AN: yep, I updated, Vie been working on my deception so this chappie should be pretty good. Hope you all like it, Id like to new your thoughts on my impotents: D
The generous mountain loomed over their heads, an oppressive god squishing the sky to the ground. Rayne sighed wistfully and squeezed eragons hand in a way that said 'I really like you and I wanna know more about you' he fixed his eyes on hers, locking together like a vice. Arya flew overhead, firefly wheeling around like a mutant seagull that was on fire. Rayne and eragon herd her happy exclamations and grazed at each other again. Saphira spoke to Rayne "we are nearly there, I trust you know the password?' "huh? Password? You have got to be kidding me right?" "nope, no password, no passing!' she winked playfully and reached into eragons bag for a snack. "you know the password right?" rayne started to freak out. "of course, it was….uh…something…err" Eragon .mumbled and stumbled looking cute. 'I don't know!" he funaly grinned. 'omg how could you string me along like that?" she freaked. "I though he was so sad," she though to firefly. "just wait and see' she whispered back. "were here" eragon announced to the vast cavern that enveloped them in oppressive dark. It was a nice dark, comforting and safe, like a big hug. There was a cool blue pool that limpidly floweed around the caven, teasing the rock with playful laps at the edge, like a dog that wasn't really thirsty. Frogs climbed out of the water and serenaded the couple. "we have to go through the water" eragon motioned and started to take of his clothers. "huh, ok' rayne giggled and changed into a really cute minkini that she carried around. Eragon blushed. "I'm not used to err…" he stumbled, flopping around like a fish being devoured by the frogs on the edge of the giggled and pulled him into the water, swimming as gracefully as a ballay dancer. They swam down deep, and eraon cast a spell to let them breathe. "wow how did you do that?" rayne asked. "I'm a rider" he replied simply. They arrived at a large stone at the bottom of the lake. Rayne felt a funny sensation come over her, without knowing why she placed both hands on the stone and shut her eyes. Power coursed through her like violent currants. Groaning, she gasped, a light was coming from her hands and eyes. She pushed harder and the stone glowed, consumed by her radiance and shattered into diamond sparkling pieces. Eragon gaped open mouthered at her. "how did you do that?- we needed a password!" she shrugged. "lets go" as they stepped into the cave the rock had revealed. It was surprisingly dry and had lots of gems on the walls, it looked like a jewelry store but prettier. They walked through and Rayne saw her first dwarf. They were short grubbly creatures, she thought. The dwarf ran down a tunnel, as there were tons of tunnels coming of the entry tnnel. She gasped in surprise as the tunnel opened into a large chamber. 'why would dwarfs need such a big space…are they trying to compensate for something?" rayne wiggeld her eyebrows at eragon and he laughed. "dwarfs are weired" he chuckled. "ERAGON!" a voice sqeeked from the shadows. "nasuda!" eragon replied in turn, and went up to a plain wonan and hugged her, caressing her back as he did so. Rayne felt ashamed that she had even though about eragon, when he was clearly with someone else. Her face burned with shame and she dashed out of the room.
So, what did you think?
