Sup! So I have been reading the most awesome harry potter stories. The one I love the most, is at he bottom of the list of favorites in the order of the dates. I loved it! If you are a total potterhead, read this, It shows a nice Snape! I love. It has Dumbledore!bashing, Dursley death and a secret, all in one story. As soon as I clicked on it, I couldn't stop reading it. I would put it down for a minute, and then I would start to read. Ahh, and then the ending I was just like yes, And It shows Ron being a total A$$HOLE! whats better then that? Its called Empty Jaded Emerald Eyes, by DebsTheSlytherinSnapefan.

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Zanes POV

So as we walked along the castle, I saw Falcon at the window. I nod in his direction. He blinks at me and his eyes flashed blue for a moment. I look back at him. And his eyes flashed again and I open the window. As I open the window, my friends keep walking. I see that there is a note attached to his foot. I open it and see elsas hand writing.

"Guys!" I call

"What?" askes Anna

"Look, I found this note, and I know its from Elsa."

"How?" askes Cole

"There is traces of her magic." I say

"OK, What does it say?" Asked Anna

"Zane,

Help me, I was able to escape. I'm in the forest, the birch wood forest." I say

"OK, Lets go get her." says Anna

"Well, we don't know exactly where she is." said Cole

"I don't care." said Anna "I will go on my own and find my sister."

"I'll find my queen, Will you help us?" I ask

"Yes." said Nya

"Of course." said Kai

"Obviously." said Cole

"Meeh," said Jay

"Whos going to stay here with me?" asked Danny

"Umm, Well..." I say because i had no idea.

"I'll stay, Zane." said Nya

"You sure?" I ask

"Yes, I'm sure. now go." said Nya

"Alright" I say as we head out the door. Falcon started to head into the Birchwood forest. As we entered the forest, Falcon took off.

"Wow, Loyal pet." muttered Cole as he watched falcon take off.

"Shut up, Cole!" says Anna

"Yeah, Cole." says Kai as I turn away. I just sigh, and get off my horse. I start to walk away with the practice of a ninja. And Cole said Jay couldn't be quiet. He was walking with me and not making a sound. I wonder if Elsas OK?

"Zane?" asks Jay in a quiet voice

"Yeah," I ask

"Whats that?" asks Jay pointing to a mass on the ground. I run to it. I roll the thing over and see that its Elsa.

"Jay, go back tell them, we found her." I say as Jay runs away from the place. I hear a branch snap near me and I silently unsheathe my swords. I look around and see nothing. I know I could be over reacting, but with all thats happened, I wouldn't put it pass the serpentine to come to take her. I slowly turn, and I see that no one is around. Doesn't matter I will protect her. At least until some help arrives. I use my magic to scan the area. Theres someone here. Not human, but reptile like. I curse, I recognize the signature. Its Pythor. I thought he was eaten by the Great Devourer. I automatically tense. Someone else is here. I see the a small child all in purple. He radiates power, like Pythor.

"Ohh, What do we have here? A man here to save his love?" said the child

"What do you want?" I growl.

"Well, I want that pretty girl there." said The child

"Why? You'll never get her." I say

"Because dad, said she would be my new mom. All the others failed the test." said the child

"Well, You aren't getting her." I growl as I drag the sword around.

"That will be unfortunate. That you won't be around to save her." said the child

"You going to just talk, because even I am getting bored of this." I say as I get in front of her. I see Jay approaching from behind me. and quietly take her away from here. The child turns and starts to swing a sword. It is clear he is unused to fighting with a weapon.

"Having a little trouble?" I ask in a mocking tone.

"Why do you refuse to die?" The child shouts.

"Why do you not give up or run away?" I ask. The child just growled and throws his sword and uses his abilities. I ducked as he shot me a purple beam of air. The tree behind me, burst into flames then discriminated. I duck another blast and shoot back a beam of ice. I then chuck my sword. I wanted to charge the kid, but he was just that, a kid. But god, he tried to kidnap my girlfriend. I mean, even when Kai irritates me, I don't want to kill him. I eventually hit him, and I turn and run. I still hear my father screaming at me to control myself. I mean the last time I was in the forest I lost control and froze half the forest. I run back to my horse, and I see Elsa waking up.

"Elsa!" I call

"Zane?" She asks

"Hey," I say.

"What happened?" said Elsa

"Well, you sent a message via Falcon. My friends and I Came to find you. The others, were arguing, so me and Jay walked to find you. I found you, fought some serpentine, and then came back here." I say

"So you did find me." murmured Elsa.

"I did." I say as I take her into my arms.


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