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The last episode! Or maybe it's just the beginning! There's the drill
one more time.
This story is by Charlie Regan and the story and idea are his!
Here is the last episode it's much the same idea as before,
original script woven with my story! (Hay it saves me from writing whole
episodes and keeps as close to the original as I can! LIKE it or not E-mail
me at Chip43_@hotmail.com
Return to Space(Edited to include Charlie's story ots B Hilda doesn't die!)
Here is the original as always http://www.escaflowneonline.com/os/os26.txt
in case you want it!
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(original)
// Gene "and Charlie" runs through a dark hallway to the center of the
Leyline.
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Leyline: We shall test thy worthiness. Present the maiden.
Hazanko: She is here.
// Melfina is connected to the Leyline.
Leyline: It is the maiden. The Leyline is considering. The Leyline will now
converse with the supplicant.
// A face similar to Melfina's comes out of the top of the Leyline.
Face: That which has come with the maiden, tell me, what is thy desire?
Hazanko: Power, immense power, so absolute that even the Tendo King would
bow before me and allow me to crush the emperor.
Face: That is thy desire?
Gene: Hey there, hold on a minute. At last... I came for my second place
prize.
Hazanko: Blast it, Gene Starwind!
(not original)
Charlie "Hold it Gene!"
(original)
Gene: Eat this!
// He shoots Hazanko, who is sucked into the shell. Gene gets blasted again.
Gene: Ah!
// He collapses. Gwen walks by him.
Gwen: Well, and the third one after all. How efficient of you. Now I don't
have to destroy anyone. So tell me, is the Leyline the accursed record?
(not original)
Charlie "Forget about me Gwen?" Scene Charlie charges the X-7 gun
Gwen "Are you mad?!
Charlie "YES!"
Charlie "Gene are you all right?" *thinks cocky basted.... that shell isn't
powerful enough!*
Gwen "I must know!
Face: It has that power, however. Its power goes beyond that.
Gwen: Oh, so its the Keylines. Causality can be manipulated here. Hence the
name Leyline. By manipulating the factor we call fate, as if it were a
physical law.
Can I finally learn what I want to know? Everything I want to know?
Face: I will answer all. I will bestow all.
(not original)
Gene "I'm ok.... shoot that bastard!"
(original)
Gwen: Just a moment, now just wait a minute. If I'm not alive you see, if I
die, everything that I've learned will be lost forever. Don't you
understand?
(Not original)
Charlie" Gene that shell was not enough, you idiot! no your down to your
last
shell! we have to work together He'll Be back!"
Gene "then lets get Melfina and go!
(original)
Gene; Melfina, are you okay? Melfina?
Melfina: Gene.
Gene: How do I turn Melfina back to the way she was?
Gwen: Gene, wake up. We've finally reached the Leyline. Aren't you happy? Or
at least curious? Come, come, what is it that you want? Is it political
power? Or is it
money? Information? Nothing you can imagine is unreasonable. You can claim
it. Anything.
Anything you want. Everything you want is right here. Right now.
(not original)
Charlie *thinks I could be really rich, to bad have to save the damsel*
"Awancer the dam question Gwen!"
(original)
Face: Thou who has come with the maiden, what is your desire?
Gwen: What, what's that?
// Hazanko returns.
Hazanko: I am Hazanko. A caster attack will not work against me. It is
useless.
Gene: And I am Gene Starwind. An outlaw not in the habit of listening to
warnings. I'm here to take back Melfina.
(not original)
Charlie "And I'm Charlie the best and this is my little friend! I doubt even
you can take an attack for both our weapons at once!
Hazanko "Impressive but I can tell your bluffing!
Charlie "Me and Gene aren't leaving with out Melfina! Scene Charlie cocks
the
X-7 gun and prepares to fire
(original)
Hazanko: Heh heh heh. You and your friends don't know the first thing about
her. Using the secrets that we have uncovered, Melfina is a mere puppet
that we have created.
Melfina: Huh?
Gwen: Yes, yes, that's right, that's quite right. She's a puppet.
Gene: Shut up Khan.
(not original)
Charlie "Your wrong about that Khan"
(Original)
Hazanko: The Leyline project was founded a long time ago through the secret
wisdom of the grave of the dragon. It produced a puppet that would be
the key to
entering the Leyline. This puppet was to function as a highly
sophisticated navigational
system that would eventually open the doors of the Leyline. That puppet
is none other
than Melfina.
Melfina: So I'm just a mere puppet?
Gene: That's enough!
Melfina: You knew all along Gene?
Gene: Melfina, the answer you needed wasn't in your past. The answer you
were looking for is...
Hazanko: I'll give you that answer. Melfina, you're nothing more than a tool
that we needed.
(not original)
Charlie "Don't listen to him Melfina you more that the ships navigation
system!"
Melfina "I am,?.. How do you know?
Charlie "I read the report too. It's true that is part of the reason your
created but your so much more you life is what you make of it ! You as much
a human as me YOU ARE NOT JUST A TOOL! Melfina You have people that care
about you!"
Hazanko "That's just hot air she's a tool!"
Melfina "I...I don't know what to believe Charlie!"
Melfina: Did you bring me here because you knew you could use me Gene?
(original)
Gene: No, I didn't!
Hazanko: Oh really?
Melfina: This whole time I've been your tool?
Hazanko: That's it precisely.
Gene "and Charlie": He's lying!
Hazanko: Absurd!
(not original)
Charlie "Fire Gene !!"
(original)
Gene: Yeah!
Melfina: Gene!
(not original)
Scene Gene shoots his last shell and Charlie shoot the X-7 gun with a
blinding beam of light, Hazanko counters the caster but not the X-7 blast
and there is a huge explosion
(original)
Gene"and Charlie": Aaaaaah!
Leyline: Danger. Danger. They are gone. They are gone. Return them. Return
them.
// On the Geomancer...
Tobigiera: Its already been almost 24 hours since Lord Hazanko set out. I
can't believe that no one has contacted the ship.
// On the Outlaw Star...
Jim: Gilliam, has there been any word from Gene yet?
Gilliam: I'm sorry, but I've received no word at all.
Suzuka: Jim, lets just try to remain calm and wait for him.
Aisha: That's right, just try and stay calm. Stay calm. Stay calm. Ahhh!
How
can I stay calm at a time like this?!
// On the Shangri-La, a cyborg like Ron wakes up with Harry front of him.
Harry: Hey Ron, are you awake?
Ron: Harry... is that you?
(not original)
Harry: Are you ok Ron?
(original)
Ron: Yes.
(not original)
Ron "That blasted Gene!"
Harry "Gene?
Ron "Yea it was him that got me!"
Harry *angrily*"HE did it !! And he stole my love Arrrg!"
Ron "I though you were dead!"
Harry *still pissed* "Charlie managed to save me, but it seems he did it
only to use
me!"
Ron "Don't worry we'll get them!"
Ron "But how did you manage to save me?"
(original)
Harry: I was able to trace down the sensors in your body and bring you back
here to recuperate. You're badly hurt Ron, so I'm afraid you'll be in
there for a while.
Ron: Harry, lets pull out for now. But this is not over yet, is it?
Harry: No, it isn't. Not by a long shot. We'll show 'em what happens when
you cross the MacDougal brothers.
Ron: The MacDougal brothers, huh?
// They leave. Meanwhile, electric currents move towards the ships.
Gene: Gene Starwind.
Melfina: Melfina.
Hazanko: Hazanko.
Gwen: Gwen Khan.
(not original)
Charlie: Charles Joseph Regan IV "The Best" aka Goku
Scene; The representations of Hazanko and Gene and Charlie fight.
Scene : Charlie wakes up in cyber space Melfina is there.
Charlie "Melfina are you ok?"
Melfina "Yes"
Melfina "What is it you desire?"
Charlie "Your safety,... Melfina I had to keep this a secret because it
could endanger many of my friends but now that were alone I have something
to tell you. Many years ago I was part of the core of engineers that
designed your matrix. Your more than a machine! The hirer ups didn't even
know about it but all the programmer agreed to make you real.
It took tremendous work and at great risk, but we did it ! Everything
about is
human, your not a puppet or a machine!
I quit that organization after that because they wanted to use you for evil
purposes. I managed to hide the identities of the other programmers but I
was
found out and nearly assigned but I managed to escape with believe it or
not Gene's help. He inspired me to become an outlaw and not just any outlaw
but the best! After I escaped I then trained very hard and built my
reputation. Once I
heard that the pirates had the XGP I had no choice but too leaked the
information
about the XGP , to the one person who could get it Hilda! She succeed and
stole it. Of course I had to join up with her to make sure she took good
care of you. I was quite suprised to see Gene traveling there, I barely
recognized him after all those years, He of course didn't recognize me, heck
I
barely would recognize me!, anyway you know what happen after that! I was to
far away to help but I knew Gene would not let you get hurt !
*Melfina cries*
Charlie "I don't have the awancers to the question of the meaning of life or
the reason of creation, I'm no God. I do know that life is a journey and
your
have to live it to find it's meaning for your self. Just do good and love
others and receive love and try to have some adventure and fun :-)
Melfina "Thakyou"
Charlie "Besides your safety that I'll take a mountain of high density
dragonite in a collapsible container the size of a small box and some coffee
if you have any my head hurts!
Melfina *giggle*
Charlie " How's Gene?" "Will we be brought back?"
Melfina " He is OK it will take more to bring him back"
Charlie "He is good for you Melfina, you make a good couple go to him he
needs you and you need him!"
Melfina "Hanzonko will ask for immense power will you fight him ?
Charlie "I'll do it for the coffee and enough power to help,,.. oh yea and
the dragonitre! "WE can't let that
guy loose with all the power of the Leylin!"
Melfina "Then I'll send you back"
Charlie "I'll be waiting ,.. and Mel. you will find Gene does care about
you! No one would go through all this if they didn't!"
Melfina :-) Bye for now Charlie your a good man."
Charlie "I'm The BEST LOL!"
(original)
Gene wakes in a field.
Jim: Gene!
Melfina: Gene!
Gene: Melfina.
Melfina: Gene, I'm now connected to the will and the desires of the Galactic
Leyline. Hazanko's Tao magic and your caster's power have somehow reacted
and
canceled each other out and we've all ceased functioning.
Gene: Are we dead then?
Melfina: The answer to that is both yes and no. The will of the Leyline is
keeping us alive in a different location. In my current state I can
explain to you what
the Galactic Leyline is. Its like a galactic library left by a now extinct
race that
possessed a highly advanced understanding of science and technology.
However to
humanity, we may think of it as like a machine god. After you finished
healing yourself, and
return to reality, the Leyline will probably grant your every desire.
Gene: Are you saying that this isn't reality?
Melfina: This is data.
// They are in the data world.
Gene: Is this cyberspace?
// Gwen Khan appears.
Gwen: Hello Gene. Thanks to you I learned what I wanted to know. Now I have
the answers to my questions. Well goodbye then, I am data, and data's me.
Goodbye.
Goodbye.
Gene: He makes absolutely no sense.
Melfina: This is the data repository. Professor Khan's objective must have
been to gain as much knowledge as possible. Gene, is there something you
desire? Say it.
By using the Leyline, I can grant anything your heart desires and make it
real Gene.
Gene: There isn't anything the Leyline can give me. All I really want is for
you to return with me.
Melfina: Gene.
Gene: Oh no, I made you cry again. Melfina, what is it that you wish for?
Melfina: I want to stay who I am. I want to be with you forever Gene.
Gene: Well that's what I want too.
// They kiss.
Gene: Then come away with me Melfina, right now.
Melfina: Yes. Oh.
Gene: What is it?
Melfina: Hazanko is preparing to leave here right now. He has all the power
that he wished for. If we don't stop him the entire universe will be in
danger.
Gene: What should we do?
Melfina: We'll join forces, I'll combine my power with yours and then we'll
fight him to the end.
(not original)
Gene "What about Charlie?"
Melfina " The gun he used and allmost destroyed everything"
But he was saved also He has agree to fight for some coffee , enough power
to help and dragonite
Gene 0_0 *thinks I should have held out for some coffee!*
(not original)
Scene; Charlie appears on the Draco with his coffee and box of dragonite
Draco "Captain??!"
Hilda "Charlie??"
Charlie "I'm baaack!"
Hilda" I was worried,.. Is Mel and Gene ok?"
Draco "I was also quite concerned for your health!
Charlie "I'm fine Draco prepare to power up we have a fight on your hands!"
Charlie "Melfina is ok... but we now have to fight Hazanko and he has the
tremendous power of the Leyline
Hilda "Sounds like good odds"
Charlie *sips coffee* MMM! good .."Gene will help and I received more than
coffee and this box!
Scene Ship is enhanced with power
Charlie "Can you handle the weapons system?
Hilda YOU bet!,,... Charlie there something between you and Mel isn't
there?
Charlie "Well.. Yes and No, I'm more her farther than anything"
Hilda 0_0! *Insert anime drop on head* HU?!"
Charlie "I'll let you in later *kiss* lets just say Gene is the only man for
Mel and your the only woman for me!"
Hilda "Thanks" "But if you think I'm settling down.."
Charlie "Wouldn't think of it! ;-)
Hilda
Charlie "There's Hazanko, Gene hurry up already, we need your help! man
can't that guy be early for once!"
(original)
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Eyecatch
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Hazanko: I finally have it. Power. Power!
// Hazanko melds with the Geomancer.
Jim: What's happening now?
Aisha: What just happened? Hey?
Gilliam: Oh my... What in the world.
// Gene and Melfina return.
Melfina: Systems all green. Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to surprise you.
Gene, I'm right here.
Jim: What happened Gene?
Gene: Don't worry I'll fill you in on all the magic soon enough Jim. Outlaw
Star, get ready to launch.
Jim: Its a miracle isn't it.
Gene: Yeah, must be. I met God.
Melfina: Gene... we're currently linked directly to the Galactic Leyline.
Nows the time to free your mind and fight with all you got. You should be
much stronger
than usual.
Gene: That's a roger. Lets do it!
(not original)
Charlie "Gene were ready here!"
Gene " Ha you sly dog! lets go save the world!
(original)
// They fight. In the cyberspace, Gene and Hazanko fight.
Hazanko: You'll pay. I'll make you pay Gene Starwind!
(not original)
Scene; Charlie Joins in and cuts Hazanko
(original)
// The Geomancer fires but doesn't take out Outlaw Star.
(not original)
Scene;The Draco swoops in and fires damaging the Geomancer
(original)
// They fight. Gene headbutts Hazanko.
Hazanko: Blast you.
Gene: Heh heh.
// Hazanko attacks him with wires coming out of his body.
Gene: Ah!
Hazanko: I don't know why I'm wasting time like this when I can absorb you
right into myself.
Melfina: Gene, remember we're not alone anymore. Together, work together.
Wake up Gene!
Jim: Gene!
Suzuka: Gene!
Aisha: Gene!
(not original)
Hilda "GENE!"
Charlie "Gene! "Forget about us all ready HAH??!"
(original)
Gene: Okay!
Hazanko: What the... huh?
Gene: Ah!
// Gene breaks free and everyone else appears. The Outlaw Star transforms.
"And so does he Draco"
Hazanko: Die!
// They "all " fight. Hazanko dies.
(Not original)
Scene ; The Outlaw Star dives in from the top while the Draco comes in from
the bottom they pass eachother mid way and Charlie gives Gene the thumbs
up, Gene returns with the v for victory sign.
Hazanko: Ah!
// Meanwhile, Melfina sees a girl who looks just like herself in cyberspace.
Cyber Melfina: Melfina... Melfina... Melfina... I'm glad that we could meet
Melfina.
Melfina: Who are you?
Cyber Melfina: The Galactic Leyline is going to be moved to a new location.
I'm going with it so I came to say goodbye too.
Melfina: You're me, aren't you?
Cyber Melfina: Right. I'm the you that's the maiden of the Leyline. You
don't
need me anymore right? After all, you know how to take care of yourself
now and you know how you can give your heart wings. Isn't that right
Melfina?
Melfina: Yes. Yes, thank you.
Cyber Melfina: Goodbye.
Melfina: Farewell.
// The Galactic Leyline vanishes after Outlaw Star "and Draco " flies out.
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To Be Continued
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// At Blue Heaven...
Swanzo: Pioneer McCoy. Grim Lotus. Hot Ice Hilda. When an outlaw gets a
reputation they really get a nickname that fits them. Hmm... I wonder what
would be a good
name for that kid?
Mikey: What about 'I'll pay you when I make it big' Gene?
Swanzo: No, that's a little over the top. Now that you mention it, I hear
he's back on Sentinel 3, getting into all kinds of trouble.
// At Clyde's Bar...
Iris: Hey Clyde, guess what I heard, Gene's come back to Sentinel 3. How
come he hasn't come in yet?
Clyde: I'm not sure. Good question.
// At jail...
Guard: Alright, get out Gene Starwind.
// Outside, Jim gets him.
Jim: I'm not surprised.
Gene: Man, I can't believe they haven't forgotten about that.
Jim: Just be glad that you're only getting off with a 200000 wong fine. You
really trashed the space port's equipment.
Gene: That's because we were attacked by those pirates, remember? Anyway, I
hear the air traffic controller was in on it.
Jim: That's why you're getting off with just a fine.
Gene: Hmm. Hey, where did you get the 200000 from?
Jim: Same place as always. He lent us what we needed to resupply. But he
wants to hear how we're planning to repay him, so what's the plan?
Gene: A crime is a crime. If he can't wait until we make it big, we'll just
have to skip town on him.
Jim: Hit it big huh?
// At the spaceport...
Fred: I can't believe Twilight Suzuka has been traveling with Gene all this
time without me knowing.
Suzuka: Don't worry about it. My employer can't seem to get together the
cash to pay my fees so there's no longer any reason for me to try to hurt
you.
Fred: Actually, I had a little something to do with that. So, staying on
with him? Well?
Suzuka: Gene says that he's going to be heading to the Arasean system but
I've already been there so I think I'll decline.
Aisha: I'm gonna try and make ends meet here somehow until the empire gives
me the free ride home they promised me.
Jim: Hey Fred, are the parts loaded?
Fred: They were loaded a long time ago. This brings my loan to you to about
1.6 million wong.
Jim: Send the payment plans to that loser.
Fred: Speaking of which, where's Gene?
Jim: Um... he's out seeing someone.
// Melfina is at the graveyard.
Gene: Who's the bouquet for?
Melfina: For everyone who's gone because of the Leyline. Its the least I
could do.
Gene: That's nice.
// He grabs her cheek like he did before.
Melfina: Ugh.
Gene: Hey, don't forget what happened back there. You are you, know?
// She does the same.
Melfina: Don't worry, I haven't forgotten. I know I'm still me, that's all I
need to know.
Melfina and Gene: (laughs)
Gene: Hey, what do you say we get out of here?
Melfina: Sure.
(not original)
Scene Charlie and Hilda are there waiting for them at the space port Charlie
shakes Gene's hand
Charlie " I guess this is good bye again!"
Gene "AGAIN??"
Charlie " You still don't recognize me hu.. Well I'm not supprised.. Gene
were are even now, the XGP is yours!
Gene "HU MINE??!!"
Hilda "And I'm not even charging you for browning it!"
Gene "But ..but..
Hilda "*she puts her finger on Gene's lips* "Listen Gene we had some good
times but Melfina is yours and Charlie is mine" *smirks at Charlie who is
blushing*
Hilda "Just make it big hu Gene and keep Melfina safe that's all I ask !"
Gene " Un .. OK!"
Jim "What do you mean Charlie by saying that you and Gene are even??!"
Charlie "Well with the money Hilda owed me , I managed to convince her to
let me have the XGP so I could give it to you and Gene to pay the debt I
owed him?"
Scene;Jim looks at Gene and he shrugs!
Gene "What debt? Who are you?"
Charlie " We meat many years back then I was a nerdy programmer who was
about to be assassinated by the space forces
Gene ".. I remember now your Goku!
Charlie Ha yes I am!
Gene *Flashes back to scene of a nerdy guy contacting Gene many years ago
asking for his help* " I never thought I'd see you again!"
Charlie "You helped fake my death and though the assassins, you inspired be
to
become and Outlaw and not only an Outlaw but THE BEST!
Charlie *flash back * Scene Gene accepts his offer to help fake his death,
even though he has no money
"Gene you helped me even though I had nothing and I can finally pay you pack
for risking your life for me!"
Gene " I think this is a bit much for that job"
Charlie "Ha consider it interest Besides do you remember what you had to
go
though! * flash back to that day* .
Jim "Listen let them find you and chase you to this intersection. When the
truck passes you'll drop into the sewer Then Gene will pop up discussed to
look like you. He will then lead them to a boat with the dummy in it! They
will fire at the boat and once Gene sneaks of the back though a secret door
it will blow along with the dummy. Charlie "But they will know the body
isn't mine!"
Jim "I took care of that, that's why we took your dental records, all that
will be left of the dummy will be those fake teeth, they'll never know!
Charlie "Thank you some day I pay you back BIG TIME! I swear!"
Jim *thinks why did Gene take this job he doesn't have any money and it's
really dangerous "yea ok"
Scene back in sewer Gene gets ready
Gene Yeaugh! Why did I take this job, * He remembers Charlie begging him to
help him and the story of a powerful ship and a tale of him and some
engineers making a bio android real.* Charlie "I swear I'll pay you back
some how! Gene "He was probably a lying!* He the remembers the look in
Charlie's eye much like to look in his eyes when he was a kid helpless in
the world just after he landed. "I'll do it" now rang in Gene's ears* Gene
"NA It's all for a good cause! Besides it will be fun! Scene; In Gene
earpearce
he hear Jim " are you ready Goku(Charlie) is in position!"
Scene;Charlie sits in a bar nervously sipping a beer. The assassins sneak
in. In
Charlie's ear he hears there hear get ready to move!. Charlie *chugs the
rest of the beer and thinks why me!* Jim "now!" Scene; Charlie Runs out
the
door followed by the assassins they fire at him. He runs down a street and
a
truck stalls behind him as he drops into the sewer. Charlie "Go Gene and
thanks!" Gene "Right"
Scene; he bops up and runs just as the assassins get
around the truck. Then a scene much like the original into happens with
bullets and rocks fly at Gene as he hops over street debris and he races to
the
dock Gene "Shit!" Gene escapes by the boat and the assassins follow after
steeling a speed boat. They chase Gene and catch him shooting at him , Gene
fires back between two drums then once they pull back he ducks out the back
through a secret door. The assassins come back and fire at the dummy and
the ship explodes Gene allmost gets blown up two but escape underwater and
surfaces behind another his he is pulled in. Jim Gene are you ok?
Gene "I little shined but ok, Charlie made it to the ship right" Jim :Right
those assassins will find those denatures and assume Goku(Charlie) is dead
he'll be safe!" Jim Why you do I he cost us a ship, and allmost your life!
Gene I had too he'll pay us back , some day" Jim "yea When I MAKE IT big"
Gene Yea make it big! LOL Lets go Jim! * End of flashback*
Gene Yea now I remember I got singed because of you and you didn't say they
had
rockets!
Charlie Hay I didn't know
Gene LOL HAAHA!
Scene;Charlie Joins in
Charlie HAHA!
Gene "Ok were even though your are quite late!"
Charlie "Yea when have you ever paid anything on time"
Both laugh
Jim HUPH that was one of my best ideas it even fooled the space forces
assassins but do I get anything NOOO!
Charlie "I didn't forget you Jim look at your computer!"
Jim "HU ...Hay half you debt is gone!"
Charlie "Now were all even HAHA!
Gene "You get that money for the dragonite?"
Charlie "Yes but me and Hilda aren't ready to give up the outlaw life yet we
still have another job to do."
Gene "All ready?"
Charlie YEAP! We could use your help it starts in four months!
Gene Yea.. I think about it"
Charlie " Be on time for once Gene!
Gene "haha"
Gene "What is it?"
Charlie "A bank, let's just say it's impossible and if we do it it'll make
us richer then kings!"
Gene "Your on After we make it big in Arasean we'll meat back up with you!"
Jim "Oh no here we go again!"
Gene "First we go to Arasean then after we get some money to pay off the
rest of your debt and make it big then we'll help Charlie and have enough
to retire on!
Jim "Ugg!"
Charlie and Hilda "BYE Gene see you soon!
Gene "You can count on it!"
Scene Charlie and Hilda leave for the Draco
Hilda "Why wait Four months?"
Charlie "So me and Gene can get to know our lady friends?"
Hilda "really?!" *kiss*
Charlie "Maybe I should have made it longer!"
Hilda "We'll have to make do!"
(original)
// They do stuff at the port and the ship gets ready to take off.
Gene: Outlaw Star, now ready for liftoff.
// It takes off
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See You Later
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// Later...
Gene: Oh man... how the heck could we break down in the middle of nowhere
like this?
Jim: Because we keep cutting corners on our maintenance bill.
Gilliam: It seems the parts replacement and repairs have been completed.
Repair Guy: The repairs are all done. Just sign here please.
Gene: Yeah, fine.
Repair Guy: Okay, that's everything. Bon voyage for now.
Gene: Yeah right thanks a lot.
// The guy leaves.
Gene: Well, what do you say we get going... huh?
// They find Aisha and Suzuka in the control room.
Gene: Suzuka? Aisha? What are you two doing here?
Suzuka: I've already been to some of these places, but it may prove more
interesting with you people. We hitched a ride with the Repair Ship guy.
Aisha: And when I thought about it, you guys still owe me for all of those
times I saved ya. Until you guys pay me back in full, I don't think its
going too far
to say your ship and all of its equipment belongs to me.
Gene: Alright fine, you got me.
Gilliam: It appears everybody is ready, I will prepare to get us underway.
Melfina: Systems all green.
Gene: Outlaw Star ready to launch.
All: Roger.
( not original)
Minwhile abroad the Draco
Charlie " By now Suskia and Asai should have caught up with Gene , Boy
won't he be suprised!"
Hilda "What do you think will happen to Gene?
Charlie "He'll get into trouble and maybe even make it big!'
Hilda "HAHa What do you think his nick name would be?
Charlie HA "how about big Gene?"
Hilda " Na what about cheery?
Charlie "HAHA NA what about Pure Skill or sheer luck!"
Hilda :-)"I guess we know soon enough" *kiss*
Charlie "MMM! Hugs Hilda Your probably right You know I know the perfect
place to go the Hot springs on Planet Tenrai
Hilda "Sounds good Lets go!
Scene they go into to warp and we watch there signature fade .
The End??
(original)
Narrator: Gene Starwind, native of planet earth, outlaw age 20. His partner
is Jim Hawking, age 11, computer engineer. Additionally, it has been
confirmed that
his navigator is Melfina. Rumor has it that he is accompanied by an
assassin who
goes by the name Suzuka; and a Ctarl Ctarl named Aisha, but until we have
more
information this remains unconfirmed. His ship is called the Outlaw Star.
For a new outlaw
yet to make a name for himself, his reputation precedes him. However, the
nickname he
earns for himself will depend on the effect of his future actions.
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The End??
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Hoped you like it that's it for now email me at Chip43_@hotmail.com with
your comments!
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The last episode! Or maybe it's just the beginning! There's the drill
one more time.
This story is by Charlie Regan and the story and idea are his!
Here is the last episode it's much the same idea as before,
original script woven with my story! (Hay it saves me from writing whole
episodes and keeps as close to the original as I can! LIKE it or not E-mail
me at Chip43_@hotmail.com
Return to Space(Edited to include Charlie's story ots B Hilda doesn't die!)
Here is the original as always http://www.escaflowneonline.com/os/os26.txt
in case you want it!
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(original)
// Gene "and Charlie" runs through a dark hallway to the center of the
Leyline.
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Leyline: We shall test thy worthiness. Present the maiden.
Hazanko: She is here.
// Melfina is connected to the Leyline.
Leyline: It is the maiden. The Leyline is considering. The Leyline will now
converse with the supplicant.
// A face similar to Melfina's comes out of the top of the Leyline.
Face: That which has come with the maiden, tell me, what is thy desire?
Hazanko: Power, immense power, so absolute that even the Tendo King would
bow before me and allow me to crush the emperor.
Face: That is thy desire?
Gene: Hey there, hold on a minute. At last... I came for my second place
prize.
Hazanko: Blast it, Gene Starwind!
(not original)
Charlie "Hold it Gene!"
(original)
Gene: Eat this!
// He shoots Hazanko, who is sucked into the shell. Gene gets blasted again.
Gene: Ah!
// He collapses. Gwen walks by him.
Gwen: Well, and the third one after all. How efficient of you. Now I don't
have to destroy anyone. So tell me, is the Leyline the accursed record?
(not original)
Charlie "Forget about me Gwen?" Scene Charlie charges the X-7 gun
Gwen "Are you mad?!
Charlie "YES!"
Charlie "Gene are you all right?" *thinks cocky basted.... that shell isn't
powerful enough!*
Gwen "I must know!
Face: It has that power, however. Its power goes beyond that.
Gwen: Oh, so its the Keylines. Causality can be manipulated here. Hence the
name Leyline. By manipulating the factor we call fate, as if it were a
physical law.
Can I finally learn what I want to know? Everything I want to know?
Face: I will answer all. I will bestow all.
(not original)
Gene "I'm ok.... shoot that bastard!"
(original)
Gwen: Just a moment, now just wait a minute. If I'm not alive you see, if I
die, everything that I've learned will be lost forever. Don't you
understand?
(Not original)
Charlie" Gene that shell was not enough, you idiot! no your down to your
last
shell! we have to work together He'll Be back!"
Gene "then lets get Melfina and go!
(original)
Gene; Melfina, are you okay? Melfina?
Melfina: Gene.
Gene: How do I turn Melfina back to the way she was?
Gwen: Gene, wake up. We've finally reached the Leyline. Aren't you happy? Or
at least curious? Come, come, what is it that you want? Is it political
power? Or is it
money? Information? Nothing you can imagine is unreasonable. You can claim
it. Anything.
Anything you want. Everything you want is right here. Right now.
(not original)
Charlie *thinks I could be really rich, to bad have to save the damsel*
"Awancer the dam question Gwen!"
(original)
Face: Thou who has come with the maiden, what is your desire?
Gwen: What, what's that?
// Hazanko returns.
Hazanko: I am Hazanko. A caster attack will not work against me. It is
useless.
Gene: And I am Gene Starwind. An outlaw not in the habit of listening to
warnings. I'm here to take back Melfina.
(not original)
Charlie "And I'm Charlie the best and this is my little friend! I doubt even
you can take an attack for both our weapons at once!
Hazanko "Impressive but I can tell your bluffing!
Charlie "Me and Gene aren't leaving with out Melfina! Scene Charlie cocks
the
X-7 gun and prepares to fire
(original)
Hazanko: Heh heh heh. You and your friends don't know the first thing about
her. Using the secrets that we have uncovered, Melfina is a mere puppet
that we have created.
Melfina: Huh?
Gwen: Yes, yes, that's right, that's quite right. She's a puppet.
Gene: Shut up Khan.
(not original)
Charlie "Your wrong about that Khan"
(Original)
Hazanko: The Leyline project was founded a long time ago through the secret
wisdom of the grave of the dragon. It produced a puppet that would be
the key to
entering the Leyline. This puppet was to function as a highly
sophisticated navigational
system that would eventually open the doors of the Leyline. That puppet
is none other
than Melfina.
Melfina: So I'm just a mere puppet?
Gene: That's enough!
Melfina: You knew all along Gene?
Gene: Melfina, the answer you needed wasn't in your past. The answer you
were looking for is...
Hazanko: I'll give you that answer. Melfina, you're nothing more than a tool
that we needed.
(not original)
Charlie "Don't listen to him Melfina you more that the ships navigation
system!"
Melfina "I am,?.. How do you know?
Charlie "I read the report too. It's true that is part of the reason your
created but your so much more you life is what you make of it ! You as much
a human as me YOU ARE NOT JUST A TOOL! Melfina You have people that care
about you!"
Hazanko "That's just hot air she's a tool!"
Melfina "I...I don't know what to believe Charlie!"
Melfina: Did you bring me here because you knew you could use me Gene?
(original)
Gene: No, I didn't!
Hazanko: Oh really?
Melfina: This whole time I've been your tool?
Hazanko: That's it precisely.
Gene "and Charlie": He's lying!
Hazanko: Absurd!
(not original)
Charlie "Fire Gene !!"
(original)
Gene: Yeah!
Melfina: Gene!
(not original)
Scene Gene shoots his last shell and Charlie shoot the X-7 gun with a
blinding beam of light, Hazanko counters the caster but not the X-7 blast
and there is a huge explosion
(original)
Gene"and Charlie": Aaaaaah!
Leyline: Danger. Danger. They are gone. They are gone. Return them. Return
them.
// On the Geomancer...
Tobigiera: Its already been almost 24 hours since Lord Hazanko set out. I
can't believe that no one has contacted the ship.
// On the Outlaw Star...
Jim: Gilliam, has there been any word from Gene yet?
Gilliam: I'm sorry, but I've received no word at all.
Suzuka: Jim, lets just try to remain calm and wait for him.
Aisha: That's right, just try and stay calm. Stay calm. Stay calm. Ahhh!
How
can I stay calm at a time like this?!
// On the Shangri-La, a cyborg like Ron wakes up with Harry front of him.
Harry: Hey Ron, are you awake?
Ron: Harry... is that you?
(not original)
Harry: Are you ok Ron?
(original)
Ron: Yes.
(not original)
Ron "That blasted Gene!"
Harry "Gene?
Ron "Yea it was him that got me!"
Harry *angrily*"HE did it !! And he stole my love Arrrg!"
Ron "I though you were dead!"
Harry *still pissed* "Charlie managed to save me, but it seems he did it
only to use
me!"
Ron "Don't worry we'll get them!"
Ron "But how did you manage to save me?"
(original)
Harry: I was able to trace down the sensors in your body and bring you back
here to recuperate. You're badly hurt Ron, so I'm afraid you'll be in
there for a while.
Ron: Harry, lets pull out for now. But this is not over yet, is it?
Harry: No, it isn't. Not by a long shot. We'll show 'em what happens when
you cross the MacDougal brothers.
Ron: The MacDougal brothers, huh?
// They leave. Meanwhile, electric currents move towards the ships.
Gene: Gene Starwind.
Melfina: Melfina.
Hazanko: Hazanko.
Gwen: Gwen Khan.
(not original)
Charlie: Charles Joseph Regan IV "The Best" aka Goku
Scene; The representations of Hazanko and Gene and Charlie fight.
Scene : Charlie wakes up in cyber space Melfina is there.
Charlie "Melfina are you ok?"
Melfina "Yes"
Melfina "What is it you desire?"
Charlie "Your safety,... Melfina I had to keep this a secret because it
could endanger many of my friends but now that were alone I have something
to tell you. Many years ago I was part of the core of engineers that
designed your matrix. Your more than a machine! The hirer ups didn't even
know about it but all the programmer agreed to make you real.
It took tremendous work and at great risk, but we did it ! Everything
about is
human, your not a puppet or a machine!
I quit that organization after that because they wanted to use you for evil
purposes. I managed to hide the identities of the other programmers but I
was
found out and nearly assigned but I managed to escape with believe it or
not Gene's help. He inspired me to become an outlaw and not just any outlaw
but the best! After I escaped I then trained very hard and built my
reputation. Once I
heard that the pirates had the XGP I had no choice but too leaked the
information
about the XGP , to the one person who could get it Hilda! She succeed and
stole it. Of course I had to join up with her to make sure she took good
care of you. I was quite suprised to see Gene traveling there, I barely
recognized him after all those years, He of course didn't recognize me, heck
I
barely would recognize me!, anyway you know what happen after that! I was to
far away to help but I knew Gene would not let you get hurt !
*Melfina cries*
Charlie "I don't have the awancers to the question of the meaning of life or
the reason of creation, I'm no God. I do know that life is a journey and
your
have to live it to find it's meaning for your self. Just do good and love
others and receive love and try to have some adventure and fun :-)
Melfina "Thakyou"
Charlie "Besides your safety that I'll take a mountain of high density
dragonite in a collapsible container the size of a small box and some coffee
if you have any my head hurts!
Melfina *giggle*
Charlie " How's Gene?" "Will we be brought back?"
Melfina " He is OK it will take more to bring him back"
Charlie "He is good for you Melfina, you make a good couple go to him he
needs you and you need him!"
Melfina "Hanzonko will ask for immense power will you fight him ?
Charlie "I'll do it for the coffee and enough power to help,,.. oh yea and
the dragonitre! "WE can't let that
guy loose with all the power of the Leylin!"
Melfina "Then I'll send you back"
Charlie "I'll be waiting ,.. and Mel. you will find Gene does care about
you! No one would go through all this if they didn't!"
Melfina :-) Bye for now Charlie your a good man."
Charlie "I'm The BEST LOL!"
(original)
Gene wakes in a field.
Jim: Gene!
Melfina: Gene!
Gene: Melfina.
Melfina: Gene, I'm now connected to the will and the desires of the Galactic
Leyline. Hazanko's Tao magic and your caster's power have somehow reacted
and
canceled each other out and we've all ceased functioning.
Gene: Are we dead then?
Melfina: The answer to that is both yes and no. The will of the Leyline is
keeping us alive in a different location. In my current state I can
explain to you what
the Galactic Leyline is. Its like a galactic library left by a now extinct
race that
possessed a highly advanced understanding of science and technology.
However to
humanity, we may think of it as like a machine god. After you finished
healing yourself, and
return to reality, the Leyline will probably grant your every desire.
Gene: Are you saying that this isn't reality?
Melfina: This is data.
// They are in the data world.
Gene: Is this cyberspace?
// Gwen Khan appears.
Gwen: Hello Gene. Thanks to you I learned what I wanted to know. Now I have
the answers to my questions. Well goodbye then, I am data, and data's me.
Goodbye.
Goodbye.
Gene: He makes absolutely no sense.
Melfina: This is the data repository. Professor Khan's objective must have
been to gain as much knowledge as possible. Gene, is there something you
desire? Say it.
By using the Leyline, I can grant anything your heart desires and make it
real Gene.
Gene: There isn't anything the Leyline can give me. All I really want is for
you to return with me.
Melfina: Gene.
Gene: Oh no, I made you cry again. Melfina, what is it that you wish for?
Melfina: I want to stay who I am. I want to be with you forever Gene.
Gene: Well that's what I want too.
// They kiss.
Gene: Then come away with me Melfina, right now.
Melfina: Yes. Oh.
Gene: What is it?
Melfina: Hazanko is preparing to leave here right now. He has all the power
that he wished for. If we don't stop him the entire universe will be in
danger.
Gene: What should we do?
Melfina: We'll join forces, I'll combine my power with yours and then we'll
fight him to the end.
(not original)
Gene "What about Charlie?"
Melfina " The gun he used and allmost destroyed everything"
But he was saved also He has agree to fight for some coffee , enough power
to help and dragonite
Gene 0_0 *thinks I should have held out for some coffee!*
(not original)
Scene; Charlie appears on the Draco with his coffee and box of dragonite
Draco "Captain??!"
Hilda "Charlie??"
Charlie "I'm baaack!"
Hilda" I was worried,.. Is Mel and Gene ok?"
Draco "I was also quite concerned for your health!
Charlie "I'm fine Draco prepare to power up we have a fight on your hands!"
Charlie "Melfina is ok... but we now have to fight Hazanko and he has the
tremendous power of the Leyline
Hilda "Sounds like good odds"
Charlie *sips coffee* MMM! good .."Gene will help and I received more than
coffee and this box!
Scene Ship is enhanced with power
Charlie "Can you handle the weapons system?
Hilda YOU bet!,,... Charlie there something between you and Mel isn't
there?
Charlie "Well.. Yes and No, I'm more her farther than anything"
Hilda 0_0! *Insert anime drop on head* HU?!"
Charlie "I'll let you in later *kiss* lets just say Gene is the only man for
Mel and your the only woman for me!"
Hilda "Thanks" "But if you think I'm settling down.."
Charlie "Wouldn't think of it! ;-)
Hilda
Charlie "There's Hazanko, Gene hurry up already, we need your help! man
can't that guy be early for once!"
(original)
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Eyecatch
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Hazanko: I finally have it. Power. Power!
// Hazanko melds with the Geomancer.
Jim: What's happening now?
Aisha: What just happened? Hey?
Gilliam: Oh my... What in the world.
// Gene and Melfina return.
Melfina: Systems all green. Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to surprise you.
Gene, I'm right here.
Jim: What happened Gene?
Gene: Don't worry I'll fill you in on all the magic soon enough Jim. Outlaw
Star, get ready to launch.
Jim: Its a miracle isn't it.
Gene: Yeah, must be. I met God.
Melfina: Gene... we're currently linked directly to the Galactic Leyline.
Nows the time to free your mind and fight with all you got. You should be
much stronger
than usual.
Gene: That's a roger. Lets do it!
(not original)
Charlie "Gene were ready here!"
Gene " Ha you sly dog! lets go save the world!
(original)
// They fight. In the cyberspace, Gene and Hazanko fight.
Hazanko: You'll pay. I'll make you pay Gene Starwind!
(not original)
Scene; Charlie Joins in and cuts Hazanko
(original)
// The Geomancer fires but doesn't take out Outlaw Star.
(not original)
Scene;The Draco swoops in and fires damaging the Geomancer
(original)
// They fight. Gene headbutts Hazanko.
Hazanko: Blast you.
Gene: Heh heh.
// Hazanko attacks him with wires coming out of his body.
Gene: Ah!
Hazanko: I don't know why I'm wasting time like this when I can absorb you
right into myself.
Melfina: Gene, remember we're not alone anymore. Together, work together.
Wake up Gene!
Jim: Gene!
Suzuka: Gene!
Aisha: Gene!
(not original)
Hilda "GENE!"
Charlie "Gene! "Forget about us all ready HAH??!"
(original)
Gene: Okay!
Hazanko: What the... huh?
Gene: Ah!
// Gene breaks free and everyone else appears. The Outlaw Star transforms.
"And so does he Draco"
Hazanko: Die!
// They "all " fight. Hazanko dies.
(Not original)
Scene ; The Outlaw Star dives in from the top while the Draco comes in from
the bottom they pass eachother mid way and Charlie gives Gene the thumbs
up, Gene returns with the v for victory sign.
Hazanko: Ah!
// Meanwhile, Melfina sees a girl who looks just like herself in cyberspace.
Cyber Melfina: Melfina... Melfina... Melfina... I'm glad that we could meet
Melfina.
Melfina: Who are you?
Cyber Melfina: The Galactic Leyline is going to be moved to a new location.
I'm going with it so I came to say goodbye too.
Melfina: You're me, aren't you?
Cyber Melfina: Right. I'm the you that's the maiden of the Leyline. You
don't
need me anymore right? After all, you know how to take care of yourself
now and you know how you can give your heart wings. Isn't that right
Melfina?
Melfina: Yes. Yes, thank you.
Cyber Melfina: Goodbye.
Melfina: Farewell.
// The Galactic Leyline vanishes after Outlaw Star "and Draco " flies out.
---------------
To Be Continued
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// At Blue Heaven...
Swanzo: Pioneer McCoy. Grim Lotus. Hot Ice Hilda. When an outlaw gets a
reputation they really get a nickname that fits them. Hmm... I wonder what
would be a good
name for that kid?
Mikey: What about 'I'll pay you when I make it big' Gene?
Swanzo: No, that's a little over the top. Now that you mention it, I hear
he's back on Sentinel 3, getting into all kinds of trouble.
// At Clyde's Bar...
Iris: Hey Clyde, guess what I heard, Gene's come back to Sentinel 3. How
come he hasn't come in yet?
Clyde: I'm not sure. Good question.
// At jail...
Guard: Alright, get out Gene Starwind.
// Outside, Jim gets him.
Jim: I'm not surprised.
Gene: Man, I can't believe they haven't forgotten about that.
Jim: Just be glad that you're only getting off with a 200000 wong fine. You
really trashed the space port's equipment.
Gene: That's because we were attacked by those pirates, remember? Anyway, I
hear the air traffic controller was in on it.
Jim: That's why you're getting off with just a fine.
Gene: Hmm. Hey, where did you get the 200000 from?
Jim: Same place as always. He lent us what we needed to resupply. But he
wants to hear how we're planning to repay him, so what's the plan?
Gene: A crime is a crime. If he can't wait until we make it big, we'll just
have to skip town on him.
Jim: Hit it big huh?
// At the spaceport...
Fred: I can't believe Twilight Suzuka has been traveling with Gene all this
time without me knowing.
Suzuka: Don't worry about it. My employer can't seem to get together the
cash to pay my fees so there's no longer any reason for me to try to hurt
you.
Fred: Actually, I had a little something to do with that. So, staying on
with him? Well?
Suzuka: Gene says that he's going to be heading to the Arasean system but
I've already been there so I think I'll decline.
Aisha: I'm gonna try and make ends meet here somehow until the empire gives
me the free ride home they promised me.
Jim: Hey Fred, are the parts loaded?
Fred: They were loaded a long time ago. This brings my loan to you to about
1.6 million wong.
Jim: Send the payment plans to that loser.
Fred: Speaking of which, where's Gene?
Jim: Um... he's out seeing someone.
// Melfina is at the graveyard.
Gene: Who's the bouquet for?
Melfina: For everyone who's gone because of the Leyline. Its the least I
could do.
Gene: That's nice.
// He grabs her cheek like he did before.
Melfina: Ugh.
Gene: Hey, don't forget what happened back there. You are you, know?
// She does the same.
Melfina: Don't worry, I haven't forgotten. I know I'm still me, that's all I
need to know.
Melfina and Gene: (laughs)
Gene: Hey, what do you say we get out of here?
Melfina: Sure.
(not original)
Scene Charlie and Hilda are there waiting for them at the space port Charlie
shakes Gene's hand
Charlie " I guess this is good bye again!"
Gene "AGAIN??"
Charlie " You still don't recognize me hu.. Well I'm not supprised.. Gene
were are even now, the XGP is yours!
Gene "HU MINE??!!"
Hilda "And I'm not even charging you for browning it!"
Gene "But ..but..
Hilda "*she puts her finger on Gene's lips* "Listen Gene we had some good
times but Melfina is yours and Charlie is mine" *smirks at Charlie who is
blushing*
Hilda "Just make it big hu Gene and keep Melfina safe that's all I ask !"
Gene " Un .. OK!"
Jim "What do you mean Charlie by saying that you and Gene are even??!"
Charlie "Well with the money Hilda owed me , I managed to convince her to
let me have the XGP so I could give it to you and Gene to pay the debt I
owed him?"
Scene;Jim looks at Gene and he shrugs!
Gene "What debt? Who are you?"
Charlie " We meat many years back then I was a nerdy programmer who was
about to be assassinated by the space forces
Gene ".. I remember now your Goku!
Charlie Ha yes I am!
Gene *Flashes back to scene of a nerdy guy contacting Gene many years ago
asking for his help* " I never thought I'd see you again!"
Charlie "You helped fake my death and though the assassins, you inspired be
to
become and Outlaw and not only an Outlaw but THE BEST!
Charlie *flash back * Scene Gene accepts his offer to help fake his death,
even though he has no money
"Gene you helped me even though I had nothing and I can finally pay you pack
for risking your life for me!"
Gene " I think this is a bit much for that job"
Charlie "Ha consider it interest Besides do you remember what you had to
go
though! * flash back to that day* .
Jim "Listen let them find you and chase you to this intersection. When the
truck passes you'll drop into the sewer Then Gene will pop up discussed to
look like you. He will then lead them to a boat with the dummy in it! They
will fire at the boat and once Gene sneaks of the back though a secret door
it will blow along with the dummy. Charlie "But they will know the body
isn't mine!"
Jim "I took care of that, that's why we took your dental records, all that
will be left of the dummy will be those fake teeth, they'll never know!
Charlie "Thank you some day I pay you back BIG TIME! I swear!"
Jim *thinks why did Gene take this job he doesn't have any money and it's
really dangerous "yea ok"
Scene back in sewer Gene gets ready
Gene Yeaugh! Why did I take this job, * He remembers Charlie begging him to
help him and the story of a powerful ship and a tale of him and some
engineers making a bio android real.* Charlie "I swear I'll pay you back
some how! Gene "He was probably a lying!* He the remembers the look in
Charlie's eye much like to look in his eyes when he was a kid helpless in
the world just after he landed. "I'll do it" now rang in Gene's ears* Gene
"NA It's all for a good cause! Besides it will be fun! Scene; In Gene
earpearce
he hear Jim " are you ready Goku(Charlie) is in position!"
Scene;Charlie sits in a bar nervously sipping a beer. The assassins sneak
in. In
Charlie's ear he hears there hear get ready to move!. Charlie *chugs the
rest of the beer and thinks why me!* Jim "now!" Scene; Charlie Runs out
the
door followed by the assassins they fire at him. He runs down a street and
a
truck stalls behind him as he drops into the sewer. Charlie "Go Gene and
thanks!" Gene "Right"
Scene; he bops up and runs just as the assassins get
around the truck. Then a scene much like the original into happens with
bullets and rocks fly at Gene as he hops over street debris and he races to
the
dock Gene "Shit!" Gene escapes by the boat and the assassins follow after
steeling a speed boat. They chase Gene and catch him shooting at him , Gene
fires back between two drums then once they pull back he ducks out the back
through a secret door. The assassins come back and fire at the dummy and
the ship explodes Gene allmost gets blown up two but escape underwater and
surfaces behind another his he is pulled in. Jim Gene are you ok?
Gene "I little shined but ok, Charlie made it to the ship right" Jim :Right
those assassins will find those denatures and assume Goku(Charlie) is dead
he'll be safe!" Jim Why you do I he cost us a ship, and allmost your life!
Gene I had too he'll pay us back , some day" Jim "yea When I MAKE IT big"
Gene Yea make it big! LOL Lets go Jim! * End of flashback*
Gene Yea now I remember I got singed because of you and you didn't say they
had
rockets!
Charlie Hay I didn't know
Gene LOL HAAHA!
Scene;Charlie Joins in
Charlie HAHA!
Gene "Ok were even though your are quite late!"
Charlie "Yea when have you ever paid anything on time"
Both laugh
Jim HUPH that was one of my best ideas it even fooled the space forces
assassins but do I get anything NOOO!
Charlie "I didn't forget you Jim look at your computer!"
Jim "HU ...Hay half you debt is gone!"
Charlie "Now were all even HAHA!
Gene "You get that money for the dragonite?"
Charlie "Yes but me and Hilda aren't ready to give up the outlaw life yet we
still have another job to do."
Gene "All ready?"
Charlie YEAP! We could use your help it starts in four months!
Gene Yea.. I think about it"
Charlie " Be on time for once Gene!
Gene "haha"
Gene "What is it?"
Charlie "A bank, let's just say it's impossible and if we do it it'll make
us richer then kings!"
Gene "Your on After we make it big in Arasean we'll meat back up with you!"
Jim "Oh no here we go again!"
Gene "First we go to Arasean then after we get some money to pay off the
rest of your debt and make it big then we'll help Charlie and have enough
to retire on!
Jim "Ugg!"
Charlie and Hilda "BYE Gene see you soon!
Gene "You can count on it!"
Scene Charlie and Hilda leave for the Draco
Hilda "Why wait Four months?"
Charlie "So me and Gene can get to know our lady friends?"
Hilda "really?!" *kiss*
Charlie "Maybe I should have made it longer!"
Hilda "We'll have to make do!"
(original)
// They do stuff at the port and the ship gets ready to take off.
Gene: Outlaw Star, now ready for liftoff.
// It takes off
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See You Later
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// Later...
Gene: Oh man... how the heck could we break down in the middle of nowhere
like this?
Jim: Because we keep cutting corners on our maintenance bill.
Gilliam: It seems the parts replacement and repairs have been completed.
Repair Guy: The repairs are all done. Just sign here please.
Gene: Yeah, fine.
Repair Guy: Okay, that's everything. Bon voyage for now.
Gene: Yeah right thanks a lot.
// The guy leaves.
Gene: Well, what do you say we get going... huh?
// They find Aisha and Suzuka in the control room.
Gene: Suzuka? Aisha? What are you two doing here?
Suzuka: I've already been to some of these places, but it may prove more
interesting with you people. We hitched a ride with the Repair Ship guy.
Aisha: And when I thought about it, you guys still owe me for all of those
times I saved ya. Until you guys pay me back in full, I don't think its
going too far
to say your ship and all of its equipment belongs to me.
Gene: Alright fine, you got me.
Gilliam: It appears everybody is ready, I will prepare to get us underway.
Melfina: Systems all green.
Gene: Outlaw Star ready to launch.
All: Roger.
( not original)
Minwhile abroad the Draco
Charlie " By now Suskia and Asai should have caught up with Gene , Boy
won't he be suprised!"
Hilda "What do you think will happen to Gene?
Charlie "He'll get into trouble and maybe even make it big!'
Hilda "HAHa What do you think his nick name would be?
Charlie HA "how about big Gene?"
Hilda " Na what about cheery?
Charlie "HAHA NA what about Pure Skill or sheer luck!"
Hilda :-)"I guess we know soon enough" *kiss*
Charlie "MMM! Hugs Hilda Your probably right You know I know the perfect
place to go the Hot springs on Planet Tenrai
Hilda "Sounds good Lets go!
Scene they go into to warp and we watch there signature fade .
The End??
(original)
Narrator: Gene Starwind, native of planet earth, outlaw age 20. His partner
is Jim Hawking, age 11, computer engineer. Additionally, it has been
confirmed that
his navigator is Melfina. Rumor has it that he is accompanied by an
assassin who
goes by the name Suzuka; and a Ctarl Ctarl named Aisha, but until we have
more
information this remains unconfirmed. His ship is called the Outlaw Star.
For a new outlaw
yet to make a name for himself, his reputation precedes him. However, the
nickname he
earns for himself will depend on the effect of his future actions.
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The End??
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