Okay~ Just to let you know...its been awhile since i've written somthing in this Perspective...Hense: Repairing a Broken Soul...(all in Maka POV) *SIGH!* Yes...i yelled out my sigh. That means it was loud! .

"Alice in Wonderland", "Alice of Human Sacrifice", and "Soul Eater" do not belong to me! If only...


Chapter 9: Storm and Rescue

"Meow~" Blair cooed in a seductive voice as she and the rest of the group rode their horses down a forest trail. Maka lifted her brow at the cat witch. Blair had actually been doing that for awhile now. The blond though hadn't bothered to ask anyone why or for what purpose she was doing it for anyway. It may have been for practice…or she could have been doing it for no reason at all. She looked over her shoulder to look at the blue haired ninja Black*Star. He wasn't paying attention though. He was more interested in what the princess was talking about at that moment. She was making a quick back up plan in case the first didn't work.

"Shibusen Palace is up ahead!"

Maka looked even further back and saw Liz holding up a map as she and Patty sat upon a horse on each side of the OCD prince. Patty nodded to confirm her older sisters words and pointed out into the far horizon; causing Maka to look. And there, just slightly above the trees, she could see one of the large castle towers. There was no telling which tower it was since there were so many. But she defiantly knew that it wasn't the one Soul was in. She had stared at it half way to Tsubaki's Gardens after he shoved her out the window and told her to leave. She memorized the tower's appearance as if it were her last name.

"Alright…Blair, you know what you're doing…correct?"

The good witch looked over her shoulder and nodded to the camellia princess before jumping off the horse. "I'm to go and distract the guards in the front so you all can sneak around back and hide the horses." She then said; receiving a nod in response. Blair then nodded right back and handed Maka the reins to her horse before walking away. And before anyone else could speak, Blair was gone and out of sight with a flick of her magic wrist.

"Nya…" Blair breathed out as she lightly landed on a tree branch in front of Shibusen Palace's gates. She grinned a very feline like smile and jumped down to the ground; immediately gaining the guard's—which consisted of Snakes, Large tadpoles, and regular human men—attention. "You-Who~!" She called while waving her delicate feline hand in the air. The two men looked over as she made her way towards them, and immediately they had stars in their eyes.

"Well hello there." One man said as Blair took her place in front of them; wearing the cutest and most seductive face she could think of at the moment. "What's a pretty lady like you doing all the way out here in this dangerous of an area?" He then asked her as the tadpoles and snakes kept their eyes facing the inside of the palace gates. The other man nodded as if agreeing with his fellow guardsman and stepped over to stand closer to her.

"Well you see…" Blair began with a sad expression. "I got lost." Both guards gasped and looked at her in concern as she held both her hands behind her back and stared at the ground sadly. "I was looking for someone who can help me move my… …" Trailing off, the cat witch looked up and caught their eyes with her hypnotizing gold ones. "…underwear dresser." The men both shuddered at her look and she took a step forward. "Tell me…I'm sure big strong men like you would be able to help me lift that dang thing." She took their arms and smiled. "I have so much lingerie in there…poor me can't lift it all on my own."

"Oh…I'll help you…Mrs…?"

"Please…" Blair set a finger on both of their lips. She leaned in close, pressing her breast against their spear wielding hands, and whispered in a seductive voice: "Just call me Blair." The two men seemed to shudder again and one almost felt too weak at the knees to even stand. "Now…" Licking her lips slightly, Blair took each spear in hand and set them on the ground so she could grab their hands and pull them away from the other guards. "Help me with that—"

"YA-HAA!"

Along with the sudden yell, there was an explosion from inside the palace gates and immediately the guards took defense. "Damn it! We've been tricked!" The taller one yelped as he and his fellow guardsman ran over to their spears. Blair though appeared near them and picked them up; causing both of them to stop in their tracks.

'Alright…now that they've passed…All I got to do is keep the guards busy for a little longer.' The feline thought with a grin. Another explosion from the blue haired ninja was sounded and caused a cloud of dust to rise from the direction of the palace courtyard. "Pump-Pumpkin, Pumpkin!" She threw the spears to the side and held up her right hand. "Halloween cannon!" And just as last time during the battle with Arachne, a glowing pumpkin appeared and launched towards the two men like a large cannon ball. She jumped back to perform a few back hand springs and held out her hand again. She usually used this move when in the air. But time wasn't on her side.

"Pump-Pumpkin, Pumpkin, Smashing Pumpkin!"

An explosion the size of a small building and shaped like a pumpkin blasted both men away once more after getting to their feet. She heard the clanking of amour behind her and looked over her shoulder to see more guards heading her way with weapons at hand. "This palace used to be such a peaceful place." She mumbled to herself; her golden eyes narrowing. She turned around, held up a hand to shoot her Halloween cannon and moved aside so the flying bodies wouldn't hit her.

Blair then stepped to the other side as the men charged her way with spears. She spun around to face a group and ducked down to dodge one, and then jumped up to dodge another. She set her hands on a man's shoulders, flipped over his body, landed on the ground and then swung her leg around to trip him. She then stood back up, held out a hand to stop another spear, and pushed it aside so the man could lose his balance and fall over. Though, where his face had landed caused his nose to bleed uncontrollably.

"Is it warmer there?" Blair asked as she pulled the man's face out from between her boobs. She giggled slightly at his knocked out form, but stopped when another explosion from the blue haired ninja was sounded. She became serious and held the man up by his torso and hair like a shield. Her hand came out from under his arm and she grinned in a feline like way. "Pump, Pumpkin, Pumpkin, Halloween cannon!" The three men in front of her blasted back and were soon out of sight and knocked out in the forest nearby. She then dropped the man and turned around just in time to dodge a snake.

"Chi, Chi, Chi…"

Blair's eyes widened for only a second before she looked over her shoulder and saw the pink haired rat she hated so much. "Well Blair…" Mizune, the mouse witch began as mice and snakes surrounded the cat witch. "Isn't it nice to see you here…I'm sure you're the reason that ninja is making a mess of Medusa-Sama's Courtyard—"

"Shinigami-Sama's Courtyard!" Blair corrected; causing the other witch to narrow her eyes. Mizune then scoffed and took a step forward. "Stay back!" Blair shouted as she grabbed a snake by it's neck. She then tossed it at the pink haired woman before doing a back hand spring to land near another large snake. She grabbed that one and tossed it too. But Mizune took it within her own hands and set it back down with ease. "Mizune, I don't want to kill you—"

"Go ahead Feline~"

"Rat!"

Blair held up her right hand and conjured up another pumpkin cannon so it could blast the pink haired witch into oblivion. The explosion was nearly at the same time as one that Black*Star had created in the courtyard. As soon as the dust cleared, Mizune ran towards her and tackled her to the ground; causing them both to roll for a few meters. Growling, Blair then shoved the mouse witch off of her and stood up; only to find herself being surrounded by more men from inside the palace. They all held up their spears and threatened to take her down as the snakes took their places again. Blair scoffed with a small, sarcastic laugh and watched Mizune stand up and brush off her striped dress.

"Easy…"

She conjured a few flying pumpkins and stood on one before looking down upon the human men. "This is almost too easy…" She then said to herself before causing another smashing explosion down on the ground to let more bodies fly. "Come on you big "strong" men…I'm sure you can take me on." A man threw his spear up at her but she merely moved out of the way. "You can do better than that!" Then, just as she smiled after this, an arm went around her neck and pulled her back; causing the pumpkin to spin in back flips towards the ground. The witch narrowed her eyes and disappeared in a cloud before it could hit the ground—the attacker, Mizune, landing with ease over by the main gate.

The men and the witch glanced around while looking for her as a cat sat down near a tree. The purple haired feline grinned, fixed her hat, narrowed her golden eyes and trotted away from them just as a crowd of horses left the back entrance. They had done their job and it was time for them to get back to the gardens.


"This way, Maka. Hurry." Tsubaki said as she and the others galloped into the back entrance. Black*Star immediately hopped off of his, hid his and Soul's horse behind a tree and ran off to go do his part of the job while the others did so just a bit slower. The princess hid her's as the others did as well and was soon walking towards the nearest entrance. "Liz, Patty. You're my guards." She then said and soon the two sisters were walking nearby with guns in hand. "Maka, Crona. Follow me please." Maka nodded and grabbed the shy pinkette by the hand and soon Kid was out of sight to go do his job: research on his father's whereabouts. "Crona, please lead the way."

"Yes ma'am."

In a diamond shape, Tsubaki and the other three girls followed Crona into the first dark red hallway—Tsubaki in the middle, Maka following from behind, and both sisters on each side at the ready. An explosion and laugh—clearly Black*Star's—was sounded in the direction of the courtyard. "Looks like Medusa's in the courtyard." Liz muttered as she looked down a hallway they passed silently by. Maka looked down the same hall in the corner of her eyes and nodded in agreement before looking down another to make sure no one that the sisters missed where there.

They turned a right corner and walked down another long hall, before turning another left and just as Maka went to speak she felt another explosion shake the ground. They all stopped in their tracks to wait it out and just as they went to walk again Maka felt the floor shift from beneath her feet. She gasped as she slipped right through; her hair flying upward and whacking her in the face many times. She heard Tsubaki and the rest of them calling out her name and she reached out for something. But it all seemed like dirt and garbage as she fell. What in the world was she going to grab? A dead man's skeleton arm! No thank you!

"Who puts a giant hole in the middle of the damn palace?" She screamed as her hands found a rope. But immediately her hands let go and she continued her decent. She felt like she was in "Alice in Wonderland" falling down the giant rabbit hole! Garbage and random items whizzed by at high speeds and she soon eyed a piano that looked like it was pinned down within the dirt wall enough for her to grab hold. Maka held out her hands and got ready to grab hold, but as soon as she hit it, a loud crash of mixed notes was sounded and the piano came right out of the wall. "WHAT!"

It played by itself as it fell right above her, close enough to feel the breeze when the keys were pressed. It sounded familiar but she was too panicked to think at the moment. Scared for her life, the blond reached up and pushed the large instrument away, but it kept on its decent and got closer; playing the same strange and familiar tune. "Stop it!" Maka yelled; her hands crashing against the keys. "This is no time for a piano to be playing around on its own like this!" She then screamed. She kicked and yelled but the piano kept playing; widening her eyes with each beautiful note.

"Maka-Chan~"

Suddenly a creature with red skin and horns upon his head appeared upon the glossy surface while the keys played the horrific melody. The little imp grinned; showing off its sharp teeth as she kept trying to push the piano away. "Maka-Chan~" The imp breathed from its shark toothed mouth as his small body stood up and began walking over to her as if there was some kind of gravitational force pulling him down on the piano's surface. "Interesting soul…and interesting eyes…" He growled with a narrow of his own eyes. "No wonder he likes you so much…"

"Wha—"

"MAKA!"

Her eyes snapped open and Maka found herself sitting in the middle of the hallway. Each person she had come with—Tsubaki, Crona, Liz, and Patty—were looking at her with concerned eyes. "Are you ok?" Tsubaki asked; reaching over to touch Maka on the cheek with her right hand. "You suddenly passed out. You gave me a fright." Maka nodded with a bewildered blink before looking to where she had passed out, only to see that it was also the same place where she had "fallen down the hole" just moments before. "I'm sure it was Medusa. She probably knows we're here. We need to hurry."

Maka looked up and nodded in agreement before being helped up to her feet. She looked behind herself and with a quick check up on the floor and her feet, the blond signaled for them to continue on their way. Crona led them down more halls and soon came to the door they were all there to pass through. Tsubaki took hold of the door handle, but the door was locked. So in response she looked at Crona. She knew that Soul couldn't have locked it. It once was a door that locked from the inside, but Medusa had changed that…

"D-Don't look at me…" Crona mumbled nervously. "The door wasn't locked last time…"

"We got this." Liz said as she and Patty stepped up to the door. The younger sister pointed her gun at the handle and Liz lifted her foot. "GO!" She then shouted causing her younger sister to nod happily. Patty then—tongue sticking out and all—shot the gun about three or four times before her older sister kicked it right in the middle; causing the wooden entrance to fall to the ground with a slam. Both Thompson sisters then walked into the room, but kept their weapons up and at the ready just in case.

"Soul?" Tsubaki asked as she walked in. She swayed her hand around to clear the dust and after seeing a flash of light over by the desk area, a white haired figure appeared. "There you are." She smiled and walked over to Soul to hug his poor trapped body. But as the princess hugged him, he kept his crimson eyes on Maka; who stood at the door patiently. Another explosion was sounded and dust came flying in threw cracks in the walls.

"Let's get out of here, dear."

"H-Hold on!" Soul tugged away from Tsubaki and ran back over to his desk. He opened a drawer and pulled out a few papers before folding them up and sticking them into his suit pocket. He then took one last look around the dusty room and followed the others out. As soon as they were in the hallway, men with guns and spears came around the corner and spotted them. Soul's eyes flashed and he immediately put on a frown; walking faster than the rest of the small group. "Stand back!"

Maka gasped as Soul shoved through to walk ahead. "Soul what are you—" She was interrupted as the men shot their guns at the young man. But with another flash of something she couldn't quite make out, he held up his arm in front of him and out of her sight. She heard something ricochet and then for some reason, after doing so, the men dropped their guns, ran off out of sight and left Soul completely unharmed. Another flash, Soul dropped his arm back down to his side and began running after the two guardsmen.

"Oh no you don't!"

"Soul—"

"Maka-Chan." Tsubaki set a hand on the blond's shoulder; causing the younger girl to look back. "Soul will be fine. He has a...unique way of fighting and staying alive." Maka stared for a moment as Soul turned the same corner the enemy had, and before anything else happened, she gave the princess a nod. "Alright then." She looked at Crona and the sisters. "Let's get back to the horses and get ready to go."


Medusa narrowed her snake like eyes as she looked down on her courtyard from her balcony up above. She normally did this just to stare at it, or to pass the time really. A queen never really had anything to do during the day other than paperwork, politic related things or plan out her war with Soul Eater and the rebellion…But she was all done with that now, and she was fixed on staring at her courtyard. Free, the wolf man who stood beside her normally stepped up from behind a curtain and the witch glanced at him from the corner of her eyes; lifting a brow.

"Well?"

"Shinigami is still there your highness." Free told her with a large bow to her majesty. "Just as you had presumed…" Medusa, earlier, had asked him to check up on the former king of Death City and that was exactly what he was updating her on. The old death lord was trapped in the dungeons deep beneath the beneath. All the way down in the area where she kept the Kishin God until she needed his power. Shinigami was powerful, and she knew that keeping him in a regular dungeon wouldn't keep him still. The sub-dungeons were just perfect for him. She knew it…

"Wonderful." Medusa told her right hand man; looking at her courtyard again. "Go ahead and go back." She then told him. "I want you to tell him something horrifying…" She set a hand on her chin and thought about it for a moment before facing the man with a wicked grin. "Tell him that I've finally been able to catch and kill his son Death the Kid." She lightly laughed before setting her hand on her chin again. "Oh…and say that "The Alice" is here and I've captured her!" She laughed even more as Free nodded.

"Yes you're highness."

"YA-HAA!"

The yellow snake eyes that belonged to the evil witch caught sight of a blue blur flying across her courtyard. The blur ran into the wall to her left and caused an explosion of debris and a shock wave to shake the castle slightly. "Oh my…what do we have here…?" The queen muttered to herself as Free took a defensive position. "No…Free. Go do what you were told. I'll be fine." She lifted her left hand and pushed him back so he could go do as he was ordered. Then soon her eyes flashed over to the right wall as the dust began to clear up. 'Tsubaki's here huh…with a few allies….' Her eyes narrowed and she grinned.

"Tsubaki, you sneaky little girl…" Medusa breathed as she sensed the many different people within her castle. "Breaking in to get Soul I see...Oh and what's this?" She held up a finger and grinned a little more. "Marie is Maka…and Maka is Alice. You think you can sneak in as well?" She let out a small evil giggle before spinning her finger in the air; thinking of a rhyming spell she could use on the poor girl. "I guess you should be punished, but I don't have the time. Fall down a simple illusionary hole instead, and good luck waking to even a single chime—"

"YO!" Black*Star yelled to interrupt Medusa from completing her spell entirely. "Stop doing your little witchcraft spell thingies and pay attention to me!" The blue haired boy slammed against another wall on the other side of the courtyard; causing another large explosion of stone and rubble. "Because I am awesome!" He then smashed himself onto the ground; causing the earth to shake once more while she watched with a lazy, board and relaxed expression. He grabbed the chain scythe he usually carried around his waist and threw it around to cut trees and wreak as much havoc as possible before the mission ended. He jumped on the far left wall once more—destroying part of it—and went to throw the bladed weapon at the witch, but instead, it wrapped around a part of her hand railing.

"Little brat…" Medusa muttered to herself as she reached over to pry the weapon off of her balcony's handrail. But, the blue haired boy suddenly appeared in her face and yelled loudly; causing her to actually jump back in her seat with a gasp. She growled as the boy laughed in a squatting position on the handrail. And then, as she reached out for him, he gripped the railing and tore it from the rest of the balcony; flipping backwards and down to the ground. As soon as he was there, he took hold of his chain scythe and grinned up at the witch. "Can I get some guards in here!" She yelled in slight frustration.

"Like some group of lame guards can take me on!" Black*Star shouted as he watched men walk into the courtyard with guns and spears. "I'm the great Black*Star bitches! YA-HAA!" He jumped up and did a back flip as bullets lifted into the air. He landed next to the group and began swinging the chain scythe above his head in a helicopter motion. He laughed loudly as the blade clattered against their armor and knocked them over, sometimes even cutting their skin—but never a decapitation. "Take that, Peasants!" He then yelled as he kicked a man in the face and then head butt another on the forehead.

More bullets were shot and he did a couple back hand springs before landing on the fountain in the middle. He held up the blade to deflect a few and then jumped back and hid on the other side of the statue. And the rest of the men were actually stupid enough to run over and cross the watery fountain. Black*Star had grinned and snickered to himself before he had thrown one blade around the statue; catching it from the other side with his other hand. He then took both blades with both hands, and used all his might to push off and backwards, towards the witch. This pulled the men forward, against the statue and it immediately came off its hinges and was pulled away from the fountain; causing stone and rubble to crush and lift into the air.

…Just more simple destruction in the average everyday life of the Great and Almighty Black*Star…

"Oh yeah…" Black*Star breathed as he pulled the other end of the blade back around; watching the broken fountain spray water every which way. "I'm awesome…" He then said to himself; now glancing over to the knocked out guards. He giggled to himself before jumping up on the broken statue and jumping back up onto the wall where he had been earlier. He then eyed the witch and grinned. "Nothing can stop the great me! Nothing! YA-HAHAHA!" He went to cause even more damage, but a familiar voice stopped him in his tracks and caused him and the evil queen to look at the courtyard entrance at the bottom right of Medusa.

"Black*Star!"

"SOUL~!" Black*Star called out happily at the sight as Medusa looked at the white haired boy on the level below. The blue haired boy put away his chain scythe as he jumped over to his best friend and caused another large explosion and dust cloud to rise on impact. Medusa sat up a little and looked into the cloud as it began to fade away. And then, after what seemed like hours, the dust cleared just enough for Soul's deep menacing crimson glare to meet with her lazy and uninterested snake like gaze. They locked eyes in a never ending staring contest until, finally, the dust cleared enough for the blue haired boy to be revealed. "You gunna help me kick some witch ass—"

"Nope."

Soul spun around quickly, hooked the blue haired boy's neck with his arm, and walked back into the hall. "What—SOUL!" Black*Star gasped as he tried to move around and jump out of Soul's grasp. But the white haired boy didn't let go. "Let go! What are you doing?" Back in the courtyard however, things were much calmer for the evil queen just sat back in her chair and lifted a brow as Free came back into view.

"Did Soul get out on his own…I was sure I had locked his door."


Kid crawled closer and narrowed his eyes as Medusa sat on her balcony. He, by luck, had found the room that was connected to the balcony she always liked to sit on and stare at the courtyard in. He came closer and hid behind a curtain before leaning slightly her way to see if she had noticed him at all. But when he saw that she hadn't, he crept away and began looking at the books on the desk inside—silently of course. Anything involving his father would have been nice. Anything that said his father's name would do nicely…but he didn't seem to find anything even with the numbers 4242 on it!

The door creaked open and caused him to panic and quickly take cover beneath the desk. A man who wore no shoes walked by and took his place to the left of the evil queen that was responsible for Kid's and Soul's misery all those years ago "Shinigami is still there you're highness." Free told her with a large bow to her majesty. Kid lightly gasped at the news. His father was still…there? What did he mean by "there"—No…that didn't matter as long as his father was alive right? That made the OCD prince happy to hear and very, very, 'very' relieved.

"Wonderful." Kid heard the evil witch say to the man. "Go ahead and go back." She then told the wolf man. "I want you to tell him something horrifying…" Kid looked her way and lifted a brow. Something horrifying? To him that would probably be something super asymmetrical…like the number seven. "Tell him that I've finally been able to catch and kill his son Death the Kid." As she lightly laughed, the prince swung a hand up and over her mouth to keep himself from gasping in shock and horror. Then the witch spoke again. "Oh…and say that "The Alice" is here and I've captured her!" She laughed even more and Kid only growled.

"Why you asymmetrical hag…"

"Yes you're highness."

"YA-HAA!"

The black and white haired OCD child retreated back under the desk from being slightly out from beneath. He knew Black*Star was going to do that, but he hadn't suspected it right then. Thank goodness he didn't yell in surprise or anything, or he would have been screwed. An explosion was sounded as Kid held himself under the desk. The witch said something to herself before saying something to Free and soon he had left the room. Angry, Kid, crawled out from beneath the desk and came closer and closer to Medusa as possible.

As the witch began to name a rhyme, Kid held up both of his hands and reached over from behind in attempt of trying to kill her by choking her to death. He bit his lip—symmetrically of course—and looked away to see if that would help him. But it didn't. He just stood there and didn't know what to do. His hands came closer…close enough where he could barely feel her hair sticking out from the braid she wore. He wanted to kill her as much as Soul wanted to. But he didn't have the guts to do it like Soul did. If said man was in his position, the evil witch would have already been dead when he had walked into the room.

"YO!" Black*Star yelled; causing Kid to quickly pull his hand away from the witch's neck. He looked out to where the blue haired boy was and gulped. "Stop doing your little witchcraft spell thingies and pay attention to me!" The blue haired boy slammed against another wall on the other side of the courtyard. "Because I am awesome!" He slammed on the ground; causing the earth to shake once more while Kid slowly began to stand; watching in curiosity of what the boy could actually do. He destroyed trees and he destroyed the plants…all in which made Kid's face grow pale.

'Father's courtyard…that's going to take years to rebuild…' He thought as the boy tossed his chain scythe over to hook the handrail. 'It's so…asymmetrical now…' He silently sighed to himself and glanced up just as Medusa fell back in her seat. Black*Star had landed on the balcony railing in a squatting position with a loud laugh. Kid then, nearly forgetting that Medusa was there, set his hands on his hips and gave the ninja a stern look. Black*Star caught sight of the prince, and for a moment paused, before giggling again and tearing the railing away from the balcony. 'Stupid asymmetrical boy…' Kid thought as the witch yelled for guards.

As the ninja fought off the guards, Kid bent over again to try and attempt to kill the witch once more, but just as a bullet flew by his head, he pulled his hands away and took cover behind the large seat she sat in. 'Dear lord!' He thought with an internal scream; his eyes wide in panic. More bullets flew past and destroyed things within the room, while the witch seemed to just sit there and watch; completely unharmed. Kid then cringed once he heard the sound of the fountain being destroyed and he glanced over the witch's shoulder; almost regretting it instantly. But, his pale face came back into color and he slowly stood back up straight; spotting Soul enter the courtyard from the below entrance.

"Black*Star!"

As soon as Soul's voice rang through the air and was followed by Black*Star's, Kid turned and jogged over to the door. But immediately it opened as soon as Black*Star caused another shockwave. The prince quickly out of instinct grabbed a nearby curtain and hid behind it as the man known as Free walked back in and over to his queen. Then Kid slowly made his way across the floor as quietly as possible and slipped through the door before jogging down the hallway.

"There!"

Kid slid to a stop and looked to his right, only to see a group of men with guns held up and facing him. His eye twitched and he stood up straight. "I say…haven't you been taught proper military etiquette?" He asked them. "You aren't standing perfectly symmetrical in any way shape or form—AH!" The bullets and odd shaped weapons were shot at him without warning and he scrambled out of the way; breathing heavily. "Dear lord…"

"Kid, let's get a move on."

His golden eyes glanced over to his right and he saw Soul carrying Black*Star up by the neck with his arm. The blue haired boy had given up on struggling on getting away by then he assumed. "Ah yes, shall we." The black haired OCD child walked away from the busy hallway as if it were nothing and followed his fellow comrades down a calmer one. They soon came to an opening where Tsubaki, Crona, Maka, and the Thompson Sisters stood near their horses.

"Soul."

Said man looked to his right after setting the blue haired boy down and saw Maka holding an orange colored horse with a black mien by its reins. She looked at her hand as it held them for a moment before looking at him and holding them out to him. "Here." She smiled slightly to see him take it out of her hands and then before she knew it, he had hopped on and began trotting over to the exit. She pulled herself on her horse and began to follow them out and as soon as they were all out far enough to get Blair's attention, the horses picked up speed and they were soon all home free…for the time's being that is.


Sorry this one took a little longer to get out, but—to make it up—I made this one longer than the rest have been :3

And, look, it shows everyone's point of view of the storming. Kid's is funny, but I think I like Black*Star's the best. What do you think guys? He's just great XD "Just more simple destruction in the average everyday life of the Great and Almighty Black*Star…" XD Favorite line in this whole chapter!

So guess who made their first appearance in this chapter! Two people I believe :3 I'm sure you'd know…I mean…Pff! You guys just read the dang thing! XD

Next couple chapters (possibly two of them) are going to be Soul and Kid's story in how they escaped the castle, how they met the sisters, how Soul met Crona, and how Soul found the legend of "The Alice of Human Sacrifice"

Then we get back to the story~! :3

FEEDBACK TIME~~!

LightningxStrife: :D …You made me so happy with your review you know~ I'm glad I have everyone in character! I always hate it when I get a little OOC on their asses…lol please don't hurt yourself in the wait ok? I'd love for you to be in good health by the time this story ends… :3

KittyAttack: Tsubaki is! D: …Well…I guess if it's ok, then I think it's ok…for now…lol How was this raid? Did you love it? 'Cause you know, it's a raid and you said that everyone loves them and stuff…was mine worth the love? Oh, and I'm glad you are ok now! Lol XD So…I updated my story by the way…when do I get my cool "Get-to-do-everything-for-free-pass"? I want to watch the last airbender series on the widescreen O-O

Heromaster3: BAKAME! …lol JK XD Thank you for taking another shot at it. I'm sure it was worth it C: So please, sit back and enjoy even MOAR! …Bakame… XD

RandomDancing123: oo~ Tsubaki hasn't officially seen the Kishin God. He was in a book, so that's why she's all clueless about it lol XD Soul just happened to know which page the picture was on and she immediately assumed that he was tall :D And yes, Black*Star…how was he in THIS chapter…he got some spotlight for awhile~ Excalibur says: Bakame! For saying that you couldn't wait to see him XD But I guess it's going to be freaking hilarious. Because when he does show up, everyone's going to be PISSED! (I've probably said that already…) lol and last but not least, Thank you for your kind words my friend~

Rin Winters: Thanks~! :D Black*Star's part was…? What did you think? Was it as hilarious as you thought it would be?

SoraKazumiha: 1: YESH! 2: You said something about a hat.. O.o 3: My "dirty" experiments will be explained soon~ XD 4: FUCK YEAH! …lolz this IS fun…

Orange Cat Thief: Go ahead and review every chapter! The more the reviews, the better! Oh, and your welcome~ lol *Sets hand on your shoulder* You ok…? Lol That freak out kinda scared me for a moment… :3 the group didn't die silly, and the ending…*zips mouth shut* not talking…*looks at Ghost Turkey-San* Uh…ok…your welcome…? O.o…

Mushraluvr: YES! You guess his motorcycle and you got it correct :3 Idk…I was just wanting a special "individual" design for his horsy…So I picked out his cycle's design XD Great idea, no? lol Did you like Black*Star's part…?

Purple-Eyed Devil: I'm glad my review answers make you smile~ :3 'Cause they make me smile too O-O . lol hope you liked this chapter, and I put your undying need to strangle Medusa into Kid's heart. I needed an idea for that part and I remembered that you wanted to strangle her…so I had Kid almost do it for you~ :D

RebelAngel91210: You are so lucky that you have a horse! My mom told me if I wanted one, that I'd have to leave town and go marry a cowboy O.o…She won't get me one…*Sigh* oh well…Rowie sounds like he has one interesting look! I'd love to see him one day! He must be beautiful~

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