Hey guys, it's great that you're all reading and reviewing my story! I really appreciate it! I'm only 14 and I'm just starting my writing career, so I'd really like it if everyone could review. All reviews help! Thanks and **wink wink** you could tell me what you want me to fix …
Chapter 9:
"God Deeks, you really need to lay off the hamburgers." Kensi says almost out of breath trying to drag him out the door and into the black BMW. She had been doing this without complaint for the last half hour but he was starting to get too heavy. Deep down she knew she was kidding.
"Thank you. I'll remember that the next time you fall while chasing someone and I have to pick you up and get you to the car, and bring you to to the hospital. Don't let me forget." Deeks says trying to laugh off the pain he was in, dosing in and out of consciousness.
"Deeks, I was only kidding. You weigh the perfect weight. Don't lay off the hamburgers." Kensi tries to keep him awake until she reaches the car, "You need to stay awake Deeks. At least until we get to the motel. Stay awake Deeks. Stay awake…" Deeks nodded off just as they reached the car. Kensi practically threw him in the car and shut the door. The sales man came around the bend and held something out, a white envelope.
"Here, a man came and said to give this to a young woman matching your description. Is your name Kensi?"
Stunned Kensi says, "Y-yes." She began to reach out for it but stopped mid grab, she pulled a rubber glove out of her bag from Deeks.
Kensi reached for the envelope and the man grabbed her hand pulling her in close, "You should be carful who you hang out with. I'd hate a pretty little face like yours to be destroyed by a man like him."
Kensi began to smile. Sam had once told her that smiling would stifle the gag reflex. This guy smelled so bad, it should have been a crime for him not to have showered, Kensi asks, "What man?"
He tightens his grip on her wrist, like Iron, "Calls himself nick," he says emphasizing the K, and pushing her against the car "and he seems to really…" he looks at her up and down, "Like you." He breathed in deep, "You smell very pretty Kensi… you were nice perfume." Kensi had heard enough. She pushed him slightly, giving herself enough time to raise her heels to his privates and kicked him harder than she was used to. He tumbled forward against her and she grabbed the back of his head, still trying not to gag, "The next time you see him you call NCIS. You do not tell him that I was here and If you ever touch me again I'll have you arrested for assaulting an officer." She let go of his head and pushed him to the ground dropping the NCIS card with only their number and name of organization. But before she did she wrote on the back,
'Nick, whatever your trying to do… it isn't working. The next time I'll see you will be behind bars.'
And with that Kensi got into the car with a snoring Deeks, started up the engine and roared off.
