Hi!
Thank you for all the reviews! I never expected to have this many.
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Frostfire of ThunderClan- Thanks! And I know, Eaglekit is sort of mean.
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Flight of The Snowy Owl- You'll see soon enough. I think next chapter. Or actually, next chapter is Eaglepaw's POV, so next next chapter.
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HalfSun- I don't know; I mean I don't feel so bad for Eagelepaw. And thank you!
RAINBOWPOOPINCAT- Lol! And please don't! I'll update!
Chapter 9
Breezepaw let herself be led towards the Apprentice's den by the other apprentices. Her den, now.
She could still hera her Clanmates shouts of congratulation, ringing in her ears, though somehow, it seemed that they were shouting Eaglepaw's name louder. Breezepaw was sure of that.
Breezepaw didn't enjoy it, though for once she was the center of attention, she wasn't happy about the mentor she got. Not that she thought Leafstorm wasn't a strong warrior, the problem was that he was strong. She knew that Leafstorm was a young, talented warrior who was expected to become deputy, and she was sure he would just be frustrated that he got her instead of Eaglepaw. Not that she would rather getting Fogwhisker instead of Leafstorm. She didn't want either of them, but she preferred Leafstorm.
And then Eaglepaw just left in the middle, to go speak with Skystar. If Breezepaw would dare do that, everyone would get annoyed and irritated at her, if they would even notice. But since it was Eaglepaw, everyone just let her, and Breezepaw was almost sure quite a few of their gazes darkened with disappointment.
Breezepaw had a pretty good idea of how Eaglepaw's and Skystar's conversation would look; Eaglepaw would demand she get Leafstorm, or at least someone but Fogwhisker, and she would get exactly that. And Breezepaw would be stuck, like always, letting Eaglepaw get the best of everything, because that would be what Skystar demanded. After all, what is a small, unpromising apprentice next her bigger, stronger sister?
Skystar thought I couldn't even be a warrior! he told me he thinks I would make a good medicine cat, and since Fallenwhisker and I got along well, I should become a medicine cat. Pfft!
He was just trying to tell me in a subtle way that I won't be a good warrior, and that I shouldn't even try.
Well, I'll show him! I'll become the best warrior ever, and he won't be able to stop me!
Even if Skystar does give Leafstorm to Eaglepaw instead of to me, I will still manage to become a better warrior then her. I promise that.
Breezepaw was so caught up in her thoughts she didn't notice she was in the apprentice's den until she bumped into a furry body.
"Watch where you're walking," Leopardpaw, who turned out to be the cat she collided with, hissed.
Breezepaw backed away quickly. "Sorry."
Leopardpaw snorted in annoyance and curled back up in her nest.
"Ignore Leopardpaw," Ashpaw whispered in her ear. "She's always grumpy."
Breezepaw frowned. She didn't think that was fair; after all, she did just smash into Leopardpaw because she wasn't watching where she was going. Sure, Leopardpaw could of phrased it in a gentler way, but it wasn't too harsh what she mewed.
Ashpaw padded away with her brother, Bluepaw, and they curled up in their nests, fur pressing. Breezepaw watched their closeness in envy; she had always wished she and Eaglepaw could be like that, but she knew it would never happen.
Suddenly Bluepaw raised his head, and his yellow eyes stared into her blue ones.
"Oh sorry," he mewed. "I forgot; you can sleep anywhere you want."
Breezepaw didn't answer. She was too transfixed in the dark yellow eyes, that seemed to pull her own towards them. Her heart beat faster and she felt adrenaline rush through her body, and another thing; a strange feeling she had never felt before.
"Umm, Breezepaw?"
Breezepaw snapped back to reality. "Oh, ya, that's fine. Thanks!"
Bluepaw nodded and curled back up.
Breezepaw tried to shake away the strange feeling that was filling her body, and decided to go to sleep.
Her eyelids were getting heavy and her tail was dragging. She gathered herself a pile of moss and curled up, soon falling asleep.
Sorry that the chapter is short, I just needed to get it up, because I won't be able to update for the next couple days. Please review anyway!
