped and her eyes shot open.
"Don't move!" Thranduil said commandingly.
Adlanniel looked up to find the spider with her sword through its head. One of its fangs filled with venom was touching her cheek. She was not sure whether or not it had caused any damaged and was already killing her.
She felt numb all over except in her back. Her back was searing with pain. Adlanniel moaned.
"Adlanniel!" Legolas screamed. Adlanniel heard him run over to her. "Are you hurt?"
"I can't feel anything except my back…..it hurts," Adlanniel said, her voice raspy.
"Adlanniel, we're going to life the spider off of you, okay?" said Thranduil smoothing the hair out of her face. Her face was wet from tears.
Adlanniel smiled weakly. She could hear Thenidiel saying something softly to her.
"One! Two! Three!" Adlanniel suddenly felt the pressure left off her cheek, hands, and stomach. She realized that the end of the sword that her hands were holding onto was poking into her stomach. She, now, felt as if she had been speared through with a blunt blade.
"I…." Adlanniel started to say. Legolas was by her side again. She felt his hand on her cheek. Her vision was blurred.
"What is it?" he asked softly. Adlanniel stared into his eyes. It was filled with an emotion that made her pain dull.
"I can't…" she said. Her voice no more than a whisper. "Legolas….Legolas, I cannot see." Her vision was cloudy. Everything was white. Soon, she could only see visions from past years. They were all slowed down, dragging on as if waiting for something.
"Legolas! Bring her to the healers!" Adlanniel heard Thranduil cry. Legolas carefully lifted her up. Adlanniel felt her eyes widened and she gasped in pain. More tears formed in her eyes.
The searing pain lasted for hours. Adlanniel stared at the visions in front of her. She did not recognize them anymore. Adlanniel saw a tiny elfling with golden hair that glowed almost a silver aura in the sunlight and piercing emerald eyes. The elfling was running through a field with a familiar wreath of pink flowers in her hair. She smiled.
She felt as if she was drowning from the tears that were covering her face. The pain was subsiding, but the visions continued. King Thranduil was standing under a tree, talking with an elleth she had never seen before. Adlanniel saw her naneth and adar in the distance. They were walking towards the sun that was setting in the distance.
Adlanniel felt a familiar touch on her head. "Naneth," she whispered. The touch froze. "Naneth, say something. I need to hear you. Where is Adar?" No one replied.
"Adlanniel," a voice suddenly said. Adlanniel recognized the voice as Legolas'. "Adlanniel, whatever you do, keep on talking to me."
"I saw my past," she said. Her tears were all gone and in their place was a blank expression and eyes staring up into the sky. The only sign of life on Adlanniel was her voice. "And then, I saw visions I could not recognize."
"What kind of visions?" Legolas asked. His voice was curious as he held onto her hand.
"Visions I could not recognize. I saw my naneth and adar. I also saw Thranduil with an elleth, but I could not recognize a little girl who was running towards me.
"What do you see now?" another asked. It was Thenidiel.
"I see the sky…..and clouds." A hand waved across her face.
"Did you see that?"
"Yes." Adlanniel's eyes widened and she nodded. Everything was clear again. Though the pain had subsided, she could feel he limbs again.
Adlanniel suddenly became aware off those around her. Legolas was sitting by her side with a curious expression on his face. Thenidiel was beside him. However, she did not recognize an elf with golden hair, but wearing c0olors of a different realm, standing behind them. He seemed to be glowing light.
"Hello," he said as soon as he noticed Adlanniel staring at him.
Adlanniel did not say anything. She continued to stare at the elf. His light shined so brightly that it seemed to almost warm her in the most comfortable way.
"I am Glorfindel."
-I wonder what movies Orlando Bloom is in now. Last I saw him, he was a pirate (bye bye Legolas -
OMG! Does Adlanniel like Glorfindel? Does Glorfindel like Adlanniel? Why was there a spider? WHAT ABOUT LEGOLAS? (I just put up a clue about what's going to happen next. hehe)
I think I'm making only myself excited right now. Lol!
R&R please! :-D
