Hey every one sorry i havn't upadated sooner i started school yesterday. 4 hours of pure geometry it sucks really boring. but i saw one of my best friends today so i was happy i was super tired to people just can't stop forwarding me them stupid text msg's you know those ones that say send to 10 ppl or yourgoing to have bad luck well my friend decided to send one at like 1am who does that then my dad decided to text me at 4.33am im assuming he forgot there is a time diffrence lol. But yeah thanks to everyone who reviewed and my lovely Melody aka Violinlover96 was my lucky number 30 again yay so yet again ppl read her story its in my favs. SECOND TIME'S THE CHARM its one of my fav stories. so yeah i got some complaints on why i WRITE LIKE THIS i like it because i like it thats how i write when its small it looks boring and i hate boring so if you been wondering thats why i like it sorry if it got on your nerves my bad!
disclamer. i don't own any thing because if i did i would be rich and i wouldn't be on here writing stories i would be making a Camp Rock show and be mitchie lol but i could only dream so yeah on with the chapter
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"PAUL DON'T LEAVE ME COME BACK" I started to run to try to catch him but it was too late I was alone again. I fell to the floor and started to cry. Every thing seemed to fit into place maybe it was really my time to go. First it was Paul then it was Troy and now it is me. Things must happen for a reason.
"Mitchie get up your going to be okay." a voice said it was a familiar smooth voice of a certain blue eyed basketball player I knew. It was
"Troy is that really you?" I asked looking towards a bright light soon start to fade and a shadow start walking towards me. It was him all of the cute golden brown haired boy. He was walking towards me he was caring a baby. My baby girl Gabriella that moment I felt like the luckiest girl in the world or where ever I was. All my pain went away because right now I felt at peace knowing they were here with me.
"Mitchie things weren't suppose to happen like this. Your stronger than this, be strong for our baby Mitch." tears fell down my eyes I never got to hold my daughter I lost her when I lost Troy. I went into depression and I end up loosing my baby in the process. I hated my self I put Troy and Gabriella in the deepest part so I wouldn't remember the pain. He handed me the little baby she was wrapped into a white blanket she was the cutest thing I had ever saw. She had little brown curls and bright blue eyes like her daddy.
"I know it's my fault why she is here. I wasn't ready to be a mom and I got sick and lost her. It's my fault you are here too. I should have never told you to go out that night, I was so depressed when I got the phone call that night saying you got shot. My whole world fell apart, I had a mental breakdown and I ended up loosing our baby." I said crying what have I done it's all my fault.
"No Mitchie it's not. I have to tell you...some one poisoned you making you loose Gabby. The same person who poisoned you had me shot. That same person is the reason why your here now. Mitchie it's not your time I came to tell you your given another chance. It's your time to shine just know that we will always be looking down on you making sure your okay. I promise you will always have someone watching over you I love you but you have to go back. I can't be with you and protect you like that Guy Shane can he is still there for you Mitchie don't let what happened to me happen to him. He is a good guy and your going to be happy with him." he grabbed the baby out my hands and started to walk away
"I don't want to go back I want my family again!-"
"Mitchie things are going to be okay just believe in your self. We will always be with you in your heart but it's his turn to be happy with you I had mine and you gave me some one to always remember you I have to go now but thing's will get better" and with that he disappeared like Paul. Did I guess they are right I should fight this, I'm a fighter I'm better then this my life is with Shane now and I have to make things right. All of a sudden I felt a jolt things started to flash before my eyes and I started to here voices.
"1,2,3 Clear!"
(Shane's Pov)
We been up all night waiting for the doctor to come talk to us. I was getting mad because they wouldn't let us find out what was going on. My head was spinning I was tired and uncomfortable, I was worried and my hair lost it's shine. I looked bad . Everyone was here Caitlyn called Mitchie's mom and she flew here from New Mexico and her dad was going to come in a couple of hours. On the other side of the room was her friends and that guy Chad. How I hated him with a passion he was such a conceded pretty boy thinking he is better than everyone else.
"Look at him he don't care about Mitchie I just want to knock his lights out." I said to Nate he looked just as bad as me he was worried and tired it was tearing us apart.
"Shane I don't think it will be a good idea to fight Mitchie's friends. You just got her back you don't want to go fight then and loose her again do you?"
"Lose her again? Look at us Nate were loosing her now. And these stupid doctor's don't even know what's going on! There keeping us in secret they wont even tell Connie.. They won't let us see her." I snapped I was getting mad they wouldn't let me or any one for that chance see her. I just got up and went to the desk.
"Hi Melody right?" I asked to the perky nurse in green and pink scrubs
"Yes I am how may I help you Mr. Grey?" she asked
"Yeah is it possible if I can find out some information on Michelle Torres please. We been waiting for the doctor but he never came back." I said in a whisper I didn't want any one to notice Shane Grey looking like a mess and have a commotion at the hospital.
"Oh yeah ill have Dr. Chester speak to you once he is out of the I.C.U... I could loose my job if I tell you this... but She been dead for five minutes-" What I just turned pail and every moment I had with Mitchie flashed between my eyes the day I first saw her with flour all over face in the kitchen to the day she broke my heart. Then at final jam to our first kiss, then that night I last saw her. Now when I finally got her back she was gone forever. I felt like dying myself those words filled my head put on repeat 'been dead for five minutes' 'been dead for five minutes' everything started to spin.
(No one's pov)
"Some one help I need a stretcher and a iv ASAP !"Melody shouted.
Every one in the waiting room ran to see what happened they saw Shane being put into a stretcher and being sent to the E.R Melody made everyone go to the waiting room to tell them what happened. He passed out before the nurse could finish what she was trying to tell him.
"What happened to Shane? Is he going to be okay?" Jason said with tears falling out his eyes he was scared Shane was so strong he was Jason's little brother he watched him grow up.
"Well he came to find out about Michelle Torres and I was telling him what had happened and before I got to tell him the rest he fainted."Melody said
"What happed to her?"Chad asked
"well we lost her-"She said before she got cut off
"What no not Mitchie"Chad yelled and tears started to fill his eyes
"Can you people please let me finish! Yes we lost her for about five minutes, but then we had to shock her and we got her stable. We have her under control and she is going to be okay, we found out that someone poisoned her. She had some type of chemical in her system, I don't know what it is yet. They sent it to the labs to find out. But as for Mr. Grey he fainted but he is going to be okay he is in good care"
Nate was just confused he didn't say anything he was mad he took off walking and Caitlyn ran to catch up with him. He hit the hospital wall and he slid down on the floor and started to cry into his hands pulling his legs up to his chest.
"Nate it's okay, he is going to be okay... I know he will be" Caitlyn said hugging her boyfriend
"But what about Mitch? Caity she almost...died. What if they can't save her next time?" he asked whipping tears off with his sleeve.
"I know but she is a fighter Nate, she isn't going to give up her life with out a fight." Cait said while rubbing Nate's back. Mitchie use to be like a sister to Nate until he started to hate her for hurting his brother. But he was finally getting his sister back then this happens.
"Shane is stable we told him the story and he is relived that Mitch didn't die. He want to talk to you Nate." Nate just looked at Jason's hand, he grabbed it and stood up. Caitlyn and Nate just followed Jason down light blue halls. They turned the corner and went into this room. They looked up and saw Shane sitting on the bed looking at a magazine. Jason and Caitlyn left and waited outside so that the
"hey Shane are you okay?"Nate asked
"Yeah, I can't believe we almost lost her...Nate I don't think I can handle the pain if she dies"Shane saidlooking down. He was scared he didn't want to loose her again.
(Mitchie's Pov)
"1,2,3 CLEAR" someone yelled I started to hear a heart monitor start having a steady heart beat sound. Where was I? What happened to me? I opened my eyes and I was in a hospital room, I looked around and saw a heart monitor and a iv connected to me. The door opened and I saw a certain blond I really didn't want to see.
"Oh good Mitchie your okay. I was worried about you."Terri said with this smirk on her face that only meant she was up to no good.
"Get away from me Terri!" I tried to yell but my voice was harsh and you could hardly hear it.
"Oh Mitchie the games just began. And if you run to the cops ill make sure to make your life a living hell. And I will make sure that your never going to be happy again." she said and started to laugh
"why you doing this to me Terrs? Your my cousin why have you been hurting me?" I said sadly trying to fight the tears.
"okay ill tell you why. Just because your my cousin ill be nice. Remember when we were little and my parents died and me and Paul were forced to move in with you? Well you had everything and I had nothing. You were always mean to me making fun of me when you were with Paul and your friends.-" "No I wasn't it was you who was mean to me. You broke my Barbie's heads off and you were the one mean and made fun of me when you were around your friends." I said with tears in my eyes
"Let me finish my story. You think that, but you always had your way with your mom and dad you were there little princess. You never got into trouble it was always me. Then when I tell you I like SHANE GREY you end up taking him away from me. When I decided that I wanted to be with TROY BOLTON you end up getting pregnant from him. You were taking every thing away from me." Terri yelled. Thats when I remembered the little baby in my dreams and with that I flipped it was her fault why my baby died.
"YOU TOOK EVERYTHING AWAY FROM ME TERRI!" I yelled trying to sit up on the bed.
"Excuse me? What do you mean I took everything away from you?" she snapped
"Your the reason why I lost Gabby and Troy he loved me not you! Just like Shane loved me not you. You had Jack some one who loved you and done everything for you and who chased him off? It was you." she got pissed off and slapped me. The pain stung, I just closed my eyes she hit me again. I was too weak to defend my self or hit back. She kept hitting me over and over, the blood started to flow out my nose and lip. Things started to get dizzy again and I couldn't stay awake, I looked to my right and saw the nurse call button I tried I pressed it right before she hit me again but I missed. I couldn't stop her I ripped the iv out of me and I took off all th wires. Right when she was about to hit me again I rolled off the bed all the pain shot down my body it felt so painful. I tried to crawl but I couldn't she sat on my back and started hitting my head against the floor. I started to see black and the warm blood started to drip on the floor.
"Oh my God what are you doing to her!" a Nurse yelled and went to get help Terri just got up and kicked me and ran. I turned on my back and the pain was awful the pain didn't go away I saw the black spots in my eyes again and everything went blank from there. i was back in my familliar white paradise i was in. You know death use to sound scary but now it sounds peaceful to me. I always was scared how I would die I thought I would drown or fall off a building, I never would have thought it would be my own cousin to be the one trying to kill me. Who would have guessed my own flesh and blood was so evil and hateful. I use to love life it use to mean everything to me. But so much has happened to me over the past three years things just keep getting worse for me. This is a nightmare that seems like I can't escape I remember something Troy told me that he would always be watching me to believe in my self because it's my time to shine. I had to fight for my life earlier, now I have to fight for it again I'm in the same place I started in. Alone and lost in a white paradise I only been here once but it's the most peaceful place I have been in and I like it. I never knew that dying would be so peaceful now I know what everyone who is truly in love why they would die for the person they love. I think If I ever wake up from this I would most likely die for Shane. Terri took him away from me and I fell for it. Like Troy said it's my time to shine and I am going to fight back and get Shane Back. I just have to believe in my self again and I know he still loves me, she cant and will not take the last thing I have left away from me this time.
so i dont know really about this chapter it kinda blah to me im still suffering from a bad case or writers blockphobia its a bad bad disease but yeah please review
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Questions?
Should Mitchie tell Shane about Troy and Gabby?
How is Shane going to react if she tells him about her dead baby?
Is Mitchie going to give up and walk into the light?
