Edward Elric and the Personality Siblings

Chapter Nine – An Introduction Not Needed

Mr. Merlin watched as all the children gasp at him, he knew that they would be surprised by him. Before they even walked into his store he could tell that one of them bared a deep curse, he just didn't know which one of them. Because Tellma's work was very powerful. She had no doubt already fled Amestris.

"You were split into 12 people too?" Alphonse asked. Edward remained silent, just staring at him. He didn't know what to say or what to do. This man could cure him, it was perfect.

"Tell me!" Edward shot from his seat as he was released from his daze, "Tell me how I can be cured!"

Yao looked at his feet, shaking his head with a sour look on his face. His expression left Edward stunned.

"It's not that easy boy. One of the personalities is hiding a key inside them and they have to be with all the personalities including you. To simplify the explanation, one of them is special and they have to be around in order to connect all of you again."

Edward sat back down and let his face smack into the table, "Go figure…it'll take forever to find all of the Personalities and it may be too late when I get them all.. This is just great…"

"Come on Ed we can't lose help. I sure we can all get back to normal in no time!" Eddie smiled, chewing on her Carmel pop. Edward glared at her, "Thanks for the encouragement."

Yao sighed and collected the wrappers from her candy, "I would help you but I have to watch my shop. Bu-."

Alphonse stood up from his seat and suddenly pointed out the window.

"L-look!" he frantically yelled.

Everyone's attention fell on a hooded figure wearing a purple and red coat. They could also see a black choker around their neck.

He was walking into the Candy Store.

"Ooh, looks like someone is here to try your delicious Candy!" Glutton cheered but his happy attitude dies quickly when he realized the new comer was a threat.

When he came inside he looked at the people staring at him. He already knew who they were.

"Hello, Edward Elric I presume?" his voice was all too familiar.

"Yes...that's me..." Edward stood from his seat and moved in front of the others. His hand was resting on his covered up Auto-mail, as if he were preparing to attack.

"Well, it's so nice to meet you." The hooded figure's voice hissed at them. "So, I guess you already know who I am. But do you really know what part of you I am?"

Edward winced, seeing the hooded figure unmask his face from the shadows and seeing his own face staring back at him. But it was an uneasy face. He was smirking devilishly.

"I knew I would meet you. I just didn't know when. You're the evil part of me...aren't you?"

Alphonse gasped, watching as Eddie and Glutton moved behind him in complete fear.

"You are smart. Good I'm glad that you aren't as dense as the others."

"Shut up, why did you come here?"

"Simple really, I'm here to negotiate a deal with you. Don't you want to come back to normal?"

"Edward!" Yao yelled over him, "There was something I forgot to tell you! The Personality with the Key! When they absorb the others they'll come after you last and then they will become the normal being!"

Edward gasped and turned around.

"Damn...and I was so close too," the evil Ed laughed "Look, I've come here for one thing. Give me the girl and the eating machine."

"H-hey!" Glutton cried but he was interrupted by Ed.

"Like hell I will! Why would I give you Eddie and Glutton?" he yelled.

"Look," The evil Ed walked closer to the four making them very uneasy "I can tell that this is going to get very ugly. Meet me at the Fountain tomorrow at 12:00 on the dot with the Personalities you've found now. If you don't show...let's just say that a lot of people are going to get hurt." He turned back around and opened the door leaving the others stunted.

"Oh, and since your naming us...call me Edvil."

Eddie was seen trembling behind Alphonse, scared for her life.

Ed lowered his head, "Damn it!" He hissed cursing under his breath. "You get back here you-!"

That was when Edvil clapped his hands and pressed against the doorway causing drywall to fall on the ground and create a white smoke screen. When it finally cleared he was gone.

"Edward...you don't think-." Alphonse paused.

"Yeah," Edward squeezed his fists together "He is the Key."

"That guy was a very unfriendly customer..." Glutton whinned.

Yao looked at Edward, "I'm sorry Edward. I wish there was something I could do. I'm just a retired Merchant with a Candy Store."

Edward tried smiling at him. But it faded when he became lost in thoughts. Then after a moment of silence he raised his head. "We're going to give Edvil exactly what he wants tomorrow. He wants Personalities...he's got Personalities."

Ed grabbed Alphonse's and Eddie's hand and dragged them to the doorway, "Thank you for everything Yao. We'll be back as soon as we can!" Glutton quickly rushed after the three.

Yao bowed, "Anytime Edward! And I'm sure that you'll be able to stop your evil self! Oh and Glutton...try not to eat food that doesn't belong to you..."

"Yeah, sorry about that Mr. Yao!"

And with those final words the four headed back to the hotel...only to find complete disaster.


Yeah~! The main antagonist has arrived! A lot of you said that you wanted to see an evil side of Ed, well we were already planning to make him appear in this chapter! Can...can you guys read our minds? O.o

Time to answer some questions/reviews!

A Mysterious Illusion: He's not Gluttony! XD He's just a glutton, thus giving him the name Glutton. Your one of the many readers who wanted a trouble-making and or Evil Ed! Like I said before I was already planning for him to make his appearance! (Kok0roxGuardian)

FullmetalAlchemist64: We'll never truly know what's going to happen next! XD (Kok0roxGuardian)

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