Chapter nine team black flames is born
--The next day--
-are you sure about this?
Asked Allen who was surprised to Jin's comment
-of course I challenge the bravest five to spar with me
Answered Jin looking at the group
-I'll take you on
Said Yuji who looked at Jin with anger
-alright I'll go its interesting to have a sparing match against you Jin-san even if I don't like the idea of five against one
Said takimi
-you'll see why when we start
Answered Jin with a kind smile
-he'll be pulverize then we will be able to leave his stupid training
Said Kurosaki
-I can't let myself to be left behind
Said Akira
-then if takimi is going so does me
Said Kaze
-be careful takimi-nisan! Also you Kaze-senpai
Said Mizu
-don't embarrass yourselves idiots
Said Yumi in a cold tone
-Yumi-chan don't say that
Said Kimiko
-I'm sorry Hime-sama
-did Yumi called kimiko princes?
Asked Jin on his head
-do your best you two
Said Thomas
-no kaze you are not fighting me
Answered Jin surprising him and the rest of his buddies
-why?
-because I need you to be at your maximum for your special training to unlock your spirit power so Allen will take that place
-oh ok
Said Kaze
-wait Jin-kun
Said Cate surprising Yuji for calling him like that
-what is it Cate?
Asked Jin kindly
-I have some questions about what happened when you arrived, you told us you would answer any questions
-I'll do it after this match ok?
-I got a question involving the sparing match
Said Kaori
-what is it?
-why are we here?
Asked Kaori who looked the place that was just a small room with black walls and on the middle there was a small green cube
-oh for this, is my friends new training device i'm testing
Answered Jin who turn it on transforming the place into a rocky area with many hills around
The ones who weren't fighting were at the bottom of a giant hill and they could barely see the five and Jin on top
-incredible this looks so real
Said Mizu surprised
-why can't we be up there
Asked Kimiko annoyed
Up the hill the five stared at Jin whosegrey jacket, blue pants and black t-shirtchanged tothe same clothing he had when he arrived
-ok……lets start
Said Jin
-INNOCENCE ACT……
For the spectators surprise they saw how one by one the five were being thrown from the hill and crashed on the very bottom of it, Allen being the last to fall got up first looking furiously at the edge of the cliff where Jin was looking at them
-he didn't even….let us activate our weapons..
Said Allen who got up and pulled out his sword
-they survived that fall?
Asked Midnight surprised
-it's not real so I doubt they would get hurt
Answered Akemi
The rest activated their innocence as the saw Jin jumping from the hill surprising everyone when they saw him fall on his feet with no problem
-you cheater!
Said Akira
Jin charged towards the five throwing a kick surrounded by black energy towards Allen who rolled away from it, Akira threw a kick towards Jin but Jin dodged it by rolling forward then blocked Takimi's swing with his sword using his left gauntlet
-slow
Said Jin who kicked Takimi on the stomach then a spinningkick on the face
Yuji attacked Jin with his sword making his extendable hyoujin into the size of a dagger but Jin quickly grabbed Yuji's hand and threw him away taking away his Hyoujin, Allen attacked with his clown belt but Jin dodged it by jumping and on mid air he grabbed Akira with his legs and Takimi with his arms.
-what are you doing?
Asked Akira furiously
Jin made a spin throwing Akira, when he was on his feet threw Takimi jumping back to avoid Allen's attack with his sword
-don't swing your sword like an amateur!
Said Jin
-you move to fast!
Said Allen but for his surprise he was kicked on the face by Jin
-you guys!
Said Jin appearing beside's Yuji and kicked him on the face then punched him on the stomach several times until the final one sent him way back
-are crap!
Continued Jin blocking Tamimi's sword with a kick from his left leg then he kicked him several times all around his body with the other
-at fighting!
He finished by giving Allen an uppercut sending him flying and fell on top of akira
The five regroup exhausted and injured but Kurosaki looked at Jin furiously
-you think you are so tough? Take me on!
-with pleasure!
Answered Jin throwing Yuji's Hyoujin at Kurosaki's face
-damn you! THAT HURTS!
-no more comedy and fight!
Jin blocked many kicks from Kurosaki with his own, Kurosaki furiously he was going to snap his fingers but Jin grabbed both his hands and threw him away. Kurosaki hit the ground getting up slowly as the other four came to his help
-it's over
Said Jin with black energy on his hand
The five exorcists eye's almost came out of their eye sockets when they saw Jin throwing a black energy sphere blowing up in front of them sending them flying like popcorn
-owned badly..
said midnight
--Half an hour later--
The group were beside a giant river were Cate, Kaori and Rosette were putting bandages on the injured exorcists
-I saw your level of fighting and its pathetic you rookies won't beat any Zokuma or a Noah and even less a Kirayu
Said Jin who was seated on top of a big rock looking at the lake
-shut up you attacked us without us being ready that's what a coward does
Said Yuji annoyed
-…you think the enemy will just wait for you to get ready?
Asked jin leaving Yuji surprised so did everyone else
-Allen I told you many times to train harder with your sword and body I beat you easily not because you are weak its just that I have become stronger and you are left behind, Yuji your stubbornness may screw up important missions and the way you fighting stile its just to aggressive, Akira you believe that you are strong enough not to depend on your own comrades so just because you can defeat level 3's that doesn't mean anything when it comes to stronger opponents, Takimi you just need to train harder but next time don't hesitate on using your power to the max and finally you Jin Kurosaki you believe you are strong enough you don't need training then why did I beat you on a one and one?
Everyone didn't say anything else as Jin expected
-I don't want my comrades to be hurt
He said surprising everyone there
-I know
Said Allen
-I'm sorry for hitting you like that……I didn't hold back I just want to make you strong enough so you wont depend on me that much….even if I'm not strong enough I'll try to avoid any of my comrades to die….
Jin closed his fist remembering that day when he gave his all to save suman dark but he failed for lacking power when Ticky Mick killed suman and left him half dead
-what are those armors those guys with the kirayu were wearing?
Asked Cate
-ah those? kaze explained you the spirit power right?
-yeah it's incredible to be able to do that
Answered Cate making Jin smile
-well after you unlock your spirit power doesn't mean it's the last thing inside of you that you have awaken, inside everyone there is a will….that will is made by personality and actions, that creates a force inside of the spirit power user it has many shapes like animal's, plants, elements and other things. that power is the second stage of spirit power the "armors", its when you unleash that will inside you and materialize into a armor and represents something like a element of fire, a shark, a dog, cat……
-or a white wolf
Said Kaze annoying Jin
-oh shut up and let me finish, the armors have 3 ranks, the first one everyone has is the bronze rank, it's the weakest easy to break by another spirit power user but still you get a lot of power, the second is the silver which is the bronze evolves into a more sophisticated armor protects the body more and increase the power and lastly it's the most powerful the gold rank
-gold rank? Does the armor become gold?
-correct Jin, the armor you could say it's the most powerful and resistant, also the ones who have reached that level are declared the most powerful human's in the world
-the armors must be heavy……useless weight
Said Yumi
-no they are not at all they are indeed light as a feather since they are made by your own spirit power no matter how big it looks but for normal people it is
-Jin-kun? Can you tell us a little about you?
Asked Cate surprising him and all of the girls for asking such a direct question
-since these days you never said anything….so I….
-I think that's rude to ask that Cate--why the hell she is so interested in him? IN THAT STUPID COOL WANNABE GUY?"
Said Yuji
-its alright well how should I start?.well I was born in Japan, but I'm half Japanese and half American, I like any kind of pizza, sushi, fight against strong opponents, train a lot….oh I'm barely 18……I hate the earl, the kirayu their god, the triangle order, the remains of MITHRIL who are still bothering me, 3 year old to 12 year old kids, girls who believe their lives are miserable and act like idiots when their lives aren't even that bad comparing to others
-wow that's a lot of things you hate
Said Cate
-not only that I hate immature brats who even if they are older than me they act so pathetic and ridiculous
Completed Jin starting at Yuji
-why are you starting at me!
-forget it what else do you guys want to know?
-you should tell then about what you were before being an exorcist
Said Allen
-oh that? But don't you think I barely know them to tell them that?
Asked Jin
-you took your time to tell your own comrades when we were attacked by MITHRIL remember?
Jin started at Allen with a emotionless face, Cate was starting to feel regret for asking him that
-alright……listen up I'll say it once since it's a long story first of all I was a member of a spirit power group called "Triangle Order" a group that fights any kind of threats like monsters, paranormal events, akuma and the earl, I was part of the unit 5 in the soldier position alongside ray and Diana was the doctor
-soldier position?
Asked Kaori
-the ones who are sent to the missions it's the same with the lower rank exorcists, three years ago our entire unit were sent to stop a group of spirit power users named "Neo World" in China who were reuniting the seven banno diamonds that gives whoever has them the power of a god. We had many battles and finally we defeated them but that was not the thing that made me leave that place……our leader the team leader of unit 1 declared us traitors for both the world and the triangle order with no reason and even less prove of that starting the famous triangle order civil war
-wait! The triangle civil war? The war between a group of rebels against the entire order? You were there!
Asked Takimi surprised
-our own team leader was assassinated by our leader….we fought alone against three hundred spirit power users and in our final move after loosing many of our friends we attacked France where the triangle order main base was leaving only six survivors….just to later found out that our leader Xexts was the main priest and one of the three most powerful kirayu, ray, my ex-girlfriend erith and I fought against him even if we were heirs of the 10 clans the Kirayu clan ultimate enemy we barely beat him and I lost a arm on the battle and my bones were completely shattered making everyone think I was dead
The last comment left even Allen shocked, everyone surrounded him and checked both arms making him feel like if he was freak
-none of them are prosthetic!
Said Jordon
-you never said that to us Jin!
Said Allen and kaze at the same time
-I was healed thanks to my sister's shamanic powers I got it attached again why should I want to tell you something like that specially lenalee you know she gets too worried
Answered Jin whose arms were being pulled by Midnight and Kimiko
-but when you said that you fought alone with some friends……you fought against the rest of your comrades?
Asked takimi making everyone stop the commotion
-…yeah….I killed people I knew since I was a little boy….people who were like my brothers….and sisters….
Answered Jin leaving everyone there speechless and he noticed it and smiled
-don't worry I've got over it! I just retired from there join the order to defeat the earl who killed my father in cold blood and I got here thanks to general yeeger
Said Jin surprising both Cate and Yuji
-you are one of yeeger's apprentices?
Asked the two of them
-yep!
-so are we! I hope we can see our master soon we haven't heard of him for a while
Said Yuji leaving Jin confused
-what are you……
-we haven't seen him for two years since our final test was to find the order and it took a while
Said Cate
-don't tell me……they don't know?
Asked Jin on his head while he made a fake smile
--XXXXXX--
In the earls black arc, in a big table the earl itself, kai kirai and other noah were eating dinner
-this place has gotten more abandoned
Said road kamelot
-maybe because we lost many brothers a year ago
Said the earl
-why did you call us for?
Asked the 28 year old man African American with a big afro, dark sun glasses wearing a 70's white disco clothes,
-it's a miracle you didn't say groovy this time Mick Daniels Noah of dance
Said the tall 18 year old wearing a black tuxedo and a big hat, straight black hair that goes over his left eye
-shut up Jin Park Noah of Illusion groovy!
-you are disrespecting the earl when you fight like little boys idiots
Said the 24 year old man with long sharp silver hair wearing a black blindfold, he had markings on his face and wore a similar clothing as Jin Park
-language Haruko Noah of Greed
Said Lulubell the Noah of lust arriving alongside a young girl Noah around 17 but she is only 4'6 with mid-back length hair that's white with tips that looks like they were dipped into a pool of blood wearing a black with white gothic Lolita dress
-the beautiful Lulubell of Lust and the small butterfly Rae Stover Noah of past have finally come
Said Jin Park making the young girl blush but Lulubell ignored it
-so everyone is here eh?
Asked the earl
-no three are missing the Noah of Pride, the Noah of Envy and the Noah of pleasure
Said Jin Park
-both Pride and Envy are in a mission they got informed about what we will discus in this meeting and the Pleasure well……lets say he is still recuperating from the battle one year ago ready to fight against the one who left him like that
Answered the earl as in that moment on the last floors of the arc ticky Mick was imprison tide up in chains on both arms and legs as he whispered a name over and over
-so what we were called for?
Asked Haruko
-well lets start with the question of the day….do any of you know who is "Jin Mirouko"?
Asked the earl nobody answer even if Lulubell and Road knew who he was
-for the ones who don't know is the greatest threat after the General Cross Marian no……he is even more of a threat than him
This left most of the Noah surprised since they never heard about him but Jin just smiled
-I bet he is a weak exorcists who managed to do something a little incredible to surprise you earl
Said Jin making the earl stare at him with his crazy eyes
-you just insulted him idiot
Said Haruko
-Jin Mirouko has three reasons why he is a threat and must be killed as soon as possible the first one is that he is equal power to the generals so it doesn't matter if he is just a elite exorcists……no he is not even a elite exorcist anymore
-what do you mean?
Asked Rae confused
-like our precious Zokuma…he is a spirit power user
Answered the earl leaving the Noah's shocked
-An innocence accommodator? And a spirit power user?
Asked Haruko furiously
-correct my dear Haruko you should know he is also one of the heirs of the 10 legendary clans who fought against the Kirayu clan thousands of years ago before I was born…he might equal the kirayu since I heard about him returning from his long absence to the exorcists side when they were being attacked by a kirayu he managed to hold him off pretty well
Said the earl leaving them even more surprised
-those kirayu bastards! He is not only powerful but he probably reaches the power of those guys?
Asked Jin surprised
-the second reason is because he is the son of that man who killed many of us in the past Saga Mirouko
-what? The son of that man?
Asked kai kirai
-groovy! He killed 100 of us in one battle but thanks to you he was killed
Said Mick surprised
-so Saga's blood run in this boy veins then he must be powerful
Said Jin
-you should know he is three months older than you Jin Park so you cant call him boy
Said the earl surprising him
-you should know that he was the responsible of leaving ticky mick like that….that's the third reason
Said the earl making some of the noah stay quiet
-so the third reason is because he can defeat noah?
-no kai kirai……he also was the one who killed haidarnes noah of war and jak noah of friendship on the battles on edo but the real third reason is……his power of creating miracles
Said the earl confusing his family
-miracles?
Asked haruko who wanted to laugh
-ticky unleashed his full power and defeated all of the exorcists on the arc but……that bastard Jin managed to summon from bronze to a gold armor temporally and defeated him easily
-bronze to gold?
Asked a man who arrived with nine more men behind him
-oh so you are back……my dear overlords
Said the earl looking at the gold rank spirit power users who fused their blood with Noah
-we found a way to use so of our Zokuma and a little help of Jin Park and his illusions to lure and eliminate that Jin Mirouko
Said the leader of the ten
-really? Is that true?
Asked the earl staring at Jin who seemed confident
-I was saving this for an occasion since recently we managed to catch something really precious for the order
Said Jin whose hand glow and revealed a image of lenalee in a prison made out of crystal unconscious making the earl laugh
-wonderful! Just wonderful! Then I leave this job to you Jin Park
-as you whish earl
--the next day on the library--
Jin was carrying many books on a big pile about mythology and saw Midnight seated on a table alone, he never actually knew her like yuji or Cate so he decided to befriend with her
-hi
Said Jin who sat down on the other side of the table and Midnight stared at him in silence
-so you are midnight right?
-yeah……
Jin stared at her with surprise hearing Midnights voice that almost sounded like a whisper
-your cute
Said Jin surprising the girl a little
-I'm i?.
-si
-huh?.
-I mean yeah or else why would I say it?
-because you are flirting with me….
-I just mentioned it don't worry I got a girlfriend already and I love her a lot
He said laughing
Jin noticed she wasn't paying attention, her face was red and she seem spaced out looking beside him. Jin looked behind him and saw Lavi paying with kanda's hair who of course he wasn't liking the idea, jin smiled seeing this
-kanda eh?
Asked Jin making midnight blush even more
-I know him pretty well since the first time I saw him he got is ass kicked so bad…
-JIN!
Shouted Reever running towards him
-what's wrong?
Asked Jin who looked at exhausted head chief of the science department
-we have found out something terrible! Of the ten finders who were with lenalee and her companion one of them has come back
-so what do you mean!
-lenalee……got kidnapped by the noah
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--on Komui's office--
Cate and Yuji were seated on the couch in front of Komui's desk who seemed nervous
-Komui……
Said Yuji who tried to say something to make him feel better but he didn't know what to say
-you are one of the few exorcists right now available I know you are rookies but please save my sister
Said Komui who sounded like he was begging
-we will don't worry
Answered Jin entering the room
The three were surprised to see Jin's uniform specially cate and Yuji
-what a cool uniform
Said Cate on her head
-I wish I can get one of those elite uniforms soon..
Said Yuji on his head
-so Jin you decided to make your team now?
Asked Komui who tried to sound more serious
-this two are my first members
Answered Jin surprising the two
-why us?
Asked Yuji
-because I tried to recruit most of the exorcists but they have already a team and you don't so I'll be better since we are yeeger's apprentices aren't we?
Asked Jin who sounded exited
-I like the idea
Said Cate
-well since we were taught by the same general why not?--quot;he might act sometimes like a idiot but he is a nice person"
Said Yuji scratching his hair
-alright so you are now team jin right?
Asked Komui
-no……I don't like the sound of team Jin it sounds so……so….it makes me feel like I'm the absolute leader of the team
-then we are team yeeger?
Asked Cate
-nop we are team black flames for now on
Answered Jin leaving the two with a drop of sweat
-what a random name
Said Yuji
-you will know soon why its called like that
Said Komui who areadyknew why
-ok we cant waste any more time lenalee is in danger so is her companion so we must go now
Said Jin
-Jin wait! Since you made a team already I decided to sent someone else to join
Said Komui
-who?
-you don't know him but he is a nice person you'll get along pretty well
Said Komui as someone opened the door behind Jin leaving him shocked when he saw him
A big man way more taller than Komui extremely buffed resembled those stereotypical muscular people who work on the circus with a little piece of black hair on the middle of his forehead that looks a pig's tail, a big mustache and he wore a exorcists uniform
-he is huge!
said Jin on his head
-meet William Elric Armstrong
Said Komui making the young exorcists feel weird about him
-I heard a lot about you Jin Mirouko
Said the man in a cold tone leaving Jin feel a little scared
-he is so huge……so buffed….he is a monster
Said Jin on his head
For everyone's surprise Armstrong hugged Jin as tears came out of his eyes like a river
-OH POOR JIN-KUN I HEARD YOUR SAD STORY ABOUT THE WAR ON THE TRIANGLE ORDER! YOU AT SUCH A YOUNG AGE FIGHTING FOR YOUR LIFE! YOU INSPIRE ME TO JOIN YOUR TEAM!
-he is killing me…. out of air…bear hug….
-there goes our team leader
Said Yuji
-stop it mister you're killing him!
Shouted Cate
-DO NOT FEAR MY SWEET CATE, COURAGEOUS YUJI AND OF COURSE POOR JIN-KUN I'LL PROTECT ALL OF YOU WITH MY LIFE! THANKS TO THE BEAUTIFUL STREGHT THAT HAS BEEN PASSED DOWN IN THE ARMSTRONG FAMILY FOR GENERATIONS!
He shouted removing his jacked revealing his over exaggerated muscular chest and arms leaving everyone there in complete silence
-OH YEAH THEN TAKE A LOOK AT THE BODY OF ONE OF THE HEIRS OF THE LEGENDARY 10 CLANS!
Shouted Jin taking off his jacket and the white shirt under it revealing his upper part of his body surprising Armstrong since he may not look exaggerated as him but he looked more muscular that he expected making Cate blush annoying Yuji of course
-OH RIGHT THEN TAKE A GOOD LOOK AT THE BODY OF A EXORC……
-not you too yuji!
Said Cate who had tears on her eyes
-alright! Alright! I won't do it
The other two were staring at each other with a killing intent for some seconds until the two shacked hands
-we are going to get along just fine
Said Jin kindly
-A FRIENDSHIP FORGED FROM MUSCLE?
Shouted everyone else at the same time with their mouths hanging
--some minutes later--
-so we must go to England eh?
Asked Jin who had his shirt and jacket on
-yeah but the arc can't take you directly to where lenalee and her companion Aleena were gone missing but you will arrive to a town that is five hours away from there
Answered Komui
-alright let's go team black flames
Said Jin getting up from his seat
-alright!
Answered the other three
D GRAY MAN THEATHER FAKE JIN TRUE JIN
Chibi Jin Mirouko and chibi Jin Kurosaki stared at each other
Jin: what?
Kurosaki: how dare you and the writer call me by my second name now why not call you Mirouko and I Jin
Jin: because I'm the real Jin you are just a copy
Kurosaki: what was that?
Jin: that's not all I'm way better good looking, my black eyes that makes all girls fall in love with me, better fighter, better exorcists and you are just a copy of me from Catchan's D gray man a black parade fic
Kurosaki: I knew that! (Vein pops out from forehead)
Jin: but the most important thing is……
Kurosaki: what is it?
Jin: somehow Pegasusjin and I managed are taller and you are just a shorty!
Kurosaki: (notice the difference in height)…DON'T CALL ME A SHRIMP!
(Curtains close)
Jin Park: what about me?
D GRAY MAN THEATHER PUTTING PEOPLE IN DANGER
(chibi cate is crying on her bed and chibi yuji arrives)
Yuji: whats wrong?
Cate: I'm a disgrace! I put everyone I danger1!
Yuji: huh?
Cate: because of me Jin needed to fight against three dangerous Zokuma in the previous chapter
Yuji: that's not tru….
(A rock falls on top of him and kills him)
Cate: YOU SEE? YOU CANT EVEN TALK TO ME OR ELSE YOU DIE!
(Kurosaki and Akira enter surprised)
Kurosaki: WTF?
Akira: why is Yuji dead?
Yuji: I'm not…. (another rock falls on top of his head killing him for real)
(both akira and Jin are shot to dead for an unknown reason)
Cate: YOU SEE?
(curtain's close)
Lavi: Cate gives put everyone in danger saaaaaa (a car falls on top of him)
Krony: this theather is dangerous dearu (Chibi Armstrong falls on top of him)
NOTES
Just to let you know before a new translation there was a fic before called "triangle order" I mentioned this on the dgm a new translation but I'll say it again both the previous part and this one are a alternative continuation of a saint seiya fanfic and the main characters were Jin and Ray (now jin is himself the protagonist) so the only characters from the first part are Ray, Jin and Diana and the other heirs of the 10 clans
Jin uniform was the hardest uniform to pick for a character on this fic (I made 13 different stiles and I picked this one since its more original but still I felt it still has the feeling of being one of the uniforms the exorcists used on edo) its hard to draw but its my favorite of all Jin's clothing
Team black flames fourth member Armstrong if you wonder yeah he is based on major Armstrong from fullmetal alchemist since he is one of my favorite characters (he is so funny I decided to put someone based on him on the team black flames)
Jin's size was shorter than mine originally since I was to lazy to figure out my height when I was creating his biography on the previous part (and catchan's dgm a black parade) so I picked a random height then later on I notice that was shorter than my original size! and then I grew up a little more but thank god he didn't make me a shrimp like our dear Kurosaki!
oh if you cant see the manga scene copy url then paste it then either you erase the http/ or add it completly since for some reason it gets incomplete well enjoy (it took me three days to find out this problem)
