Okay, so I changed the story some, I squished it together, it's actually longer but I made each chapter about three times as longer than before (making it go from 15 chapters to 8). Also the sequel will now be up. It won't be updated too quickly, at least not until I buy Desolation of Smaug so I can have references. The sequel I am calling Heartbreaker, originally going to be When the Levee Breaks (my favorite Led Zepplin song), but I feel it'll be better for the next part since shit's going down more then.