I AM SOOOOO SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE! Forgive me! Honestly the past two years have flown by in a blink of an eye and I have not had any time to expand on this story until today. (1/31/13) I just got swamped with work and life. I am so sorry!
Thank you to EVERYONE who reviewed on this story they really mean a lot. I just reread the story and reviews. Many of you commented on my spelling…well.. While English is my first and primary language.. That doesn't mean that I know how to spell a lot of words. This was also two years ago. I can honestly say that I have gotten better. …hopefully… As for the title… Yes it is meant to be Secrets Revealed. Epic Spell Check failure there. But I am too lazy to change the title.
Review Wall:
EmilyF.6- Thank you for being the very first reviewer. I am glad that I was able to make you laugh. I hope that you come back to read the rest of the story when I get around to posting it and that you like it as much as you did in the beginning. Cool name by the way.
PwettyGurl-Alright, you made the comment that Ren doesn't seem like the type to swear…I see Ren as somebody that has a hidden playfull side but still somebody that you don't want to mess around with. I get the playful side because when he was on Dark Moon and he plays around on the piano. I took that as a playfull scene yet a growing scene for him as an actor. And also him as a badass because well…he scared the crap out of the Beagle. There are also hint of him cursing throughout the Manga which I like better then the anime. I'm glad that you like this story. I still have no idea where I am going with it but what the heck. As they say, 'Roll with the punches.' Oooo….lightbulb….
Leavesfallingup-Yes. Sho and Ren are cousins. Will it be the end of the world? I don't know. Will there be a fight between the two? Quite possibly. Will Ren lose his famous temper? Debating that right now actually.
21han-You brought up an interesting question. 'If Julie is not American, how come she have blond hair? Is it natural?' Well… I will explain that either in this chapter or in the next couple. I actually remember thinking that a couple years ago of how I was going to explain that, I reread your review and it came back to be. So, if you are still reading this story, then wait awhile longer because that willbe answered.
MissTiburtius-I am glad that you like my story. Yes, Ren noticed the similarity between Amanda and his mother right off the bat. And the fact the she has their father eyes was solid proof. He was still processing that when Kyoko asked him if he was okay.
Laura-Ella-I am glad that you are liking this story. Again, yes my English is bad when I don't take the tim to go back and proofread, but, I will do that with the upcoming chapters and any upcoming stories that I may or may not have.
HanaYuuki-I'm updating, I'm Updating! I'm updating! I can't help but imagine their surprised expressions too.
Rya-chan X Shii-chan- Thank you for the corrections!
TIGGI1-My latest reviewer. A special thank you to you for making me actually do something on my day off and type again. It feels great to be doing this again. Thank you.
Well Everyone, Here is chapter nine, after a two year hiatus, I hope that it is as good the previous chapters. If not, please be kind when you review.
Everyone watched as the door closed behind him then turned to Selena. Kuu spoke up. "You got on to Kyoko for getting a 92 on a test? She was how old, six?"
Selena just glared at him, "she needed to be taught that anything less than perfect would be accepted by me."
Sho stood up and pushed in his chair. He gripped the back until his knuckles turned white and he said in a low, tight voice, "You were never here. You never saw her tears when you left to go out at night. You never saw how hard she pushed herself to study for those tests. Or the excitement in her voice on our way home. That day, she was so proud, she just wanted a hug, but no." Sho looked up and glared at her. "You were to busy being a selfish bitch wollowing in self pity, 'oh I lost my husband, oh poor me, wah wah wah, nobody wants me, nobody loves me.' SHE LOVED YOU!" he growled as he pointed at a stiff Kyoko. "And you ruined that when you decided to leave and not show up for the next ten years. Where were you when she needed a mother? That's right. Gone. Vanished. Nobody knew how to contacted you. You are a sorry excuse for a mother. No, you shouldn't even be called that. You just gave birth to her, but that is it. Please excuse me." He took a deep breath and then walked out the door.
Five minutes earlier
Ren walked out the door and ignored the curious looks on his coworker's faces. He spotted a clearing about twenty yards away and headed there. The conversation from inside replayed in his head and he unbuttoned his shirt as he walked. By the time he got to the clearing he laid his jacket, dress shirt and watch on a smooth rock. He then proceeded to stretch for a few minutes.
Everyone stopped what they were doing and watched as he stretched and then they gasped as he surprised them by jumping up kicking the tree that was standing in the middle of the clearing. They barley noticed that Fuwa Sho had exited the house and was walking over to Ren, while also taking off his shirt and watch along with his ring and jewelry.
Ren paused as Sho entered and watched.
Sho set his stuff to the side and tossed him a roll of bandages. Ren glanced at them then started to wrap his hands while Sho did the same. "Don't what to hurt those girly hands off yours now do we?" Sho said in a teasing voice. Ren glared at him and threw the bandage back at him when he was done. It bounced off his head. "Ow." Sho said rubbing his head.
Ren walked ten yards away and said in a taunting voice. "Would you like to see how girly my hands can be?" Sho set the bandages aside and then walked to stand in front of him. "Any rules, or just to get the tension out?"
"No breaking bones and try not to sprain anything." Ren said smirking. "Prepare yourself." He got into position and Sho followed easily.
"Let's see how long that gentleman façade can last." Ren smiled and attacked.
Inside
Kuu, Julie, Hikari and Ryuji glared at Selena. Lory looked at her disappointed while Amanda climbed into Kyoko's lap and stuck her tongue out at Selena. "Bad lady. Hurt Onee-san" She buried her face in her shoulder and hugged Kyoko tightly to her. Well, as tightly as a six year old could. Julie had to blink back tears while Kuu gave Selena a 'cat-who-ate-the-canary' smirk. Kyoko hugged Amanda to her and kissed her head. She lifted her head and looked at Lory, "Um..President..grandfather..what do I call you?"
Lory smiled and said, "In private you may call me grandfather. When we are in public it will have to be President since you work for me still."
She nodded then said, "Me being you granddaughter had nothing with getting the job did it?"
Lory laughed and said, "No, I didn't even know who you were when I saw you. It wasn't until you got to know Maria did I actually look at your folder. I noticed some similarities between you two and I wanted to check. It didn't click until I asked you about high school and I called the Fuwa's. They explained everything, I hired a PI to find your mother, after a month with no luck, I contacted a lawyer and we worked out something. Since Selena-san had given custody over to the Fuwa's when she abandoned you, they quickly gave me custody of you. As you grandfather. I have full custody of you. You're mother cannot take you away or make any decisions for you. This is until you turn 18."
Kypko smiled. She stood up with Amanda in her arms and bowed her head. "Thank you grandfather. If you will all excuse me I will go make sure that Ren and Sho have not killed each other yet. Amanda, would you like to go see onii-san?" Amanda nodded and Kyoko opened the door. She paused. "TSURUGA REN AND FUWA SHO! STOP THAT THIS INSTANT!"
