ok! Now I know I promised every Friday they'll be an update but couldn't since I had too much in my plate. BIG test that decided if I pass this year, Science Fair, Babysitting, and now I have a PowerPoint Game project (thank God my partner knows computers much better than I do I'm surprise I made it through the first PowerPoint project without help except for my brother…). Anyways I shall update two-chapter s to make it up so please review even though I haven't kept my promise! Also thank you kat for the idea I shall use it (as always)!
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Jill: Welcome back from the very long commercial and let's review shall we. The teams have gone through much pain, Red Cross team seems to be winning, Jc, the first judge if you remember is back and not drunk! In addition, this is the last course challenge well for this part anyways…
Bubba: What do you mean for this part?
Jill: I mean two things; one that there will be another course challenge soon and two I'm talking about the future sequel show.
Bubba: There's a sequel!?
Jill: Yes but first let's finish this show which will take some time so don't be expecting a break soon.
Bubba: I have a feeling the sequel will be worse…
Jill: Back to the point, you will now face the last course (Gestures towards the Death Trap from last chapter in which that Jc survived somehow)
Mimi: Exactly what is it?
Jill: Exactly what the name is.
Mimi: This will not end good…
Jill: Also, the kids will not help what so ever so you can just let them go.
(Jak, who carried the girl, put her down, she walked towards Jill, and Ashlein did same with the boy who also walked towards Jill)
Jill: In another addition, those who are blindfolded may take them off…if you wish.
Bubba: What do you mean if you wish?
Jill: Nothing just take it off if you want.
Bubba: why wouldn't we want to take it off though?
Jill: I don't know just do as you please, sheesh.
(Both teams hesitantly took off their blindfolds and made their way to the entrance of the Death Trap. As they stood by the entrance Jc walks in with a grin plastered on her face.)
Bubba: Why are smiling?
Jc: I just am.
Jill: Whichever team makes it out first with all the teammates would be the winners to the course challenge. I've kept track of the scoreboard since the beginning and the girls have one point while the guys don't so girls are winning!
Daxter: Wait how did the girls get a point?
Jill: Well let's see, you sang and than my sister sang, she won you lost she gets a point for her team you don't.
Daxter: oh yea
Jill: Now Jc is the course ready?
Jc: Yup just finished putting the last few touches.
Jill: All right, any mark, get set…GO!
(Both teams didn't move since none thought that they could make it through the first part of the course. The first part was to go through very large sludge hammers that are swinging left and right. There was six sludge hammers in total and there was no long gap between two that made it possible for the gangs to cross with out harm.)
Vin: uh Jill how did you make it through this before?
Jill: I don't know I just walked.
Vin: uh how did you make it through Jc?
Jc: I was drunk so I have no idea what you're talking 'bout.
Vin: (gulp)
Jak: Uh ok, well there has to be a different way pass this right?
Daxter: yea there is always a shortcut somewhere!
(The Red Cross team is trying to figure out a way to cross the course by a shortcut as the Red Cross Team argued mostly Ashlein and JJ…)
Ashlein: instead of making stupid remarks why don't you help!
JJ: I don't help! Last time I checked if it wasn't for me, we would probably still be up in that first mountain climbing!
Ashlein: Oh, please I could've found it sooner.
JJ: Why didn't you, I was blindfolded you weren't!
Ashlein: Well, why don't you just find a way to get us across then?
JJ: You're the leader! Why don't you! Better yet, why don't you just drop dead!
(Both are about to fight until Tess decides to break it up)
Tess: Arguing will not help! Lets all think of a way!
JJ: Well who knew that the blonde would speak?
Tess: Don't start with me.
JJ: Whatever
(Both teams have no idea what to do since it is impossible to cross)
Daxter: Wait! Jc just walked through it like in cartoons! That's how we are going to cross!
Jak: Not bad idea Dax, worth a try, (Walks casually and passes sludge hammer but steps in a mine and BOOM!) (The mine is not a death defying mine but a mine that'll give you a big shock and flies you three feet away so now Jak is in the beginning of the course.)
Daxter: There's explosions!?
Jc: Yup, I called someone and put mines randomly around the course so good luck with those!
(Both teams know how to cross but with the mines, the course is harder since it'll blow you three feet back. Baron was thrown back numerous times and had many cuts since he had been thrown back to the sharp wires that the gang had to crawl under to get pass. Keira had been blown into mud, wh8ich JJ liked, and the one who had the most injuries was Erol since he had stepped on mines numerous times. Finally, all the gangs were at the end except for Vin and Rayn. Rayn was at the last challenge but her foot was stuck in mud and Vin was way in the beginning.)
Jak: VIN! Get your scrawny (beep) over here!
Vin: I'd rather not!
Jak: just walk causally!
Vin: What about the mines!
Jak: I'm pretty sure Erol stepped on all of them!
Vin: What if he didn't!?
Jak: Vin! (Thinks for a while 'til remembers what Jill had said) Vin get a blindfold and blindfold yourself and than come over here!
Vin: uh…ok! (Blindfolds him self and begins to walk but gets hit with sludge hammer, flies in air lands on a bouncy house and flies across the dangerous course and lands an inch from the finish line unconscious.)
(Rain gets foot out and is running to finish line as Jak grabs Vin's arm and drags him through the finish line)
Jill: and we have a winner! The boys win and gain a point in the scoreboard! So far, it's a tie!
Jc: Now, the boys win for their victory challenge a-
(Man voice that announces prizes) coupon for Pizza Hut!
Baron: Are you kidding! A coupon?
Jc: Its either the coupon or the ice cream cone choose your pick.
Baron: (grumbles) we'll take the coupon…
Jill: all right now here's a short commercial and we will begin the new segment so stay tune!
PeAcE!
~DLC Girl~
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