Okay wow I'm getting a lot of reviews on this. I know it needs a lot of work. But this after all was my first story I've ever written. Thank you to every one who gave me advise and the nice reviews. ^-^ and to those who didn't like it. I'm sorry but this is my story and I like it. If you don't like these kinds of stories. Then don't read them. Anyway I'm thinking about making a sequel to this one. I'll try to make it better and MAYBE add one or two new characters. Anyway, I've written a lot more stories now, and I've gotten a lot better now. I'm on a site called Quotev. My profile is Just some random guy named Sky. And my url is Disortion if you want to see some of the things I've done there. I'm in the middle of writing a story called Love's Journal. It's on my profile under published. Anyway, one more last big thank you to everyone. This is were I got my start. I wrote my first story here in grade 8. Now two years later I've written many things. And each time I've gotten better at it. So thank you. :) BAI LOVE YA ALL :D
