I CHANGED MY NAME. I WAS ONLE DOWALS
Hey guys. I took a vacation off from here. I've been really stressed lately. I don't know what to do. I honestly don't have time or... friends... I do ,but not close enough to talk about my love for writing. It bores them to death. Whatever. I received a very upsetting comment on my newest story. They said "Yuck. Just end it" Or whatever. It is the second time I received a comment like that,but the first one was worse. They were cussing.
Here is the story.
(I love you guys though... Please don't hate me)
TRIS POV
Zaine dropped me off at school today. I thought about how he told me he loved me. Our relationship is moving very fast,and that is not the only thing on my plate. Four has been watching me all day. I take a seat by Zeke at lunch ,and Four just watches me like a hawk. I pretend not to notice him. Zeke reminds everyone again about the party tonight. Chris squeals like a pig... I swear I need to buy ear plugs.
"How is everything going ,my friends?" Uriah asks. He eats a slice of cake.
"Good." I mumble,while everyone goes on about their amazing lives... I look around the room and see Four still staring at me. I frown. I turn to the right and see Eric. I wave at him and give him a smile. He trods over to me.
"Hey,Eric. What's up?" I ask casually,but everyone in the lunch room stop everything and stare at this "rare phenomenon".
"Nothing,just wondering if I could give you a ride today." He looks around as everyone whispers. "Everyone, shut you mouths, or I swear ,I will cut you to pieces and feed it to my dog!"
I shuddered. He was really-something.
"Eric, calm down." Zeke says quietly. Eric glares at him,but smiles at me again.
"We are friends right?" He asks. I am surprised.
"Of course." I mumble. He walks away as cool as ever . Four walks over now. Oh great.
"Tris."
"Four."
There is an awkward silence at the table. I frown and furrow my brow.
"What is it that you need?" I say through clenched teeth.
"Have you thought about what I've said?"
I nod. "Yeah, I would like it if you'd just leave me and Zaine be okay? I'm done with our friendship."
"Tris, you realize how I feel right?" He asks.
"Yeah, of course. You are a retarded scum bag play boy thinks I'm just another girl he can toy with for a bit! Now get your sorry little face out of here!" I shout at him. He turns around before I could catch a glimpse of his face. I take a sip of my water. Uriah stares at me.
"What?.." I ask annoyed.
He raises his hands. "Calm down ,Tiger!"
AFTER SCHOOL
Eric opens the door to his Honda for me. I hop in the passenger seat. It was really clean in the car. It still had that new car smell (How many of you know what a new car smells like? ;) I do! Review if you do!)
He hops in the driver seat and soon we're off.
"Take a left here." I say directing him to my house. "That house." I point to the white and blue house with the neat front yard and nice pruned bushes. Eric parks his car in the front.
"Do you want to come in for a bit?" I ask. It was hospitality that my mother taught me.
"Um... why not?" We both walk in.
"Hey,Beatrice." Caleb says casually walking into the kitchen,but walks backward and does a double-take. He sees Eric and hides in the kitchen.
"WHY DID YOU BRING HIM!?"
Eric laughs.
"Come out you baby. Eric is my friend."
Mom comes downstairs to greet us. Eric followed me to the livning room.
"I'm Natalie ,Tris's mom."
"I'm Eric, Tris's chauffer." Eric joked.
I just smile as my mom giggles at that.
"How does she pay you? With a kiss?! " Calen calls from his hiding place in the kitchen."Is he blackmailing you?"
"No, Caleb!" I sigh,looking back at Eric."I think you better go before he passes out or something."
Eric chuckles.
"Okay, Let me know if you ever need a ride, Prior."
"Of course, I will. You are my chauffeur." With that Eric leaves.
I call Zaine.
"Hey, do you want to go to that party I mentioned? I mean you don't have to,but everyone has been bugging me about you."
"yeah of course." Zaine says over the phone.
1 HOUR OF TALKING ON THE PHONE.
Chris dresses me up and all that jazz,which I have no clue how to imitate the process or whatever. I am dressed in black jeans, a deep pink flowy blouse, a greyish cardigan,and combat boots. I throw over a leather jacket. I see Zaine waiting in his car.
"Hey, Mind if I tag a long?" Chris asks. I look at Zaine he nods. Chris squeals and gets in the back seat.
"How are you, Love?"
"Good." I said kissing his cheek."Now,maybe better."
He grins.
AT THE PARTY
The loud music fills the house,but I still can't understand a word the singer sings. Zaine and I weave our way to a safe spot in Zeke's house.
Uriah man's the DJ station.
"Let's give it up for TRIS AND ZAINE!" Everyone shouts.
"They are crazy." Zaine said.
"Finally someone who agrees."
Zaine smiles. I take in his collared shirt. It was black and pressed. He wore greyish pants and a belt. His hair was as attractive as can be,and his smiles beamed,which caused the same light to show in his eyes. I lean into him.
"Are you okay with this?" I ask.
"No the I should be asking if you're okay with this." He says and kisses me. Warm lips,hands,and body touch and linger on our skin. My hands in his hair. HIs on my waist and lower back. Our lips tasting each other's tilting his head to the left ,deepened the kiss. Tris whimpered as she felt sensation bursting in her.
"WHOA! LOOK AT THEM GO!" Shauna shouts. I pull back ,blushing .
"Everyone out ! EXCEPT FOR THE NAMES ON THIS BOARD!"
I saw my name at the top and Zaine's under mine.
"Time for Dauntless or Candor." Uriah says grinning.
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Marlene starts the game.
"Tris, Dauntless or Candor?"
"Uh- D?"
"French kiss a guy in this room besides Zaine."
I clear my throat. I rather not remove my shirt. I took my jacket off a while ago so... I'm not taking my shirt off. I looked at all the guys in the room. Will winks at me. Uriah is doing the chicken dance, Don't know why,but he was. Zeke is eating a mint. Eric sat there fiddling with his car keys. Zaine gave me worried eyes.
"HURRY UP ,TRIS!" Chris shouts.
"Here, I'll narrow it down." Marlene says." French kiss ...-ERIC!" I gasp . Eric gasps.
"but I'm just a chauffeur!" He randomly says." We just became friends today,and you are asking me to what?!" (There will not be a love triangle with Eric)
I hush the crowd as I sit in front of Eric.
"Just trust me." I said. He nods. (Eric's appearance is like it is in the movie minus piercings and tattoos) I place my petite hand on the side of his face and th other on his shoulder. I lean down and close my eyes. I place a small peck on his lips. I look at his eyes. I kiss him a little longer. A spark ignited within him. I pressed my lips against his with more confidence. It's just a friend. It's just a friend... I keep repeating. I feel our kiss deepen as I tilt my head to the right. His tongue dragged against my lower lip. I whimper against his mouth without thinking.
"Get it ,Eric!" Uriah calls. I think Zaine threw something at him.
I open my mouth slightly. My tongue just touching the tip of his. I hear him groan a bit in my mouth. I pull away. Feeling that sinking feeling in my stomach. I blushed and sat back next to Zaine. He looks at me and suddenly kisses me with lots of force and urgency. He pulls away.
"You guys here, don't ever touch Tris like that. " He says in his adult tone.
"Yes,sir." All the guys mutter. I snuggle into his side.
"Thank you.
This is just a filler. I'm so stressed...
Sorry if you hated the Eric thing. I don't know what to do. Hate this chapter if you want,but that doesn't make me want to write more.
