A/n: oh yea! I'm writing the next chapter! Oh, and so sorry for it taking so long I was really stuck on what to right next! So sit back and hold on to your sit its time to begin!

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Chapter 9

"My name is…" I couldn't tell them my real name, because my name is the same as the little girl with blond hair and cute little curls. Then I touched my head and thought, why cant my name be…kitty? I thought.

"my name's flame." my john said, he must have wanted that name for a long time considering it took him only a matter of seconds to think it up.

"I'm rose." Jennifer said.

"And I'm..." but then I was cut off but something unexpected.

!!BOOM!!

The door was slammed in, and a girl ran in followed by 20 erasers that ran after her into McDonald's making everyone here freak out. Then I noticed she was a girl in the same room I was in. she must have escaped, when Iggy blew the huge hole in the ceiling.

"Get out of here, and U and A!!" max screamed, over the screaming people.

The Girl ran behind the counter, me following close behind, Along with 10 of the 20 erasers. Wait they weren't erasers they were flyboys!!

My bro (flame), sis (rose), and everyone who helped us escape ran out the front door, rose and flame fighting on the ground, while fang, max, nudge, the Gasman, Iggy, Angel, were fighting their own end in the sky. Me and the girl were running threw the McDonald's kitchen with employees screaming at us to get out, or screaming like girls because of the flyboys.

"You will die!!" they said in robotic voices.

"Not on your watch!!" I yelled behind me, I jumped over a hot stove rolled under a cart and jumped threw the door with the girl right behind me.

Max's pov

We had just started eating, and were talking to the newbie's when a girl slammed the door, and flyboys were hot on her trail. She ran threw the kitchen and 10 of them went after her they 10 came after us.

"ahhh, and just when we were trying to eat!! If we ever get some peace and quiet to eat I think I'll die!" the Gasman said.

"Get out of here, and U and A!!" I screamed at them over the screaming people. when we were outside, we left flame and rose on the ground to fight the ones that couldn't fly, and we fought the ones that could.

"get. your. furry. ass. out. of. here. were. kicking. your. butts!" fang said each word after every punch. angel killed 5 of the flyboys on her own.

2 minutes later rose, flame, the flock, and the 2 newbies who by the way we still don't know there names.

"Iggy, fang,gasman go and pick up flame and rose andthe newer newbie I'll get the other girl. OK?" so we flew down pick them up because they still don't know and we headed to the grand canyon to find a cave to sleep in for to night.

my pov

we were flying for about 30 minutes of silence when the nudge started talking. great! (note the sarcasm)

"heymaxweredidyousayweweregoingagain?oh,yeathegrandcanyon!howoldistheGrandcanyon?Totalwillbesuprisedwhenwegetback!becausewelefthiminthecavewewerestayingatlast.iwonderifhe'sok.ifhe'shungryorstarving.or...mugh..mff.

"shut your mouth. i know you used to taking so much but please, your going to make the newbies deaf!! giggle" Iggy said,while hes hand was over her mouth.

"ha ha iggy your so full of bombs. i just like to see you blow-up!! n...not really iggy i dont wanna see you.." but nudge was cut off by a huge wind.

My wing was…itchy or something. When your wings itch during flight, and you are being held you can't exactly scratch them. The wind seemed to blow harder against me, and max got a bit lopsided. she began exerting myself to keep ahead. My itch must have mutated or something. It spread.

max's pov

Land Max. You need to land now. My Voice urged me. Land? I wasn't tired. We'd never get to the cave were total was if we kept having breaks. And I'd never—

I was trembling. My wings were numb now…if I weren't gliding, that might be a problem.

"Max," Fang called over, "You ok? You seem…," a smirk appeared on his dark face, "wobbly." I laughed.

"the Canyon has weird weather, and I can assure you, I never, ever wob--,"

I was cut off by the wracking pain that reverberated through my head and spine. I began having spasms in my wings. I was considerably weaker, and lost altitude.

my pov

"Max? What's wrong Max?" Fang yelled, as i started screaming because i was fallinf with her like a dead weight.

"Max is hurt! Help her", Angel cried. I gasped in pain. The wind died around us, and Max became dead weight under her useless wings. Gravity took over, and we were no longer flying, but falling. Everything then went black, and the last thing I heard was Fang cry "NO! Max." and thinking they never evan new my name.

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