Hi ummm Brambleclaw umm Jazz Band is , I got we better start the story before I (as in Brambleclawhater8) say more random stuff (pickles). Oh yea DISCLAIMER we do not own warriors. And ACTION. Also Jayfeather24 is going to recommend a band for you peeps, they are called Straight No Chaser . Look them up (or don't) Okay ACTION.

Edit: So first please don't get mad at us for editing this chapter beffore publeshing a knew one it's just that...we had some changes to make (Bracken kit and Greykit are now Rainbowkit and Morningkit) and so yeah.

I raced after Sunpaw and when I got close enough I yelled,

"Sunpaw!" I paused to cough. "Come back!"

When he heard me he skidded to a halt and whipped around.

"Leave me alone you stupid apprentice!"

"Sunpaw what hap-"

"I said leave me ALONE." He turned his back on me then sat down and burst into tears. I stood there awkwardly before I padded closer to him and tried to lick his ear comfortingly.

"It's all go-" I stifled a cough. "Going to be okay."

He whirled around and snarled,

"I'm not some stupid kit who needs comfort!"

I flinched and stepped back then he turned around and buried his muzzle in his paws.

"Sunpaw? What hap-" I crouched and began to cough uncontrollably. "Happened?"

"I don't want to talk about it."

"Okay. I'll wait." I stopped to cough. "until you want to."

I sat down and settled into a comfortable position to wait. I waited for what seemed like ages. My eyes slowly began to droop before Sunpaw finally stood up.

"I thought I told you to go away."

I got up as well.

"Well I want to know what happened."

"If you go back to camp you'll find out."

"Well I want." I coughed. "you to tell me."

"You're going to keep bothering me till I tell you right?"

"Yes."

"Fine." He sighed and sat down again. "It's Skypelt."

"Is he still sick?"

"He's dead! and it's all my FAULT."He burst into tears again.

I stood in shocked silence before finally replying, "I'm sorry,I know what it's like to lose someone you care about."

He scoffed and growled, "You have no idea what it's like! To lose everyone you care about! To have no one left who cares about you!" He snarled then sprang up and dashed away. I stared after him for a few seconds, I started to get mad at Sunpaw after all I was nice to him and felt sorry for him, but he just acted like a jerk back to me. I shook my head then turned away and started to head back for camp. Still though I couldn't believe Skypelt was dead. "When the sky falls the sun will lose it's flame leaving the wind at the mercy of the cold." I suddenly remembered the message that Goldenflame and Rippledawn had sent me. I figured that the part with the sky falling was Skypelt dying,and I knew the part about the sun losing it's flame was about Sunpaw but I couldn't figure out how it worked, and the last part I assumed was about Windclan but again I didn't know how it connected. I thought about it all the way back to camp. I went through the entrance and saw the entire clan gathered around Skypelts body. I sighed and padded over to join them. Before I got there Azuresky blocked my path, he looked really mad.

"Where have you been?"

"I-" I paused to cough. "I followed Sunpaw to see what was wrong."

All the anger left his eyes, replaced by worry. "Tallpaw are you ok?"

"I'm fi-"I started to cough again."Fine."

"No your not."

"Yes I a-"I was interrupted by a fit of coughing.

"No you aren't!"

"Yes I am!"

"You should have seen Sunpaw ages ago!"

"I didn't need to cause I'm fine!"

"What are you guys arguing about?"

"Tallpaw's sick."

"I'm not." I stopped to cough. "Sick."

Redstreak just looked at us for a second before she mowed.

"Tallpaw,I agree with Azuresky you are sick and you should have gone to the medicine cat den ."

"But...I guess you're right, but I can't go to the medicine cat den now "

"I know,where did Sunpaw go anyway?"

"I don't know he just ran off."

"You guys realize that it's half moon right? He probably went to moon stone with the other medicine cats."

We all turned to look at Runningnight.

"Oh okay, thanks for telling us." Azuresky turned back to me. "Then you can go see him when he gets back, you should go wait in the medicine cat den for him. "

"Okay." I padded over to Skypelts body and pushed my muzzle into his fur.

"I'll miss you Skypelt." I whispered. I got up and dragged myself over to the medicine cat den. I padded inside and sat down to wait. Slowly my eyes began to droop.

"Hey Tallpaw."

"Huh, what? Oh hi Silentflower what are you doing here?"

"I came to check on Icekit."

"Oh okay."

I slowly closed my eyes and slumped to the floor. I awoke back on the windswept plain again.

"Goldenflame! Rippledawn! Are you here!?"

"No Tallpaw. I need to speak to you."

I whirled around to see a light gray cat walking towards me.

"Who are you?"

"I'm Stormfeather."

"What do you want with me?"

"I need you to tell my brother, Sunpaw to stop being a jerk."

"Why?"

"If he doesn't many cats will die."

"Okay but-"

"Not now. I have to go."

"But-"

"Bye Tallpaw."

I awoke in the medicine cat den. The sun was rising but Sunpaw wasn't back yet. I slowly got up and stretched my cramped legs. I quietly padded out of the den and into the clearing.

"Where's Sunpaw?"

I coughed then headed for the entrance.

"Where are you going?"

I whirled around to see Swiftshadow standing behind voice,it took me a few seconds to realize that her voice was the she cats voice I had heard that night.

"I asked where you were going Tallpaw?"

"J-just for a walk."

"Oh, okay."

When I had got closer to the entrance I turned back to see Swiftshadow leaving, she seemed to be going somewhere, a few seconds later I saw Goldenrod get up and follow her. Well that seemed suspicious, oh well I had bigger things to worry about. I started to head for the entrance again and headed for the entrance hoping no one would see me. When I got there I looked back to make sure no one saw me and headed out of camp. I remembered what Runningnight told me that, Sunpaw had probably gone to moonstone,the only problem was that I had no idea where it was. So I guessed on a direction and started to walk.I walked on until my paws began to hurt. I stopped and began to lick my sore paws.

"Tallpaw what are you doing here?"

I looked up to see Sunpaw walking towards me.

"I was worried so I went looking for you."

"Are you completely rabbitbrain? You could have gotten lost and you're sick "

"Sorry but I had to tell you something important Sunpaw."

"Suntail."

"Oh, anyways I have to tell you something important. Your br-"

"Tell me later we have to get you home."

"But-"

"Now!"

"Fine." I sighed and got up. We continued back to the camp in silence. We slipped through the entrance and into the clearing. Before we were able to get very far though, Dawnstar came storming out of her den.

"Where have you two been!?"

The two of us stopped and turned to face looked very mad.

"Dawnstar,it was half moon so I went to the Moonstone to meet with the other medicine cats."

"I know that I'm wondering what took you so long to get back. And Tallpaw why did you sneak out of camp?"

"Well I went to go look f-" I paused to cough. "For S-"

"Are you sick?"

"Yes bu-"

"You shouldn't be out of camp if you're sick! You should be in the medicine cat den getting better! And Sunpaw you should be in the medicine cat den taking care of all the sick cats so they don't die!"

"Suntail."

"Whatever! Both of you in the medicine cat den NOW!"

The two glared at each other for a few seconds before Suntail dropped his flicked his tail for me to follow,while we were walking to the den I felt the gazes of my clanmates.I was relieved when we got to the den, I could finally tell him what Stormfeather told me.

"Suntail,I need to tell you something."

"Yeah,ok whatever."

"Stormfeather t-"

"DON'T YOU DARE TALK ABOUT STORMFEATHER!"

"Bu-"

" I DON'T CARE YOU STUPID APPRENTICE! SHUT YOUR MOUTH BEFORE I SHUT IT FOR YOU!"

I quickly fell silent. I curled up in my nest and closed my eyes.

Time skip (yay)

gathering time

"Ashbreeze,Redstreak,Ecomist,Hawkstorm,Tigerflower, Phoenixflame,Dreamfeather, Emberdust,Silverfall,Frozenpaw,Oakpaw,and Chervilpaw."

Of course I knew that Dawnstar wouldn't pick me,but I was still sad that I wasn't going to go to the gathering

"Sorry you can't go Tallpaw. I hope you get better soon."

"Thanks Frozenpaw, promise to tell me about the gathering?"

"Promise." She smiled and left the den.I lay there for a while thinking about who the other cat that I had overheard could have been. I heard some noises at the entrance and looked up to see Silentflower and her two other kits Brackenkit and Greykit walking in.

"Hey,Silentflower che-" I paused to cough. "Checking on Icekit again?"

"Yeah, just wanted to see how she was doing and Rainbowkit and Morningkit wanted to see her."

"Icekit!" Yelled Rainbowkit, bounding into the den.

"Hi Bra-" She stopped to cough. "Rainbowkit."

"Feeling any better?" Meowed Morningkit, padding after her sister much more calmly.

"Not r-" She had to stopped as coughs racked her small frame."Really."

"I hope you feel better soon, sweetie." Purred Silentflower, rubbing her muzzle across her daughters head.

"Tha-" She couldn't continues as she began to cough uncontrollably.

"Come on you too, lets let your sister rest."

"Okay. Bye Icekit!" Squeaked Rainbowkit giving her sister a playful swat.

"Bye Icekit." Mrrowed Morningkit, padding out of the followed the two of them out of the den. I looked after them for a second before turning to look at Icekit, She had fallen asleep . She was in the worst shape out of the four of us.

"Do you think she'll live?"

"What? Oh hey Brambleflight you feeling any better?

"Not r-"he paused to cough."Really, any way you didn't answer my question."

"Well I'm not the medicine cat."I started to cough."Ask Suntail when he comes back."

"Alright then. How do you feel?"

"Well I guess not that good."

"Hey what are you guys talking about?"

"Not much, Stormpaw."

" Tallpaw si-" He was interrupted by a coughing fit." Since when were you in hear?".

"Well I just got here a little while ago."

"Wel-."He started to cough again."Well I hope you get better soon Tallpaw and you too Brambleflight."

"Thank you."

"Yea-."I was interrupted by a fit of coughing."Thanks, you too."

He nodded and laid back down. My eyes slowly began to droop. I closed my eyes and fell asleep.

I awoke in the wind swept plain again. But this time it was different. Something felt wrong.

"Goldenflame! Rippledawn! Stormfeather! Are you here?!"

A shadow flitted out of the corner of my eye. I whirled around but it had already vanished.

"Hello!?"

"Ha ha ha ha!" I whirled around and saw a tom cat standing there in a pool of blood. "Ha ha ha ha!"

"Hey! What's going on?!" I ran forward but he vanished as soon as I got close.

"Tallpaw run!" I turned around again to see Dawnstar looking terrified.

"Dawnstar! What's happening?! Where are we?!"

"Run! You have to g-" She was cut off as a shadow dashed in front of her, slitting her throat. I screamed and began to run as fast as I could.

"Tallpaw! Help I'm slipping!" I turned to see Azuresky sliding over a cliff.

"Dad!" I tried to run to him but I couldn't get any closer .Suddenly the tom appeared in front of him.

"Oops." He growled. Stabbing his claws into Azuresky's paws.

"NO!" I shrieked as I watched him fall down the cliff. I turned and began to run again. I had to get out of here. I saw a forest ahead of me and decided to head towards there.

"Get away from me!" I saw Spiritpaw ahead of me. Trying to battle the shadow and the tom at the same time

"Spiritpaw!"

"Go away Tallpaw I don't need your help!" She turned to snarl at me. As soon as she turned her attention away the shadow leapt forward and ripped her throat.

"SPIRITPAW NO!" I ran, tears streaming down my face. I dashed blindly into the forest hoping to find the way out. I ran faster than I had ever run trying to leave the nightmare no matter how far or fast I ran I could still remember everything that I had seen.I slowed down as I noticed something different. The air wasn't crystal clear anymore. It was so foggy I could barely see two feet in front of me. The ground was hard and didn't have any lush grass.I looked up and only saw a pitch black sky. Wherever this was it was definitely not Starclan.

"Hello!?" I yelled my voice echoing eerily.

"Hey."

"AHHH!" I screamed whirling around to see a calico cat standing behind me."W-w-who are you and where am I?"

"You are in the place of no stars. And my name is Mapleshade ,who are you?".

"I'm Tallpaw."

"You aren't the one with the crooked jaw,you're the one with the long tail right?"

"Ummm..I are you talking about when you say the one with the crooked jaw?"

"That does not concern you,after all your destiny is different then said cats."

"What does that mean?"

"That doesn't concern you Tallpaw."

I whirled around to see Rippledawn standing behind me.

Mapleshade growled, "Rippledawn."

"Mapleshade."

"Rippledawn I told you that if you ever get near me again I'd k-."

"Mapleshade I don't were leaving now."

"Okay."

She turned around and flicked her tail for me to follow. I was about to turn around when I saw Mapleshade crouch, about to pounce.

"Rippledawn look o-"

Mapleshade sprang ready to kill Rippledawn. I saw Rippledawn move and before I could register what had happened Rippledawn, had pinned Mapleshade to the ground.

"I told you before, Mapleshade you can't beat me."

"I can try."

"Then you'll fail."

I saw anger flash threw Mapleshades eyes then she shoved Rippledawn off of her. Rippledawn landed skidding to a halt. Mapleshade quickly leapt on top of her. The two she cats rolled around on the ground. The two broke apart both of their pelts were hanging of them in shreds,and Mapleshade had deep gashes in her side that were bleeding heavily. After a second Rippledawn flew at Mapleshade who dodged in the nick of she countered by kicking Rippledawn in the side and sending her flying. Rippledawn struggled up panting. Then in a flash she pinned Mapleshade to the ground.

"Give up?" She snarled.

"Get out." Mapleshade growled.

Rippledawn nodded and flicked her tail for me to follow. I looked back at Mapleshade who turned and disappeared into the I turned to follow Rippledawn out of the creepy forest. I sighed with relief when we were back on the field. Rippledawn turned to me and said.

"Tallpaw, you need to wake up now."

"But why?"

"Because yo-." she was interrupted by some cat who was yelling for help. I looked up and saw Frozenpaw stuck in fox trap.

"Frozenpaw! We have to help her!"

Rippledawn nodded but before she could do anything a terrified look crossed her face, before she disappeared and was replaced by the Shadow it smiled evilly and began to run towards Frozenpaw.

"Tallpaw! Help! Help me! Tallpaw. Tallpaw. Tallpaw! Wake up!" I felt someone jab my ribs. "Hey,wake up."

"AHHHHH!" I shrieked.

And end chapter well ummm sorry if you people get mad at us for the whole Mapleshade and Darkforest fluff (the new stuff) we just really like her and Darkforest (actually Brambleclawhater8 would rather go to Darkforest but you know whatevs) and umm if the dream was like over the top please blame Jayfeather24 (don't blame me. Blame Brambleclawhater8) (Don't blame me I can't write crap like that) So review and fluff and tell us who your favorite characters thanks by.