This is another mess up/draft for a poem that turned into a short story….

Blame: A Angst Fic (Valerie Grey is talking)

She stared at the picture in her hand,

Her eyes staring daggers into the picture

He had lied to her; he had pretended to love her, to be her friend

She growled and crushed the picture of Fenton, dropping it to the ground

He had been Phantom, that stupid, no good, evil, ecto-brat, ghost!

She still blamed him for ruining her life, but even as she picked up a gun to end what she had started, it felt wrong.

The blame was slowly being replaced by guilt, but she didn't notice, nor would she ever notice

Because he was a ghost and she destroyed ghosts

Fine!, Phantom's words echoed through her head as she remembered what he had said about Danielle. Destroy ghosts! But can you honestly take part in destroying a human?

For a second she paused looking down at the gun, could she really destroy Phantom, destroy Danny

But before she could answer her own question she shook her head and narrowed her eyes.

She hated Phantom more then she loved Danny, and for that Phantom was going to die, Danny was going to die

But she didn't care, she was lost in her own ocean of hate and blame, with no islands of hope or love dotting the waters

All the fics I've read (and honestly have written) are about how Valerie accepts Phantom, when she finds out that Danny is Phantom, I decided to put a twist on it!

So what did you guys think?

Book phan44: Hmmm maybe after I finish all my other fics. I'm kind of backed up...ya took on too much at once...

Turkeyhead987: lol, !